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Post by n.i.n.j.a.m.i.n.d. on May 18, 2007 20:09:04 GMT -5
THAT WAS GREAT!!! YOU SHOULD BE AN AUTHOR!!
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Post by berrykit on May 19, 2007 17:41:21 GMT -5
Yep your a born author
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Post by Shadeheart on May 20, 2007 10:19:47 GMT -5
Yeah, what Sandstorm and Berrypool said.
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 20, 2007 11:01:11 GMT -5
Aw, you guys! But thanks! Chapter 17Fernflower hissed, “I thought I took care of you Heathercloud when I abandoned you. I guess I was wrong!” Heathercloud whipped around, eyes flashing and crouched down to leap at her, but a soft mewling interrupted her. She immediately disappeared into the bush and nudged out two kits. Oakwind was speechless. “Are… are they mine?” he barely whispered. Heathercloud nodded. “This kit,” She let her tail rest on the black kit, “is Ravenkit. He’s the eldest tom.” Heathercloud tapped the younger kit. “The dark white gray kit is Mistkit. She’s already feisty.” Oakwind purred and nudged Ravenkit with his paw. Ravenkit glanced up at his father and growled, “Who are you?” Oakwind looked crestfallen. Turning to Heathercloud, he asked, “They don’t know me?” Heathercloud bowed her head. “I told them about you, but they don’t know what you look like.” Oakwind glanced down once more at his son. “I am your father.” Ravenkit widened his green eyes and mewed, “You are?” Oakwind nodded, and Ravenkit crept up to his father, and let out an unsteady purr. Featherstream’s throat constricted as she saw father and son greet each other the first time. She was not aware of Fernflower slowly sneaking around the two kits and their parents. When Fernflower was right behind Heathercloud, she launched herself at her foe. Heathercloud yowled in pain as Fernflower’s claws dragged into her back. Oakwind was on Fernflower in a moment, pulling her off the moment she scored a single blow on his mate. Snarling, he pushed her down. “You don’t deserve to live.” Fernflower spat, “Mouse-dung!” and clawed at his flank. Ravenkit hissed and pounced on Fernflower’s twitching tail and bit down hard. Fernflower yowled, and Oakwind tossed his head approvingly. Featherstream quickly told Cinderbrook, who had been nervously staying the shadow, to send for Onestar. Later, Cinderbrook returned with Onestar, Ashfoot, Barkface and Kestrelpaw to Oakwind still pinning Fernflower to the floor. Onestar exclaimed, “What are you doing Oakwind?” Oakwind spat, “This… this heap of fox-dung tried to kill Heathercloud!” Fernflower struggled to escape. “I did nothing of the sort!” Featherstream coughed disbelievingly. “I’m sorry Fernflower, but I saw you attack her.” Cinderbrook chimed in her agreement, as well as both Ravenkit and Mistkit’s soft mews. Onestar nodded and flicked his tail for Oakwind to let her get up. He complied and snarled his contempt. Onestar mewed, “You could have been a valuable warrior. However, you attacked one of your own Clanmates. You must leave WindClan.” Fernflower rose, pelt dusty. “Very well.” She snarled. “But this is WindClan’s loss.” She stalked away, dappled gray pelt disappearing into the ShadowClan pines. Oakwind muttered underneath his breath, “Good riddance.” Barkface and Kestrelpaw tended to both Heathercloud and Oakwind’s wounds, while Mistkit and Ravenkit gazed at their leader with wide eyes. Ashfoot nosed Mistkit, and Ravenkit spat threatening, but the deputy paid him no mind. “We must get them back to camp.” She mewed worriedly. Onestar nodded and turned to Heathercloud. “Are you fit enough to travel?” Heathercloud struggled to her paws and nodded. “Come along Ravenkit, Mistkit.” She meowed softly. Oakwind pressed his flank against hers and supported her back to camp. Featherstream was the last to go. She glanced at the brush where Fernflower disappeared. “Where will she go?” she murmured, then disappeared behind her brother.
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Post by Shadeheart on May 20, 2007 12:29:10 GMT -5
FANTASTIC Chapter! I can't wait for more! ;D YES! FERNFLOWER IS GOOOONE! Not for good I know, she'll return.
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Post by Berrypool on May 20, 2007 16:29:21 GMT -5
I'm speechless! But I think Fernflower will go to ShadowClan!
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Post by Tear on May 20, 2007 17:52:25 GMT -5
That was a good chapter. Fernflower on the other hand is and shoud never be allowed on WindClan territory again.
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on May 22, 2007 17:18:10 GMT -5
Hear hear! Yucky evil MEAN Fernflower! BAH!
If she returns I WILL GO MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!
Done lurking, needed to rant with my joy that she is gone!
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Post by Tigerfur on May 24, 2007 21:41:36 GMT -5
I LOVE your story Featherstream! I hope you continue soon! ;D
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Post by Sunsetfur on May 26, 2007 16:25:43 GMT -5
Great job, Featherstream. ;D ;D Awesome plot and excellent characters.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 2, 2007 14:28:50 GMT -5
Type another Chapter already!
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on Jun 3, 2007 14:21:51 GMT -5
Sorry! Homework=ebil
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 5, 2007 16:50:13 GMT -5
I don't have homework for the rest of the year, but we have a math assessment to finish. For me, school's out the twenty second! Wish it were out now.
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Post by Bp on Jun 5, 2007 22:17:58 GMT -5
You guys are still in school? I've been out for about 2 or 3 weeks.!
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 6, 2007 12:42:28 GMT -5
Lucky you. It's not my fault I'm stuck there!
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Post by Tear on Jun 8, 2007 12:08:51 GMT -5
I have been out for a week all ready.
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Post by berrykit on Jun 10, 2007 21:22:41 GMT -5
No no. Take your time with the story. It's not like we can't wait or anything. *sarcastic*
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