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Post by Tear on May 29, 2007 19:20:44 GMT -5
WinterClan Leader Echostar - very pale gray tom with black patches on his eyes. Deputy Lightclaw - yellow tabby tom apprentice Duskpaw Medicine cat Drizzleflower - blue gray she-cat Warriors (Toms and she-cats without kits) Frozencloud - frosted white she-cat apprentice Phoenixpaw Soaringeagle - brown and black tabby tom Dappleclaw - dapple gray she-cat Beartail - grizzly brown tom apprentice Mintypaw Quickfoot - silver tabby tom Squirrelheart - ginger and brown tabby she-cat apprentice Silentpaw Heatherstripe - brown tabby she-cat Stormtail - stormy gray tom apprentice Snowpaw Dryfeather - light silver tabby she-cat Apprentices (More than six moons old; in training to become warriors) Duskpaw - blue gray she-cat Phoenixpaw - red gold tom Mintypaw - minty sea green blue she-cat Silentpaw - silent white tom Snowpaw - white she-cat Queens (she-cat expecting or nursing kits) Leopardfoot - tan she-cat with black patches Goldenfire - golden tabby she-cat Airfeather - white she-cat Elders (Former warriors and queens; now retired) Scratchtail - snappy gray tom Darkeye - black she-cat with a torn eye and ear
OakClan Leader Banditstar - brown tom with a black stripe over the eyes Deputy Blackstripe - gray tom with black stripes Medicine cat Fogfeather - foggy gray she-cat apprentice Heartpaw Warriors Featherstreak - silver tabby she-cat apprentice Hollowpaw Staintail - white tom with a black tail Misticflower - gray black she-cat apprentice Bramblepaw Emberspark - yellow, red, and orange tabby tom Sapphirepelt - blue gary she-cat Queens Warmflower - yellow tabby she-cat Elders Oldclaw - scared gray tom
RainClan Leader Dragonstar - black she-cat with red and gold streaks Deputy Linxtail - tan and black she-cat Medicine cat Dewdrop - blue gray she-cat Warriors Grassfire - gray green tom apprentice Maskpaw Hiddenheart - dark gray tom Seaflight - sea green blue she-cat apprentice Cinderpaw Flightfeather - silver tabby she-cat apprentice Shadowpaw Queens Darkfeather - black and gray she-cat Elders Morningdew - old gray blue she-cat
FrozenClan Leader Froststar - frosted white she-cat Deputy Moonclaw - midnight white tom Medicine cat Kestraltail - brown tabby tom apprentice Followingpaw Warriors Blueclaw - blue gray she-cat apprentice Tigerpaw Shadeshadow - gray black tom apprentice Barkpaw Vinewhisker - green gray tom Queens Tendersoul - silver tabby she-cat Grayheart - gray black she-cat Elders Racingclaw - black tom with white stripes Rushingriver - blue gray she-cat
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Post by Shadeheart on May 29, 2007 19:33:20 GMT -5
Good names, I hope you start soon! ;D
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Post by Tear on May 29, 2007 22:39:51 GMT -5
Prologue A pale gray cat padded through the brush. Its blue green eyes glowed in the moonlight. The cat crouch as if to spring. It was no surprise when a mouse darted out from under a birch tree. The cat leaped, pinning the small brown mouse to the ground. Before the cat could swip its massive claws through the mouse's neck a cat padded out behind the first. The massive pale gray cat turned looking at the new comer. "I thought you would be coming, Darkenedheart." first cat growled slowly. The cat named Darkenedheart sat down licking his large paw. Between licks Darkenedheart mew, "There will be no time for fun and games, Echostar." Echostar looked surprised. "I never.." He was cut off. "Echostar, something terrible is going to happen. Doom forseen by StarClan. "
Darkenedheart started pacing up and down the clearing. Echostar replied with a shuddering mew, "How can this be?" The black tom stopped in his tracks. Looking up he mew, "let me give the prophecy now. Snow will fly and barely come back, others will travel with her. Mint will go farther by a warrior you cannot trust. All will end with death. There I might be able to give you a clearer sign than that later." Darkenedheart started to fade away into the darkness.
Snow will fly and barely come back. Echostar paced inside his den. Others will travel with her?He stopped pacing. Mint will go father by a warrior you cannot trust? Echostar shook his head. "Snow must mean Snowpaw, and Mint must mean Mintypaw." He thought the last part of the prophecy again. All will end with death Echostar mew to himself, "That means cats are going to die."
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Post by Shadeheart on May 30, 2007 11:58:26 GMT -5
Great prologue, I can't wait for more!
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Post by Tear on May 30, 2007 17:29:41 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Tear on Jun 1, 2007 21:30:50 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Echostar padded slowly out of his den. It was morning. Echostar looked around. He noticed that his warriors went hunting for there was prey. Padding over to the fresh kill pile a small kit ran out of the nursery. The she-kit was followed by a white tom-kit. "Echostar, when are we going to be apprenticed?" asked the the white she-kit. Echostar look down and mew softly, "Snowkit, Silentkit, your apprentice ceremony will be tonight with Duskkit and Mintykit." Snowkit turned an ran back to the nursery with Silentkit following.
Echostar dicited to hunt for awhile. Padding around the forest he noticed that there was not one single prey out. "May be it is to cold for them. It is all most leaf-bare." he thought. A mouse came out of a small hole. Echostar looked up as it moved. Crouching he swiftly and softlly moved forward. He leaped. echostar pined the the prey to the ground. He swiped his claws killing the mouse. Then he picked up the dead mouse and found a soft patch of ground. He buried it.
Meanwhile. Snowkit was in the nursery playing with the otherkits. "Come on Duskstar." she squeaked to little Duskkit. Duskkit jumped on top of Snowkit. Silentkit sat in a corner grooming a small gray and white kit. "Silentkit, Dawnkit, come and play with us." mew Duskkit. As if waiting for a command Dawnkit raced forward to play with Duskkit and Snowkit. Turning she mew softly to Silentkit, "Come on Silentkit.' Silentkit nodded and padded forward. 'We are Dawnstar of OakClan and Silentstar of FrozenClan." The four kits started to play.
Echostar returned from his hunting with a mouse in his mouth. A frosted white she-cat padded over to him. "Hi, Echostar." she said brightly. Echostar dipped his head to the she-cat. 'Hello, Frozencloud. We have ceremonies to do today." Frosencloud purred, "When?" Echostar sat down and rapped his tail around his paws, "At moonhigh." Frosencloud nodded and padded away to the nursery.
Moonhigh came quickly. Echostar padded out of his den for the tenth time that day. he leaped on the rocks. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Rocks for a Clan meeting." he yowled. Cats started to come out of dens. Echostar continued, "Tonight is a night I love. Duskkit, Silentkit, Snowkit, Mintykit, and Quickpaw come forward." Duskkit bonded forward with Silentkit, Mintykit, and Snowkit at her heels. Quickpaw padded slowly out from the croud. "Mintykit come. From this day forward, until she gets her warrior name shall be known as Mintypaw. Beartail, you were a fine mentor to Dappleclaw. You have shown yourself loyal and gentle. I expect you to teach Mintypaw everything you taught Dappleclaw and that you learned from Lightclaw." Beartail got up and padded to Mintypaw. He touched noses with her. Echostar flicked his tail for silence, "Silentkit come forward. "From this day forward until he gets his warrior name shall be know as Silentpaw. Squirrelheart, you are ready for your first apprentice. You have shown great skills and courage. I expect you to teach Silentpaw everything I have taught you. Duskkit come here. From this day forward until she gets her warrior name shall be known as Duskpaw. Lightclaw, you are ready for another apprentice. I hope you teach her everything Orangestar taought you. Snowkit come now. From this day forward until she gets her warrior name shall be known as Snowpaw. Stormtail, you are ready for your first apprentice. You have shown great loaylty and courage. I expect you to teach her everything Soaringeagle has taught you. Now last Quickpaw come."
Echostar looked down at the young apprentice and mew, "I, Echostar leader of WinterClan, ask my warrior ansectors to look down on this young apprentice. He has trained hard to learn your noble code and I commend you as a warrior in his turn. Quickpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and protect and defend the Clan, even at the cost of your life?" Quickpaw was quick to aswer, "I do!" Echostar mew, "Then by the powers of StarClan I give you your warrior name. Quickpaw, from this moment on you shall be known as Quickfoot. I honor your quickness and patients. We welcome you as a full warrior of WinterClan." Echostar bowed his head on Quickfoot's. Quickfoot gave Echostar's shoulder a quick lick. 'Quickfoot! Quickfoot!" the Clan chanted. "As in tradition, Quickfoot must gaurd the camp till dawn." Quickfoot placed himself at the entrence of the camp.
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Post by Tear on Jun 2, 2007 9:48:14 GMT -5
Snowpaw trotted over to her new mentor. "Hi, Stormtail!" she said brightly. Stormtail dipped his head. "Go get some sleep, Snowpaw." She dipped her head and trotted over to Mintypaw. "Lets go to bed." Snowpaw mew. They padded into the apprentice den. Stormtail looked longingly after the snow white apprentice. he shook his head and turned back to eating silently.
Quickfoot sat in the cold leaf-bare wind. This was it he was a warrior. Quickfoot grew tired and nearly fell asleep. He forced his tiredness away. Dawn came and Echostar padded out of his den. "Quickfoot, bed. now" he called. Quickfoot yawned and padded slowly into the warriors den. He curled up into his new nest of moss.
Snowpaw awoke early the next day. She saw Heatherstripe. "Heatherstripe, is Stormtail up?" she asked the brown tabby she-cat. Heatherstirpe mew, "Yes he is up. Get yourself some breakfast first." Snowpaw dipped her head and padded over to the fresh kill pile. She chose a large vole from the pile. A red gold apprentice padded over to the fresh kill pile. "Snowpaw, this is Phoenixpaw." mew a quiet vioce from behind her. She turned around to find a grizzly brown tom. "Oh, hello, Beartail. Want me to go get Mintypaw?" Snowpaw asked. Beartail mew a reply, "I would like that."
Snowpaw ran back to the apprentice den. "Mintypaw, Beartail wants you." she called. Mintypaw got up and padded out of the den with Silentpaw and Duskpaw behind her. Stormtail padded up next to Snowpaw. "Ready for training?' he asked her tentively. She nodded. "Lets go." Stormtail led Snowpaw out of camp. "We are going to patrol the boarders. Snowpaw fell back with Mintypaw. They were going to partol together. "This is RainClan territory up there. See what you can scent." ordered Stormtail. Snowpaw sniffed. "Rabbit, mouse, and I think it is RainClan." Beartail mew to Stormtail, "You have a fast learning apprentice." Stormtail purred. 'Yeah, I have noticed."
Mintypaw whispered, "It has to be RainClan scent for we are at the boarder." The four traveled onward. Snowpaw looked around, "Stormtail, is this OakClan's boarder?" she asked. Stormtail mew back, 'Yes." Beartail hissed to Stormtail, "I wish I had Snowpaw." Stormtail purred and mew to the apprentices, "Lets get back to camp." The four traveled back to camp.
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Post by Tear on Jun 20, 2007 11:52:06 GMT -5
Note:Some of the cats the three of the leaders talk about are characters but not metioned in the alligances. Chapter 2 The Gathering
Snowpaw and Mintypaw padded out of the apprentices den a moment later to Echostar's call. Echostar was on the Highrock. He called, "The gathering is tonight and here are the cats going with me: Lightclaw, Duskpaw, Drizzleflower, Beartail, Mintypaw, Stormtail, Snowpaw, Frozencloud, and Silentpaw. Dappleclaw is in charge of the camp. Lets go to all the cats going."
Snowpaw raced along side Mintypaw. They reached the fourtrees. "Wow." Snowpaw gasped. This was her first time to a gathering. Mintypaw raced off towards some FrozenClan apprentices. Snowpaw pelted behind her. "Hi, Tigerpaw, Barkpaw." Mintypaw mew happily. Snowpaw looked at the two apprentices. 'They must be siblings for they both have a orange tabby pelt.' Snowpaw thought. Just then a gray tomcat aprentice trotted over. "Hi, Mintypaw! Who is this?" the tom asked.
"That is Snowpaw," replied Mintypaw. The four leaders were on the Great Rock. "I will go first!" yowled Froststar leader of FrozenClan, "We are doing well. We have a two new apprentices Forestpaw and Treepaw are here tonight. FrozenClan lost its deputy Tendersoul. We are proud to have Moonclaw as our new deputy. FrozenClan has a new warrior Cloudfrost. I am done now."
Then the OakClan leader Banditstar stepped forward. He yowled out to the Clans, "OakClan is doing great! We have a new apprentice Hollowpaw is here tonight. I am done." Echostar called, "We have two new apprentices Snowpaw and Silentpaw. We are still strong after the OakClan attack." Froststar growled loud enough for every cat in the Fourtrees to hear, "You calling us weak!"
Echostar murmured, "No, WinterClan is strong after the attack." Dragonstar just sat there. Banditstar yowled, "You are calling us weak. We will show you weak! OakClan and FrozenClan will be twice as strong together." Echostar bowed his head. He turned and leaped of the Great Rock for there were clouds covering the moon. Dragonstar padded over to Echostar, "I will fight with you." Echostar nodded his good-byes and thanks to Drangonstar.
Snowpaw whispered to Mintypaw, "What was that all about?'' Mintypaw mew, "When you were a kit a moon ago Quickfoot, then Quickpaw witness this: On a cold leaf-bare day Quickpaw witnessed a murder of old Darkstar of WinterClan. Echocast watched it too. OakClan's old leader Killingstar murdered Darkstar, since Darkstar was on his last life. Killingstar died few days after that. OakClan has been very touchy to WinterClan now."
Snowpaw gasped. Echostar yowled, "Attack!'' FrozenClan cats and OakClan cats raced into the clearing. "Prepare for most of your Clan to die." growled Banditstar. A gray tom leaped on Snowpaw. "Hollowpaw?" she asked. Hollowpaw stopped and raced away. Mintypaw yowled, "Snowpaw, Emberspark!"
Snowpaw turned to see Emberspark leap on top of her. "Snowpaw!" he growled. He slashed every bit of Snowpaw he could reach. Then he bit down hard on her neck. No other cat saw. Snowpaw looked at Emberspark hatered in her eyes. She used the last bit of energy she had left and clawed his face hard. She raked him belly. The darkness came over her.
"Where am I?" she asked a tree. A silver she-cat padded forward. Snowpaw asked, "Who are you? What do you want? Why am I here? Am I dead?" The she-cat purred, "I am Silverheart. I need to tell you something. You are here because Emberspark made a fatal wound to your neck. No, your not dead."
Snowpaw looked at Silverheart. Silverheart continued, "Here is a prophecy: Snow will fly and barely come back, others will travel with her. Mint will go farther by a warrior you cannot trust. All will end with death. Good Bye!"
Chapter 3 Will come soon!
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Post by Tear on Jun 21, 2007 11:03:02 GMT -5
Chapter 3
Snowpaw awoke suddenly Whith her pelt prickling. She was in the medicine cat den with Drizzleflower and others. 'Why am I here, but StarClan healed my wounds' Snowpaw thought. Drizzleflower looked up from Lightclaw. "Oh, Snowpaw your awake. You may go." she rasped. Snowpaw got up and padded back to the apprentice den.
Snow will fly and barely come back, others will travel with her. Mint will go farther by a warrior you cannot trust. All will end with death.
The prophecy has begun. Snowpaw awoke the next morning to no call from Stormtail. Turning around to face Mintypaw. "Where are our mentors?" she muttered to her. Mintypaw sighed, "Dunno." Snowpaw bounded towards the medicine cat den. "Drizzleflower is Bearclaw and Stormtail in their?" Snowpaw asked. Drizzlefower poked her head out. She mew, "Yes, but their nearly died last night." Snowpaw padded away.
Mintypaw looked at her, "Nearly died. Sad. Lets go hunting." Snowpaw nodded, but murmured, "I don't feel like hunting. I am going on a boarder patrol." Snowpaw bounded away from Mintypaw who pelted after her. "Frozencloud, may we join the patrol?" Frozencloud nodded. The patrol set off. Frozencloud looked at Lightclaw with a worried look. Snowpaw murmured to her, "Is it Lightclaw? If so he is quite fine." Frozencloud looked at her. She nodded.
Snowpaw looked down at her paws as they reached the OakClan boarder. She looked up to see a OakClan boarder patrol was waiting for them. Blackstripe stepped forward. "Tell us we are stronger than you and we won't hurt you. Lightclaw growled, "Never!" The two patrols battled. Snowpaw was releved that Hollowpaw was not here. Blackstripe pinned Lightclaw down. Frozencloud was battling another cat, and did not notice Lightclaw.
Snowpaw lanched herself at Blackstripe. She nocked him off of Lightclaw. Lightclaw murmured to her, "Thanks." Frozencloud watched as her cat ran away. Soaringeagle looked at Blackstripe. He lanched himself at Blackstripe. Blackstripe jumped and landed ontop of Soaringeagle. The rest of Blackstripe's patrol grouped around him so no cat to get him. "Soaringeagle." Snowpaw cried out. 'Why him. not me.' Snowpaw thought.
Blackstripe growled, "You will get the same as him if not join us.'' Blackstripe clawed his neck. They ran away. Snowpaw ran forward."Eagle...'' Snowpaw looked at him. Then she wailed, "I am so sorry." Tears were running down her face. Soaringeagle open his eyes, "Snowpaw, I love you. I am proud to have you in my Clan. You are to stop all this madness with four other cats. Mintypaw is one of them. Good-bye.'' Snowpaw whispered, "Eagle?" Frozencloud stood stock still. Mintypaw looked over at Snowpaw. Lightclaw was laying down getting his breath. Duskpaw simple look amused. Snowpaw was still on the ground by Soaringealge. "M.. Mintypaw h..help m..me c..carry h..his b..body b..back." whispered Snowpaw.
The two apprentices carried Soaringeagle's body back. Echostar padded out toward them. Phoenixpaw told me that their was a fight. With who? What the.." Echostar looked at the battled cats to Soaringeagle. Mintypaw said, "He died fighting Blackstripe." Echostar gave a soft 'Oh'. Echostar leaped ontop of the Rocks. "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the Rocks for a Clan meeting!" Cats started to come out of their dens. They saw Soaringeagle lying dead on the ground. Echostar continued, "Tonight OakClan attacked and killed one of our great warriors, Soaringeagle. Lets give thanks to StarClan for his life here in WinterClan." Every cat bowed their head exepted Silentpaw and Duskpaw who were in the apprentices den. Snowpaw lay nexted to Soaringeagle as the other cats said their good-byes. Last was Echostar. He murmured to Snowpaw, "Snowpaw you can bury Soaringeagle alone."
Snowpaw dipped her head. 'He souldn't gone on the patrol.' Snowpaw thought as she burried Soaringeagle's body. She murmured, "Eagle, I love you. You were always kind to me and my family even though we were loners. I never forget how you saved me from that blizzard six moons ago." Snowpaw looked up into Silverpelt. She saw a brightstar. It was new too. "Eagle, are you watching me?" asked Snowpaw. The star twinkled. Snowpaw sat their util Sunhigh.
Snowpaw went into the apprentice den. She curled up in the back of the den. She was asleep. She saw Soaringeagle. "Eagle!" she yowled. Soaringeagle licked her gently and murmured softly, "Remember what I said before I died." Snowpaw dipped her head. Soaringeagle continued, "Do not grieve for me to long." Snowpaw whispered, "I will always love you, Eagle." Soaringeagle fadded away as Snowpaw awoke.
Chapter 4 Will come soon!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Jun 21, 2007 17:14:37 GMT -5
Cool!
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 25, 2007 9:13:41 GMT -5
hSorry I haven't posted for so long, but AWESOME chapters! ;D "That is Snowpaw," replied Mintypaw. The four leaders were on the Great Rock. "I will go first!" yowled Froststar leader of FrozenClan, "We are doing well. We have a two new apprentices Forestpaw and Treepaw are here tonight. FrozenClan lost its deputy Tendersoul. We are proud to have Moonclaw as our new deputy. FrozenClan has a new warrior Cloudfrost. I am done now." Uh.... Moonclaw is the name of my main warriors character...
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Post by Tear on Jun 25, 2007 14:27:53 GMT -5
Oh, I did not know. All the cats in my stories are based on people I know in person. Moonclaw is based on one of my uncles.
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Post by Tear on Jun 25, 2007 14:58:02 GMT -5
Echostar chapter Mintypaw chapter Snowpaw chapter Duskpaw chapter Silentpaw chapter Phoenixpaw chapter
I just had to tell this to you.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 25, 2007 16:20:54 GMT -5
Cool! I wanna hear the Phoenixpaw chapter, it seems interesting! ^^
I just make up my names, and Moonclaw was the first cat I ever made. ^^;
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Post by Tear on Jun 25, 2007 18:47:23 GMT -5
Okay I will.
Chapter 4 Phoenixpaw's chapter
The red gold apprentice padded through the forest. He thought about the way Mintypaw looked at him last night. "No, she just looked at me." he growled to himself. His golden amber eyes clouded with sorrow and happiness. Phoenixpaw saw a mouse. He crouched dow ready to leap. A russtle in the trees made Phoenixpaw give up his hunt.
He started to wander toward the sound. When a cat leaped out at him. Hissing he reared. The cat backed away. It was a silver tabby she-cat. She mew, "Don't hurt me. I h..have kits." Phoenixpaw relaxed his body and replied, "I won't hurt you since you have kits. Take me to them. " His voice calmed the she-cat. She flicked her tail to a bundle of kits.
Phoenixpaw's eye widened and asked, "Do you have names for the kits? Oh I did not catch your name. I am Phoenixpaw." The she-cat replied to Phoenixpaw. "I am Stormpaw. My kits are Shadekit." Stormpaw placed her tail on a dark gray brown tabby she-kit. She continued, "This is her twin Beautykit. Here is Hushkit." She placed her silver tabby tail on white she-kit with silver tabby ears. Stormpaw mew, "These four are Firekit, Tigerkit, Frostkit and Sandkit."
Phoenixpaw looked at the kits. He asked, "Do you want me to take you back to my camp?" Stormpaw nodded. the two apprentices and six kits walked back to camp.
Chapter 5 Stormpaw and kits chapter
Stormpaw padded back to the WinterClan camp with Phoenixpaw. She stayed farther behind him to make sure that Shadekit would not rin away. She like Phoenixpaw. He was always kind to her even when she was Silverpaw. Stormpaw renamed herself when she had kits. She was at least only seven moons old.
Beautykit ran up to Phoenixpaw and jumped on his back. She was loving the ride he was giving her. Beautykit squeaked, "Tigerkit, look were I am." Tigerkit leaped on Phoenixpaw. She swatted Beautykit. The little silver brown tabby she-kit fell off. Firekit padded next to his young mother. Shadekit, Sandkit, and Frostkit talked while they walked. They reached the WinterClan camp. Stormpaw hurried the kits into the nursery.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Jun 25, 2007 18:57:19 GMT -5
Great chapter!
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 25, 2007 19:52:40 GMT -5
Great chapters!!!
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