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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 26, 2007 17:26:53 GMT -5
Yes, I think the personality would also be good! ^^
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Post by Tigerfur on Jun 26, 2007 23:49:39 GMT -5
She is friendly, nice, kind, and caring all the time, but when you get her mad she has a tongue as sharp as a thorn, she is one of the best fighters and hunters in the Clan, willing to fight and defend her Clan in any situation.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 27, 2007 13:03:41 GMT -5
Thanks, she'll first be a kit and then an apprentice . . . uh, who do you want to mentor her?
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Post by Tigerfur on Jun 27, 2007 14:17:43 GMT -5
I would like Dawnfur to mentor her, so they can become best friends! ;D
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 27, 2007 14:18:59 GMT -5
Okay, lol.
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Post by Tear on Jun 27, 2007 17:05:38 GMT -5
Here is my kit: Name: Hushkit Gender: She-cat Appearance: Hushkit is a frosted white she-cat with silver tabby on the ears and tail tip. Personality: Hushkit is a dare devil. She will leave the Clan for good if ordered to. Hushkit is not the cat to trust when in battle. She might turn to the other clan for battle and fight against her own Clan.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 27, 2007 18:54:36 GMT -5
Who would you like to mentor Hushkit?
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Post by Tear on Jun 27, 2007 21:51:17 GMT -5
If Darkness stays I would like him to be hushkit's mentor. If not I would like Firestripe to mentor her.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 28, 2007 10:04:25 GMT -5
Alright...
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Post by Shadeheart on Aug 8, 2007 14:00:18 GMT -5
Frostywind silently followed Dawnfur as she was running, a little slower than usual, through the territory, it looked as if she was heading someplace. Has she got another secret place now? wondered Frostywind, slowing down as Dawnfur began slowing down, and then walking. Frostywind stopped, and jumped behind a holly bush as Dawnfur glanced around, making sure no cat was following her.
This is it? A tree? thought Frostywind, shocked. She watched Dawnfur walk up to the tree and climb it a bit, then enter a small circle-like hole in it. Frostywind sighed. What a waste of time, she thought. "Frostywind, I know you're there." mewed a cat behind Frostywind, and immediately knew it was Dawnfur. Frostywind's fur stood on end, and she slowly turned to face her sister. "Um, hi . . .?"
Dawnfur laughed. "I knew you were following me, Frostywind. You need to find something better to do than find out all the places I want to keep private." Dawmfur seemed kind about it, but Frostywind could tell she was slightly angry. "Sorry, Dawnfur, but if you didn't want me to find this place and you knew I was following you, why'd you lead me here?" Frostywind asked, letting her fur lay flat again.
Dawnfur looked taken aback, she didn't know how to answer. "I, um . . ." Dawnfur stammered, but was interrupted by another voice behind them both. "I knew about this place for ages. I know about every place there is, whether it's in ThunderClan, ShadowClan, RiverClan or WindClan." the voice mewed loudly. Frostywind sighed.
"Anyone would know all that if you've been a loner for as long as you have." Frostywind pointed out. Darkness stepped out from behind his hiding spot and hissed. "Well, I'm lucky then, aren't I?" he growled, then turned to Dawnfur. "You'll never find a spot that hasn't once had my scent lingering there." Darkness mewed, and sat down.
"Whatever, if you want to annoy someone, make it someone who actually wants to listen to you!" Dawnfur hissed angrily, and stormed away from them. "Dawnfur doesn't like it that I'm your friend." mewed Frostywind. "Okay," Darkness mewed. "Odd. Anyway, I could show you a spot that only I've been to, besides our warrior ancestors, of course."
"I think I like it better in places every cat knows." Frostywind murmured. "I'd better get back to camp, and find out what we're doing with your band of rogues." Frostywind turned to go back to camp. "I'll go, too!" Darkness called, running after Frostywind. "Okay." Frostywind meowed. "But, aren't some of those cats your friends?" she asked. "Do you really want to fight them?"
Darkness' tail lashed angrily, and his fur stood on end. "I hate every one of them! They think they're so great, they think they can control every cat, they think taunting cats and killing them is the best way to win fights!" Darkness snarled. "I don't want to see them happy and thriving, I want to see them gone." Darkness was falling behind a bit, and Frostywind looked at him, and saw that his eyes were narrowed; not in anger, but it almost looked as if he did want to see them again.
Frostywind quickly looked away, and they soon reached camp again. Spottedstar, Cheetahstar, Ravenstar, and senior warriors from each Clan except ShadowClan were there. "Frostywind, Darkness, come! You must know the plan we choose as well. And we need your help deciding. Flamestripe and Dawnfur are already here!" Ravenstar meowed, signaling with her tail for Darkness and Frostywind to go to them.
So Frostywind sat down beside Flamestripe, knowing Dawnfur is still angry at her. Darkness sat down beside Frostywind, too, and the three leaders began explaining what they had been discussing so far. "I still like Spottedstar's first idea, announcing an attack but fighting on your side." Darkness meowed calmly. "Yes, most warriors like that idea, so we'll most likely use that, but we may come up with a better plan." Cheetahstar replied.
There were more ideas, like attack directly, surprise attacking in many different ways, attack randomly in groups, hide and attack warriors one by one, and more, but Darkess still urged on Spottedstar's first plan. Frostywind sat there, nodding, listening and suggesting more ideas. It was nearly moonrise by the time they had decided on a plan, and it was what Darkness wanted, Spottedstar's idea.
Frostywind walked over to the fresh kill pile and picked up a rabbit. I wonder why Darkness wanted Spottedstar's first plan so much, she thought, brining it to a warm spot near the center of the clearing. There were so many nice ideas, that one wasn't nearly the one I'd want as much as attacking one by one and such.
Frostywind took a bite of the rabbit, knowing better than to ask Darkness why he liked Spottedstar's plan so much. The leaders said good bye to each other and leaving the camp.Frostywind soon finished the rabbit and went straight to the warriors den, but before she reached it, she heard Ravenstar call a Clan meeting. Frostywind knew it was to tell the Clan what they were going to do, so she sat at the Gathering spot and listened, even though she knew what the plan was.
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'Tis the end of Frostywind's chapter, and I was going to make a "special" chapter that features Darkness now, but it would contain stuff that you might not want to know before the fight, so I'll make his chapter once the fight is over. ;D Oh, btw, I would make Darkness' chapter black, but since I'm using the skin that makes the background colour black, I can't for it would be unreadable. ;D So instead it will be brown. Or yellow. I don't know. o.o; I think Dawnfur's is yellow. Um . . . o.o;
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Flamestripe listened intently to the plan Ravenstar was telling the Clan about. He had no idea she would tell cats exactly what and where they had to be and at what time. He pricked his ears and listened to nothing except Ravenstar's voice as Ravenstar called his name. "You will be leader of one group, and make sure you disguise yourselves as part of their Clan." Flamestripe nodded, happy that his leader trusted him to lead a group.
They had decided on Spottedstar's first plan, but it was changed a little. Just in case they were late for the battle, the leaders decided to have a group to fight DarknessClan straight away. Flamestripe met his group at the entrance to ThunderClan camp, there were a few cats from each Clan. "Flamestripe, how will we disguise our scent?" asked a calico tom.
"I think we should either get really wet, by the river, of course, and then dry ourselves off to disguise the scent, or roll in fox dung, but maybe that's not a good idea because they'd wonder why we smell so bad." Flamestripe explained, hoping he could be a good leader and make sure no cat dies.
A few cats nodded, but others looked uncertain. "Or we could rub against the walls of that place, and just maybe pick up their scents." Flamestripe added, hoping this was a more "simple" idea. "I agree with that plan!" mewed a silver and black tom, who looked brave, loyal, and slightly old. Flamestripe guessed this was a deputy. "But we should also disguise our scent with one of the first things Flametsripe suggested." a light brown and darker brown she-cat mewed. "Just in case."
Flamestripe and the silver and black tom both nodded. "Oh, right, I'm Silvershadow, deputy of RiverClan." the silver and black cat mewed. Flamestripe bowed his head to Silvershadow. "Greetings, I'm Flamestripe, as you might already know." Flamstripe replied. Silvershadow nodded. "I'm Whitepatch." the calico tom meowed, dipping his head to Flamestripe, who nodded back.
"I'm Hazelice," the brown she-cat purred, dipping her head. After being introduced to the three other cats Flamestripe had to lead, they all headed towards the river to mask their scent. Flamestripe let every cat go before him, then he jumped into the river. Once he got out again, spitting out water, his thick fur was very wet.
Flamestripe shook his fur, and water flew everywhere, hitting Hazelice and Silvershadow. "Stop that!" Silvershadow hissed. "It's not my fault I'm not like RiverClan, who actually enjoy getting their paws wet." Flamestripe meowed. His fur was no sticking up everywhere, and he was about to groom himself, but Hazelice stopped him. "You never know, their fur might always be like that. If not, we'll groom ourselves quickly." Hazelice meowed. Silvershadow murmured agreement, and Flamestripe just nodded.
He led the way to the cave where DarknessClan was. They each rubbed their fur against the walls of the cave, and managed to get themselves to smell a bit more like DarknessClan cats. "I'll go in and check to see how they keep their fur." Flamestripe meowed, and crept into the cave, tail and head held high as if he just defeated the most powerful cat in the forest.
Fkanestripe saw both a tom and a she-cat come out of what looked like the warriors den, looking like they had just finished a conversation. The tom's fur was messy and matted, with a little bit of mud. The she-cat's pelt, however, was nicely groomed. Flamestripe quickly raced out of the cave to tell his group.
"By the looks of it," mewed Flamestripe. "The toms don't bother to groom their fur, and let it get messy, but the she-cats always groom themselves." The group nodded, and the tom cats made sure their fur was messy, but the two she-cats, Hazelice and Hollowsky, both groomed their fur neatly.
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I'm done for now, cause I have to log off! XD
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 8, 2007 18:12:11 GMT -5
FANTASTIC chapters! ;D I hope you update again really soon! ;D
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Post by Shadeheart on Aug 8, 2007 20:12:11 GMT -5
Tigerfur joined!! YAY!!! ;D Oh yeah, if you want your name to be capital, so to your profile thing and that change name thing and choose an avatar and signature and stuff if you want. ;D
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Post by Tear on Aug 8, 2007 23:09:15 GMT -5
Great Chapter
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Post by Shadeheart on Aug 9, 2007 14:36:00 GMT -5
The group of cats sat there, waiting for Darkness to appear and call together DarknessClan. Flamestripe's ears were pricked, and he heard a rustle in the bushes a few tail lengths away from the group. It must be Darkness, he thought, lashing his tail. Why wouldn't he hurry up?
The black cat came out of the bushes, muddy, dirty, and smelling horrible, like he was in the wild for ages without grooming himself once. Flamestripe was about to open his mouth to say "Hurry up," but Silvershadow hissed quietly, basically saying not to say anything.
Darkness merely nodded to the group of cats, his eyes narrowed, and walked into the cave, tail high in the air. "Darkness!" a black and silver cat mewed, loudly. Murmurs were heard from many cats in the cave, and cats came out of their dens to see their leader.
Flamestripe signaled with his tail for Silvershadow, Hollowsky, Hazelice, Whitepatch and Oceanfire to follow him into the cave.
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I'm busy right now, so I'm done right now. xD
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 9, 2007 21:12:50 GMT -5
Thanks for the advice Shadeheart, i'll go and do that as soon i'm done posting this message, and thanks for welcomeing me too! ;D AWESOME start for the chapter! I hope you finish really soon! I wonder if Darkness will betray the Clans?
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Post by Shadeheart on Aug 10, 2007 12:09:40 GMT -5
Maybe . . . --~-- The group of cats pretending to be shocked by the arrival of Darkness. "Where were you?" asked a loner she-cat, who was shocked like the rest of the cats. "Spying on ThunderClan," Darkness replied simply, his tail lashing. Apparently, he had no need to call the Clan together, as every cat was surrounding him.
"They're planning to attack us," Darkness continued. "So we'll have to fight back, prepare yourselves, as they are attacking today. I don't exactly know when, but soon, I am sure of that." shocked murmurs spread through the loner cats. Flamestripe, Hazelice, Silvershadow, Whitepatch and Hollowsky pretending to be shocked, as well.
"We can defeat ThunderClan easily," a she-cat with a glossy black pelt meowed. "Yes, we can," Darkness agreed, bowing his head to her. "But they're also attacking with WindClan and RiverClan. We may be outnumbered, but we can still win, if you do know how to fight." he added, his tail lashing. A few cats nodded.
All the cats became silent as they heard yowls from outside the cave. A moment later, cats from ThunderClan, WindClan and RiverClan were all pouncing, growling and preparing to fight. Flamestripe groomed his fur neatly and joined a group of ThunderClan warriors - Dawnfur, Frostywind and Ravenstar.
Flamestripe leaped at a blue-gray tom, with Dawnfur at his side. Flamestripe clawed down his face, and Dawnfur bit his tail hard. The loner hissed, and managed to bite down on one of Flamestripe's front legs, but Dawnfur pulled the cat's tail, making him lose his grip on Flamestripe. The loner hissed, bleeding, and left the cave, hissing.
Flamestripe then pounced on a sleek black she-cat, while Dawnfur went to fight with Frostywind and Ravenstar.--~-- Next time I'll try to write when I'm not busy.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 10, 2007 13:18:14 GMT -5
GREAT part chapter, I hope you write more soon, it's okay that your writing while your busy, at least your writing something instead of not at all.
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