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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Oct 31, 2006 18:36:59 GMT -5
This is a story of one year later then the latest book: Twilight. ALLEGIANCES ThunderClan Leader: Graystar-longhaired solid gray tom Deputy: Brackenfur-golden brown tabby tom Medicine cat: Leafpool-light brown tabby she-cat Warriors:Dustpelt-brown tabby tom Cloudtail-longhaired white tom Thornclaw-golden brown tabby tom Brambleclaw-dark brown tabby tom Rainwhisker-dark gray tom with blue eyes Ashfur-pale gray tom Spiderleg-long-limbed black tom with a brown underbelly Birchtail-brown tabby tom Sorreltail-tortishell and white she-cat Dapplefur-beautiful golden she-cat with brown spots, and black stripes Queens:Whitenose-white she-cat, mother of Birchtail's kits Squirrelflight-dark ginger she-cat, mother of Ashfur's kits Brightheart-white she-cat with ginger patches, mother of Cloudtail's kits Elders:Sandstorm-pale ginger she-cat Fireheart-ginger tom with a dull flame-colored pelt Longtail-pale tabby tom with black stripes Ferncloud-pale gray she-cat ShadowClan Leader:Russetstar-dark ginger she-cat Deputy:Tawnypelt-tortishell she-cat Medincine cat:Littlecloud-very small tabby tom WarriorsOakfur-small brown tom Cedarheart-dark gray tom Rowanclaw-ginger tom Talonclaw-black tom Browntail-brown tabby tom Whitecloud-white she-cat Tallpoppy-long-legged light brown she-cat Ashcloud-pale gray tabby she-cat WindClan Leader:Onestar-brown tabby tom Deputy:Ashfoot-gray she-cat Medincine cat:Speckledfur-pale light brown tabby she-cat with black legs Warriors:Webfoot-dark gray tabby tom Crowfeather-dark gray tom Owlfeather-light brown tabby tom Nightcloud-black she-cat Apprentice:Silverpaw Weaslefur-ginger tom with white paws Whitetail-small white she-cat RiverClan Leader:Mistystar Deputy:Reedwhisker Medicine cat:Mothwing Warriors:Voletooth-small brown tabby tom Stonestream-gray tom Rippletail-silver she-cat Dawnflower-pale gray she-cat Minnowflower-black she-cat Pebbleclaw-gray tom Stormfur-dark gray tom Queen:Swallowtail-tabby she-cat, mother of Rainwhisker's kits Elders:Mosspelt-tortoishell she-cat Loners Ravenpaw-jet black tom with a white tail tip, and white dash on his chest Barley-white and black tom Brook-brown tabby she-cat Rogues Sasha-tawny colored rogue she-cat Hawkfrost-huge dark brown tabby tom with a white underbelly and ice blue eyes (if any of this is incorrect or doesn't make since, don't be afraid to tell me )
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 1, 2006 8:01:25 GMT -5
Prolouge Night lay upon the forest of the warrior cats, suddenly, a yowl echoed through the clearing, "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, gather here for a Clan meeting!" Firestar rasped. The cats of ThunderClan slipped out of their dens like shadows, and sat next to the Highledge. "What is it Firestar?" Meowed Sandstorm in an anixous mew. "I have decided to retire to the elders!" He announced, "for I am getting really old, and am not able to lead this Clan as proporly as I used to. From now on, Graystripe will be the leader of ThunderClan!" "Graystripe!" "Graystripe!" "Graystripe!" The gathered cats choursed. The solid gray tom rouse to his feet in surprise. He dipped his head in respect at Firestar's demand. "I will try to lead you as best as I can!" Graystripe meowed. Firestar purred, and yowled, "I will now be known as Fireheart, for I am no longer the leader of ThunderClan. I will now live in the elder's den." He shot an amused glance at Graystripe, "but don't worry, my claws will be sharp, and I will still have the ability to fight." His words dismissal, he retreated back with the elders. Graystripe leaped on the Highledge with a single bound, and steaded himself with his unseathed claws. "I will travel with Leafpool tonight to the Moonpool to earn my nine lives." He announced shakily. Dustpelt snickered a little, but Graystripe silenced him with a sharp glance. "I must now appoint a new deputy." He meowed. Hmm...maybe Brambleclaw...Dustpelt? No. How about Brackenfur? Senior, experanced, loyal. He would make a great deputy. Graystripe thought. "Brackenfur will be the new deputy of ThunderClan."
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Post by Firrlover on Nov 1, 2006 9:11:12 GMT -5
Good story! I like how you don't kill off firestar! ;D
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 1, 2006 13:36:55 GMT -5
Great story Moony, but I want my Squirrely's kits be fathered by Brambleclaw. Can Squirrely and Brambleclaw be mates agian and have kits together? By the way, leaders have to be leaders until the day they die. So, I wish for my Firey to be leader agian. Tallstar was leader intill he died.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 2, 2006 8:13:51 GMT -5
No, they don't have to die, and plus, this is my story Saberclaw, I say Firestar retired, and Squirrelflight's kits are fathered by Ashfur. But don't worry, there will be a twist. Chapter One A sleek cat ran through the forest. It's eyes squinted, it's fur was soaked from the air that had poured down from Silverpelt. The cat was belly down, and slinking toward's ThunderClan territory. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> "Sorreltail, Brambleclaw, and Ashfur will take the hunting patrol." Brackenfur ordered with the flick of his golden ears. "Shall I tell them?" Cloudtail asked, tail in the air in anticapation. "Sure." Brackenfur meowed. Cloudtail sprinted off towards Ashfur and Squrrielflight. "Hey, Squirrelflight," Cloudtail meowed. "How's your kits?" "Just fine, thank you." Squirrelflight mewed. "Ashfur, Brackenfur wants you to go on this morning's hunting patrol." Cloudtail mewed, and nodded his head towards Brackenfur, who had just gotten Sorreltail. Ashfur sat up immedatly, and gave Squirrelflight a lick on the top of her head. "Take care of the kits while I'm gone." He mewed hastily. "Don't worry you stupid furball." Squirrelflight teased, "I'll take care of them." Ashfur's whiskers twitched with amusement, and he padded off to Brackenfur. A moment later, Brambleclaw appeared, " You're coming with?!?" Came a furious hiss. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> The sleek cat was on the edge of the heart of ThunderClan camp. It sniffed the air, and growled in excitement. A fight was out. Ashfur hissed at Brambleclaw. Brambleclaw didn't react, but retorted coolly, "Don't worry kittypet, I won't hurt you." "Oh yes you will!!!" Ashfur snarled, and leaped up on Brambleclaw's shoulders. "STOP!" Yowled Graystar at the foot of the Highledge. Ashfur stopped to listen to Graystar, and Brambleclaw saw his chance, he twisted Ashfur off of him, and gripped his teeth in his neck. Ashfur let out a cry, and tried to get free. Fear filled Ashfur's heart, and he knew, Brambleclaw is going to kill me He thought. Graystar pounced on Brambleclaw, rolling him away from Ashfur. "Ashfur!" Squirrelflight mewed. "Go see my sister!" Ashfur struggled to get up, but a sleek golden cat with brown spots and black stripes helped him. "Thanks Dapplefur." Ashfur rasped when he got inside Leafpool's den. "I can't believe you two!" Graystar snarled, "fighting inside the camp!" He still pinned Brambleclaw down. "From now on, Brambleclaw, you will remain a prizonor, and Ashfur will help the elders." The dark brown tabby hissed at Graystar, "I was trying to help him! Look at the nursery!" Brambleclaw choked. Graystar spun around, and lost his grip on Brambleclaw in shock. There, outside the nursery was a fox. "I was trying to tell him that the nursery was being raid! But he wouldn't listen, and he pounced on me like a stupid kittypet...so I had to fight back." Brambleclaw explained. "You will help the elder's then, with Ashfur, and until you two get along, you will be done with the elders! Now go!"
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 2, 2006 13:49:09 GMT -5
Moony? Can I name my Squirrely's kits and give their description? Can my Squirrely have three litters of cats?
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 3, 2006 19:57:45 GMT -5
Yes, you can, but they absouletly HAVE[/u][/i] to have the fur color and eye color of Ashfur and Squirrelflight! Squirrelflight: Fur: Dark ginger Eyes: Green Ashfur: Fur: Pale gray Eyes: Blue And please don't add err...odd names like Snakekit or Eelkit, and stuff like that please, next chapter will be up shortly, and Squirrelflight will only have two litters of kits.
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 4, 2006 11:46:02 GMT -5
Thanks Moony!
Litter One:
Prettykit (a pretty ginger she-cat with forest green eyes and one white forepaw) Possible warrior name-Prettypelt.
Palekit (a pale gray with darker flecks she-cat with dark blue eyes) Possible warrior name-Paleface
Wolfkit (a pale gray with darker flecks tom with dark blue eyes) Possible warrior name-Wolfclaw
Litter Two:
Garnetkit (a dark ginger she-cat with forest green eyes and one white forepaw) Possible warrior name Garnetstone
Horsekit (a big dark ginger tom with green eyes and one white forepaw) Possible warrior name Horseheart
Will you name these Squirrely's kits their possible warrior names when they have their warrior ceromony?
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 4, 2006 12:31:20 GMT -5
Sure Saberclaw!
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 4, 2006 12:36:25 GMT -5
:)Thanks Moony!!!
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 4, 2006 12:40:49 GMT -5
I made a Firestar plushie, I made a Squirrelflight plushie, and I made a Scourge plushie. I also made plushies of my pet cats. They all took a long time to make, but they're done and their worth it. Why don't you make yourself a Onestar plushie and a Tawnypelt plushie Moony? I'll give you steps on how to make them if you want. By the way, who do you like better, Tawnypelt or Onestar? P.S, thanks agian Moony!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 4, 2006 14:26:03 GMT -5
Your welcome Saberclaw. Sure, I would like the steps on how to make them! Hmm...I really like Tawnypelt better. ;D TAWNYPELT ROX MY SOCKS!!! lol Onestar's cool too. Also, could you please change Prettykit's name to something else? It's not that I don't like it, it's just, I don't think that the Clans would name a kit, 'pretty'kit... Here's the next chapter! (any guesses on who the rogue is, by ThunderClan camp?) Chapter Two Ashfur and Brambleclaw nodded their heads, and retreated to the elder's den. "This is all your fault!" Ashfur hissed. "My fault?" Brambleclaw meowed in disbielf, "you're the one who attacked me first!" "Ehem." Meowed a deep voice, Brambleclaw and Ashfur spun around and saw Brackenfur looming above them. "Do we have a problem?" He asked, and lashed his tail from side to side in anger. "N-no, we're fine B-Brackenfur, thanks." Ashfur stammered. "Good." Brackenfur grunted, "now get to the elder's." He ordered with the flick of his tail. Ashfur dipped his head, and butted Brambleclaw in the shoulder with one of his paws, "we better get moving." He meowed, and the two sprinted towards the nursery. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The rogue hissed at the two toms. The dark rogue stepped out of the shadow of the bushes, and walked closer to the large canyon in the ground that ThunderClan called home. It sniffed cautiously, then slithered down into the canyon, unseen in the gathering darkness. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "I can't wait for my kits!" An elderly white cat with ginger patches meowed in a hoarse voice, quivering in excitement. "This shall be your 3rd litter, Brightheart." A dark ginger she-cat meowed. "I know." Brightheart's eyes clouded with grief, "I miss Gingerfur, Snowheart, and Thunderpelt." Gingerfur, Snowheart, and Thunderpelt had been Brightheart's 2nd litter, but they had died from a rogue ambush, they were slaughtered by a rogue named Blood. But Cloudtail had avenged his kit's deaths by killing Blood in the slowest way, by tearing his pelt off, and starving him to death, then he sent the dead cat down a river, where it fell over a steep waterfall. But that did not help the grief of her whole litter dying. Three of Sorreltail's kits had died from Blood's attack, only one had survied. Dapplefur was her name. A few days after the death of Sorreltail's three kits, a prophecy had came: Ice will distroy the storm, and great bloodlust is yet to come...darkness will take over, and only the one bearing lightning will save the Clans..."I can't wait for my kits either!" A snowy white queen meowed, rubbing her swollen stomach. "My grandkits." Brightheart purred, and touched her daughter's nose with the tip of her tail. Suddenly a despreate yowl errupted from the ginger she-cat. "Squirrelflight!" Whitenose shrieked. Dapplefur, who was passing by, heard the scream, and ran into the medincine cat's den. "Leafpool!" She called breathlessly. Leafpool came hurtling out of her den with a bundle of herbs in her mouth. She dropped them in the nursery. "Back away!" Leafpool ordered the other queens, who were wide-eyed with fear. Leafpool strocked her sister's belly, and in a agonizing cater-waul, Squirrelflight gave birth to two she-cats. Leafpool licked one she-kit, and gave the other one to Brightheart, who licked furiuosly at the newborn. Another spasm shook Squirrelflight dark ginger body, and in another despreate yowl she gave birth to one tom. Squirrelflight then gasped, and one final fourth kit came out. A moment later, and Ashfur came pelting in the nursery. "You name the toms, and I'll name the she-kits." Squirrelflight murmured. "How about Wolfkit." He mewed and nudged the pale gray tomkit, "and Breezekit." He said, nudging the small gray and white tomkit. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dapplefur heaved a sigh of relief when she heard Squirrelflight's kits were healthy, and there was four of them. She padded toward the pile of fresh-kill, and a dark tabby paw lashed out and caught her on the side of her head. She went down with a sharp grunt, and got up, and shook herself, she pricked her ears, then leaped in the bushes from where the paws had come from. The rogue was not prepared for the attack, and rolled, and hit the wall of the rock. The rogue was stunned for a heartbeat, then hurled himself at Dapplefur, and they tumbled out in the middle of ThunderClan camp. Who the mousedung is this? A rogue on my territory? Dapplefur pinned the rogue down, and at once she had knew who this was. "Hawkfrost!"
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 5, 2006 9:32:26 GMT -5
Prettykit shall be known as Firekit. Firekit's warrior name shall be known as Firetail.
Okay, here's step one of making a cat plushie.
Step 1: Cut the legs in a half a circle shape and sew from one point tip to another so you'll have openings for the stuffing.
Step 2: Cut out a big circle for the body and sew all the way around it, but leave an opening for the stuffing.
Step 3: Cut out a little circle for the head and sew all the way around it, but leave and opening for the stuffing.
Step 4: Cut out a long thin rectangle for the tail ans sew all the way around it, but leave an opening for the stuffing.
Step 5: Cut out two small triangles for the ears and sew all the way aroud them.
Step 6: Attach all of the parts together with your needle and thread.
Step 7: If you wish to add patches, sew them onto your plushie.
Step 8: Get two buttons for the eyes and sew the onto your plushies face.
Well, I'm sure you know how to do the rest. If you got anymore questions, feel free to ask me. I tried to make the steps sound easy as possible.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 10, 2006 22:23:28 GMT -5
Thanks Saberclaw. You're a great friend. *gives Saberclaw the real Firestar and Squirrelflight* Chapter Three Meanwhile, in ShadowClan camp... Tawnypelt trotted out of the warrior's den. "You're late getting up." Cedarheart growled at her as she came out into the cool sunlight. "Oh shut up Cedarheart." Oakfur muttered, he went next to Tawnypelt. "Don't mind him." He murmured, "he's got a furball stuck somewhere." "Err...yeah." Tawnypelt meowed, and raced away toward the Marshpatch (where SC gathers) "I'm sorry I was late getting up." Tawnypelt yowled, "I will now organize the border and hunting patrols." Hmm...I think I will lead the border patrol. I will take Oakfur, and Browntail with me. Then Cedarheart, Whitecloud, and Rowanclaw will take hunting patrol. Tawnypelt thought with saticfaction. "Cedarheart will lead the hunting patrol with Whitecloud, and Rowanclaw!" Tawnypelt announced, "Then I will lead border patrol with Oakfur, and Browntail." With the patrols done, Cedarheart looked proudly around the clearing, waiting for his Clan mates to join him in the patrol. "I've never been on a border patrol in a while Tawnypelt!" Browntail mewed excitely. Tawnypelt's whiskers twitched with faint amusement, and she swung around, and summoned her Clanmates to follow her with the flick of her spotted tail. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Soon, Tawnypelt, Oakfur, and Browntail were on the boundary with RiverClan. "Nothing here Tawnypelt." Oakfur growled. He almost sounded disappointed. "You two go, I will try to hunt for a while." Tawnypelt hissed softly. Browntail and Oakfur raced away with the flick of their tail to show their farewell. Tawnypelt sniffed in deeply, suddenly she scented RiverClan! Before she knew it, a black cat crashed into her. With a loud hiss of surprise, Tawnypelt whirthed on the ground, and spat, claws extended. She tore her claws through the flesh of her attacker, and with a loud screech of agony, the cat rolled off of her, blood bright against the darkness of the marsh. "Tawnypelt!" The tom gasped. "Reedwhisker?" Tawnypelt snarled, "what are you doing in ShadowClan territory?" "I'm sorry." Reedwhisker apologized, bowing his head down in a mixture of shame and embarassment. "I thought you were Sasha." Sasha was the rouge who was mother to Hawkfrost and Mothwing of RiverClan. Their father had been the murderous traitor, Tigerclaw, who was Tawnypelt's father as well. "How can I look like Sasha?" Tawnypelt snapped, "do I look a least bit like her? I'm a tortishell for StarClan's sake! Not a golden tabby!" Reedwhisker looked stunned from Tawnypelt's snapping, but he didn't flinch as he met her burning green gaze. He trembled for a second. Then straightened himself. "Don't forget I'm RiverClan's deputy!" He snarled. "You still have no right to be on ShadowClan hunting grounds! Leave, or die!" Tawnypelt bared her teeth, and slashed her paw down a pine tree that was close by. Reedwhisker refused to flee, he scratched his back paws, scraping the grass and grit off the ground to leave just bare dirt. Tawnypelt was just about to sound an alarm call, when a cat leaped on her, and pinned her to the ground. The cat's burning eyes, and gleaming teeth lunged toward her, and bit her throat. Tawnypelt let out a choking yowl and prepared to meet StarClan.
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 11, 2006 10:12:34 GMT -5
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 11, 2006 13:40:05 GMT -5
Wow dat waz good! write more!
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 11, 2006 20:15:21 GMT -5
Moony! Tigerfur! As you all may know, I'm a senior in high school. I'm seventeen. I'm going to graduate in June, and I'll be eighteeen as well. I'm so excited! I have to share this news with you all!
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