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Post by Tigerfur on Mar 28, 2007 17:30:28 GMT -5
Nice chapter. Can't wait for more! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 30, 2007 6:50:15 GMT -5
Sweet chapter! I just typed a chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait for you to review it!
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 3, 2007 12:39:55 GMT -5
Chapter 30 I watched as Graystone stretched. He looked so familiar; I just couldn’t put my paw on it. He turned his auburn gaze on me. He smiled. “It’s finally dawn.” He murmured.
I nodded, “It feels good to finally be a warrior. I can’t wait to do my first warrior mission!” I purred with enthusiasm.
Flamestorm grinned and licked me on the head. “I bet your first warrior task will be hunting a mouse.”
I rolled my eyes. “Very funny, Flamestorm.” He beamed at me with laughter in his eyes.
Firestar strolled over. “You four get some rest. Then you can eat.” We all dipped our heads in respect as he walked away. Graystone walked by me our pelts brushing in a brotherly-sister way.
We all curled up, Flamestorm not far from Peachflower and Graystone was next to me, fur warm as our bodies touched.
I closed my eyes and it was then I realized who Graystone looked and sounded like.
Stonefur!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 3, 2007 12:46:53 GMT -5
Brava! Brava! I just typed a chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait for you to review it!"
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Post by Tigerfur on Apr 3, 2007 15:54:26 GMT -5
I hope it is Stonefur, but then him in Featherfur could never truly be together because they're brother and sister.
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 4, 2007 8:25:19 GMT -5
Chapter 31 Graystone POV I looked at Featherfur and remembered when we were in StarClan together. She glanced over at me and smiled. I smiled back as I put my head on my paws. I closed my eyes and dreamt of StarClan.
I opened my eyes and saw Bluestar, my mother, standing in front of me. She touched my nose briefly and opened her mouth to speak. “Stonefur, all Clans must stand together when the hawk flies in with more enemies.”
I shook my head in confusion. “What does that mean? Who is this ‘hawk’?”
As Bluestar faded she dipped her head, “All will be revealed soon.”
I jumped as I awoke to Featherfur jabbing me in the side. “Graystone, come on Firestar just called a meeting. I think it’s about who’s going to the gathering.”
I followed her outside and sat by her and Brambleclaw. Firestar looked like a fiery ember that never lost its glow. Graystripe sat by him smiling.
Firestar called out, “As you all know tonight is the gathering and I have chosen the cats that are to go. Graystripe, Blazepaw, Featherfur, Swiftpaw, Thornclaw, Leafpool, Brightheart, Sandstorm, Whitecloud, Brackenfur, Graystone, and Dustpelt.”
My heart flipped with joy as Firestar called my name out along with Featherfur’s. I could see her eyes shining with anticipation.
“The cats I called eat and get ready to go!” Firestar added.
I couldn’t wait to go. ‘Hurry up and eat!” I silently pleaded to everyone who was going. I went over to Featherfur and we ate so quick that Graystripe came over and purred, “The food and the gathering isn’t going anywhere you two. Take your time before you choke.”
Featherfur and I looked at each other and burst into laughter and chewed slowly after that. Finally everyone was finished and Firestar padded to the entrance. “Let’s head to the island!” he yowled.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 4, 2007 9:04:28 GMT -5
Purr-fectly grr-reat chapter! lol I just typed a chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait for you to review it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Apr 4, 2007 12:53:30 GMT -5
Yay, their first Gathering as warriors! ;D
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Post by Tear on Apr 5, 2007 20:38:21 GMT -5
Cool chapte!
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 6, 2007 18:56:55 GMT -5
Thanks guys!!! ;D
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Post by Tear on Apr 6, 2007 22:41:36 GMT -5
NP, Firelover.
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 13, 2007 8:35:50 GMT -5
Chapter 32 Featherfur POV When we got to the island, I looked around and saw that we were the first ones to arrive. I padded over to Graystone. “Looks like we’re the first ones here.”
He looked at me. “Yep, looks like it.” Then he burst into a purr of laughter. “Come on let’s go sit by Graystripe and Sandstorm.”
I nodded to the senior warriors. Sandstorm smiled at me and turned to continue her conversation with Dustpelt.
Sandstorm was talking about some cat she drove out of the territory. “He was black and looked like a mini Crowfeather. In fact, I thought he was Crowfeather, but I gave him some scratches he won’t soon forget.” she said.
I pricked my ears in concern. They were talking about Nightshadow! A yowl made me look up and see RiverClan leap down from the tree. I padded over to Mistyfoot.
“Greetings Mistyfoot. How is the prey running in your Clan?” I asked.
I could see something in her eyes but she blinked and it was gone. “ It’s Mistystar now but the prey is running good, how are you Feathertail?”
I widened my eyes as she called me Feathertail. “I’m fine and it’s Featherfur now.”
She stared at me in sadness, “Oh yeah, its just you look so much like her. Congratulations on your warrior name.” She padded off so miserably; I had to run to catch up to her.
“Wait I need to tell you something. I’m Feathertail. I was given a second chance to live by StarClan.” I whispered.
Mistystar’s eyes widened. “Seriously? Then you should come back to RiverClan! It’s where you belong! Have you told Stormfur yet?”
I shook my head. “No but I will soon. I can’t join RiverClan, it’s my destiny to stay here in ThunderClan.”
Mistystar smiled sadly. “At least think about it ok?” As I nodded she padded over to the Great Tree and leapt next to Firestar.
I looked at my paws. Should I join RiverClan with Mistystar and my old friends?
Chapter 33 “Let the gathering begin!” called Onestar. I sat in the crowd with Graystone and Nightshadow. Mistystar went first.
“Leopardstar died of an attack by rouges. She was a well loved leader and StarClan shall honor her.” Mistystar bowed her head but went on. “I went to the Moonpool and got my nine lives. The new deputy of RiverClan is Swallowtail.”
I noticed that Blackclaw’s eyes glittered with resentment. Mistystar locked eyes with me before stepping backward.
Blackstar stepped forward, “ ShadowClan has been thriving. Russetfur died defending our territory from a badger. The new deputy is Rowanclaw.” Everyone chanted happily for Rowanclaw. “We have several new apprentices here tonight, Fernpaw, Darkpaw, and Aquapaw.”
He stepped back and Firestar went. “ThunderClan has been well also. Spiderleg was killed recently. We have two new warriors here tonight. Graystone and Featherfur.” Everyone turned his or her eyes on me. I smiled back at everyone and they nodded with encouragement.
Onestar padded forward with confidence. “WindClan has been attacked but we are still strong.” He said shooting a glance at Firestar. “Ashfoot died in a battle and the new deputy is Crowfeather, her son.”
I let out a loud yowl, which made a lot of cats turn and stare at me. Onestar went on, “We have a new warrior here also. His name is Nightshadow.” I nudged my “brother” happily. “If that’s all the news, then this gathering is…”
“Wait!” Mistystar stepped forward interrupting Onestar. “RiverClan has one more thing to add…”
Chapter 34 I raised my eyes to meet Mistystar’s. She went on. “I’d like to ask a certain warrior to join us. Featherfur, would you like to join RiverClan?”
I stared at her in horror. Firestar stepped forward, bristling. “Mistystar how can you ask her if she doesn’t even have RiverClan blood? Besides she belongs to ThunderClan.”
Mistystar smirked, “Oh but Firestar, she does have RiverClan blood in her. In fact her name isn’t Featherfur, its-”
I opened my mouth to yowl but a different voice cried out. “No! Don’t say another word!” the crowd parted to show Graystone. “She belongs in ThunderClan. I’ll go to RiverClan.”
Mistystar blinked at him. “Why would RiverClan want you?” she asked.
Graystone took a deep breath and glanced at me before continuing. “I’m not Graystone. Before I died I was Stonefur.”
Mistystar’s eyes widened, “Stonefur? But…. How?” Then it hit me. Stonefur was Mistystar’s brother.
She bounded off the Great Tree and ran over to Stonefur. She looked deep in his eyes. “How can you prove to me that your Stonefur?” she whispered.
He bowed his head. “I mentored Stormfur and you mentored Feathertail. I was killed by Blackstar, then Blackfoot, when TigerClan was formed between RiverClan and ShadowClan.”
Mistystar’s eyes watered up. “It is you. I recognized those eyes anywhere.”
He smiled, “So I can join RiverClan?”
She purred, “Of course.”
He smiled. “Just let me say goodbye to someone.” He padded over to me. “Goodbye Feathertail. I love you. Just remember that.” He touched noses with me and followed Mistystar home to RiverClan.
“Bye Stonefur,” I meowed softly.
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Post by Tigerfur on Apr 13, 2007 13:50:21 GMT -5
Awwww, thats so sad! But they were very good chapters.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 13, 2007 17:58:48 GMT -5
*sniffles* How sad! Awesome chapters though! I just typed another chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait for you to review it!
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Post by Tear on Apr 14, 2007 14:18:46 GMT -5
That was sad.
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 16, 2007 12:59:09 GMT -5
Chapter 35 Firestar’s POV I widened my eyes as I listened to commotion around me. Stonefur? He was a warrior when I had just become leader. He was deputy when Leopardstar was alive. I looked around. “Ok ThunderClan let’s head home.” I leapt down and padded over to Featherfur. “You sure you want to stay in ThunderClan? Feathertail?”
She widened her eyes as I said “Feathertail.” “How did you know?” she whispered.
I smiled, “StarClan sent me a dream away back.” I licked her ear. “You should tell your father.” I purred softly. She looked over at Graystripe.
“Yeah I should. But I’m going to stay in ThunderClan. I love being here with Stormfur, my father, and Flameshadow.” (AN: Flameshadow is my character, he was mentioned earlier. He loves Featherfur)
I watched as she stared that oh so familiar gaze at Flameshadow. He smiled back at her and Featherfur padded over to him.
I sighed and led my Clan back home.
I'll add more later!!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 16, 2007 17:34:04 GMT -5
Great stuff! Yay, Firestar!!! I just typed a chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait for you to review it!
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