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Post by Logged out Moo on Jan 30, 2007 22:15:56 GMT -5
Next chapter! Chapter Thirteen "What in StarClan's name are you doing back here?" Tawnypelt snarled at Dapplefur, "I told you to beat it!" She ignored the hiss in Dapplefur's throat and continued to tend to Reedwhisker. "So...this is what you were hiding from me?" Dapplefur scoffed, "An injured Reedwhisker?" ((( MAJOR LOL))) "No." Tawnypelt winced, "That's not what I have been hiding from you, if I told you, you're Clan would kill you, and me too." "Tell me, they doubt my loyality. My own father said that I would go off with Hawkfrost!" Dapplefur's spine fur bristled and she dug unsheathed claws into the ground, "Can you believe that?" "Your father..." Tawnypelt whispered, suddenly feeling very sad, tears blurred her eyes, but she blinked them away, she couldn't let Dapplefur know that she was about to cry. "What's wrong Tawnypelt?" Sasha sneered, unable to help herself, "You gonna cry?" "Shut up!" Tawnypelt hissed, but her voice faultered at the last note, and it sounded squeaky and whinny. She dug her claws down, unable to keep herself from attacking Sasha. She whirled around, one singal tear dripped down her white chin, her green eyes blazed in fury, Sasha knew Tawnypelt's dreaded secret. "Leave Tawnypelt alone." Dapplefur growled, turning around to advance on the tawny colored she-cat. "Oh, don't hurt me." Sasha growled saractisly, her eyes narrowing into tiny blue-colored slits. "Don't you dare hurt Dapplefur." Tawnypelt drew up to defend the ThunderClan she-cat. Sasha's claws slid out, "You would take her side over mine? That's a shame, let us see what you do, when I attack her!" Sasha leaped onto Dapplefur, hissed with a terrible screech. "NOO!" Tawnypelt yowled, and tried to take Sasha off of her. "Don't you dare hurt my daughter!"
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Post by Tigerfur on Jan 31, 2007 15:54:33 GMT -5
No don't stop now, what did she mean by 'my daughter'? And so you know, i'm starting my own story to, its called Tale Of The Warriors, and you can be part of it if you want.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Feb 3, 2007 22:33:06 GMT -5
Sure, I'll check that story out Tigerfur! About the 'my daughter' thing, you'll find out soon! Chapter Fourteen Dapplefur froze in her struggle against Sasha, but Sasha did not stop attacking her. Sasha whipped her claws over Dapplefur's face, and left a terrible scar. Blood dripped down, Dapplefur shook her head to get the blood out of her eyes. Tawnypelt shook with emotion, and then after a couple of heartbeats, leaped and thundered her hindpaws on Sasha unprotected stomach. Sasha was flung onto the ground, she cut her claws into the peaty soil, and regained her balance, and shook her paws, trying to get the muck out of her claws. "No." Dapplefur whispered. Tawnypelt walked towards her. "No, m-my mother w-was Sorreltail." Dapplefur meowed, her voice shaking. "No, " Tawnypelt whispered, a thorn of regret piercing her. "I'm your mother, I gave you to Sorreltail because I would have been banished from my Clan if they had discovered who your father was. I would have been killed, and if I was, who would take care of you? You would have never known your real mother. I'm sorry Dapplefur, but it's true." Dapplefur shook her head slowly, "No!" She yowled, "You can't be my mother! Your a ShadowClan cat!" "It's true." Sasha sneered, getting closer, "And do you want to know who your father was?" Dapplefur nodded slowly, wondering if she could trust Sasha. "He was..." Sasha cut off as Reedwhisker began to stirr, his paws twitched. Sasha suddenly grew tense, turned around, turned back to look at the waking-up Reedwhisker, then whirled around in mid-air and sped off into the forest as if badgers were chasing her. "I wonder whats gotten into her." Tawnypelt snorted. She turned around to Reedwhisker, "You okay?" She asked, her voice hard. "Yes, thank y-you Tawnypelt." Reedwhisker said, getting up slowly on his shaking legs. Tawnypelt supported him with her shoulder, then when he could stand up, she backed up. "You had better get back to RiverClan." Tawnypelt pointed out, "They will wonder where you have gone." Reedwhisker nodded, and threw a 'thank you' over his shoulder as he ran off into RiverClan territory. Tawnypelt watched him until she couldn't see him anymore, then turned around to Dapplefur. "Who was my father?" Dapplefur asked Tawnypelt. "Your father." Tawnypelt whispered. "He was... an evil cat..." "Tell me." Dapplefur mewed, her voice pressing for more information. "Your father was not of ShadowClan, he lived in WindClan, his name was Webfoot."
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 4, 2007 0:01:42 GMT -5
Great chapter! But that was really unexpected. ;D
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Feb 4, 2007 19:26:17 GMT -5
In a good way right? =3 Chapter Fifteen "Tell me the story." Dapplefur murmured, sitting down, and curling her tawny tail over her black paws. "Well..." Tawnypelt sat down. "I was at a gathering one early Leaf-bare, and Webfoot was sitting some few mousetails away from me. I caught his eye, and we looked into each-other's eyes, it was sort-of a love-at-first-sight thing. He walked over to me, and we began to talk, he told me some of the tales that happened in WindClan, like when Bluestar had accused WindClan of stealing prey, and when Brokenstar drove out WindClan from their home. I had heard these stories before, but not in such detail, Webfoot was a great storyteller, and we talked for hours. Soon, I knew we were in love, so every half-moon we would meet at Fourtrees. He soon confessed he loved me, and I said the same. Soon after one of our Fourtrees meetings, I saw him run back... but not in the direction of WindClan territory, in the direction of ThunderClan territory. I followed him, and saw him talking with some rogues that I had seen in BloodClan. They talked for a little while, then they ran off, straight into ThunderClan's turf. I continued to follow them, and saw them attack Brightheart's 2nd litter of kits, I can't remember their names, because they were going to the gathering that night. I saw Webfoot take a ginger one down, h-he sliced her neck, and she died in front of my eyes, he then attacked another cat, and killed him, then killed a final cat, then ran off before anyone could see. I hated him for that, and later, I said I would never meet him again, he tried to explain, but I wouldn't listen? How could you explain something like that? I later found out, that I was pregnant with his kits, and you were the only one to survive, all of your brothers and sisters died from the cold, but you didn't. I told Littlecloud, and he told Leafpool, and Sorreltail and Leafpool are best friends, so Leafpool took you to ThunderClan, because ShadowClan territory couldn't support you, it was a big famine when you were born, and there was some of the coldest nights in that season. Sorreltail took you in and called you her kit, but you were never really her's, Sorreltail was the only one I could turn to, because she looks like you. I never told your father that I was pregnant with his kits, and if he knew, the word would spread, and our Clans would banish us from our Clans." "But, why didn't they banish Webfoot?" Dapplefur asked. "Webfoot is an elderly cat, and they need him for fighting purposes, and plus, I'm the one that really knows what happened on the day of Brightheart's kit's deaths." Tawnypelt explained. "Tawnypelt? Is that you?" Came a raspy voice. "Oh dear." Tawnypelt meowed. "Tawnypelt!" The voice came again, a dark gray tom appeared, his pelt was badly scared, and his ears were shredded. "Go away! I hate you!" Tawnypelt hissed, and lashed her tail. It was Webfoot.
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Post by Tear on Feb 4, 2007 20:46:35 GMT -5
Great chapters Moony!!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 5, 2007 18:44:00 GMT -5
Intresting chapters Moony! I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 5, 2007 18:46:12 GMT -5
To answer your question Moony, yes in a good way it was unexpected, and by the wat that was an AWESOME chapter!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Feb 7, 2007 20:52:42 GMT -5
Thanks! Sorry I haven't updated in a while! Here's the next chappy! =3 Chapter Sixteen Dappletail let out a whistle of air, "father." She whispered, her eyes wide, and tail lashing slowly back and forth. "Tawnypelt." Webfoot meowed, taking a step backwords. "I told you to go away! You're not wanted anywhere! So why bother showing up for me!" Tawnypelt hissed, and turned her back on him, and lashed her tail. "Tawnypelt... who is this?" Webfoot asked, his voice softening. "That's Dappletail..." Tawnypelt hissed, "Now go away, and leave your dau..." She stopped abruptly, and turned her head. "Daughter?" Webfoot whispered, "That's my daughter?" He gazed into Dappletail's blue eyes, "She has my eyes." He sighed. "No." Dappletail meowed, she backed closer to Tawnypelt. "Your not my father, get away from me." Webfoot advanced closer. "Dappletail... you are my daughter." "No I'm not!" Dappletail yowled, she unseathed her claws, tears running down her eyes, "Go away." Webfoot stopped, his paws neading in the grass nervously. "Dappletail..." "I said go away you stupid piece of rotten foxdung!" Dappletail hissed, and bared her teeth, her blue eyes burned and her eyes seemed to light up in the dark sky. Tears continued to roll down her cheeks. "But..." Dappletail cut Webfoot off, "You killed my best friends... my brothers and sisters, I hate you!" Dappletail shrieked, and ran to Webfoot and scratched him on the shoulder as she tore in the other direction, her paws thumping in the crunchy leaves. Dappletail settled herself by a tree, and cried herself to sleep. Her father was a killer.
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 8, 2007 9:18:28 GMT -5
oh no! keep going!
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 9, 2007 14:51:58 GMT -5
That was a really good chapter, keep going!
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Post by Tear on Feb 9, 2007 19:25:47 GMT -5
That was sad
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Feb 10, 2007 12:07:46 GMT -5
Thank you Firelover and Tigerfur! I know Hushpad, but sometimes you go to add a little drama, poor little Dapplefur... Don't worry, she'll get over it! Next chapter will be up in a little while!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on May 5, 2007 18:29:06 GMT -5
Okay, here's the next one: Chapter Seventeen [/center] Dapplefur awoke, and it was almost dawn, the coils of sunrays stretching out into the horizon. She rose up, and discovered she wasn't in the same place she had been before when she had discovered the horrible truth. Webfoot was her father, and Tawnypelt was her mother. She still couldn't believe it, and was telling herself it had all been a dream, she had fallen asleep on her journey, and then drempt the whole thing up. She got up, and stetched her back, then her shoulders and let out a yawn. She looked around at her surroundings. She was in a grassy place, and she could see a river in the distance, a single tree stood right beside her, and she smelled the strong scent of RiverClan. She suddenly heard pawsteps, and a dark brown tabby appeared from in the tree she was standing under. She let out a hiss, and unseathed her claws and prepared for a fight. The tom didn't look threatning, he just leaped down from the tree, gave his shoulder a couple of quick licks. His icy blue gaze stared in her dark blue one. "Hawkfrost." She whispered. "Dapplefur, I'm so glad your awake! What were you doing in ShadowClan territory anyway?" The dark tabby gave her a quick sniff and swept his gaze up and down her tortoiseshell body. "I-I don't r-remember." Dapplefur stammered, "All I remember is that Tawnypelt told me she was my mother and Webfoot was my father." She suddenly stopped, and realized she'd said too much. "But it was most likely a dream." She added quickly, by the shock on Hawkfrost's face, he didn't seem convinced. "I don't believe you." He meowed sternly. Dapplefur looked down at her paws, and sighed, she slumped on the grass and started dabbing at a beetle lazily. She laid her head down on her paws, "I don't know what to do." She meowed softly. She expected Hawkfrost to run and tell Mistystar what he had found on RiverClan territory, and Mistystar would send a patrol to drive her out, but instead Hawkfrost curled up beside her, sympathy in his icy stare. "I know how you feel." He murmured, "Not feeling like you belong anywhere, and feeling like you've been lied to all your life." His tabby pelt mingled with her tortoiseshell one, and a jolt of pleasure went up Dapplefur's spine. She gazed up at the rising sun, lost in thought, then turned her head and starred into Hawkfrost's eyes. She licked his cheek before she knew what she was doing. She suddenly flinched, and looked at the ground in embarrassment. "No need to be embarrassed Dapplefur." Hawkfrost whispered into her ear, her licked her cheek in return, and they sat there in the sunlight, talking. Dapplefur never wanted this moment to end.
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Post by Tear on May 5, 2007 19:06:23 GMT -5
Asome chapter!
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Post by Tigerfur on May 6, 2007 13:46:25 GMT -5
Awwww, that was so sweet, that was a really good chapter, can't wait for the next one.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Jun 5, 2007 21:07:54 GMT -5
Chapter Eighteen Dappletail let out a sigh as the sun sank below the horizon, a blazing ball of red and orange flames, letting out streaks of beautiful purple, and pink, stretch across the sky. Hawkfrost's pawsteps sounded in the grass behind her, and she twisted her neck. He was carring a freshly killed mouse, and a plump fish in his jaws. He dropped the warm-smelling fresh-kill by Dappletail's nose, and flicked his ear. "I thought you might be hungry." Hawkfrost meowed, swiping his tongue around his jaws. Then he sat down in front of her, and peered into her dark blue eyes, waiting for her to choose. Dappletail felt embarrassment burning the tips of her dappled ears, and she chose the plump fish, it's flesh wet and slippery beneath her jaws. Hawkfrost twitched his ears in surprise. Then shrugged it off, and bit into the flesh of the mouse. Dappletail never tasted anything more delicious. It succulent, and warm, and tasted wonderful. Hawkfrost dug a hole into the ground, and burried the bones of the wood mouse, as a sign of respect for the mouse's life. The dappled she-cat nosed the fish skeleton into the hole, and the dark brown tabby warrior burried the bones with his muzzle. Dappletail looked at him as he worked, and he suddenly looked up at her, and their eyes locked. "Dappletail..." Hawkfrost breathed as their muzzles came close together. His eyes studied her's, and waited for permission. Sorry about the half-chapter, I'll finish it tomorrow!
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