Guardians of the Sky: The Prophecy

[Tear]

great chapter!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

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Fishingwings


Vesper woke up.
"About time you woke up, sleepy head! It's nightfall!" Casaja squeaked.
The dream made Vesper scared.
Very scared.
There were some bats she met and have yet to meet that can't be trusted.
'Who are the not trusted bats?' Vesper thought to herself.
Vesper knew that she must not tell any bat about her dream. She wanted to seek out the bats on her own. She had to be very watchful and careful.
"Well, let's go seek some more bat colonies." Noct sighed.
Vesper nodded.
Vesper and her crew flew off.
They flew away from the abandoned cave with regret.
'I must obey Mistress!' Vesper told herself.
She certainly wasn't going to find other bat colonies in that peaceful cave.
Vesper and her bats were flying near a lake.
To Vesper's fortune, she saw forty bats flying over the lake.
They were catching...fish!
"Those bats eat FISH???" Casaja exclaimed.
"Yes, we eat FISH! We're Fishing Bats!" one of the squeaked.
"Were the Fishingwings!" another one squeaked.
"We want to speak to your leader!" Moth squeaked.
"What for?" another one demanded.
"We have to as your leader something very impartant!" Vesper squeaked.
"Hover, I'll be right back." the fishing bat sighed.
The bat flew off.
A few moments later, the bat reappeared with a skinny elderly he-bat.
"My name is Kosak. What do you want to ask me?" the elderly bat squeaked.
Vesper told him about the Bloodwings and how they were killing her colonymates. She also told him about the Mistress dream.
"Great Nocturna! You asking me to take my colony and join you foolhardy bats to fight a war???" Kosak squeaked loudly.
"PLEASE, Kosak! It's for the good of all bats in Batdom! If we don't stop the Bloodwings from killing and eating bats, we'll be suffering loss for many moons to come!" Vesper squeaked.
"Well, the Bloodwings did slay and devoured ten of my best bats. Maybe we ought to join in this war." Kosak squeaked.
All of the FishingWings stared at Kosak.
"Are you mad, Kosak? What if we get killed???" a Fishingwing she-bat squeaked.
"Never say 'die' when we can try, Minnow." Kosak squeaked.
Minnow looked a little doubtful.
"All right, Vesper. We'll join you." Kosak squeaked.
A spark of light touched Vesper's heart.
Then, it faded.
'I wonder who are the untrusted bats in the Fishingwing colony...' Vesper wondered.

[Tear]

Cool chapter.

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

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Suspicion


The bats began to hunt.
The Fishingwings hunted for fish, the Vampwings hunted for blood, and the four Leafwings hunted for inscets.
Vesper already caught and devoured nine-hudred-six mosquitos and gnats.
Then, Vesper saw a big and plumb ghost moth.
'I caught one before and I can catch one agian!' Vesperthought to herself.
Vesper flew after the moth.
Vesper had to be careful about her sonar because some moths, such as ghost moths, can hear bat sonar and try to fool them.
Vesper saw the moth fly in zigzags.
That didn't fool Vepser. She continued to fly after it.
She senced that she got closer and closer to the moth.
But, she can only see slightly better than a human in the dead of night.
So, Vesper carefully let out a sonar.
Vesper knew where the moth was now and flew after it.
But, the moth heard her and flew in another direction.
Vesper flew after it, making out the moth's outlines.
Vesper got closer to the moth.
Vesper got closer and closer.
Then, clamp!
Vesper caught the moth.
She chewed it up and swallowed it.
"Good catch, Vesper!" Casaja squeaked.
"You're a great hunter!" Fuzz squeaked.
"Slick flying!" Moth squeaked.
Vesper was shocked. The arrogant Moth, just complimented her!
Then, Vesper saw a Fishingwing stare at her with narrowed eyes.
"Quit staring at her, Trout and hunt!" Kosak growled.
Trout gave Vesper another narrow-eyed stare.
Then, Trout growled and continued to hunt.
'Could that Trout be one of the not trusted bats?' Vesper wondered.

[Tear]

Great chapter!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Thankies!


On The Sky Agian


The bats finished thier meal and continued to fly, in search for other bat colonies.
Vesper couldn't get Trout off of her mind.
'He's got to be one of the not trusted bats!' Vesper though to herself.
The moon was thin and curved as a bat claw. Starlight showered on the bats, turning their fur to silver, making them look like spirits of Sky Haven.
Vesper flew next to Casaja.
"Casaja, I don't think that we can trust that Fishingwing, Trout." Vesper whispered to Casaja's left ear.
"Why in the world not?" Casaja whispered.
"He keeps staring at me through narrowed eyes!" I whispered.
"So?" Casaja squeaked
"So, he just looks suspicious!" I whispered.
"Just because he doesn't like you doesn't mean that he can not be trusted!" Casaja whispered.
"Just, be careful when you're near him, okay?" I whispered.
"Okay, mother! I will!" Casaja squeaked.
Vesper sighed and flew in the lead.
'I'm going to meet other bats, but some can not be trusted!' Vesper thought to herself.

Vesper and the bats flew alnight long. Dawn was rising.
The bats found refuge in a rain forest.
The bats huddled together and began to fall asleep.

[Tear]

Great Chapter!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Thankies!


Danger!


Night came.
Vesper and her companions woke up. The began their search agian.
Just as they flew off, Vesper heard something.
Something deadly.
Vesper turned around, and saw...twenty-five false-vampire bats!
"Guys! We got twenty-five false-vampire bats after us! Fly faster!" Vesper cried.
"Are they Bloodwings?" Casaja squeaked.
"I don't know!" Vesper squeaked.
The bats flew faster, trying to lose the carnivorous bats.
The huge bats still flew at Vesper and her friends.
"Fly faster!" Vesper screeched.
With that, they flew faster.
But, the flesh-eating bats flew faster as well.
Then, one of the false-vampire bats snatched a Fishingwing.
"Stream!!!" Kosak squeaked loudly.
The huge bat bit into the she-bat, killing her.
"NO!!!" The Fishingwings cried.
The big bat flew off with Stream.
Then, Vesper saw mist.
'We have to fly into the mist! We got to lose those false-vampire bats before they kill us all!' Vesper thought to herself.
Vesper and her friends flew into the mist.
So did the false-vampire bats.
They were all in the mist.
"Fly right!" Vesper whispered to her mates.
They obeyed.
Then, they were out of the mist.
To their great fortune, the false-vampire bats didn't follow them.
"We lost them!" Moth squeaked in relief.
"Well, let's keep on flying fast just in case!" Vesper squeaked.
They obeyed her.
'I sure hope we find reinforcment soon!' Vesper thought to herself.

[Tear]

Great Chapter! Danger is a great chapter title.

[ƒrФ§тƒire]

This is a very good story!!!!

It would be more interesting *being the critic* if you didn't used 'squeaked' after every word.

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Thankies!

Bats squeak. That's how they talk. That's why I type "squeaked" after almost every quote.



Loss For Kosak


"I can't believe that Stream's gone!" Kosak sobbed.
Vesper pitied the poor elder.
Vesper knew what's like to lose a bat close to you.
Minnow nuzzled Kosak.
"Sky Haven will honor her." Minnow promised.
Then I saw a look on Trout's face.
I didn't know if it was shock or dazed.
"She's safe in Sky Haven." Noct squeaked.
"Well, unless we want to lose anymore bats, let's keep on flying!" Vesper squeaked.
The bats flew two-hundred feet away from the deady mist.
Kosak still sobbed.
Vesper wanted to sob too.
She hated to see other bats suffer.
"She's gone! Gone!" Kosak wept.
"We'll never forget her." Minnow squeaked.
"Thanks!" Kosak wept as more tears dripped down his cheeks.
I silently prayed to Sky Haven that things will get better.

[Tear]

Sad, but great chapter

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Thank you!


Uneasy Allie


Vesper and her companions stopped for a meal.
Vesper spotted a bunch of crickets nearby.
She flew after them.
She caught three so far.
The crickets were fast, but Vesper was faster.
Every bug, including the bravest praying matis, feared Vesper.
Vesper was a mistress bug hunter.
She was fast, agile, and clever.
No bug is safe from Vesper.
Not even the most tricky moth can escape from Vesper.
Vesper has even been known to catch small tarantulas.
Vesper has now caught over forty crickets.
Vesper spotted a really large and fat cricket lying on a blade of grass.
Vesper's mouth watered as she silently flied towards the cricket.
The cricket saw Vesper and tried to hop away.
But, it was too late.
Vesper caught it.
Vesper quickly devoured the juicy cricket.
Feeling thirsty, Vesper flew towards the river for a drink.
Then, something slammed her into the water.
It was Trout.
"What did you do that for???" Vesper screeched as the river swept her away.
Trout said nothing and flew off.
Vesper tried to swim towards the shore, but the current was too strong.
Vesper tried to fly out of the water.
Vesper managed to fly out of the river just before she could fall off the waterfall.
Vesper landed on the ground and groomed herself dry.
'Why did he do that for?' Vesper thought to herself.
Now clean and dry, Vesper flew up and began to search for her companions.
Vesper knew that she had to be extra careful of Trout.

[Tear]

Great Chapter. Trout is evil.

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Thanks for the compliment!


In the Middle of Nowhere


Veper tried to tell Kosak about what Trout did to her, but Kosak believes that Trout is a loyal warrior and would never do anything like that.
"I telling the truth!" Vesper screeched.
"Kosak had always been loyal to me! Maybe you just accidentally bumpped into him and fell." Kosak squeaked.
"Yeah, I would never no anything like that!" Trout squeaked.
'Liar' Vesper thought to Trout as she glared at him.
"Uh, Ves, do you know where we are?" Casaja asked with a hint of uneasiness in her voice.
Vesper look.
There were no trees, caves, logs, or bushes in sight.
They were a thousand wingbeats away from the place they last slept in.
"I...I...don't...know." Vesper stammered.
"Then, we're lost!" Moth exclaimed.
"Just because we don't know where we are or where we're going, doesn't mean we're lost!" Fuzz squeaked.
"That's what lost is, stupid!" Trout screeched.
"Yeah!" Noct screeched.
"Oh great! Dawn's is starting to rise and we have no idea where we are!" Blood, a Vampwing screeched.
"This is all Vesper's fault!" Trout screeched.
Guilt flooded Vesper.
It was her fault.
Vesper began to feel really bad.
"Uh, guys?" Casaja squeaked.
"What?" Vesper squeaked.
"We're being followed!" Casaja squeaked.
The bats turned their heads, and saw a murder of crows chasing them.

[Tear]

Great Chapter.

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Thanks!


A Murder......of Crows


"Fly faster every one!" Vesper screeched at the top of her lungs.
With that, the bats flew faster.
So did the crows.
The crows cawed sinisterly.
The crows flew closer and closer to the bats.
A huge he-crow, obviously the leader of his murder, advanced towards a Vampwing.
The crow grabbed he-bat with his talons and killed him.
"Ozar!" Noct cried.
Without thinking, Vesper flew towards the lead crow.
Vesper landed on the crow's beak.
Vesper slashed the crow's eyes with her thumb claws, blinding him.
The crow cawed in agony and fell.
Vesper flew off the crow's beak.
Vesper quickly flew back in the lead of the bats.
"That was really stupid of you, Vesper! The crow could've killed you!" Fuzz spat.
"Hey, now that I defeated their leader, they'll leave us alone!" Vesper squeaked.
But, the crows still flew after them, cawing angerly and hurgerly.
"What were you saying that they'll leave us alone?" Casaja screeched.
"I can't believe it! I defeated their leader and they're still chasing us!" Vesper screeched angerly.
"Good Sky Haven! There must be at least a hundred on them there crows chasing after us!" Fuzz shrilled.
"What are we going to do???" Moth squeaked.
"Maybe we Vampwings can rip out them crows' throats with our sharp teeth!" Noct suggested.
"No, there are only thirty of you Vampwings and a hundred of those crows. They'll slaughter you guys before you could flap a wing!" Kosak squeaked darkly.
Noct shot Kosak a glare. She was a proud bat and didn't like to be dissed. But, she nodded in agreement and sighed.
"The crows outnumber us! We'll never be able to wound or kill them all! So, we have to try to lose them!" Vesper screeched.
"Maybe we should split up." Trout screeched.
"No! We're leaving no bat behind!" Vesper screeched.
Trout glared at Vesper with bared teeth.
'There's nothing we can lose the crows with! What are we going to do?' Vesper thought to herself.
Then, The bats saw a thousand bats flying towards the crows, screeching loudly.