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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 23, 2007 13:12:25 GMT -5
Thanks! I know! It is so sad! Suspects Vesper stared at Rannocko's corpse. She noticed that his throat was bloody. And the marks were a bat's bite marks. 'A bat killed him!' Vesper thought to herself in rage. Vesper got a closer look at the bite mark on Rannoko's throat. The marks were too small to be a Bloodwing's. Vesper realized that a bat she was traveling with killed Rannoko. But, who cloud be vicious enough to kill him? Vesper knew some bats that probably done it. Fishingwing Trout, Brownwing Spark, Vampwing Carsen, and Blackwing Kreeda. So, those were the suspects. But, the question is, WHICH of the four did it? But, Vesper realized that now wasn't the time to be pointing thumbs. "We should cremate him!" Marieko screeched loudly. Vesper nodded in agreement. Vesper and Marieko grabbed Rannocko with their feet and flew off with him. The other bats followed. --- Vesper and Marieko spotted an abandoned campfire. It blazed its red-orange flames. "Gently now." Marieko squeaked. "I will be most gentle." Vesper squeaked. "Kiss up!" Kreeda muttered. Vesper and Marieko laid Rannoko's body onto the fire. Vesper and Marieko darted away from the errupting flames. "We should say our prayers now." Marieko demanded. The bats circled around the fire, hovering above it in the sky. The closed their eyes and murmurred their prayers. This was so sad that Vesper cried while she said her prayers.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 23, 2007 20:21:04 GMT -5
I think it was all four of them! Traitors! WONDERFUL chapter Beautypelt! ;D
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Post by Tear on Aug 23, 2007 21:58:36 GMT -5
great chapter
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 24, 2007 11:04:35 GMT -5
Thankies!
Burning
Vesper silently said her prayers for the dead Rannocko. Then, Vesper felt a wing slapped agianst her back. HARD. Vesper went sprialing towards the fire. Vesper opened her eyes and screamed. All of the praying bats opened their eyes and gasped. "Hang on, Vesper!" Fuzz cried. "We'll save you!" Casaja screehed loudly. "With our own claws!" Moth cried. "Well, don't you three just hover there! Rescue her!" Marieko cried. The three Leafwings nodded and dived over towards Vesper. Vesper was still sprialing towards the hungery flames. Vesper kept on screaming. Vesper was getting close to the flames. Dangerously close. Vesper can smell the smoke. Vesper's eyes began to water. Them, a small piece of the fire touched Vesper's forehead. Vesper screeched in pure pain. Then, her whole body and head went into the fire. Fuzz, Casaja, and Moth stopped diving and hovered aboved the fire. "Oh no!!! We're too late!!!" Casaja cried. "Maybe not! Maybe Vesper can fly out of there!" Fuzz squeaked. "And if she does, we'll escort her to the nearest source of water!" Moth squeaked. Just then, Vesper flew out of the flames. Vesper's body and head was covered in fire. "Vesper!!! Follow us!!! We'll escort you to some water!!!" Fuzz screeched at the top of his lungs. Vesper nodded to show that she understood. Fuzz, Casaja, and Moth flew high in the sky. Vesper used her sonar to follow them. Although, it hurt Vesper very badly when she used it. The fire was burning her ears. Her whole head and body hurt in agony. But, Vesper knew if she wants to survive, she must follow them. To the bats' luck, they located a pond. "We're going to dive, Vesper!!!" Casaja screeched in top of her lungs. Vesper nodded. Then, the four bats began to dive. Vesper dived for a while, and then fell. "VESPER!!!" Casaja, Fuzz, and Moth screeched.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 24, 2007 22:05:18 GMT -5
That is not good at all! I hope vesper will be okay. FANTASTIC chapter! ;D Can't wait for more! ;D
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Post by Tear on Aug 24, 2007 22:24:53 GMT -5
Poor Vesper. Great Chapter.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 25, 2007 9:45:25 GMT -5
Thankies!
Freezing
Vesper quickly flapped her wings agian. She followed her friends to the pond. She made it over the pond. Then, she stopped flapping and fell in. SPLASH!!! She landed in the water. Down, down, down she sank. SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!! The flames were melted. Gone. Smoke sizzled out of the water. 'Ahh, much better!' Vesper thought to herself. Vesper's body didn't hurt anymore, but must of her fur was burnt away and her skin was coal-black. Vesper continued to sink. Then, Vesper began to get cold. Very cold. Very painfully cold. Vesper's eyes shot open and she thrusted herself upward. Vesper now craved for air. She used her wings to force herself out of the water. She went higher and higher. GASP!!! Vesper was out of the water. She gasped and breathed heavily. She paddled towards the shore. At last, her thumbs touched land. She shook her remaining fur dry. "Vesper! You're alive!" Casaja screeched in delight. "Alive!" Fuzz and Moth squeaked in joy. Vesper coughed and sneezed. 'Oh no...I've caught a cold!' Vesper thought to herself in dread. Vesper's freezing body shook violently.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 25, 2007 11:12:34 GMT -5
Uh-oh, thats not good. How is she going to lead the other bats when shes sick? AWESOME chapter! ;D Can't wait for more! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beauty on Aug 25, 2007 13:04:34 GMT -5
Thanks!
Rough Flying
Almost every single bat was very happy that Vesper survived. Marieko was hugging Vesper and kissing her. "Vesper, you're alive!" Marieko squeaked. Vesper sneezed. "Yes, but I've caught a cold." Vesper moaned. "Why am I not surprised." Kreeda sneered. Vesper's throat began to hurt. "Vesper, you just lead us to a cave or some where and you can sleep that nastiness out." Kosak squeaked. Vesper groaned. Can she manage a fly? Vesper knew she must. She used all her strength to flap her wings. She flew up with the other bats with Marieko flying behind her. Vesper let out a hacking cough. "Will you be okay?" Casaja asked. "I don't know." Vesper squeaked meekly. "Vesper, no offence, but try to fly far away from me. I don't want to catch your cold." Moth squeaked. "Neither do us!" Carsen grumbled. Vesper opened her mouth and nodded. Vesper flew in the lead. "Everyone, follow me!" Vesper screeched as loud as she could. It hurt to talk. Vesper lead the way. Vesper's nose began to leak. Drops of nasal mucus rained out of Vesper's nostrils. Vesper became embarassed. All Vesper wanted to do was go find a perch and land. But, she had to keep flying so that she can find a nice and safe spot to sleep. Vesper sneezed agian. Vesper let out a moan. "Shut up!" Trout screeched rudely. "Yes, please!" Spark screeched just as rude. Vesper shot them a glare and returned her gaze back to the horizon. Vesper strained as she flew on. She really wanted to land so that she can get some sleep. Then, Vesper saw a very large and hollow tree. "We'll land there!" Vesper called. Vesper and her allies flew into the tree. 'At last!' Vesper thought to herself. The bats perched and closed their eyes. The sun began to peak over the mountains. At last, Vesper began to sleep.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 28, 2007 16:24:34 GMT -5
AWESOME chapter Beautypelt! ;D I hope Vesper feels better when she wakes up! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 29, 2007 17:44:55 GMT -5
Thankies!
Shade
Vesper, still sick, realized she was in Sky Haven agian. 'Good! Maybe THEY can tell me who the flying rat that pushed me the fire!' Vesper thought to herself. Vesper sneezed as she flew around Sky Haven's territory. Just then, Vesper saw a small black he-bat with silver tipped fur flying towards her. 'A Silverwing!' Vesper exclaimed silently. Vesper knew that Silverwings were Northern bats and speak with an American accent. Vesper realized something. 'Can this small bat be Shade?' Vesper wondered. Shade was a runty bat, but he was a huge hero. He stopped Cama Zotz's plan to wipe out the sun, the owls and the beasts let the bats see the sun agian because of him, and he sacraficed his life to save his son and his friend. Vesper always wanted to meet the legendary bat. She eagerly flew over towards the little bat. "Greetings! My name's Vesper! I'm a Leafwing! Are you-are you-are you Shade?" Vesper squeaked. The he-bat nodded. "It's such an honor to meet you! You're every bats' hero! You're a legend!" Vesper screeched. "It's an honor to meet you too, Vesper." Shade squeaked. Then, Vesper remember the question she wanted to ask him. "Shade, do you know who the bat was that tried to kill me...burn me to death?" Vesper asked. "It was Kreeda. She planned it with Carsen, Spark, and Trout. Carsen was also the one that killed Rannocko. He planned it with Kreeda, Trout, and Spark. Those bats got bad blood in their veins. They refuse to help you and your friends and always will." Shade answered. "If they refused to help, then why are the coming with my friends?" Vesper demanded. "They didn't want their leaders to get suspicious of them. Now, I didn't come to visit you in your dream just to answer your questions. Listen to me and listen good." Shade screeched. Vesper's ears twitched. "You'll find a powerful colony of bats by a huge pond. They might be friendly or hostile. If they ARE friendly, expect to meet another enemy." Shade squeaked.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 29, 2007 17:53:14 GMT -5
Uh-oh, sounds like more trouble for Vesper. GREAT chapter Beautypelt, can't wait for more! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 30, 2007 9:28:55 GMT -5
Thanks!
Owls
Night has fallen into the sky agian. Vesper and her traveling mates woke up. Vesper was feeling a lot better, but she was still sick. 'I'm still sick, but at least my sore throat is gone!' Vesper thought to herself. The bats opened up their wings and flew off their perches. "How are you feeling?" Casaja asked. "Much better, the sore throat's gone, but I'm still sick." Vesper replied. "That's good! At least you're getting better!" Casaja squeaked. "Now I just wish that my fur to grow back." Vesper muttered. Casaja licked Vesper's burnt cheek. "It will. You just have to be patient." "I sure hope so." The bats flew on with Vesper in the lead as usual. Vesper remembered her dream. "Everyone, listen to me! Sky Haven gave me another dream!" Vesper announced. Vesper told them about her dream. The bats' eyes widened. "Great! Now all we have to do is find a large pond!" Fuzz screeched happily. "And where there's ponds, there's mosquitoes!" Moth squeaked as she licked her lips. "I say that yer makin' this up!" Trout snarled. "Yeah!" Spark and Kreeda snarled. "Ditto!" Carsen snarled. "Will you four just shut up?! Can you see Vesper is our leader?! Can you be polite for her for once?!" Marieko screeched savagly. Vesper stared at Marieko with wide eyes. She was such a nice and gentle bat. That outburst startled her. Spark, Kreeda, Carsen, and Trout just glared at Marieko. "Anyway, now that we know what we're looking for, let's find it!" Vesper announced. Vesper continued to lead the way. 'A pond shouldn't be too hard to find. If it is, we'll just ask for directions.' Vesper thought to herself. Just then, there was a screech. A screech that came from Vesper's worst nightmares. Owls. Vesper turned around, a saw over one-hundred owls flying towards them. "Everbody, fly faster than you've ever flown before!!!" Vesper screeched at the top of her lungs.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 30, 2007 17:59:49 GMT -5
That is now good, I hope everyone will be alright and no one will die. EXCELLENT chapter! Update again soon! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 31, 2007 9:35:56 GMT -5
Thankies!
Narrow Escape
The leader of the owls was the biggest with a diagonal scar on her face. "I thought that us bats and you owls had a truce!" Vesper cried. "Yes, we did. But, you bats are too delicious to resist!" the lead owl hooted. Vesper gulped. Vesper and the other bats flew faster than they've ever flown before, but the owls still flew after them. "If I never see another owl agian, it would be too soon!" Fuzz muttered. "The great Vesper has lead us to our deaths!" Spark screeched furiously. "There must be some way we can lose them in!" Moth squeaked. "Like what?" Carsen muttered. "Hey! I see fog up ahead!" Casaja screeched. "I see it too!" Marieko screeched. "Everyone, fly into the fog!" Vesper ordered. The bats flew into the thick fog. The owls, determined, flew after them into the fog "Everyone, split up!" Vesper whispered. Vesper knew that owls relied on their keen eyes while bats relied on their keen ears. The bats split up. "Which way did they go?" asked a male owl. "I can't see a thing!" cried a female owl. "Why in Hagsmire did they descide to fly in this?" asked another male owl. "To ditch us, stupid!" snarled another female owl. "It's working!" muttered another male owl. "Come on, lets get out of here! No prey is worth going blind!" ordered the owl leader. The owls let out disappointed hoots and flew back towards the direction they came from. "We did it! We lost them!" Moth cried in delight. "Vesper saved us all!" Fuzz cried in joy. "And she lead us to danger in the first place!" Trout snarled. Vesper ignored Trout's remark. "Everyone, we're going to have to use our sonar to lead us out through this fog! And, we can fly into one group agian!" Vesper called. The bats screeched in agreement and fly into one group agian and flew after Vesper. 'Phew! That was a narrow escape!' Vesper thought to herself.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 31, 2007 14:13:00 GMT -5
WONDERUL chapter! I'm glad everybody is okay, I hope you update again soon so we can see what happens next! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Sept 1, 2007 13:44:23 GMT -5
Thanks!
Another Safe Refuge
Vesper and her gang made it out of the fog. "The sun's rising!" Kreeda whined. "Then, we'll find a safe spot to camp!" Vesper snapped. Kreeda glared at her. Vesper sighed as she shook her head. Vesper began to search for a safe place to perch and sleep. "I see a cave." Casaja squeaked. Vesper let out a sonar. A spectacled bear formed in Vesper's mind. "That cave's got a bear in it." Vesper squeaked. "Then, we'll avoid it like the plaque." Fuzz squeaked. "Yeah, I really don't want to become bear chow!" Moth squeaked. "I don't think bears eat bats!" Carsen muttered. "Well, one can never be too careful. We'll stay away from the cave." Sokar screeched in warning. Vesper nodded at him. The bats began searching for another temporary roost to sleep. "I see a mighty large tree." Noct squeaked. Vesper let out a sonar. Raccoons formed in Vesper's mind. "And it's full of raccoons. Better keep flying." Vesper screeched. "Of course!" Trout muttered. And so, the bats flew on. Then, Vesper spotted an abandoned human building. A really old one. Vesper let out a sonar just in case. Empty. "Everyone, we can sleep in that building!" Vesper announced. "Thank Nocturna!" Moth sighed. And so, the bats flew into the abandoned building.
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