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Post by Tear on Dec 17, 2006 17:49:32 GMT -5
nice story Moony
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 17, 2006 18:24:53 GMT -5
You're an excellent writer Moony! I posted a chapter in Nova Lee! It's in Non-Warriors Stories! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Dec 21, 2006 19:18:48 GMT -5
Thank you all! Here's the next chapter: Chapter Nine Tawnypelt, flanked by Reedwhisker, sprang and caught Sasha on her back. Sasha snarled, whipped around, and raked her claws over Tawnypelt's face. Tawnypelt spat at Sasha, hissed, and bit down on her spine. Sasha let out a caterwaul, but Reedwhisker clawed her head, forcing her to turn the other way. Mothwing let out a shriek of fury, and leaped into the fray, landing square on Tawnypelt's shoulders. Tawnypelt jumped off of Sasha, and buckled up, trying to give Mothwind whip-lash. It worked, Mothwing's head jerked up, and she yowled at the pain, but her neck was not broken. Mothwing stumbled clumsily off of Tawnypelt, and retreated into RiverClan camp, yowling. Sasha paused to watch her daughter go, kicked Reedwhisker, and sprang after her, leaving a trail of blood behind. Reedwhisker flew, and hit a strong pinetree at the edge of ShadowClan's territory. He hit it with a strong bash, and fell to the ground like a fresh-kill pile. Tawnypelt sprinted to him, and licked his ears. "Reedwhisker? Are you alright?" She hissed quietly. But the tomcat would not move.
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 21, 2006 20:48:48 GMT -5
You didn't comment my story Moony! My story is called Nova Lee. It's in Non-Warriors Stories. You did a swell job with your story though!
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 22, 2006 20:25:07 GMT -5
Hi Moony! I just posted a chapter in Nova Lee! Please, check it out! It's in Non-Warriors Stories. I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Dec 30, 2006 15:01:04 GMT -5
I did comment Saberclaw! Go check it out! Thanks! Chapter Ten Dappletail stopped as soon as she got to the horseplace. She remembered when her father, Brackenfur told her that there was horseplace cats there, and a cat named Daisy had stayed with the Clan. But soon she had moved out, and lived back in the horseplace, but left her kits with the Clan because the kits didn't know any better then living in the forest with the Clan cats. Later, Daisy had been killed by a monster traveling on the Thunderpath near ThunderClan territory, and her kits had gotten run over too when they went to fetch and burry her body. Dappletail let a growl rumble in her throat, Brackenfur, her own father had doubted her loyality to the Clan when she had felt sympathy for the banished Clan cat, Hawkfrost when Graystar had snarled at him, so she had run away. She had planned to catch Hawkfrost on his way out of ThunderClan camp, so they could find a place to settle in. A stab of horror pierced her heart, she knew she was falling in love with the traitor. She shook her head. You can't! She scolded herself, Your the daughter of the ThunderClan deputy, and granddaughter of the brave ThunderClan deputy, Whitestorm.But I'm banished now. She agrued with herself, You can do whatever you want.She nodded, pleased, and ran towards the RiverClan river. She then spied a tawny shape dart threw the trees. She strained her eyes, and searched her memory of who it might be. Her eyes darted around and she saw an unconious shape by the river, it's black fur stirring in the calm breeze. Isn't that Reedwhisker? Dappletail thought. She then darted her eyes to the still-running tawny shape. She watched it closely, and realized, Is that... "Tawnypelt!"
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 30, 2006 23:11:33 GMT -5
Nice chapter Moony! I just typed a chapter in Nova Lee. It's in Non-Warriors Stories!
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 1, 2007 18:36:48 GMT -5
Way to go Moony!
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Post by Tear on Jan 1, 2007 19:11:41 GMT -5
Great story Moony!
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Post by Tigerfur on Jan 2, 2007 14:12:23 GMT -5
That was a good chapter Moony! type more!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 6, 2007 9:47:58 GMT -5
I just typed another chapter in Nova Lee! Please, check it out!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Jan 10, 2007 18:15:36 GMT -5
Chapter Eleven Tawnypelt streaked down the path, but stopped when she saw Dapplefur. What in StarClan's name is that cat doing here? This is RiverClan territory!Tawnypelt shook her head, and kept running, she needed a medicine cat. "Tawnypelt! Wait up!" Dapplefur yelled at Tawnypelt, but Tawnypelt refused to stop. "No!" Tawnypelt hissed. "What are you doing on RiverClan territory?" Dapplefur shot back at Tawnypelt. "I'm about to ask you the same question!" Tawnypelt spat, "Now leave me alone!" "Let me come with you!" Dapplefur called, and she sped faster, her paws pounding in the damp ground of RiverClan territory. "No! Now get away from me!" Tawnypelt hissed, and sped even faster, and disappeared into the undergrowth. Tawnypelt burst into ShadowClan territory. I must get Littlecloud!She stopped by an old oak tree to catch her breath. She panted, her throat burning with cold fire. A twig snapped behind her, she spun around to see a dappled pelt, much like her own, with blue eyes. It was Dapplefur. "What's wrong Tawnypelt?" Dapplefur asked, worry heavy in her meow, "Why do you keep running away from me? What are you doing? Where are you going?" Tawnypelt shook her pelt to clear away the twigs, dirt, moss, and other things off her fur, and whirled around, and ran off again. Tawnypelt swivled her ears around, and tried to catch the sound of pawsteps behind her, and there was. "Quit following me!" Tawnypelt snarled, and unseathed her claws, this cat was really getting on her nerves. "No!" Dapplefur hissed, "Not until I know what's wrong!" "Leave me alone!" "No!" Tawnypelt let out a furious hiss full of anger and annoyance, and leaped in midair, then pelted the other direction. She ran right into Dapplefur, and she pinned her down, claws unseathed. "Don't hurt me Tawnypelt! I just want to help!" Dapplefur pleaded. "The only way you'll help me is if you leave me alone!" Tawnypelt hissed. She let her up, "Now quit following me!" She through over her shoulder. "No!" Dapplefur spat, she took a huge leap and landed on Tawnypelt, and pinned her down, Tawnypelt twisted her down, then Dappletail twisted her down. "Speak Tawnypelt!" Dapplefur ordered. "I won't let you up until you tell me what the matter is." "Don't order me around!" Tawnypelt hissed, "I don't take orders from you! You're not my leader! In fact, you're not even in my Clan!" "Clan or not, I'm going to now what the matter is!" Dapplefur retorted with a sharp growl. "Never!" Tawnypelt growled, "It is forbidden for you to know!" She twisted around and gave Dapplefur a very harsh bite on the paw, and Dapplefur hissed in agony. Tawnypelt streaked out of her grip, and sped into the forest, wishing she could tell Dapplefur what she needed to know.
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 10, 2007 19:02:51 GMT -5
*claps* great chapter! I just typed a chapter in Nova Lee! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Jan 12, 2007 19:29:54 GMT -5
That was really good, type more!
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Post by Tear on Jan 13, 2007 14:58:26 GMT -5
Great chapter, but your typed Dappletail instead of Dapplefur.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Jan 29, 2007 13:42:41 GMT -5
Thanks for that Hushpad! ;D Next Chapter: Chapter Twelve Tawnypelt quick snatched some herbs from inside ShadowClan territory, it was too risky to get her medicine cat, Tawnypelt's leader had gotten really prickly during her moons as leader, and Tawnypelt didn't want to risk her loyality to save a cat from another Clan. She quickly streaked across the marshy ground, and continued to pelt to RiverClan territory to treat the injured tom. The crunch of leaves behind her made her stop and grow suddenly alert, she looked behind her, hoping to see the creature that crunched the leaves behind her tawny tail. Nothing. She shook her pelt roughly, and continued on, hoping she wasn't too late for Reedwhisker, she could not bear the thought that he had been killed. The scratches on her fur stung like fire now as she pushed herself to go faster. Soon, she reached the edge of RiverClan territory. Reedwhisker was in the same place that she had left him in. She gave him some ragwort, poppyseeds, and juniper. She spread marigold and pressed on cobwebs on his wounds, and prayed to StarClan that he would be okay. The crunching of leaves then made her turn around... it was Dapplefur, and Sasha.
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Post by Tigerufr on Jan 29, 2007 18:21:14 GMT -5
No don't stop now, please continue! ;D
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