Silent Dusk

[Tear]

Thaks. Beatypelt, Shadeheart, here:

Phoenixpaw's eye widened and asked, "Do you have names for the kits? Oh I did not catch your name. I am Phoenixpaw." The she-cat replied to Phoenixpaw. "I am Stormpaw. My kits are Shadekit." Stormpaw placed her tail on a dark gray brown tabby she-kit. She continued, "This is her twin Beautykit. Here is Hushkit." She placed her silver tabby tail on white she-kit with silver tabby ears. Stormpaw mew, "These four are Firekit, Tigerkit, Frostkit and Sandkit."

Stormpaw's kits are Shadekit, Beautykit, Firekit, Hushkit, Tigerkit, Frostkit, and Sandkit. They are all girls.
Here are their warrior names and who they are after:
Beautykit=Beautypelt, Shadekit=Shadeheart, Firekit=Fire/spark, Hushkit=Hushpad, Tigerkit=Tigerfur, Frostkit=Frostfire, Sandkit=Sandstorm/7

[Shadeheart]

Cool! ^^

Please type more chapters! ^^

[Tigerfur]

I LOVE your story! I hope you continue soon! ;D

Tigerkit- golden she-kit with jet-black stripes, white forepaws, and ice-blue eyes

[Tear]

here is Stormpaw/leafs she-kits:
Stormpaw - silver tabby she-cat with ice-blue eyes(mother)
Stripepaw - dark golden gray brown tabby tom with amber green eyes
Tigerkit - golden kit with jet black stripes, white forepaws, and ice-blue eyes
Shadekit - dark gray tabby kit with ice-blue eyes
Beautykit - beautiful ginger kit with a flame colored pelt and bright greeen eyes
Firekit - dark golden brown tabby kit with amber green eyes
Sandkit - golden yellow tabby kit with green eyes
Frostkit - white kit with silver tabby on the ears and light crystal blue eyes
Tearkit - golden kit with black stripes and white forepaws, and ice-blue eyes. Scar across her right eye.
Tell me if this is not what your kit wants to look like.

[Tear]

Chapter 6
Duskpaw's chapter

Duskpaw watched as Phoenixpaw, Stormpaw, and Stormpaw's kits. She was very dissapointed at the choice of Phoenixpaw's new love. She was ready to make Phoenixpaw love her not a flea bitten loner she-cat. Duskpaw padded up to Phoenixpaw and rubbed her head on his chin. She purred, "Did you catch anything?" She took no notice of Stormpaw and her kits.

Phoenixpaw growled at Duskpaw. She backed up. "Phoenix, what the?" Phoenixpaw hissed. Duskpaw went over to Silentpaw and sat down nexted to him.


Silentpaw part

Silentpaw looked at Duskpaw when she cam over to sit next to him. He whispered to her, "You want Phoenixpaw and I want that pretty she-cat named Stormpaw. I will get Stormpaw to like me and you will get Phoenixpaw to forget about Stormpaw." Duskpaw nodded.

Silentpaw got up and shouldered Phoenixpaw out of the way. He helped Stormpaw into the nursery. He murmured, "How do you feel?" Stormpaw sighed, "I am tired. Could you get me some poppy seeds?" Silentpaw nodded. He turned and padded away to the medicine cat den.

"Drizzleflower, can I have some poppy seeds for Stormp..Stormleaf?" asked Silentpaw. Drizzleflower nodded. She mew, "Let me see to her." Silentpaw took Drizzleflower to Stormpaw. Silentpaw watched as Drizzleflower tend to Stormpaw. He waited and watched.


Stormpaw and Kits part

Stormpaw watched as the Drizzleflower looked over Beautykit who was hissing. Hushkit was sitting near her mother waiting for Beautykit to be done with her check-up with the new cat. Tigerkit was playing with the new apprentice. Tigerkit squeaked, "Who are you?" Silentpaw looked down and murmured, "I am Silentpaw." Tigerkit swatted Silentpaw's tail.

Shadekit sat on Drizzleflower's tail. Sandkit's tail flicked as Frostkit batted it. Stormpaw hissed, "Stop that, Shadekit!" Shadekit crouched down and leaped at Beautykit. Beautykit hissed. Echostar was in the den now. He was talking to Stormpaw who Hushkit did not pay attention to. She was having fun with Frostkit and Sandkit. Firekit was in the corner talking with a white she-kit.

New cats color chapters:
The kits
Drizzleflower
Frozencloud
Lightclaw

[Tigerfur]

FANTASTIC chapter! ;D Love the colors! ;D

[Shadeheart]

Awesome chapters! I hope Phoenixpaw gets Stormpaw...

[Tear]

Oh don't worry i will make it good.

[Shadeheart]

Yay! Please write more soon! ^^

[Tear]

Chapter 7

Phoenixpaw padded in the nursery after a while of hunting with a big rabbit in his mouth. He came over to Stormpaw. He set the fresh kill in front of her. He purred. He loved her!a lonely she-cat.! "How are you?" he asked tentively. Stormpaw mew between bits, "I am fine. guess what!" Phoenixpaw asked, "What?"

Stormpaw mew, "I am getting my warrior name tonight!" Phoenixpaw felt dissapointed, but he did not show it, "Great!" He started to groom her. He asked, "Who is going to watch your kits?" Stormpaw flicked her tail to Airfeather. "She is going to have another litter of kits after a moon," she mew. Phoenixpaw rubbed his head on her's.


Echostar yowled, "Let all cats old enough to hunt and fight gather under the Tallrock for a clan announcement! Stormpaw, come forward." Stormpaw came under the Tallrock. Echostar continued, "I, Echostar leader of WinterClan, call upon my warrior ansectors to look down on this young apprentice. She has trained hard to learn your noble code and I command to you as a warrior in her turn. Stormpaw, do you promise to protect and defend your new Clan at the cost of your life?"

Stormpaw called, "Yes, I do!" Then Echostar continued, "Then by the powers of StarClan I give this apprentice her warrior name." Stormpaw, from this moment forward you shall be know as Stormcloud." He bowed his head on her head. She licked his shoulder.


Stormcloud ran over to Phoenixpaw and mew, "When you become a warrior I will be waiting for you." She licked him. She sat at the entrence of the camp. It was a peaceful night. Stormcloud heard movement. A cat appreared out of the darkness. "Silverpaw?" the cat asked. His pelt was a dark gray tabby pelt. "No, I am Stormcloud," she whispered, "Darkpaw, leave now!" Stormcloud stoped speaking. Darkpaw growled, but left Stormcloud and the camp. The morning came.


Shadekit woke up in the morning. She noticed that her mother was still not there. "Stormy?" she called. Shadekit was starting to get cold. Beautykit awoke to Shadekit's mew. "Shadekit, why are you mewing?" asked Beautykit. She licked Shadekit. Tigerkit sturred as she felt Shadekit fall on her. "Shadekit!" Tigerkit growled.

Hushkit awoke to the growling and hissing. "Girls!" growled Airfeather. Tigerkit and Shadekit stopped growling. Airfeather mew again, "Your mother will come soon." Firekit, Frostkit, and Sandkit awoke to the word mother. "Mommy's coming?" asked Sandkit. Airfeather nodded.


Lightclaw padded out of the warriors den. He padded over to Stormcloud. He murmured, "Your vigil is over. Get yourself some food." Stormcloud nodded. Lightclaw padded over to the Tallrock. He sat at the base of it. More cats came out of the warriors den. Lightclaw called, "Here are the cats going on the patrols. The boarder patrol will be led by Frozencloud. The others are Phoenixpaw, Squirrelheart, and Silentpaw. The Hunting patrol will be led by me. The others are Duskpaw, Stormtail, and Snowpaw."

Lightclaw led his patrol to the heart of the forest. He was the one to watch out for danger this time as Duskpaw, Stormtail, and Snowpaw hunted. He heard movement. Lightclaw saw that it was only a mouse. Lightclaw sat down in the soft grass.


Stormcloud padded into the nursery with four mie in her mouth. She gave one to Airfeather, Goldenfire, and Leopardfoot. She sat down nexted to her kits. As she ate she licked one of her kits. She looked around. Where was Hushkit. "Hushkit?" she called, "Airfeather, have you seen Hushkit leave?" Airfeather shook her head.

Stormcloud mew furmly, "Daughters stay here. Wait where is Shadekit, Firekit, Tigerkit, and Frostkit? Sandkit, Beautykit, where are they?" Beautykit replied, "A big brown and black cat came in here." Stormcloud muttered, "Blackstripe." She ran out of the nursery. "Echostar! My kits they are stolen!" Echostar looked around. He mew, "They are? We will have to find them."

Chapter 8 will come soon.

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Very cool chaper!

I would like to ge a beautiful ginger she-kit with a flame-colored pelt and bright green eyes. If you don't mind.

[Shadeheart]

Awesome Chapter! Poor kits have been stolen!

You got Shadekit's description right, except she's just grey. ^^

[Tear]

Shade, Shadekit is gone. I will post another chapter later.

[[[_ moon/beam]

Awesome story!

[Shadeheart]

lakepool said:

Shade, Shadekit is gone. I will post another chapter later.

I know, they're all gone.

[Tigerfur]

Sorry I haven't posted in a while, AWESOME chapter! ;D

[Tear]

Hushkit is now Tearkit.
I am now only doing colors because I feel like it.

Chapter 8

Stormcloud awoke in the night. She was out in the clearing and smoke was filling the air. Smoke! Then she saw fire coming to the camp. Oh StarClan help me! Stormcloud raced to Echostar's den. "Echostar! Echostar! Fire in the camp!" She yowled at the entrance. Echostar padded out of his den and leaped on the highrock. "All cats to the highrock for a meeting now!" The elders came from the far side of camp, the warriors and apprentices camp out of the side nearest the fire, the medicine cat came out of her den, and the queens ushered the kits out of the nursery. Stormcloud ran to Sandkit and Beautykit. Now all the cats tried to get out through the back entrance.