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Post by Berrypool on May 14, 2007 18:50:07 GMT -5
Nice! what about Crowfeather i want to hear about him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Post by Shadeheart on May 14, 2007 18:53:59 GMT -5
Don't you get it, Berrypool? Fernflower's about to get revenge on Heathcloud because she's Oakwind's mate! Omg, if I have to wait any longer, I swear I'm gonna...
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Post by Berrypool on May 14, 2007 21:54:44 GMT -5
I get that but how does Crowfeather feel about Feathertail having kits without him?
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Post by Shadeheart on May 15, 2007 13:59:39 GMT -5
But Crowfeather already mated with Nightcloud, and plus he doesn't know that Featherstream is Feathertail. Not even Featherstream knows that! So how do you think he feels? Upset?
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 15, 2007 15:55:42 GMT -5
Thanks to everyone who commented!
Chapter 13
Featherstream flicked her tail lazily, though her mind was far from it. Her kits were fast asleep, one of the rare moments when she had a chance to think. What did Swallowfrost mean? Frostkit and Icekit were playing with Sootkit and Sedgekit, and their soft mewls faded into the background as she relived the night.
Through dusk's nightly fall, oak is the prize. Though beloved, heather will disappear, overcome by flower.
She felt a chill as she remembered Fernflower's dark gaze at Heathercloud. Would Fernflower actually murder Heathercloud? So lost in her thought, Featherstream didn't notice the absence of both Heathercloud and Fernflower, until Oakwind padded up to his sister, eyes desperate. "Have you seen Heathercloud? She went to make her dirt, and she didn't come back!" Featherstream looked around the camp and froze. Fernflower was also missing!
Short chapter I know. But I have to leave soon, so.... What do you think?
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Post by Berrypool on May 15, 2007 16:39:58 GMT -5
OH NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! lol i dont mind the shortness
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Post by Shadeheart on May 16, 2007 11:20:13 GMT -5
OH NO! I HATE FERNFLOWER! DUMB IDIOTIC... GRRRRRR! MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 16, 2007 12:26:33 GMT -5
lol, thanks everyone who's replying!
Chapter 14
Featherstream instantly leaped to her paws, fur bristling. “Quick Oakwind! Go check around the camp, and take a few warriors with you.” Even though she was in no position to order around any cat, Oakwind obeyed her immediately, calling together Breezestorm and Owlwhisker. Featherstream’s heart leaped into her throat as she saw her mate disappear along with her brother outside of camp. Would they return?
Featherstream shook her head; she couldn’t think of this. She popped her head into the nursery, looking at her kits. Luckily, they were oblivious to the worry that their mother felt. Feeling they were safe under the watch of Darkcloud, Featherstream settled to pace the empty camp, waiting for her brother and mate to return.
When they returned, Featherstream’s head whipped toward them, eyes glowing with hope. But when she saw them alone without Heathercloud, the glow in her eyes died, and her tail drooped. The only new cat Featherstream could see was Fernflower, who brushed her flank against Oakwind’s. Featherstream could feel her hackles rise, but forced them to settle. She had no real proof that Fernflower was responsible, but she could not help but feel a small twinge of distrust. At least Oakwind seemed immune to Fernflower's adoration. Featherstream sighed.
"That was a troubled sigh." meowed a rough voice behind her.
Featherstream jumped and whipped around. Her blue eyes were wide as she saw Crowfeather behind her. "Great StarClan Crowfeather! You nearly scared me out of my fur!" Crowfeather purred and let his tail rest on her shoulder for a moment. Featherstream was bewildered. What was that all about? Crowfeather spoke only a moment later.
"You did well in trying to find Heathercloud." Featherstream tipped her head and stuttered, "Th.. Thank you. I only wanted to help. She is my best friend after all." Crowfeather nodded. "I know how you feel." Featherstream purred gratefully, but was interrupted by Breezestorm, who pressed his muzzle against hers. She gave him a soft lick and twined her tail with his. Yet she could not banish the thought of Crowfeather. Why?
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Post by Tear on May 16, 2007 14:10:04 GMT -5
That was great!
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Post by Shadeheart on May 16, 2007 14:14:30 GMT -5
That wasn't 'great'! It's evil! Evil I tell you, EVIL! Fernflower did something horrible to Heathercloud and I wanna KILL her for it.... you see, I get seriously angry when something like an idiotic cat does something like that in the Warriors books, and since Featherstream's are so identical, I get angry in this too... but in other books, I just think they're being dumb, and I don't get angry... Anyways... HOW COULD YOU GET RID OF HEATHERCLOUD? SHE COMES BACK, RIGHT? SHE MUST COME BACK!
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Post by Shadeheart on May 16, 2007 14:17:33 GMT -5
Oops... sorry for saying 'idiotic' and 'not great', I mean you're an EXCELLENT writer, but I don't want those kind of things to happen in books...
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 16, 2007 15:15:52 GMT -5
It's ok Shadeheart. She'll come back... until then....
Chapter 15
Featherstream sighed as Splashkit and Eaglekit tumbled over her tail. "Splashkit, Eaglekit, stop it." she scolded lightly. They broke away and mewed in unison, "Yes Featherstream." She had to purr at their innocence. "Where's your brother?" Splashkit twitched her tail. "Over there, talking to Sedgekit." She turned her moon wide blue eyes to her mother. "He's no fun!" Splashkit complained. "He's always spending time with Sedgekit and not us!"
Featherstream purred and swept her closer with her tail. "Splashkit," Featherstream began, "It's just maybe Falconkit feels a little left out. You never ask him to play with you." She pointed out. Splashkit let out a dramatic sigh. "Yes, but he's never any fun! He always gets too caught up in the fight, and doesn't talk to me after I win!" Featherstream sighed. "Maybe you can ask." She prodded Splashkit with her tail. Splashkit sighed and padded toward Falconkit and Sedgekit.
"Do you want to play with us?" Splashkit asked. Sedgekit leaped to her paws and mewled excitedly, "Sure!" Falconkit followed slowly, distrust showing in his eyes, coupled along with another emotion. Featherstream watched her kits disappear into the camp grounds, where she later heard scuffling.
The soft mews of the other queens and the gentle scuffling of the kits faded into the background until all Featherstream could hear was Oakwind and Fernflower just outside.
"I like you, Fernflower," Oakwind was saying, "But not in the way you like me." Featherstream tensed as Fernflower protested, "But I love you Oakwind! I know we would be great together." Oakwind's fur rustled as he shook his head. "You're great Fernflower, but I feel like I'm betraying Heathercloud just be speaking with you." Fernflower growled low in her throat. "I thought Heathercloud disappearing would change that. I thought wrong." Oakwind was obviously startled. "Wh... what do you mean?" Featherstream did not hear Fernflower's reply, only her stalking off out of the camp. Oakwind sighed and padded into the nursery. Featherstream pretended that she hadn't heard them.
"How are you?" Featherstream purred. Oakwind sighed. "Not so good Featherstream. I'm worried about Heathercloud. We didn't find her body, so I'm not ready to give up on her." Featherstream nodded. "I know." she mewed quietly. Oakwind looked at her, eyes desperate and hopeful. "Do you think we can find her?"
"Yes, Oakwind, I do."
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Post by Shadeheart on May 16, 2007 15:28:17 GMT -5
Yeah! Go Oakwind! Kill the dumb Fernflower who got rid of Heathercloud! ;D You rule! Yeah! ;D Anyways, great chapter, continue!
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Post by berrykit on May 16, 2007 16:31:20 GMT -5
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Post by Shadeheart on May 16, 2007 16:55:54 GMT -5
Heehee, I like scaring people! ^_^
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Post by >> x.Featherstream.x on May 18, 2007 18:53:26 GMT -5
Thanks for complimenting everyone!
Chapter 16
Featherstream glanced at her brother staring despondently across the camp where Heathercloud used to sit and eat fresh-kill. Featherstream, sighing, padded toward him. Splashkit, Falconkit and Eaglekit would become apprentices that night, so Featherstream allowed them to relax slightly. She flicked her brother’s nose with her tail, and Oakwind looked up slowly. “Oakwind, do you want to come with me to get some fresh-kill?”
Oakwind sighed. “What’s the point? I miss Heathercloud, Featherstream! I miss her voice, her scent, the brushing of her against mine.” By this point, his voice lowered to a whisper. “You can’t say that you do not either Featherstream.” She sighed. “Yes, I do, but we can’t do anything about it just now.” Oakwind lashed his tail. “Why not?!” he burst out. Featherstream opened her mouth, but was interrupted by the sound of quick paws.
Cinderbrook, a light gray she-cat with pretty blue eyes, Nightwing, a black tom with amber eyes and particular long tail that streamed behind him and his apprentice, Thrushpaw, a white she-cat with lovely dark blue eyes, ran into the camp, panting and eyes wide.
Onestar immediately leaped down from his den. “What’s the matter?” he demanded. Cinderbrook spoke up in halting breaths. “We’ve found rogue cats on our territory!”
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Featherstream immediately felt her hackles rise and Oakwind tense beside her. She unsheathed her claws, feeling them sink into the sandy moor. Onestar glanced over the warriors and announced, “Nightwing, Thrushpaw, rest. Cinderbrook, Featherstream, Oakwind and Fernflower, deal with them.” Featherstream nodded, knowing her kits would be safe with Darkshadow. Already, her keen ears picked up Darkshadow’s voice chiming merrily from the nursery.
Featherstream waited, tail lashing impatiently, for Cinderbrook to regain her strength. Once she did, she dashed off, Featherstream and Oakwind following rapidly. Fernflower followed more hesitantly, almost as if she did not want to come.
Featherstream dug her claws into the earth and sped up, not stopping to taste the air. Oakwind did, his jaws gaping as he picked up a scent he had not scented in a few moons. Featherstream leaped out of the brush, claws out. Suddenly, she checked in mid-air, almost landing in the same spot she had started from. Her blue eyes were wide and the bracken behind her rustled as Oakwind pushed his way through it. As they looked on, Fernflower found her way, and, amber eyes glinting dangerously, launched herself at the she-cat huddling in the brush. Oakwind hurled himself at her, barring her way. “What are you doing?” he snarled, eyes narrowed into slits. Fernflower began to hiss a reply when the she-cat stepped forward. “Is that you Oakwind?” Oakwind turned his head and touched noses with her softly. “Yes, it is me… Heathercloud.”
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Post by Shadeheart on May 18, 2007 20:01:12 GMT -5
OMG! HEATHERCLOUD! I HATE YOU, FERNFLOWER! CONTINUE!!!!
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