My Escape

[Shattereddream]

This is extremely sad and deep, so beware. No, I do not plan on ever doing what has been said in the following poem. I am simply making a point.
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The world is a cold, cruel place
Where we are doomed to live
Forever filled with hate and pain
And sins we can't forgive

People are dying every day
Becasue they've nothing to eat
While others are killing for fun
Laughing at cries of defeat

With all of this suffering
It really makes you think
How do we get through each day
Knowing life is on the brink

I ponder over all these things
As I'm lying in my bed
And seeing that there's no escape
I place a gun to my head

A single tear rolls down my cheek
I whisper my last goodbye
Knowing that the ones Iove
Will surely soon cry

I quickly pull the trigger
And everything goes black
I have commited suicide
There is no turning back

[ƒrФ§тƒire]

Wow. That struck a chord. Kudos on the very moving poem...

...You don't actually feel like you're going to commit suicide, though, right? ;D

[Shattereddream]

*pokes the top of it* No way. Just something sad I made up. Thanks!

[ƒrФ§тƒire]

^-^ It really is a good poem. I'm glad you're not planning on leaving us soon.

[Shattereddream]

lol Thanks.

[greysoul]

yeah i like the intensity, but lets make this the last one.

[berrykit]

This was an amazing poem!

[Shattereddream]

Grey... You quite frankly know that this was only the beginning of my marvelous, depressing poems.
Thanks for all the comments!