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Post by Beautypelt on Mar 6, 2007 11:33:56 GMT -5
Yea! Great chapter! When will we see things in Leafpool's POV? I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Mar 6, 2007 15:00:18 GMT -5
Awww, that was such a sweet, but yet sad chapter. It was AWESOME though!
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Post by Beautypelt on Mar 6, 2007 19:54:30 GMT -5
I would like to see chapters in Leafpool's POV too! ;D I just typed another chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 8, 2007 9:27:06 GMT -5
Chapter 24 Featherpaw's POV I watched as Graypaw tackled his mentor to the ground. “Like that, Squirrelflight?” he asked mischievously.
Squirrelflight got up and shook the dirt from her pelt. “Yes, well done Graypaw. Now its my turn to attack you.” I looked away and focused on Graystripe who smiled.
“Ready? Ok attack me like I’m a enemy warrior.” I hissed and leapt not aiming anywhere in particular. I landed on his shoulders. I nipped but not too hard. He rolled on the ground trying to shake me off but I held on tight.
Graystripe went limp and I was worried that I had hurt him. “Graystripe?” I asked looking down at him.
He flipped my front paws and I landed on stomach, in one quick movement he had me on my back with his paw on my throat.
“Surprise is the warrior’s greatest weapon!” he meowed purred, quoting his old mentor, Lionheart.
I shook my pelt. “Now what do you want me to do, Graystripe?” I inquired.
“Why don’t you and Graypaw go on a solo hunting mission and remember the Clan eats first. Now go on. Squirrelflight and I will be back at camp. Good luck!” Graystripe said. With that he slipped away with Squirrelflight not too far behind him.
Graypaw looked at me. “Well why don’t you go to the ancient oak and I’ll head to the forest not to far away so if you get into trouble I can reach you in time. Okay?”
I nodded. This would be the perfect time to go see Crowfeather. “Alright, let’s meet back here close to sundown.”
He flicked his tail and headed for the forest while I advanced to the ancient oak.
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Post by Beautypelt on Mar 8, 2007 11:33:42 GMT -5
Woohoo! Yay Leafpool! Super awesome chapter! I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Mar 8, 2007 14:48:18 GMT -5
Great chapter, can't wait for more!
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Post by Beautypelt on Mar 9, 2007 8:00:07 GMT -5
P.S, I just typed the final chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle. I also started the final sequle to Nova Lee, it's called Rat Fang. We still see things in Nova Lee's POV.
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Post by Happy Beautypelt on Mar 12, 2007 5:34:37 GMT -5
Firelover, please review my stories!
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 12, 2007 16:29:56 GMT -5
Chapter 25 I crawled under the bush to the river. I gazed around searching for that familiar dark gray pelt. I knelt down to take several quick licks from the lake. The lake tasted cool and refreshing.
I noticed a movement out of the corner of my eye. I smiled and decided to sneak up on it. As soon as I was a few tail lengths away, I pounced. What I pounced on surprised me. It wasn’t Crowfeather; it was a smaller version of him! I shook my head and realized this was Nightpaw, my brother.
He snarled in rage, not knowing who I was. “Get off me!” he unsheathed his claws aiming for my face.
“Stop Nightpaw! It’s me, Featherpaw, your sister!” he backed up and peered at my face. Then recognition spread across his face.
“Oh yeah, I remember you, from the battle.” He mused. “If you were hoping to see our father, you’re out of luck. He’s busy making patrols.”
I blinked, “I thought the deputy…” Then it hit me. “You mean he’s the deputy now? That’s great!”
Nightpaw nodded, “Yeah, Onestar was going to make Tornear deputy but Tornear said he was too old and retired. So Onestar made our father deputy.”
I was enthusiastic for Crowfeather. Then I froze as I heard a voice calling for me. Graystripe…
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 13, 2007 11:07:07 GMT -5
Uh-oh! Great chapter! I just typed another chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tear on Mar 14, 2007 20:07:05 GMT -5
What's going to happen? Great chapter
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Post by Tigerfur on Mar 16, 2007 19:48:56 GMT -5
Uh-oh, sounds like trouble!
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 17, 2007 15:37:02 GMT -5
Chapter 26 I woke up to a paw poking in my side. I opened one eye and saw Owlwhisker. “Crowfeather, I can’t find Nightpaw. I was going to take him out on a patrol but I looked in the apprentice den and he wasn’t there.”
I leaped to my paws. “What? Where did you see him last?” Owlwhisker looked down at his paws.
“Earlier, Onestar sent him on a patrol and he hasn’t been back since.”
I sighed, “I’ll go look for him after I assign the patrols. You go ahead and go with the hunting patrol.”
Owlwhisker nodded and left. I padded outside and looked around. Everyone was sharing tongues.
I walked over to Nightcloud. “You take the dawn patrol later. Take Webfoot and Breezepaw.”
Nightcloud dipped her head and continued eating. I looked around for Onestar but I didn’t see him anywhere. I trotted over to his den and saw him curled in a ball.
I turned to leave but he raised his head. “Crowfeather? What is it?”
I took a deep breath, “I’m going on a patrol by myself. I need to think about some things.”
Onestar smiled, “Alright.”
I exited Onestar’s den and headed for the border with ThunderClan.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 17, 2007 21:35:09 GMT -5
Purr-ty grr-reat chapter! I just typed a chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait for you to review it!
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Post by Tear on Mar 17, 2007 21:52:09 GMT -5
Great chapter
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 27, 2007 8:27:00 GMT -5
Chapter 29 Half a moon later “Featherpaw, Flamepaw, Graypaw, and Peachpaw, come forward please.” Firestar stated. I felt a rush go through me. At last I was going to become a warrior! Firestar yowled, “Do you four promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan even at the cost of your life?”
We all spoke clearly. “I do,”
Firestar smiled as he went on. “Then by the powers of StarClan I give you your warrior names. Flamepaw, you will be known as Flamestorm. StarClan honors your strength and agility.” Firestar rested his muzzle on the newly named Flamestorm and got a respectful lick in return.
Peachpaw was next. “Peachpaw from this moment on you’ll be known as Peachflower. StarClan honors you cunningness and speed.” They did the same as Flamestorm.
Graypaw glanced at me before stepping forward. “Graypaw from this moment on you will be known as Graystone. StarClan honors your skill and braveness.” Graystone gave Firestar a lick on the shoulder before joining the crowd.
I shook lightly as I went forward. “Featherpaw,” he hesitated slightly. I glanced at Graystripe to see him stare at me sadly but encouraging at the same time. “From this moment on you’ll be known as Featherfur.” I widened my eyes as I thought of Stonefur in StarClan. Was he watching me now? I shuddered and licked my leader’s shoulder as he rested his muzzle on my head,
All of ThunderClan chanted our new names, “Flamestorm! Peachflower! Graystone! Featherfur!”
I padded over to where we would have to sit our vigil ready for whatever came my way.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 27, 2007 17:58:54 GMT -5
Sweet chapter! I just typed a chapter in Rat Fang! I can't wait for you to review it!
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