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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 27, 2007 22:58:14 GMT -5
Okay y'all, here's the sequle to Nova Lee. I hope y'all enjoy it! Rain Tribe Nova Lee: Adult black she-bear (lead character) Black Storm: Adult black he-bear (formerly of Tree Tribe) Acorn Tree: Adult black she-bear (Nova Lee's big sister) Ash Fall: Adult scarred black she-bear (Nova Lee's best friend) Red Wood: Adult black he-bear (Nova Lee's father and Rain Tribe's chief) Maple Leaf: Adult black she-bear (Nova Lee's mother) Honey Bee: Adult black she-bear (Nova Lee's aunt and Maple Leaf's twin sister) Oak Tree: Adult black he-bear (Nova Lee's uncle and Red Wood's little brother) Holy Rain: Wise elderly black she-bear (Nova Lee's grandmother and Rain Tribe's medicine bear and the mother of Maple Leaf) Elm Tree: Elderly black he-bear (Nova Lee's grandfather and father of Maple Leaf) Umber Fur: Elderly black she-bear (Nova Lee's grandmother and mother of Red Wood) Blue Jay: Elderly black he-bear (Nova Lee's grandfather and father of Red Wood) Night Owl: Young black she-bear (daughter of Nova Lee and Black Storm) Wind That Carries Leaves: Young black she-bear (daughter of Nova Lee and Black Storm) Talon Of Mighty Eagle: Young black he-bear (son of Nova Lee and Black Storm and Rain Tribe's future chief) Blood Tribe Amber Mist: Adult grizzly she-bear (close friend to Nova Lee) Gore Fang: Adult grizzly he-bear (Amber Mist's father and Blood Tribe's chief) Raven Wing: Adult grizzly she-bear (Amber Mist's mother) Mud Talon: Adult scarred grizzly he-bear (Amber Mist's little brother) Hawk Feather: Adult grizzly he-bear (Amber Mist's big brother) Sharp Fang: Adult grizzly he-bear (Amber Mist's uncle and Raven Wing's big brother) Rat Fang: Adult grizzly she-bear (Amber Mist's aunt and Raven Wing's big sister) Yellow Moon: Adult scarred grizzly he-bear (Amber Mist's uncle and Gore Fang's little brother) Whispering Shadow: Elderly grizzly she-bear (Amber Mist's grandmother and Blood Tribe's medicine bear and mother of Raven Wing) Cougar Claw: Elderly grizzly he-bear (Amber Mist's grandfather and father of Raven Wing) Night Fall: Elderly grizzly she-bear (Amber Mist's grandmother and mother of Gore Fang) Dark Sky: Elderly grizzly he-bear ( Amber Mist's grandfather and father of Gore Fang) Other Bears Bamboo Forest: Adult giant panda she-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Bamboo Tribe) Giant Of The Land: Adult kodiak he-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Ocean Tribe) Rain Forest: Adult spectacled she-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Forest Tribe) Rays Of The Sun: Adult Malayan sun she-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Sun Tribe) Frigid Weather Of Blizzards: Adult polar she-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Glacier Tribe) Coyotie Nose That Sniffs The Air: Adult grizzly he-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Mountain Tribe) Wing Of Soaring Falcon: Adult black he-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Water Tribe) Long Fur: Elderly sloth he-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Rock Tribe) Crest White As Snow: Young Asiantic black she-bear (lives at the zoo and formerly of Night Tribe) Other Animals Night Wing: Wise old she-raven Sheena: Light gray she-cat with light blue eyes (a house cat) Lion: Light tan tom with amber eyes (a house cat and lives with Sheena) Leo: Adult lion (lives at the circus) Roary: Adult lion (lives at the circus) Stripe: Adult tigeress (lives at the circus) Claws: Adult tigeress (lives at the circus) Fang: Adult tigeress (lives at the circus) Francis: Adult she-poodle (lives at the circus) Frizzy: Adult she-poodle (lives at the circus) Barky: Adult he-poodle (lives at the circus) Nipper: Adult he-poodle (lives at the circus) Sleek: Adult he-seal (lives at the circus) Bleak: Adult he-seal (lives at the circus)
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 27, 2007 23:47:30 GMT -5
Prolouge
The afternoon sun shone on my back. I was sunbathing on a patch of moss with my one true love, Black Storm. We were watching our children playing tag. "Tag! You're it Talon Of Mighty Eagle!" hollered Night Owl. "No fair! You always tag me!" snapped Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "Honey, nobody likes a sore loser." said I in a stern voice. "Sorry Nova Lee." muttered Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "Come on bro! Chase us!" squealed Wind That Carries Leaves. "Coming dear sisters!" growled Talon Of Mighty Eagle in a nasty tone. We watched him chase our daughters. "What are we going to do with that boy?" sighed Black Storm in a frustrated tone. "He's young right now, but he'll mature soon." replied I. "When I was his age, I knew my manners! I still do!" exclaimed Black Storm. "When you were his age, you were diffrent that other young male bears, but in a wonderful way. Not many male bears are as well-mannered as you." said I. "Well, those male bears should act like me! If they are polite like me, the world will be a much more peaceful place!" growled Black Storm. I gave Black Storm a lick on the cheek. "We're all diffrent dear, that's what makes the world great." said I. Black Storm's response was a grunt. We heard a scream. Night Owl's scream. "What's wrong?" asked I. "Talon Of Mighty Eagle tagged me too hard!" whined Night Owl. "I did not!" yelled Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "Yes you did! You swatted me instead of tapping me!" screamed Night Owl. "You are such a baby!" sneered Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "I am not you stupid boy!" snapped Night Owl. "Kids! Kids! Play nice! Night Owl, calm down! Talon Of Mighty Eagle, play gently!" shouted I. "Okay mommy." said Night Owl. "Whatever." said Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "Don't use that tone of voice with me young man!" growled I. "You talk nice to your mother!" snarled Black Storm. "Crap on this! I'm going to have a snack now!" exclaimed Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "That's it mister! Go to your burrow and don't come out until I say so!" growled I. "You're not the chief of me!" snapped Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "But, I am!" boomed a voice. We all turned around and saw my father, Red Wood. "Grandson, do as your mother says, or you'll be going to bed hungry tonight!" growled my father. "But-" protested Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "No buts! Do as your mother says!" snapped my father. "Oh all right! I want to get away from y'all anyway!" exclaimed Talon Of Might Eagle. "Be careful what you wish for!" warned I. "Shut it!" screamed Talon Of Mighty Eagle. We watched Talon Of Mighty Eagle stomped towards his burrow. "If that boy is going to take my place someday, he's going have to get his attitude strait!" growled my father. "Of all the brothers in the world, why did we get stuck with him?" pouted Wind That Carries Leaves. "Yeah! Why does he have to live with us?" demanded Night Owl. "Because, he's your brother and he's my son!" said I. "Can he be born in another tribe?" whined Wind That Carries Leaves. "If he was born in another tribe, I'll feel sorry for those bears!" replied Night Owl. "You two shouldn't talk that way to your brother!" said I. "I wish I had a better son!" growled Black Storm. "It wouldn't kill him if he was more respectful!" exclaimed my father. "Y'all, Talon Of Mighty Eagle might not be the most perfect bear in the world, but he's y'all's flesh and blood!" replied I. Just then, we heard crying. We all turned around, and saw Amber Mist. "What's the matter?" asked I. "Beauty Of The Night and Skunk Tail died!" cried Amber Mist.
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 29, 2007 9:09:28 GMT -5
aww, that's awful! Good prolouge though
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Jan 29, 2007 14:03:23 GMT -5
lol Great start Saberclaw!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 29, 2007 18:55:45 GMT -5
Chapter 1
"Bears of Rain Tribe, we have tragic news and some great ones. Rat Fang, you tell them." said Gore Fang. "My niece and nephew were brutally murdered by a he-cougar. They were out playing all by themselves when that cougar came. The cougar slashed their throats open. He was about to take them back to his mountain lair and have them for dinner. When I saw him, I roared at his face. He got real scared when he saw me. So scared, that he ran off, leaving my dear sister's cubs on the ground. When I chased off that cougar, I went over to the cubs. Unfortunatly, the cubs were dead. Blood oozed out of their scliced throats. They were great and noble young bears. It happened last night. We buried them this morning. We shall never forget them." replied Rat Fang. I noticed Amber Mist baring her teeth at Rat Fang. I thought I saw blood on the tips of Rat Fang's claws. "There's more news, I'm getting on in my years and it's time fore me to choose who will take my place as chief of Blood Tribe." rasped Gore Fang. "Who's going to be y'all's future chief?" asked Night Owl. "Rat Fang." replied Gore Fang. My tribe and I all let out shocked gasps. "But a chief has to be a male!" exclaimed Elm Tree. "Rat Fang is a she-bear!" exclaimed Honey Bee. "Chiefs had always been he-bears!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "Rat Fang can't be a chief!" exclaimed Wind That Carries Leaves. "Y'all must have lost your minds to make Rat Fang future chief of Blood Tribe!" exclaimed Blue Jay. "Boy I'll say!" muttered Amber Mist. "What's wrong Amber Mist? Why are you talking bad about your aunt?" asked I. "I'll tell you later!" whispered Amber Mist. 'She must not like having a female chief.' thought I. "SILENCE!!!" roared Gore Fang. We all became silent. "I have a very good reason to appoint Rat Fang Blood Tribe's future chief. Rat Fang, you tell them." replied Gore Fang. We all stared at Rat Fang as she stepped forward. I also happen to notice Amber Mist glaring at her. Why is Amber Mist acting hostile at Rat Fang? "Fellow bears, Spirit Tribe has visited me last night. I was fising in their pond, and I saw a huge rat with fang-like teeth standing on a boulder. There were a bunch of cubs bouncing and playing nearby. The rat looked over the horizon. Then, a cockroach scurried towards the cubs. The rat pounced on the cockroach and ate it. The rat climbed back on top of the boulder and kept looking over the horizon. The rat with big fangs was protecting the cubs. Then I thought, 'Rat fangs! Rat fangs were keeping the cubs safe! The fanged rat meant me! I was keeping my tribe safe! I told my chief and my medicine bear about it, and they agree that I should be chief some day." replied Rat Fang. "What a bunch of racconcrap!" muttered Amber Mist as she still glared at Rat Fang. As I watched Amber Mist, I became incresingly uneasy. "You shouldn't have been fishing at Spirit Tribe's water! That's THEIR fish!" snapped Ash Fall. "Spirit Tribe only visits the dreams of chiefs and medicine bears!" exclaimed Night Owl. "Spirit Tribe visited Nova Lee when she left on her journey. If a low-ranked black bear like her can be visited by Spirit Tribe, why can't I?" replied Rat Fang. I slashed the earth with my claws. How DARE Rat Fang called my low-ranked! I went on the quest, I helped but an end to the war, and I'm now a mother of triplets! Then, I heard Amber Mist snarling softly at Rat Fang. "My medicine bear and I had no visits from Spirit Tribe saying that Rat Fang can't be chief! rat Fang prooved herself worthy of driving that cougar away! Rat Fang in going to be a chief someday and that's that! We're going back to our half of the forest now! Bye!" growled Gore Fang. We watched him and his bears leave. Amber Mist sat down right beside me. I thought I saw an evil look in Rat Fang's eyes and I also heard a very soft meniacal laugh from her. Rat Fang followed her tribe back to the other side of the forest. "You, Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, and Black Storm come with me. There's someting I want to tell y'all." said Amber Mist in a quiet voice as she looked at me. Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Black Storm, and I followed Amber Mist. Amber Mist acted strange and I'm pretty sure I'm not going to like what she has to say.
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 31, 2007 16:36:04 GMT -5
Oh uh. Sounds like something fishy is going on
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 2, 2007 8:04:23 GMT -5
Chapter 2
"What is it Amber Mist?" asked I. "Well, I woke up last night because I was thirsty. So, I went to a nearby pond to get a drink. Then, I saw Rat Fang talking to Beauty Of The Night and Skunk Tail. She told them that she found a bunch of berry bushes over the corner of the forest. Skunk Tail and Beauty Of The Night eagerly followed her to the corner of the forest. When they got there, Rat Fang slashed open Skunk Tail's throat! Beauty Of The Night got real scared and was about to tell Gore Fang. Rat Fang slashed open Beauty Of The Night's throat to keep her quiet. After Rat Fang killed them, she looked at Skunk Tail's dead body and said, 'You thought you were going to be chief of this forest did you? Well, you were wrong! I'm going to be chief of this forest! When I do become chief, I'll murder every black bear in this forest! This forest belongs to my tribe!' Then, she licked the blood off her claws and licked her scent off my dead siblings' bodies. She ran back to my tribe. She lied to my father and said that a cougar killed his cubs! She also told him about that false prophecy that she told y'all. I tried to tell him that she was lying, but he thinks that I was just jealous that she was going to be chief someday. Rat Fang didn't know that I saw her kill Skunk Tail and Beauty Of The Night. I'll tell y'all's chief about this. Y'all are in real danger!" said Amber Mist in a panicy voice. "I knew that grizzly bear can't be trusted!" snarled Ash Fall. I was right. There was something evil about Rat Fang. She had a suspicious look all over her the moment she told us about Skunk Tail's and Beauty Of The Night's deaths. "This is bad! Really bad!" whimpered Acorn Tree. "Spirit TRibe must warn Gore Fang and Whispering Shadow immediatley!" shouted Black Storm. "I sure hope so!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "All black bears are going to die if Rat Fang becomes chief!" screamed Acorn Tree. "We have to do something!" exclaimed Black Storm. "What can we do?!" screamed Amber Mist. "There must be something we can do." replied I. "Amber Mist! Come home!" called Gore Fang. "I got to go. Don't worry, we'll talk later." whispered Amber Mist. After saying our good-byes, we watched Amber Mist follow her father back to their side of the forest. "What are we going to do? If Rat Fang becomes chief, we'll all die!" whimpered Acorn Tree. "Spirit Tribe won't let that happen. They'll stop her. Don't worry." said I. "I sure hope so!" whispered Black Storm. "If Rat Fang goes near me, I'll slash HER throat open!" snarled Ash Fall. "Come, let's go back to our tribe." said I. I lead them back to our tribe. I silently prayed to Spirit Tribe that they'll stop Rat Fang and her evil plans.
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 2, 2007 9:34:16 GMT -5
Oh snap! awesome chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 3, 2007 8:08:22 GMT -5
Chapter 3
I went over to Talon Of Mighty Eagle's burrow. "You can come out now." said I. My son came out of his burrow. "I heard those grizzly bears talking on our territory! What did they want this time?!?" growled Talon Of Mighty Eagle. I told him what happened and what Rat Fang did to her sister's cubs. "Women bears can't be chiefs! Is Gore Fang that stupid?!?" exclaimed Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "Son, have did you listen to what I had said?" growled I. "So? If Rat Fang comes near me, I'll skin her alive! Problem solved!" said Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "Yous can't do that unless she attacks you!" snapped I. "She's going to do that anyway! What's the point?" retorted Talon Of Mighty eagle. "Do you know ANYTHING about the tribe code?" snarled I. "Yes! I fight for survival just like other bears!" snarled Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "That's NOT the code! You fight for your tribe! Not for yourself!" snarled I. "That's stupid! The tribe code sucks! So does this tribe!!!" snarled Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "WELL, IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT, MAYBE YOU SHOULD LEAVE THIS TRIBE!!!" bellowed I. "FINE!!! I WILL!!! I NEVER WANT TO SEE Y'ALL EVER AGIAN!!!" bellowed Talon Of Mighty Eagle. "ALRIGHT, GO!!!" bellowed I. Talon Of Mighty Eagle glared at me and ran out of this forest. "What's going on? I heard bellowing!" exclaimed a voice. I turned around and saw Black Storm. "Our son doesn't like this tribe. I told him if he doesn't like it here, he should leave! And, that's what he did." replied I. "WHAT?!?!?! How can you do that? He's our only son!!! He's our flesh and blood!!! How could you order him to leave our tribe?" exclaimed Black Storm. "He said that he never wanted to see us ever agian! So, I let him get his wish!" growled I. "Something bad could have happened to him!!!" snarled Black Storm. "Nova Lee, you let your son leave our tribe? How could you?" replied a voice. Black Storm and I turned around and saw Acorn Tree and Ash Fall. "His wish was to never see us agian! So, I let his get his wish!" snarled I. "He's our tribe's future chief!" retorted Ash Fall. "Not anymore!" exclaimed I. "He's your son!" retorted Acorn Tree. "Well, he can be my son somewhere else!" snapped I. "Nova Lee, I thought you were a good mom! But, you let our son go to a dangerous place! Maybe I was wrong!" growled Black Storm. "I need to tell Red Wood about this!" exclaimed Acorn Tree. "I'll come with you!" exclaimed Black Storm to Acorn Tree. "Me too!" exclaimed Ash Fall to Acorn Tree. I watched them go to Red Wood's burrow. Suddenly, I felt a pang of guilt and worry. Maybe I shouldn't have let Talon Of Mighty Eagle leave this tribe. Black Storm's right, the world is a dangerous place. Where ever my so is, I sure hope he's okay.
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 3, 2007 15:26:15 GMT -5
Wow harsh! Good chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 4, 2007 9:19:41 GMT -5
Chapter 4
"YOU LET TALON OF MIGHTY EAGLE LEAVE OUR LAND?" bellowed my father. "It was his wish father." said I in a quiet voice. "I'm ashamed of you, Nova Lee." growled my father. "I'm ashamed of myself too, father." said I. "He was going to take my place as Rain Tribe's chief! Now who's going to take my place?" grunted my father. "Nova Lee, Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, and I can pick up his scent and convince him to come back." suggested Black Storm. "That's a fine idea, young one. Well, I suggest y'all go this instant before he goes too far." said my father. "Before we leave, there's something we got to tell you." said I. "What is it?" asked my father. I told him about Rat Fang and how she killed Skunk Tail and Beauty Of The Night and her plans to kill us black bears. "I thought there was something suspicious about Rat Fang!" growled my father. "What are we going to do?!" exclaimed Acorn Tree. "Y'all go find Talon Of Mighty Eagle, the others and I will keep our noses on the sniff for Rat Fang's scent on our land." said my father. "Yes father." said I. "Now, go!" demanded my father. We dipped our heads and raced towards my son's scent. We ran over forty fox lengths. Just then, we picked up Amber Mist's scent. We stopped and turned around, and saw Amber Mist. "Amber Mist!" panted Ash Fall. "What are y'all going?" asked Amber Mist. I told her what happened. "That's a little harsh on your son don't you think Nova Lee?" growled Amber Mist. "I know, that's why we're trying to find him!" exclaimed I. "What are you doing on our land?" asked Acorn Tree. "Duh! I'm here so we can figure out what we're going to do about Rat Fang!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Nova Lee told Red Wood about Rat Fang. He said he'll keep his nose on the look out for her." said Ash Fall. "That's good! I hate to see your tribe slaughtered by her!" sighed Amber Mist in relief. "I hate to keep this conversation short, but we got to find my son!" exclaimed Black Storm. "Can I come with y'all?" asked Amber Mist. "Shouldn't you keep an eye on Rat Fang?" asked Acorn Tree. "My tribe is calling me an immature liar! They're making fun of me! Besides, your tribe will keep an eye on Rat Fang! Rat Fang is getting suspicious about me! I think she wants to kill me too! Can't y'all see that I have to get away from my tribe?" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Woah! In that case, you better come with us! I would really hate to see you killed!" said I. "Thank y'all so much!" said Amber Mist. "Besides, you were a big help to us the last time we left. If will be a really good idea if you came along." said Black Storm. "Alright, it's settled. Amber Mist is coming with us. Now, let's go find my son!" said I. We sniffed around for my son's scent. After a few sniffs, we finally picked up my son's scent. We raced towards it. I silently prayed to Spirit Tribe that my son will be okay.
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 5, 2007 9:29:40 GMT -5
good chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 5, 2007 18:40:38 GMT -5
Chapter 5
The search was on. Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Amber Mist, Black Storm, and I were finding my son. We were no longer in our forest home. My son in not in the forest. "I sure hope we find my nephew." said Acorn Tree. "Where can he be?" asked Amber Mist. "He's definatley not in the forest." said Ash Fall. "If a cougar dares touch him, I'll rip its guts out! If a human dares touch him, I'll decapitate it!" snarled Black Storm. "We'll find him. Don't worry." said I. Although, I wasn't sure if we will ever find him. "He must of been running really fast." said Ash Fall. "I wonder where he's heading..." murmured Amber Mist. "Not anywhere near us that's for sure." said I. "He can be anywhere!" shrilled Acorn Tree. "Wait! My son loves to fish! He's probably near a big fishing pond!" said I. "Good thinking, sweetheart! He's probably near water!" exclaimed Black Storm with hope shining in his eyes. "Well, if Talon Of Mighty Eagle is near water, then let's go find water." growled Ash Fall. "Everyone, start sniffing around for water!" demanded I. We all lifted up our noses, and began sniffing for water. We sniffed and sniffed. Then, I picked up the faintest scent of a medium-sized pond. "I can smell water y'all! Follow me!" demanded I. Everyone's eyes shone with hope. I raced towards the scent. My traveling mates ran after me. As we ran, the scent of the pond got stronger. "I can smell water!" exclaimed Black Storm. "Me too!" exclaimed Amber Mist. As the scent of water got stronger, we ran even faster. "Faster everyone! I can see the pond!" demanded I. Everyone nodded, and we ran faster. We were getting closer and closer to the pond. I can definatley see the pond, and I can smell my son's scent there too. "I smell him! He's here!" exclaimed Black Storm. We ran and ran. Then, we skidded to a hault. We were now at the pond. "We made it! We made it!" panted Amber Mist. "Talon Of Mighty Eagle! Talon Of Mighty Eagle!" called Black Storm. "Little darling! Come out, come out where ever you are!" called Acorn Tree. "Please come on out little guy!" called Amber Mist. "Come on out you little twerp!" called Ash Fall. "Son! Please come on out! I'm sorry!" called I. "He's not here anymore." croaked a voice. We turned around, and saw Night Wing.
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 6, 2007 9:14:17 GMT -5
Night Wing!! Yea!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 6, 2007 18:52:34 GMT -5
Chapter 6
We all gasped as we saw are dear old friend. "Night Wing! It's so great to see you agian!" grunted Amber Mist. "It's been a long time!" exclaimed I. "We're so happy to see you!" exclaimed Black Storm. "It's a thrill to see you!" grunted Acorn Tree. "What they said." said Ash Fall. "It's wonderful to see y'all too. I see that y'all are looking for Talon Of Mighty Eagle." crowed Night Wing. "Yes, I had a fight with him and he ran away." said I with sorrow flooding my body agian. "He was here, but he left two hours ago." croaked Night Wing. "Oh my! Now will never find him!" shrilled Acorn Tree. "We got to find him!" exclaimed Black Storm. "It's getting late. Y'all are many pawsteps away from the forest. I suggest y'all do some fishing and settle here for the night." rasped Night Wing. "We can't stop now! We got to find my son!" protested I. "You will never find him if your tired and hungry. Your son eats and sleeps too. Infact, I bet he's looking for a place to sleep right now. So, why don't you and your traveling mates rest here and do some fishing?" cawed Night Wing. "You're right Night Wing. We should have a meal and sleep for the night." said I. "Once morning comes, I'll help y'all find Talon Of Mighty Eagle." croaked Night Wing. "You will? Oh, thank you ever so much Night Wing! You're the best raven a bear could ask for!" exclaimed Black Storm with gratitude in his eyes. "You're very welcome father bear. It's my pleasure to help." cawed Night Wing. "Well, let's start fishing." said I. We headed over to the pond. We formed a horizontal line right infront of the pond. We sat and waited. We waited and waited. Then, Amber Mist swatted her paw into the water. A grayish blue fish flew in the air. Amber Mist caught it in her mouth. "Great catch, Amber Mist! That fish is huge!" exclaimed Ash Fall. Amber Mist walked towards Night Wing and dropped the fish in front of her. "Here Night Wing, this fish is for you." said Amber Mist. "Thanks child, but I like my meat dead. I'll eat the left-overs." crowed Night Wing. "Alright, I'll give you the left overs." said Amber Mist as she picked up the fish. Amber Mist went back to her fishing spot. She lied down and began to eat her catch. I saw Ash Fall threw her head down in the water. A few seconds earlier, Ash Fall's raised her head back up with a greenish gray fish in her mouth. "Nice catch!" said Amber Mist as she chewed up her fish. "Thanks." said Ash Fall. As soon as she said that, Black Storm swiped his paw into the water with a fish in it. "Another fine catch!" exclaimed Acorn Tree. A few minutes later, a huge and fat gray fish swam right in front of me. Quick as lightning, I slapped my paw into the water and grabbed the fish. "Wow Nova Lee! That fish is huge!" exclaimed Amber Mist. I lied down and bit into the fish. A few more minutes later, Acorn Tree dipped a paw in the water. A few seconds later, a dark gray fish was speared into my sister's claws. "Wow! This pond is full of fish!" exclaimed Amber Mist. We all ate our catches and fished for more fish. We caught lots of fish and ate the all. Night Wing pecked at the fish carcasses. We all washed the fish down with pond water. "That's a great meal!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "Fish always are a great meal!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "I'm ready for sleep now!" yawned Acorn Tree. "How's your dinner, Night Wing?" asked Amber Mist. "Delicious young grizzly. Y'all picked out some great fish." rasped Night Wing. "Well, if we're going to find Talon Of Mighty Eagle, I suggest we all get some sleep." yawned I. We all curled up near a shady tree near the pond. We all said our good-nights and fell into the black wave of sleep.
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 7, 2007 9:16:35 GMT -5
Great chapter! Let's hear some more!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 7, 2007 10:21:29 GMT -5
Chapter 7
I was in Spirit Tribe. To my surprise, I saw Amber mist. "Nova Lee, why are we here?" asked Amber Mist. "I don't know." said I. We heared the birds sing. We saw silver fish leaping out of the crystal clear water to snatch flies. We smelt bears. Speaking of which, we saw two young grizzly bears walking towards us. Amber Mist had a joy filled look on her face. "Skunk Tail! Beauty Of The Night! I'm so happy to see you two agian!" sqealed Amber Mist in delight as she went over towards them to hug them. The two young grizzly bears hugged her back. "It's a delight to see you agian as well dear sister!" squealed Beauty Of The Night in delight. "Ooh, that Rat Fang! I saw her kill you two! She lied to the tribes and made up a prochecy! I just want to rip her pelt off and leave her body for the vultures!" snarled Amber Mist. "We know. We did see you. You were very lucky that Rat Fang didn't catch you spying. " said Skunk Tail. "Skunk Tail, you would have made a mighty fine chief. Much better than Rat DUNG!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Y'all just have to keep a close eye on her. Anyway, were here to give y'all two prophecies." said Skunk Tail. "What are they?" asked I. "The first one is this, listen closely." said Beauty Of The Night. "We're listening." said I. "The eagle has soared to a far away place. A place of humans and bizarre animals. A place of bright lights and odd objects. If five determined bears can make it to the new nest, they shall bring the eagle home." said Beauty Of The Night. "The eagle? Do you mean my son?"" asked I. "The next prophecy is this. Listen carefully." said Skunk Tail. "Uh, we're...listening." said I. "A terrrible rat is endangering the tribes. If two courageous bears can defeat her, the rat will be no more, and peace shall finally come at last." said Skunk Tail. "The rat? Do you mean Rat Fang? And, who is this 'eagle?' Tell me!" demanded I. "You will find out, Nova Lee. Don't worry." said Beauty Of The Night. Soon, the two young grizzly bears walked back towards the direction they came from. "Bye, brother! Bye, sister! We shall meet agian!" hollered Amber Mist as she waved her paw. Soon, all became black agian. I woke up. I saw that amber Mist was awake as well. "Amber Mist! I dreamt that I was in Spirit Tribe, and you were in it too!" whispered I. "I know! I had the same dream, and you were in it to!" whispered Amber Mist. "What do you think those prophecies mean?" asked I. "I don't know, but we shall find out soon." whispered Amber Mist. "We should go back to sleep. When morning comes, we'll tell the others." whispered I. "Agreed." whispered Amber Mist. A few moments later, Amber Mist is back to sleep. I however, couldn't get back to sleep. What do Beauty Of The Night and Skunk Tail mean? Who is this 'eagle?' Who is this 'rat?'
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