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Post by Shadeheart on Sept 15, 2007 20:55:00 GMT -5
Nooo, a fire! Continue soon! ^^
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Post by Tigerkit on Sept 16, 2007 10:24:27 GMT -5
Great chapter! Fires are bad, I hope nobody dies, continue soon please! ;D
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Post by Tear on Sept 30, 2007 15:27:18 GMT -5
Chapter 9
Those who were still in camp: Kits: Firekit, Tearkit, Tigerkit, Frostkit, Shadekit, Blizzardkit, Hazelkit, Gentlekit, Goldkit, Flamekit, Ashkit, Smokekit, Pantherkit, Lionkit, Lynxkit, Cougarkit, Jaguarkit Elders: Scratchtail, Darkeye Apprentices: Snowpaw, Silentpaw, Duskpaw, Mintypaw Others: Echostar, Drizzleflower, Stormtail, Beartail, Quickfoot
All seemed quiet as the fire raged through the camp. No cat yowled as the fire came to close to their pelts. Stormcloud carried Sandkit through the river. She could here a cat or two yowling to get across the river faster. A cat yowled back to the one RainClan cat, "Your mad! WinterClan can't swim as good as you!"
Feeling that her Clanmate was right she swam as best as her paws would carry her. Soon her paws grew numb with the cold ice water. Little Sandkit was now on her back trying not to get wet or she would freeze. Stormcloud could not see Beautykit or her leader. Where was her Clan, more like her new Clan?
Stormcloud finally got to the shore and let Sandkit fall off. They padded slowly to the reeds and moss. Why were they in RainClan territory? Dragonstar padded slowly to Lightclaw. Stormcloud say him whisper something to her. Dragonstar yowled to her Clan, "We will let WinterClan stay here until the fire is gone, but Lightclaw, has some cats still there. So here are the cats going back with him to get the dead and alive. Misticflight, Moonrise, Gryphonclaw, Stoneeagle, and Forestpaw and co."
Lightclaw now called to his Clan, "I will have Stormcloud and Phoenixpaw come with. If Phoenixpaw does a good job he will be made a warrior." Stormcloud padded over to Phoenixpaw. He was covered in ash and smoke. Lightclaw led the cats back over the river.
Meanwhile Snowpaw was huddled in a corner of the apprentices den with a few kits. Since most of the cats forgot about the apprentices, elders, and kits, Snowpaw decided to stay and help them. Most were in the nursery or apprentice den. Snowpaw was with Scratchtail, Silentpaw, Goldkit, Ashkit, Smokekit, Flamekit, Blizzardkit, Hazelkit, and Gentlekit.
Darkeye, Echostar, Beartail, Quickfoot, and a couple of the others were in the nursery and leaders den. They had no idea that the whole Clan was gone. They were just sitting there worried about the others. Echostar was completely still, but his chest was rising and falling slowly.
Next: Chapter 10 Rescue
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Post by Shadeheart on Sept 30, 2007 18:14:51 GMT -5
Great chapter, Tearkit! ;D
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Post by Tigerkit on Oct 1, 2007 14:43:59 GMT -5
EXCELLENT chapter! ;D I hope that everybody comes out alive, update again soon please! ;D
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Post by Tear on Oct 2, 2007 21:15:17 GMT -5
I will update it soon, but here is a little something for you to know: In the story the kits won't always be in the same Clan. I will choose which Clan the kits go to. I need to know your personality, warrior name(if want new one), mentor, and Clan you want to be in. I will make the final decision. The next chapter will take place a few days after the cats who were left come back. RainClan and WinterClan will be friends forever. OakClan has a special plot, actually all the Clans will have different plots, but in will lead to one major plot. Now all the apprentices have been made warriors. Here is the new allegiances for all the clans. It will have who the cat is mate to and their apprentice if they have one. I really can't start without the character things. WinterClan Leader - DEAD Deputy Lightclaw - yellow tabby tom apprentice: Hazelpaw Medicine cat - DEAD Warriors (Toms and she-cats without kits) Duskfeather - blue gray she-cat Frozencloud - frosted white she-cat Phoenixfire - red gold tom apprentice: Gentlepaw Dappleclaw - dapple gray she-cat Mintcloud - minty sea green blue she-cat apprentice: Jaguarpaw Quickfoot - silver tabby tom Squirrelheart - ginger and brown tabby she-cat Silentheart - silent white tom Heatherstripe - brown tabby she-cat Dryfeather - light silver tabby she-cat Apprentices (More than six moons old; in training to become warriors) Sandpaw - golden yellow tabby kit with green eyes Shadepaw - dark gray tabby kit with ice-blue eyes Firepaw - dark golden brown tabby kit with amber green eyes Beautypaw - beautiful ginger kit with a flame colored pelt and bright green eyes Tigerpaw - golden kit with jet black stripes, white forepaws, and ice-blue eyes Frostpaw - white kit with silver tabby on the ears and light crystal blue eyes Tearpaw - silver tabby with very light gray stripes and aquamarine eyes Hazelpaw - white and brown tom with hazel eyes Gentlepaw - gentle brown tom Lynxpaw - lynx colored she-cat with blue gray eyes Jaguarpaw - black tom with amber eyes Queens (she-cat expecting or nursing kits) Stormcloud - silver tabby she-cat mother of Phoenixfire's kits Leopardfoot - tan she-cat with black patches mother of Quickfoot's kits Snowstorm - white she-cat mother of Stormtail's kits Elders (Former warriors and queens; now retired) Airfeather - white she-cat Kits(under six moons old) Goldkit - golden brown tom Ashkit - gray tom Smokekit - black tom Lionkit - golden brown tom Pantherkit - black she-cat Cougarkit - tan tom
OakClan Leader Banditstar - brown tom with a black stripe over the eyes Deputy Blackstripe - gray tom with black stripes Medicine cat Fogfeather - foggy gray she-cat Heartstone - brown and gray she-cat Warriors Featherstreak - silver tabby she-cat Hollowclaw - pale gray tom Staintail - white tom with a black tail Misticflower - gray black she-cat Bramblestrike - bramble colored tom Emberspark - yellow, red, and orange tabby tom Sapphirepelt - blue gray she-cat Queens Warmflower - yellow tabby she-cat Elders
RainClan Leader Dragonstar - black she-cat with red and gold streaks Deputy Linxtail - tan and black she-cat apprentice Sphinxpaw Medicine cat Dewdrop - blue gray she-cat Warriors Grassfire - gray green tom Hiddenheart - dark gray tom Seaflight - sea green blue she-cat Cinderpelt - fluffy gray she-cat Flightfeather - silver tabby she-cat apprentice Cloudpaw Shadowheart - black tom Queens Darkfeather - black and gray she-cat Elders Morningdew - old gray blue she-cat
FrozenClan Leader Froststar - frosted white she-cat Deputy Moonclaw - midnight white tom apprentice Nightpaw Medicine cat Kestraltail - brown tabby tom Followingsoul - pale gray tom Warriors Blueclaw - blue gray she-cat Tigerclaw - dark brown tabby tom apprentice Hawkpaw Shadeshadow - gray black tom Barkclaw - brown tom Vinewhisker - green gray tom Queens Tendersoul - silver tabby she-cat Grayheart - gray black she-cat Elders Rushingriver - blue gray she-cat
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Post by Tigerkit on Oct 5, 2007 14:55:15 GMT -5
Okay, here is my charcters information.
Personality: One of the best fighters and hunters in the Clan, has a reputation for being both of those things, kind, caring, and some-what considerate of others, but has a tongue as sharp as a thorn when you do the slightest thing to get her mad, she never changes her mind when she makes it up, she is also very stubborn when she wants to be, and willing to fight for her Clan in any situation.She worked hard at battle and hunting practice, which is how she became the best hunter and fighter within the Clan. (this is for when she becomes a warrior)
Name: Tigerfur
Mentor: Duskfeather
Clan: WinterClan
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Post by Tear on Oct 8, 2007 19:26:44 GMT -5
Thanks! Well I am starting with the apprentice/deputy ceremony and decision . Lightclaw has been made leader. The new medicine cat is now Frozencloud since she was around the medicine cat more than usual. WinterClan Leader - Lightstar - yellow tabby tom apprentice: Hazelpaw Deputy - Quickfoot - gray tabby tom Medicine cat - Frozencloud - frosted white she-cat Warriors (Toms and she-cats without kits) Duskfeather - blue gray she-cat Phoenixfire - red gold tom apprentice: Gentlepaw Dappleclaw - dapple gray she-cat Mintcloud - minty sea green blue she-cat apprentice: Jaguarpaw Squirrelheart - ginger and brown tabby she-cat Silentheart - silent white tom Heatherstripe - brown tabby she-cat Dryfeather - light silver tabby she-cat Apprentices (More than six moons old; in training to become warriors) Sandpaw - golden yellow tabby kit with green eyes Shadepaw - dark gray tabby kit with ice-blue eyes Firepaw - dark golden brown tabby kit with amber green eyes Beautypaw - beautiful ginger kit with a flame colored pelt and bright green eyes Tigerpaw - golden kit with jet black stripes, white forepaws, and ice-blue eyes Frostpaw - white kit with silver tabby on the ears and light crystal blue eyes Tearpaw - silver tabby with very light gray stripes and aquamarine eyes Hazelpaw - white and brown tom with hazel eyes Gentlepaw - gentle brown tom Lynxpaw - lynx colored she-cat with blue gray eyes Jaguarpaw - black tom with amber eyes Queens (she-cat expecting or nursing kits) Stormcloud - silver tabby she-cat mother of Phoenixfire's kits Leopardfoot - tan she-cat with black patches mother of Quickfoot's kits Snowstorm - white she-cat mother of Stormtail's kits Elders (Former warriors and queens; now retired) Airfeather - white she-cat Kits(under six moons old) Goldkit - golden brown tom Ashkit - gray tom Smokekit - black tom Lionkit - golden brown tom Pantherkit - black she-cat Cougarkit - tan tom
OakClan Leader Banditstar - brown tom with a black stripe over the eyes Deputy Blackstripe - gray tom with black stripes Medicine cat Fogfeather - foggy gray she-cat Heartstone - brown and gray she-cat Warriors Featherstreak - silver tabby she-cat Hollowclaw - pale gray tom Staintail - white tom with a black tail Misticflower - gray black she-cat Bramblestrike - bramble colored tom Emberspark - yellow, red, and orange tabby tom Sapphirepelt - blue gray she-cat Queens Warmflower - yellow tabby she-cat Kits Sapkit - pale honey she-cat Honeykit - honey she-cat Rainkit - gray tom
RainClan Leader Dragonstar - black she-cat with red and gold streaks Deputy Linxtail - tan and black she-cat apprentice Sphinxpaw Medicine cat Dewdrop - blue gray she-cat Warriors Grassfire - gray green tom Hiddenheart - dark gray tom Seaflight - sea green blue she-cat Cinderpelt - fluffy gray she-cat Flightfeather - silver tabby she-cat apprentice Cloudpaw Shadowheart - black tom Queens Darkfeather - black and gray she-cat Elders Morningdew - old gray blue she-cat Kits Featherkit - silver tabby tom Wingkit - silver tabby tom Mothkit - silver tabby she-cat
FrozenClan Leader Froststar - frosted white she-cat Deputy Moonclaw - midnight white tom apprentice Nightpaw Medicine cat Kestraltail - brown tabby tom Followingsoul - pale gray tom Warriors Blueclaw - blue gray she-cat Tigerclaw - dark brown tabby tom apprentice Hawkpaw Shadeshadow - gray black tom Barkclaw - brown tom Vinewhisker - green gray tom Queens Tendersoul - silver tabby she-cat Grayheart - gray black she-cat Elders Rushingriver - blue gray she-cat Kits Solokit - brown tabby tom Soulkit - silver tabby tom Spiritkit - white tabby she-cat Heartkit - gray black she-cat Graykit - gray tom Blackkit - black tom 4 Moons Later
Lightstar padded slowly out of his den. Moonlight was cast over the Highrock and clearing. His whole body shivered as he made his way to the Highrock. This was his first time doing a meeting. Lightstar hesitated, before leaping on the Highrock. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Highrock for a Clan meeting!"
The cats started to pour out of the dens. The new medicine cat Frozencloud was the first to come out of her den. Lightstar looked around to see that the cats came at the sound of his voice. Snowstorm and Mintcloud were side by side. Lightstar looked at Snowstorm. She was very sad about Stormtail dying just this morning.
Lightstar yowled, "Tonight, we will have a new deputy and apprentices! First with the deputy. I say these words before StarClan and the spirit of Stormtail, and that they will hear and approve my choice. Quickfoot will be the new deputy!" Quickfoot padded up to Lightstar and turned around to looked at the Clan, which was chanting his name.
Quickfoot sat back down next to Frozencloud. Lightstar sighed and continued, "Shadekit, come forward. From this day forward she will be known as Shadepaw. Dryfeather will be her mentor. Firekit, come forward. From this day forward she will be known as Firepaw. Silentheart will be her mentor."
He let Shadepaw and Firepaw meet their new mentors before calling, " Tigerkit, come. From this day forward she will be known as Tigerpaw. Her mentor will be Duskfeather. Duskfeather, I hope you treat you apprentice well. Sandkit, come now. She will be known as Sandpaw. Her mentor is Dappleclaw."
Lightstar watched as Sandpaw and Tigerpaw touched noses with their mentors. He murmured, "Beautykit, come. She will be known as Beautypaw. Her mentor is Heatherstripe. Frostkit will be known as Frostpaw. Her mentor is Squirrelheart. Last Tearkit. She will be known as Tearpaw. Quickfoot will be her mentor."
Tearpaw, Frostpaw, and Beautypaw padded up to their new mentors, before going off the bed. There Tigerpaw was whispering to Firepaw. "I think it is time we chose which Clan to live in. Like if we wanted to live in OakClan, or FrozenClan." Firepaw nodded. Tearpaw looked at Tigerpaw and asked, "You are seriously thinking of leaving?" Tigerpaw nodded, but then shook her head.
Tearpaw lowered her head on to her paws. She was tired after the night's activities. Tigerpaw and Firepaw continued to whisper to each other. Frostpaw layed down next to Tearpaw. Frostpaw's head was hurting. She licked her paws and chest before sleeping. Now the only sound was a hooting owl in the distance.
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Post by Tigerkit on Oct 9, 2007 13:55:17 GMT -5
WONDERFUL chapter! Yay, I got my apprentice name and mentor! ;D Don't forget, my cat wants to stay in WinterClan. Update again soon!!! ;D
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Post by Shadeheart on Oct 9, 2007 14:47:15 GMT -5
Great chapter, Tearkit!
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Post by Tigerkit on Oct 12, 2007 14:39:25 GMT -5
I added a little more on to my characters personality, check it out if you want Tearkit.
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Post by Tear on Oct 26, 2007 23:26:43 GMT -5
Chapter 11
Sandpaw departing Sandpaw awoke at dawn. Mist was still hanging in the mornings air. She shivered as she looked down on her sleeping sisters for the last time until gatherings, but she thought that FrozenClan would need her more since they lost a lot of cats during the great fires.
Padding out of the clearing she headed off the the boarder with them. Froststar had always liked her so she should feel no threat about her. Sandpaw layed down on the edge of the boarder with them. A FrozenClan patrol with Froststar in lead was heading her way. What luck! Froststar spotted Sandpaw laying on the boarder.
Stupid dad is making me get off the computer. Continue tomorrow.
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Post by Shadeheart on Oct 28, 2007 10:43:54 GMT -5
Great start chapter!
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Post by Tigerkit on Oct 28, 2007 14:18:41 GMT -5
Even thoughn it was short, it was still a FANTASTIC chapter! I hope you update again soon! ;D
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Post by Tear on Dec 10, 2007 22:55:25 GMT -5
Chapter 12
Shadepaw paced back and forth in the cold apprentices den. Her eyes were locked on her dark gray tabby paws. A yowl from the the rocks made Shadepaw jump. She raced outside to see why Lightstar called a meeting. "Tonight is the gathering." She stared at her leader. Shadepaw had forgotten that there was a gathering because she never went to one, nor did any of her sisters.
"These are the cats going with me and Quickfoot: Beautypaw, Tigerpaw, Shadepaw, Duskfeather, Dryfeather, Phoenixfire, Hazelpaw, Silentheart, and Gentlepaw." Well she was going tonight. Her eyes looked around to find Tigerpaw and Beautypaw. They were sitting near the entrance to the camp.
Soon, Shadepaw felt her paws move as she walked down with the other Clan cats. The gathering place was huge. Beautypaw and Tigerpaw stopped to look at all the cats already there.
"Lets get started." Shadepaw looked up at the leaders. "Who was that?" she asked Gentlepaw, who had been their several times before. "Oh that is Froststar of FrozenClan, "Gentlepaw whispered.
"FrozenClan is fine. We have two new warriors and apprentice here. They are Cloudpelt , Stormstreak, and Sandpaw. I am done." "OakClan is healthy. We have one new apprentice and her name is Firepaw. I am done." "RainClan lives right now on only fish, but we still have enough. We have one new apprentice and that is Tearpaw. Our warriors have scented WinterClan in our territory, and as well as the other Clans."
"We did not intrude on your territory!" "Well my warriors have and so has Tearpaw. Tearpaw, tell them." Shadepaw gulped. Would she tell that Beautypaw, Tigerpaw, Sandpaw, Firepaw, Frostpaw, and her have been seeing Tearpaw. "Well, yes. I saw all the deputies from the other Clans on our territory."
Well got to go now. Bye.
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Post by Tigerkit on Dec 11, 2007 14:54:24 GMT -5
GREAT chapter! I'm glad Tearpaw didn't snitch, update again soon! ;D
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Post by Shadeheart on Dec 11, 2007 21:29:23 GMT -5
Wow, Tearpaw is awesome! ^^ Great chapter!
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