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Post by Tigerkit on Sept 2, 2007 16:01:08 GMT -5
FANTASTIC chapter Beautypelt! I can't wait to see what happens next! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Sept 2, 2007 17:44:12 GMT -5
Thankyas!
Another Colony Found
All of the bats woke up. Night has come agian. They stretched their wings and flapped them. They flew out of the abandoned Human building. "That building was quite comfortable!" Fuzz squeaked. "It sure was!" Moth squeaked. "Vesper picked out a great place to roost!" Casaja squeaked. The bats decided to hunt for a while. Vesper spotted a plump moth fluttering about. She swooped down on it and grabbed it. Vesper chewed and swallowed. 'That moth didn't know what hit it!' Vesper thought to herself. *** Vesper ate thirty flies and forty large mosquitoes and flew off to join her traveling mates. *** The bats flew on. 'All we have to do is find an enormous pond.' Vesper thought to herself. So far, all Vesper could see were streams and wet trees in the rainforest. Vesper sighed and flew on. *** Vesper and the other bats flew almost all night long. "My wings are getting tired!" Moth whined. "I'm getting tired myself." Marieko panked. Vesper didn't want to give up now. She let out another sonar. To Vesper's hope, she spotted water. "I see water! We have to keep on flying!" Vesper screeched. "Probably another stream!" Kreeda muttered. The other bats sighed in exasperation and continued to follow Vesper. *** The bats were now half way towards the water with the morning sun rising. "It IS a pond!" Sokar exclaimed. "And a large one!" cried a female Vampwing. "Everyone, this might be the pond we're supposed to go! So, let's fly faster!" Vesper ordered. The bats strained as the flew faster. *** The bats were now so close to the pond. "We're almost there!" Vesper announced. "Hark!" shouted a male voice. "Who goes there?" demanded a female voice. The voices came from a large cave near the pond. Out of the cave, came fringe-lipped bats.
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Post by Tear on Sept 3, 2007 20:22:36 GMT -5
Oh no, Great Chapter
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Post by Tigerkit on Sept 4, 2007 14:29:09 GMT -5
AWESOME chapter! I'm glad they found the other bats, I hope they won't have trouble.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Sept 5, 2007 12:04:03 GMT -5
Thanks!
Fringewings
Vesper and her gang introduced themselves to the fringe-lipped bats. "Well, I'm Galara." the female squeaked. "And, I'm Moony." the male squeaked. "We're Fringewings." screeched a female. "We eat frogs." screeched a male. "That's why we look like this." screeched a female. "Greetings, traveling bats. I'm Gertchitrex, the leader of the Fringewings." squeaked a bulky male. "Please to meet you. Now, listen to me. I'll tell you all why my mates and I are here." Vesper squeaked. Vesper told the Fringewings about the mission. "With your help, we can defeat the Bloodwings for good!" Casaja squeaked. The thousands of Fringewings laughed. Dismay flooded Vesper's eyes. 'Looks like they won't help.' Vesper thought miserably to herself. Gretchitrex laughed and wiped away a tear. "Sorry, sorry! We shouldn't laugh. It's just, we all are just small bats and the Bloodwings are such huge ones!" Gretchitrex squeaked. "Not all of us are small! The Blackwings are almost as big as the Bloodwings and you Fringewings are MEDIUM-sized bats!" Moth squeaked. "Hmmm...maybe you're on to something!" Gretchitrex screeched. "Sir, sir! Don't tell me you're thinking about joining those losers!" a female Fringewing screeched angerily. "I don't know, Mistrel. True, their idea sounds ridiculous, but the Bloodwings are a danger. So, if there's a chance of killing them, maybe we should do something." Gretchitrex squeaked. "Great Nocturna! You're joking!" Mistrel snapped. "I said that I'm thinking about it!" Gretchitrex boomed. 'Please Nocturna, please let him say "Yes!"' Vesper thought to herself.
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Post by Tigerkit on Sept 5, 2007 14:38:11 GMT -5
GREAT chapter! ;D I hope he says yes to! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Sept 6, 2007 10:53:49 GMT -5
Thanks!
Journey Home
"Alright, Vesper. We'll join in the war." Gretchitrex squeaked. "Thank you! Thank you so much!!!" Vesper screeched. "Ugh!!!" Mistrel grunted in a disgusted voice. "Okay, now, let's head on back to the rain forest!" Vesper squeaked. "I hate rain forests!" Mistrel spat. "Tough ticks! You're coming and that's final!" Gretchitrex snarled. "Okay, now follow me!" Vesper squeaked. The bats flew after Vesper. "Vesper, may I ask you a question?" Gretchitrex asked. "You may." Vesper replied. "Why is your body all burnt up with a crusty nose?" Gretchitrex asked. "I fell into a fire and I dived into freezing cold water to put it out. I had a cold afterwards." Vesper answered. "Ouch." Gretchitrex squeaked. "Tell me about it!" Vesper muttered. The moon still shone bright as the bats began their journey to the rain forest.
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Post by Tear on Sept 14, 2007 19:45:46 GMT -5
Great Chapter!
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Post by Tigerkit on Sept 14, 2007 19:46:43 GMT -5
EXCELLENT chapter Beautypelt! ;D Sorry that I haven't posted in a really long time, I hope you update again really soon! ;D Vesper is the first main character of a story that I've read that hasn't had their eyes open for a mate,or is there?
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Sept 16, 2007 11:02:13 GMT -5
Thankies!
Another Bitter Rival
The bats flew on to the rainforest. Vesper was brimming with happiness that she was fianlly going home. "I still don't see why we have to help a bunch of leaf-nosed bats!" Mistrel screeched to Carsen. "Tell me about it!" Carsen muttered. Vesper shot Mistrel a glare. "That ugly one named Vesper really irritates me!" Mistrel screeched to Kreeda. "She really irritates me too!" Kreeda muttered. "Yeah well, you guys aren't exactly my first choices either!" Vesper spat. Mistrel ignored Vesper's outburst. "You were right, Spark, those Leafwings sure are hideous to look at!" Mistrel screeched to Spark. "Of course I'm right!" Spark replied. Vesper burned with anger. "And Trout, you are so cool! You pushed Vesper into the water once!" Mistrel screeched to Trout. "Thank you!" Trout replied. "Looks like I got another bitter rival!" Vesper muttered to herself.
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Post by Tigerkit on Sept 16, 2007 11:24:50 GMT -5
WONDERFUL chapter! ;D Sounds like Vesper has another burden on her. Update again soon! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Sept 17, 2007 8:19:45 GMT -5
Thanks!
Coming Home
The cresent moon shone on the bats as the fluttered on back to the rainforest. The rain forest was a long way back, but the bats were determined. The were determined to defeat the Bloodwings once and for all. But, Vesper was keeping extra close eye on Carsen, Trout, Spark, Kreeda, and Mistrel. She did NOT trust them at all. Especially the crimes they've commited. "Quit staring at us, Mutant!" Spark snarled. "You five know darn well that I don't trust either of you!" Vesper spat. "Well that's too bad! Our pathetic leaders ordered us to come!" Trout sneered. "Yeah, so get used to it!" Mistrel hissed. "And we don't want your ugly face to be looking at us!" Kreeda growled savagly. "Yeah, it's grossing us out!" Carsen snapped. "I'll do whatever I want to, you five toucan spats!" Vesper screeched in rage. "Kosak, Vesper's making fun of us!" Trout squeaking in a mock hurt voice. "Stop it, Vesper!" Kosak screeched in anger. Trout, Kreeda, Carsen, Spark, and Mistrel smirked at Vesper. Vesper shot them a glare and turned her head back to the horizon. 'I hope owls or Bloodwings devoure those five!' Vesper thought to herself. Vesper brushed that thought away and flew on. She didn't want to stay angery to long. She was fianlly coming home. She has been feeling homesick for a long time and she was finally coming home at last. 'I'm not letting those good-for-nothing bats ruin my happiness!' Vesper thought to herself. With that, she flew faster, so did her traveling mates.
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Post by Tigerkit on Sept 29, 2007 20:52:56 GMT -5
WONDERFUL chapter! ;D Really sorry that I haven't posted in a really long time, hope you update again soon! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Oct 3, 2007 11:44:45 GMT -5
Thankies!
Little Bat Lost
Vesper and her traveling mates flew on. It was morning, but it was still very dark. "I can't wait to see the look on the Bloodwings' faces when they see all of us with our colony!" Casaja squeaked in delight. "I know! They're going to wish they never met us!" Fuzz squeaked. I bet they're going to be shaking in their fur!" Muriel, a Blackwing female, squeaked. "Hey, has anybody seen Moth? She usually flies with us." Vesper screeched. Consern flooded Casaja's eyes. "She was just here a minute ago!" Fuzz screeched. "Moth? Moth!" Muriel screeched. "What's wrong?" Kosak screeched. "Moth is missing!!!" Casaja screeched at the top of her lungs. "Alright, don't panic, we'll find her." Grechitrex squeaked. "Why waste time looking for a lowly leaf-nosed bat? We should be get going!" Mistrel spat. Grechitrex bit her on the left wing. "She's NOT lowly! She's a fellow bat that needs our help! We're going to find her!" Grechitrex snarled. There was something uncomfortably dark in Mistrel and Kreeda's faces. Vesper shuddered. Mistrel and Kreeda are the ones responsible for Moth's disappearance! Rage flooded Vesper's body. Vesper desperatly wanted to rip off the two darkhearted bats' ears off, but she knew that won't help find Moth. "We'll split up. Well meet here in those hollow trees by sunrise! We WILL find her!" Kosak screeched. The bats split up. Carsen, Trout, Kreeda, Spark, and Mistrel are the only ones that flew into one of the hollow trees. They refused to help. "Big surprise!" Vesper muttered. Vesper flew with Casaja and Fuzz. "She disappeared not too long ago. She couldn't be far away." Fuzz squeaked. Vesper sure hoped that Fuzz was right.
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