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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 13, 2006 22:14:53 GMT -5
Congradulations Saberclaw! I'm very happy for you! Sorry, but Warriors Destiny: Dusk is distroyed, I don't know what to write anymore. As for this story: next chapter will be up very soon!
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 15, 2006 5:15:48 GMT -5
Thanks for the happyness Moony. Just think, I'll be eighteen (a legal adult) and I'll be graduating!
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 15, 2006 19:10:45 GMT -5
Congrats Beautypelt! ;D
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 17, 2006 22:15:17 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 19, 2006 16:00:35 GMT -5
Your welcome! ;D
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 23, 2006 21:53:03 GMT -5
So sorry it took so long to put this chapter up!!! Chapter Four "Hawkfrost! What in StarClan's name are you doing here?" Dappletail snarled, and pinned him down tighter. "Trying to find a place to stay." Hawkfrost replied in an icy cold voice, "My Clan kicked me out." "Then why should we offer you a place here after you've been kicked out of your own Clan huh? Do you think we're that mouse-brained? Only a fool would let in a piece of fox dung like you!" Dappletail hissed in his face. "Then why offer me a chance then?" Hawkfrost laughed. "I didn't offer you a chance!" Dappletail spat, her fur straight up on her spine, she jabbed him in the neck with her paw. "Dappletail! What in StarClan's name do you have there?" Brambleclaw called. He let out a hiss of disbelief as he saw his defeated half-brother. "Expecting me?" Hawkfrost hissed at his brother. He got up slowly, and Dappletail let him. She knew that if Hawkfrost attacked, the whole of ThunderClan would be on him in a couple of heartbeats. Brambleclaw advanced, but Hawkfrost stopped. Brambleclaw let out a battle cry and hurled at the dark brown copy of himself, and they rolled on the ground, whirling and hissing, with blood spattering the ground. "Don't fight!" Dappletail called out suddenly, she was suddenly surprised by the worry in her voice, all for--Hawkfrost. She knew how powerful Brambleclaw was, for she had once attacked him in a battle with RiverClan, thinking he was Hawkfrost. "Stay out of this Dappletail!" Brambleclaw snarled at the she-cat, "This is between him, and me!" Dappletail could only watch in horror as Brambleclaw pinned the tom down, and bared his teeth, ready to kill.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 23, 2006 22:30:15 GMT -5
Chapter Five "Let her go!" Came a furious yowl from somewhere around Tawnypelt. Reedwhisker leaped on the cat that had almost killed Tawnypelt. They whirthed on the ground, and finally, the golden cat appeared on top. "Looking for me?" The she-cat hissed. "Sasha!" Reedwhisker exclaimed, but that only made his struggle harder. "Expecting me?" Sasha spat as she lowered her teeth, and threatened his neck with a bite. Tawnypelt finally gathered enough strength to leap and catch Sasha by surprise, then golden she-cat rolled over in instinct, and whipped around to face her attacker. "Tawnypelt!" Sasha hissed, "My daughter." "I am not your daughter!" Tawnypelt hissed. She unseathed her claws in anger. How dare this rogue say Tawnypelt was her kin! She leaped at Sasha again, when a yowl stopped her... Mothwing!
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 23, 2006 22:43:21 GMT -5
Don't stop now, PLEASE write more! ;D
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 23, 2006 23:54:45 GMT -5
kk, Here's the next one! (wow I'm going fast!) Chapter Six Dappletail leaped at Brambleclaw, right before he was about to kill his helpless brother. Hawkfrost stood there, dazzed, then shook his long pelt, and gave his head a shake. Brambleclaw on the other paw, whirthed around in the dust, pinned by Dappletail. "What the mousedung did you do that for!" Brambleclaw hissed. "I could've killed him, and poof! No more problem!" "ThunderClan warriors do not need to kill unless they need to." Dappletail spat, reciting the words Lionheart had used when Firestar was about to kill the ShadowClan warrior; Clawface--the cat who had killed Firestar's first love, and ThunderClan's medicine cat as well. "Who cares!" Brambleclaw snarled, and leaped up on Dappletail. "No--she's right." Came a meow from the nursery. Sorreltail then stepped out before them, her tortishell fur gleaming in the sunlight. "Thank you mother." Dappletail meowed, and dipped her head. Dappletail then ran to Hawkfrost, who spat out blood from his mouth. "Are you okay?" She asked when she got to him. "Fine." He spat, and spit out more blood from his mouth. "I was worried about you." Dappletail murmured before she could realize what she was saying--this was a banished rogue traitor for StarClan's sake! "Really?" Hawkfrost murmured back, his voice suddenly getting soft, and gentle. "Enough of this nonsense!" Came a yowl that broke the moment. Graystar hurled down the Highrock. "Hawkfrost!" He hissed with a retch of disgust. "Sorry Graystar, I was just passing through." Hawkfrost meowed, and dipped his head to the ThunderClan leader. "Don't fill me in with your smooth talk! Get out of our camp!" Graystar snarled, and turned away, his tail lashing in anger. He then stopped and turned around, "Brambleclaw! I want to see you in my den! Now!" With that, Brambleclaw sprinted after Graystar. Brackenfur then stepped toward Hawkfrost and Dappletail. "Hawkfrost, get out of our camp like Graystar said. Dappletail, come with me." Brackenfur ordered with the flick of his ears. Hawkfrost knew more then to argue, and leaped into the undergrowth, and climbed up the cavern, so he was well out of the ThunderClan camp. Dappletail paused to watch him go, she suddenly felt sad that he had left, then she shook her head, a thought had crossed her mind, was she in love with Hawkfrost?
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 24, 2006 0:51:59 GMT -5
That was WONDERFUL! I can't wait for the next chapter!*starts drooling*
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 24, 2006 18:56:54 GMT -5
Great chappies Moony! Write more!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 25, 2006 11:59:11 GMT -5
Thank you! Here's the next chapter! Chapter Seven "Tawnypelt! What in StarClan's name are you doing to my mother!" Mothwing snarled at her half-sister. "She attacked me that's why!" Tawnypelt hissed, and seathed her claws, but remained pinning Sasha to the peaty soil of RiverClan territory. "Let go of my mother! She did nothing wrong!" Mothwing ordered, unseathing her claws. Tawnypelt curled her lip, revealing her thorn sharp teeth. She lashed her tail. "Make me." She growled. Mothwing leaped, but in the same heartbeat, Reedwhisker smashed into her underbelly, knocking the breath out of her, and sending her spinning to the ground. She fell down with a sharp bam, and got up again, shaking the leaves and grit from her golden pelt. "How dare you attack me Reedwhisker!" Mothwing snarled, and fixed her furious hot blue stare on the deputy of RiverClan. Tawnypelt let Sasha up, but kept one green eye on her just in case she used the warriors best weapon, the element of surprise. "Stop fighting!" Reedwhisker yowled, but it did no use, because the she-cats only advanced closer into fighting range. Reedwhisker realized he had no choice, he backed up Tawnypelt with a hiss. Sasha went to stand with her daughter. A pair of kin, and a pair of rivals were about to attack.
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Post by Firelover on Nov 25, 2006 16:50:45 GMT -5
Keep going ! i hope you review my story!
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 25, 2006 17:06:47 GMT -5
Great chappie Moony! More! More!! MORE!!!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Dec 10, 2006 15:01:43 GMT -5
Here's the next chapter! So sorry it took so long! Chapter Eight "What do you want?" Dappletail asked once her and Brackenfur had gone in the warriors den. "Why were you attacking so sad when Hawkfrost left?" He asked with the flick of his tail, "You seemed upset that he left? Can you explain?" "No..." Dappletail meowed, slightly confused by her father's question. "I didn't feel sad, I just felt sad that Graystar screamed at him like that! I don't think that Hawkfrost meant any harm." "But he slapped you with his paw!" Brackenfur exclaimed, his voice filled with protest. "He probably didn't know I was there." Dappletail pointed out. "I mean, it is getting dark out." She glanced out of the den, she sun was just beginning to set. "Accident or not." Brackenfur spat. "He shouldn't be in our camp, he's been banished from his own Clan, so stay away from him." His tail lashed. "You think I would actually see that stinkin' furball!" Dappletail hissed, "Your wrong!" She sprinted out of the den, and climbed up the hole that made ThunderClan's camp. She walked into the woods, and stopped by a tree. She lashed out and slashed the bark of the tree in fury. How dare Brackenfur think I would meet that rogue! She thought. Does my own father doubt my loyality to ThunderClan?Slash!Does he think that I like Hawkfrost just because I felt sympathy for him when Graystar snarled at him?Slash!Maybe I should just leave, they wouldn't care if I'd become a rogue! They doubt my loyality anyway!With that furious thought in her mind, Dappletail sprinted far away from ThunderClan camp, not caring to glance back to see if anyone would follow.
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Post by Tigerfur on Dec 10, 2006 15:17:53 GMT -5
That was a great chapter, write more! ;D
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Post by Grayshadow on Dec 11, 2006 9:24:37 GMT -5
Yea! Keep going!
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