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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 10, 2007 15:21:30 GMT -5
lol, you`ll see Thanks for the reviews!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 10, 2007 19:18:16 GMT -5
You're welcome, Firelover! I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 12, 2007 9:12:58 GMT -5
Chapter 13 Featherkit’s POV I opened my eyes and saw a figure standing over me. I hissed only it was small. I looked around. I suddenly remembered I was in ThunderClan. I meowed up at the figure. Its response was licking the top of my head.
“Good morning, Featherkit.” The figure said. I peered up at the sound of the deep voice.
Another figure chuckled, “Its like she doesn’t know the sound of your voice, Brambleclaw.”
‘Brambleclaw? I’ve heard of that name!’ I thought I squeaked excitedly out loud.
Brambleclaw purred, “It looks like she does now, Squirrelflight.”
I peered up at them. “Brambleclaw, doesn’t she remind you of someone real familiar?”
Brambleclaw widened his eyes. “Great StarClan your right! She looks just like Feathertail! The same silver-gray pelt and the blue eyes!”
I chuckled inside my head. I scooted closer to my siblings and closed my eyes as Squirrelflight covered us with her tail.
Crowfeather’s POV One moon later… I watched as Onestar leapt on the Highbranch. Nightkit ran out of the nursery puffing out his chest. Amberkit and Breezekit weren’t far behind.
“Crowfeather! Guess what! We’re going to be made apprentices today!” Nightkit boasted.
I smiled, “That’s great, Nightkit.”
Whitetail walked over. “Come back to the nursery. I still need to groom you three. The ceremony isn’t for awhile now.”
Nightkit, Amberkit, and Breezekit groaned in unison as they followed Whitetail back to the nursery.
I went to warriors’ den to get some sleep before the ceremony.
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 12, 2007 16:16:24 GMT -5
Yay, Featherkit has been born, and Nightkit is about to become an apprentice!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 12, 2007 18:48:34 GMT -5
Featherkit and Nightkit seem to turn out okay, but what about the other kit? Sounds like the third kit is going to turn nasty or die because its mother is a medicine cat. Excellent chapter! I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 15, 2007 9:04:49 GMT -5
Chapter 14 Onestar leapt on the Highbranch. “Let all the cats that are old enough to catch prey gather beneath the Highbranch!”
I watched as Whitetail’s kits followed Nightkit under the Highbranch.
“It is time for these three kits to become apprentices. Amberkit step forward. Amberkit leapt forward.
Onestar went on. “From this moment on you will be known as Amberpaw. Your mentor will be Owlwhisker.” The two touched noses and sat back in the crowd.
Onestar flicked his tail for Breezekit to come forward. Breezekit timidly stepped forward.
“Breezekit, you’ll be known as Breezepaw. Your mentor will be Nightcloud.” Breezekit looked around anxiously around the clearing until Nightcloud emerged from the crowd.
Nightcloud muttered, “Don’t worry you’re doing fine.” Breezepaw perked up a little at that and sat down in the crowd next to her mentor.
“Nightkit, come forward. Nightkit until you receive your warrior name you’ll be known as Nightpaw. Your mentor will be Crowfeather.” Nightpaw yelped gleefully.
I rolled my eyes amiably at my son. I touched noses with him. He stared hopefully in my eyes. “I’m glad that you’re my mentor.”
I smiled at him then sat down with him in the mob of cats. “Breezepaw! Amberpaw! Nightpaw!” Nightpaw puffed out his chest and I cuffed his head lightly.
“Don’t get too arrogant, Nightpaw.” I warned. Nightpaw bowed his head.
“Tomorrow, we’ll go around the borders but right now go and get to know the other apprentices.”
Nightpaw raced to the apprentice den. Amberpaw and Breezepaw greeted him warmly. The other apprentices were Goldpaw, Windpaw, and Falconpaw.
I decided to go hunting and get away to think. ‘About Feathertail’ a voice in the back of my head said.
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 15, 2007 14:50:53 GMT -5
Awww, Nightpaw is finally an apprentice! Geat chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 16, 2007 7:43:50 GMT -5
Yay! Nightpaw is finally an apprentice! Excellent chapter! I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 16, 2007 13:40:33 GMT -5
Sorry for the short chapter I was up late last night Chapter 15 Featherkit’s POV I tackled my brother, Graykit. “Ha! I win, Graystar!” He rolled his eyes. “Not a chance, Featherstar!” He flung me off and I knocked into Flamekit, my other brother.
“Hey watch out, Featherstar! I was planning a battle against RiverClan.” He growled.
I rolled my eyes at him and turned to find my sister arguing with Flamekit. I strolled over.
“What’s a matter, Peachkit?” I asked.
Flamekit won’t let me be the RiverClan deputy. I turned my gaze to Flamekit. “Why won’t you let her be the RiverClan deputy?”
“Because I don’t want her to be my deputy.” He scowled.
Squirrelflight, our mother chose that moment to break things up. “Ok, if you guys can’t play nicely than you can’t play at all.
We all grumbled under our breaths. Flamekit and Peachkit shot each other icy glares. I thought to myself, ‘if looks could kill, they would be in StarClan right now.’
Mother made us line up to get our baths. Unfortunately, I was first. I protested to her that I wasn’t dirty. She ignored my moans and kept cleaning me. At last I was done and it was Flamekit’s turn.
I heard footsteps signifying that someone was at the entrance. I spun around and saw…
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 16, 2007 16:08:31 GMT -5
No don't stop now, who was at the entrance?
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Tear
Growing Kit
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Post by Tear on Feb 16, 2007 19:17:22 GMT -5
That was asome!!!!!!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 19, 2007 9:19:23 GMT -5
Chapter 16 Ashfur! I snuggled closer to my mother and other siblings. Squirrelflight snarled, “What do you want?” Ashfur glared at her.
“Can’t I visit my own mate and kits?” He walked over to Poppytail, one of Sorreltail’s first kits. She licked Ashfur’s head and then turned to glare at me. I wondered what I did to make her angry.
I turned my head and wrestled with Graykit. We had a tight relationship. Flamekit and Peachkit were close, when they weren’t fighting.
Brambleclaw chose that moment to saunter in. Flamekit and Peachkit raced over to greet him, stumbling a few times.
Suddenly I got a flashback. I saw a dark gray tom standing, smiling at Graykit and me.
I remembered a soft voice saying, “These are our kits, Crowfeather. The pale gray tom is Graykit. The she-kit is Featherkit. I named her after Feathertail. Is that ok?”
The dark tom smiled, “Of course, Feathertail would be happy.”
Then a brown figure, my mother I assumed, meowed something to the tom. He shook his head. “They should grow up together. You can let them stay in your Clan until they’re apprentices and then they can decide.”
Then my mother led Graykit and me back to ThunderClan. I felt myself turn and speak to the tom. “B- Bye d-d-daddy.” Then he smiled at me and said, “Bye, Featherkit.” Then I turned and raced to catch up with my mother and brother.
I shook my head. Crowfeather was my father! I turned to Graykit and asked him a question.
“Do you remember when mom told us she would take us to see our father?” he thought for a moment then widened his eyes.
“Yeah! I remember. So that means Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw aren’t our parents?”
I blinked, “I guess so. I remember mom saying our dad’s name. Crowfeather!”
I raced over to where Squirrelflight and Brambleclaw where lying, watching Flamekit and Peachkit play.
“Mom, can Graykit and I go visit Leafpool? Please?” I asked. Squirrelflight looked at Brambleclaw, who shrugged.
She nodded, “Just don’t mess with any herbs!” I flicked my tail and Graykit and I rushed to Leafpool’s den.
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 19, 2007 10:59:47 GMT -5
Great chapter, who will be Featherkit/tail's mate now, I mean she can't take her own father as her mate, you are really twisting things up, I mean that in a good way! ;D
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Tear
Growing Kit
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Post by Tear on Feb 19, 2007 23:03:01 GMT -5
I want to know what happens now!!!!!!!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 23, 2007 9:27:14 GMT -5
Chapter 17 I watched as Nightpaw tried to get the hunting crouch right.
“No, Nightpaw, your behind is too high in the air. Lower it down. That’s better.” I said.
Nightpaw swiftly stalked across the floor. I nodded to show that he was doing well. Nightpaw was getting restless.
“Can I go practice for real now? Please?” He pleaded. I thought it over and nodded.
“Just be careful. Enemy Clans may be lurking about. I’ll wait for by the clearing where the territory ends with ThunderClan. Be back at sunhigh.”
Nightpaw flicked his tail to show he heard and tore across the moor. I shook my head with amusement at his enthusiasm.
I padded along the lake pausing to get a drink of water. I looked up and saw Leafpool. I felt my heart bang in my chest as I stared back at her.
“Well, well look what the badger brought in.” she purred. I pretended to be cross.
She splashed across the clearing and looked in my eyes and her face got serious instantly.
“What’s wrong? Did something happen to Graykit or Featherkit?” I asked worriedly.
Leafpool smirked at my reaction. “No, well sort of. Featherkit came in with Graykit. They asked how their real mother and father was.”
I back up a few steps, surprised. “What did you tell them?” I questioned.
Leafpool sighed, “I told them the truth. Tonight, they’re having their apprentice ceremonies. So I thought it was time to tell them.”
Wild thoughts darted through my mind. ‘What did they think? Do they hate me? Or Leafpool?’ I shook my head to clear my head. Leafpool was peering at me closely.
“You all right?” she asked. After I nodded she asked. “So how’s Nightkit?”
I smiled, “Nightpaw, he got his apprentice name. Onestar selected me to be his mentor.” I finished proudly.
Leafpool nuzzled me, “That’s wonderful! I’m sure you’ll be a great mentor.” I purred at her encouragement. Suddenly the bushes rustled and we both froze.
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 23, 2007 10:34:56 GMT -5
*claps* Excellent! I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 23, 2007 13:31:33 GMT -5
NO! Don't stop now, what will happen?!
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