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Post by grey on Jan 28, 2008 17:47:49 GMT -5
He hunts at night,
a merciless fright.
A killer is he.
The dark is where he will stay,
while time wisps at the day.
No feeling has he,
Only a mission,
To destroy our kind,
He pays no mind
To our yowls of pain,
While our kin is slain.
He has one name.
Fang
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Post by Shadeheart on Jan 28, 2008 19:30:51 GMT -5
Good poem, but it's supposed to be in the Warriors Poetry, not Warriors Stories. [/center][/font] |
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Post by Shattereddream on Jan 29, 2008 15:48:18 GMT -5
Yeah, grey. Awesome poem *ahemcharacterstealerahem* But it goes in poems, not stories.
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Post by Sunsetfur on Jan 30, 2008 19:55:21 GMT -5
Fang's a common name. I have a dark character named Fang in one of my own stories, and I invented him over a year ago.
Moved to poems...
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Post by Shattereddream on Jan 31, 2008 17:16:35 GMT -5
Yes, Sunsetfur, I know it is a common name. But Grey and I are friends in real life and she told me she made this poem up about my Fang, from my story. I didn't mean it in a bad way, just a teasing way between friends. Good job grey!
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Post by Sunsetfur on Feb 6, 2008 21:00:55 GMT -5
Ah, okay.
Back on subject: 'Tis a good poem, Grey!
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Post by greysoul on Mar 22, 2008 18:18:40 GMT -5
ok sorray i messed up ok, i accidentily put it in stories ! thanks anyway!
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Post by berrykit on Mar 22, 2008 19:56:05 GMT -5
This is a great poem! Good job!
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