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Post by Berrypool on May 8, 2007 17:02:57 GMT -5
I cant wait
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 11, 2007 15:53:11 GMT -5
Chapter 8
Breezestorm flicked his black ears as Featherstream licked his flank affectionately. "What was... that about?" Featherstream paused, her tounge still on his flank. "What?" Breezestorm persisted, "With Onestar." Featherstream resumed washing him, though her stomach twinged with excitement. "Oh, it was nothing." she lied between licks. Breezestorm could feel Featherstream lying, and flicked his ears again. "Tell me," he hissed softly, getting slightly annoyed. Featherstream was taken aback at his harsh tone, surprise and a small flicker of fear in her light blue eyes. Breezestorm softened his harsh amber gaze and mewed, "I'm sorry Featherstream. It's just...." He averted his amber eyes. "I... I love you." Featherstream's eyes glowed with a luminous never before seen by Breezestorm. "I... I love you too." Breezestorm's heart shivered as he purred loudly. Featherstream twined her tail with his, feeling complete.
Suddenly, a shadow fell over the two cats. It was Onestar, who glared at Breezestorm and looked at Featherstream with such anguish that Featherstream seemed to lose her breath. Breezestorm glared up at his leader, and ignored him, licking Featherstream's cheek lovingly. Onestar's stare grazed freezingly over them, and he padded away. Featherstream caught her breath. Do I really love Breezestorm? She was so sure of it, but what about Onestar? Could she really let go of him? Featherstream shifted uncomfortably.
A few days later, Featherstream pranced into the warriors' den, her tail held high. She looked around with happy blue eyes and padded toward Breezestorm. She twined her tail with his and whispered in his ear. “Breezestorm, I need to tell you something.” Breezestorm nodded and rose, following Featherstream.
Featherstream sat, her tail wrapped tightly around her paws, though the tip flicked slightly. Breezestorm sensed an excitement in her, and asked “What is it Featherstream?” Featherstream glanced around and whispered excitedly, “I’m expecting kits!”
Breezestorm was shocked… and delighted. He purred, butting her slightly affectionately. “That’s great Featherstream!” Featherstream purred in reply, twining her tail with his. His heart beat in his throat. Featherstream was having his kits!
Sorry about the shortness, but what do you think?
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Post by Berrypool on May 11, 2007 16:11:27 GMT -5
I think you're lucky HyperSkyfrost wasn't here! lol sorry but it's true she was really hyper. That was really good!
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on May 11, 2007 17:49:16 GMT -5
Haha, skyfrost won't like that... :-)
This is really good! Very soap-opera drama with erin hunter likeness!
* i feel so random*
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Post by Nothing but Silverwind on May 11, 2007 19:40:48 GMT -5
Fabulous Story!!!
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Post by Tear on May 11, 2007 23:04:04 GMT -5
Great chapter!
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 11, 2007 23:05:00 GMT -5
Thanks everyone who replied!
Chapter 9
Onestar's eyes were slanted into dark slits as he stared at his not-so secret love, Featherstream as she pranced into the nursery, her stomach already swelling in anticipation for kits. He knew they were Breezestorm's, and his heart wrenched. Why had she picked Breezestorm over him? His tail lashed angrily, partially from confusion. Wasn't he good enough? So into his thoughts, he did not notice one of the more beautiful she-cats of the Clan sidling beside him.
Darkshadow, her black pelt gleaming, gray silver stripes accented, boldly let her silver tipped tail rest on her leader's light brown tabby shoulder. "Are you alright Onestar?" she asked, voice dripping honey. Onestar nodded absentmindedly, not really listening to her. Darkshadow, following his gaze, growled softly as she glimpsed Featherstream. "Why do you waste time thinking of her when she's already forgotten you?" Jealousy and anger made her tone harsher than she had wanted. Onestar recoiled. "I love... loved her. And she repaid me by going off with... with Breezestorm!"
He had not meant to burst out like this, or get too sentimental about it, but Darkshadow had made him feel so comfortable. Darkshadow, her amber eyes glowing, mewed softly "Onestar, there are more she-cats in the Clan other than Featherstream, more avaliable ones." At that moment, the sun struck her black pelt, and illuminated the silver stripes, seeming to make her glow. Onestar finally turned to look at her, and his breath caught, the same that had occured when Featherstream was around. Is Darkshadow the one?
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Featherstream sighed comfortably as she settled into the nest at the nursery. Breezestorm fussed over her, a worried look on his face. Dawnstream, who had moved into the nursery to help her daughter with her first kitting, purred and meowed, "Breezestorm, let Featherstream sleep. She has to keep her energy for the kitting." Breezestorm glanced sheepishly at his mate. "Sorry." he murmured. Featherstream purred and replied, "Don't worry. The kits will be born soon. Then I can come back to the warriors' den." Breezestorm drew an affectionate tounge over her silver ear and mewed, "Okay. Stay safe." Featherstream snorted "What else can I be, snug in camp as I am?"
Breezestorm purred and squeezed out of the nursery. Onestar padded by and told Breezestorm, "Stay here." Breezestorm couldn't swallow the apprenhension that built in his throat, blocking his breath. Onestar mewed, "Darkshadow is going to have my kits." His voice was excited, breathless. Breezestorm managed to purr, even though he was surprised. Darkshadow?
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Swallowfrost snuck out of the camp, eyes darting from side to side warily. When she was sure no cat was out there, she padded toward the ShadowClan border, careful to keep out of the light. She stood on the edge of the border, searching eagerly. Where is he? He said he'd be here. she thought, tail lashing excitedly. Her tortoiseshell pelt gleamed dully, amber eyes flashing in excitement and apprehension. A rustle in the brush on the ShadowClan border alerted her, and she leaned forward, waiting in anticipation.
The black tom slid out of the thin underbrush, his pelt barely visible in the gloom. Swallowfrost's amber eyes gleamed brightly and she rushed forward to greet him. His own blue eyes shone in delight and he purred into delight. She wrapped around his body with her own, and twined her tail with his. He purred louder, the only sound as the two curled around each other. "I love you.... Smokefoot."
Well, what do you think? I thought it would be cool to have a cross-clan affair, since Swallowfrost didn't seem to be mentioned a lot. Oakwind will come later!
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Post by Shadeheart on May 12, 2007 7:46:01 GMT -5
That was a great Chapter, Featherstream!
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 12, 2007 7:54:11 GMT -5
Thanks! I'm thinking of writing another story, maybe, so keep a look out for that! Oh, and there will be a sequel to this story later. Look out for that one too!
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Post by Shadeheart on May 12, 2007 8:20:34 GMT -5
Okay! You're a good story-maker. ;D
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on May 12, 2007 16:13:15 GMT -5
Agreed! This just keeps getting better and better! =^-^=
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Post by Berrypool on May 12, 2007 17:13:07 GMT -5
You're getting as good as Erin Hunter!
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 12, 2007 17:16:51 GMT -5
Thanks again for replying!
Chapter 10
Featherstream sighed, bored. Dawnstream was asleep and Darkshadow was occupied with Onestar. Her tail twitched restlessly as she shifted her weight to a better spot. Suddenly, spasms racked her body and she yowled in pain. Dawnstream woke at her agonizing yowl, and ran toward Barkface's den. She burst through the covering and meowed worriedly, "Featherstream is having her kits! Now!" Barkface looked up and dashed toward the nursery.
Featherstream could barely see throughout the pain that racked her body, and murmured, "Breezestorm?" Barkface mewed, "Don't worry Featherstream, your in good paws."
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Featherstream purred as her three kits suckled, Breezestorm watching over like a hawk watching its prey, bursting with pride. Dawnstream purred and crept out of the nursery, leaving the new mother and father alone. Darkshadow purred at the new Clan members. The kits mewed hungrily and pawed Featherstream's stomach for more milk. Breezestorm glanced at his kits proudly and asked, "Have you given them names yet?"
Featherstream nodded and let her tail rest on each kit as she named them. "The dark brown tom with golden flecks is Falconkit. The golden tom with white paws is Eaglekit." Breezestorm purred, looking at his sons. Featherstream continued, resting her tail on a miniature copy of her, "This is Splashkit, the only she-cat." Splashkit blinked open her eyes and glanced up at her father. Breezestorm bent down to lick her head between her ears, and Splashkit yawned, revealing small, sharp teeth and a bright pink mouth. "Those are beautiful names." he murmured. Featherstream purred loudly in reply; it meant a lot to her that her mate approved of the names she had given their kits.
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A few days later, Swallowfrost padded into the nursery toward her sister, Featherstream. She settled in the nest beside her, and Featherstream felt guilt and a deeper emotion running through her. "What's wrong Swallowfrost?" Swallowfrost glanced around and replied softly, "Featherstream, I'm expecting kits!"
Featherstream was shocked! "Who's the father?!" she nearly yowled. In an instant, she realized the guilt that brewed just below the surface. Swallowfrost whispered into her sister's ear, "Smokefoot."
"What?!" Featherstream let out a shocked yowl, unlodging the kits from her stomach. She settled down just enough to let the kits suckle once more. Swallowfrost looked away and murmured, "I know what you're thinking, but he isn't all that bad." Featherstream sighed. "I don't know. You're playing with fire, Swallowfrost." Her sister turned back to Featherstream and her eyes were gleaming defiance. "I don't care! I love him and that's all that matters!" Featherstream let the tip of her tail rest on Swallowfrost's shoulder for a second, to calm her. "I know how you feel, Swallowfrost, and I cannot stop you." Swallowfrost sighed, her defiance breaking down. "I knew you would." Featherstream sighed. What would they do when the Clan saw Swallowfrost's kits?
Well, what'd you think?
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Post by Berrypool on May 12, 2007 17:59:06 GMT -5
Amazing! How does Crowfeather feel about Featherstream having kits? I just started to wonder that since you haven't mentioned him in a while.
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Post by Shadeheart on May 12, 2007 19:41:15 GMT -5
I hate Nightcloud... I'd rather Crowfeather mate with Leafpool! That was random... Featherstream, your style of writing if very good... Are you Cherith Baldry or Kate Cary?
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 12, 2007 20:14:46 GMT -5
Wow Shadepelt! That's the greatest compliment anyone has ever given me. I wish I could be as good as Cherith Baldry or Kate Cary when it comes to writing stories. Anyway, I'm too tired to do another chapter, and I have to finish my new site, so expect one tomorrow!
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on May 13, 2007 17:54:35 GMT -5
Pure genius, this is VERY brilliant. OMG, this has to be the GREATEST warriors-fanfiction I've EVER read!!!!!
When you become a world-famous author, remember me!!!
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