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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 19, 2007 18:53:17 GMT -5
Uh-oh! Medicine cat kits are always a bad omen! Awesome chapter though! I just typed another chapter in Nova Lee. I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Jan 19, 2007 21:43:04 GMT -5
That was a great chapter Firelover, it was really cute how Featherkit said good-bye.
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 22, 2007 9:19:20 GMT -5
Chapter 9 I watched as Crowfeather greeted his kits. I loved the way he tenderly touched noses with his kits. But yet I wanted those kits to be Crowfeather and my kits. I sighed forlornly.
“I know you miss him, but at least you have Stonefur and your mother. Right?” a tom’s voice behind me meowed. At first all I saw was the starry skies. But then I saw the owner of the voice.
I dipped my head to him. “Hello, Redtail.”
He smiled wisely, “Hello, Feathertail. Are you alright?”
I nodded, “yes, but I miss being down there with Crowfeather. Don’t get me wrong I love being here with my mother. But my heart feels empty.”
Redtail nodded, “I too know what it feels like to have a heart empty. I loved someone long ago, but she never loved me back.”
I scooted closer in a gesture of comfort. The winds swayed slightly as we spent the night talking away.
Crowfeather’s POV Next morning I headed out. Onestar had sent me to get moss for the elders when Leafpool appeared. I saw a dark bundle in her jaws.
“Crowfeather you’ll never believe what happened. Around dawn I had another kit! He must have been overdue. Look at him! He looks just like you!”
I was speechless. Poor little kit, he was so little. I looked up at Leafpool. “What’s his name?” She shook her head, “I want you to name him.”
I thought long and hard before I answered. “Nightkit.”
Leafpool purred and set him down. “I know we agreed to let the kits grow up together, but I want you to take this one. Please?”
I sighed, “Sure, it’ll be nice having my son grow up in WindClan with me. Are you sure, cause you’ll only see him at gatherings and when I bring him here.”
Leafpool confirmed her decision by nodding. “I hope he grows to be a fine warrior like you.”
I picked up my son and purred goodbye hoarsely.
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 22, 2007 19:40:07 GMT -5
Is one of Leafpool's kits going to die or turn wicked? Kits of medicine cats are always a bad omen! Super chapter though! I just typed a chapter in Nova Lee! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 24, 2007 9:19:26 GMT -5
Chapter 10 I padded back to camp with Nightkit in my jaws. I hoped Onestar would let him stay. He was my kit and I wouldn’t abandon any of my kits. Onestar better take him. He won’t say no to a helpless kit.
Many heads turned as I walked into camp. I ignored the puzzled looks and kept padding to Onestar’s den.
I tenderly set Nightkit down and called, “Onestar?”
Onestar’s voice answered back, “Come in, Crowfeather.” I sighed and picked up Nightkit.
Onestar was just getting done with a rabbit. I cleared my throat to let him know I was there. Just then Nightkit let out a meow so earsplitting I dropped him.
Onestar stood up immediately. “Crowfeather, where did you get this kit?”
I looked Onestar in the eyes. “I found him by the lake, he was in the bushes.” I held my breath to see what Onestar would say.
“Hmm, it doesn’t smell of any Clan. He looks a lot like you, Crowfeather. Are you sure you don’t know anything about this kit?”
I kept my cool. “I told you I found him. How could I be his father?”
Onestar looked like he didn’t believe me. “Well, take him to the nursery. See if Whitetail will take care of him.”
I nodded. I felt guilty of not telling my leader the truth. I hoped StarClan wouldn’t curse this little innocent kit.
I walked into the nursery. Whitetail had two kits nursing. I padded up to her. “Whitetail? I have a kit here. Do you have enough milk to feed him?”
Whitetail looked curiously at Nightkit. I prayed to StarClan that she would take him.
Her gaze softened as he curled up to the other two kits. “Sure Crowfeather. I’ll take care of him. Did you name him?”
I fixed my blue eyes on Nightkit then back at her. “Yes, he’s name is Nightkit. And I promise to bring you freshkill everyday.”
She smiled, “Just the name I would’ve chosen. He’ll be fine, he looks like a strong kit.”
I dipped my head in goodbye and took one last glimpse at Nightkit before I left.
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 24, 2007 18:54:50 GMT -5
Bravo! I just typed a chapter in Nova Lee, I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tigerfur on Jan 24, 2007 21:01:45 GMT -5
That was a good chapter, but it does seem a little bit like Fire And Ice.
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 25, 2007 19:12:41 GMT -5
I just typed another chapter in Nova Lee! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 26, 2007 9:05:07 GMT -5
Chapter 11 I was with Redtail and Stonefur. They showed me some places that I’d never been to before. I gasped to the beauty of it all. Sometimes I never got use to the magnificence of StarClan. I knew both of the toms liked me. I didn’t know what to say.
Suddenly Lionheart strolled over. “Redtail, Stonefur. Bluestar wants to talk to you two about something. I cocked my head to the side when he didn’t include me. I knew at that point they were talking about me. I decided to walk around by myself.
I wondered around thinking about Crowfeather and Leafpool. Leafpool and I could have been close friends if I was alive. I jumped two feet in the air as Whitestorm appeared behind me.
“What is it, Whitestorm?” I asked.
Everyone wants to talk to you about what they’re going to do. Hurry,”
I was confused. Who were they talking about? What were they “going to do?” I swiftly ran beside Whitestorm. As we entered the clearing, everyone turned their heads. I felt shy all of the sudden.
Whitestorm lead me to the front beside Bluestar. I dipped my head as I sat down.
“Feathertail, I’m sure you’re wondering why we called this meeting. Well, we’ve discussed it and now we want to see what you think.”
I pricked my ears forward. I nodded for her to continue.
“Feathertail, you died defending the other five journeying cats. We think you should go back. In Featherkit’s body.”
I widened my eyes. Cinderpelt did the same thing. “I thought StarClan never did this?” I questioned.
“Like I said, we discussed it and thought it would be right for you to get a second chance to live. What is your decision?”
I thought about it for a while. I would get to see Crowfeather, hunt live prey, see my brother and father, and live in ThunderClan. I took a deep breath, “I accept.”
Stonefur padded over to me and licked my head. “Be careful, Feathertail.” He whispered in my ear. I nodded and touched his nose with mine.
“I will.” Bluestar touched my head and I felt myself dissolve away from StarClan.
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Post by Tigerfur on Jan 26, 2007 14:56:07 GMT -5
Great chapter! Yeah, Feathertail is back! ;D
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 26, 2007 20:46:39 GMT -5
Yay! Featherkit! Featherkit! Awesome chapter! I just typed a chapter in Nova Lee! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tear on Feb 3, 2007 0:06:24 GMT -5
asome chapter!!!!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 9, 2007 9:08:47 GMT -5
Chapter 12 Two moons later I watched over Nightkit whenever I wasn’t busy. Nightkit loved when I visited him. He would bounce around and pounce on my back with his needle-sharp claws extracted. I’d wince but wouldn’t say anything.
I walked in with a couple of mice for Whitetail and the kits. I gazed proudly at Nightkit. He was getting bigger than the others even though he was younger. I set down the mice in front of Whitetail. She blinked kindly at me and gulped the first mouse down. The kits wrestled for the other mouse.
I tapped Nightkit and he spun around. “Crowfeather!” he squeaked.
I purred with amusement. “Hey there, Nightkit. Why don’t you share with the others?”
Nightkit sighed, “Amberkit, Breezekit, why don’t we share the mouse? You two can have a bigger piece, I’m not that hungry.”
I rolled my eyes. “I got to talk to Onestar. I’ll see you later.” I licked his head and nodded goodbye to Whitetail.
Onestar was eating with Ashfoot. Onestar looked up as I padded over. “Ah, Crowfeather, just the cat I needed to talk to.”
I sat down. “Actually I needed to talk to you too. It’s about Nightkit.”
His ears pricked up. “I’m listening.”
“Well I was wondering if I could mentor him when the time comes. I think he is an adventurous kit and I would be an excellent mentor for him.”
Onestar nodded slowly, “True. You do deserve your first apprentice. You’ve proven that many times. Yes, you can be his mentor when the time comes.”
My heart soared. I would Nightkit everything I knew. He would be a great warrior. I, his father, would be a wonderful mentor to my son.
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Post by Tigerfur on Feb 9, 2007 15:20:50 GMT -5
Awwww, that is so sweet, Crowfeather mentoring his son
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 9, 2007 20:32:22 GMT -5
Wonderful chapter! Leafpool's kit in WindClan! I wonder when Onestar will find out about the kit *shifts eyes* Superb chapter! I just typed a chapter in Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I can't wait to hear your comment about it!
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Post by Tear on Feb 10, 2007 0:00:24 GMT -5
great chappie!
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Feb 10, 2007 11:51:33 GMT -5
Great chapter! Is Feathertail going to remember being in StarClan, or dying, or Crowfeather or Stormfur or anyone?
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