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Oct 5, 2006 23:49:07 GMT -5
Post by | s.t.o.r.m.y x Moss | on Oct 5, 2006 23:49:07 GMT -5
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Pain Anger Deception Hate
White hot pain Searing anger Burning hate Cold deception
Red fills the land Claws dig into its depths Drawing red Drawing pain and hate
Eyes close, whispers croak Deception burns and freezes over Idignity rubs hate Hate washes over pain
Until the wounds are rubbed raw
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Oct 6, 2006 6:20:23 GMT -5
Post by Nothing but Silverwind on Oct 6, 2006 6:20:23 GMT -5
*claps* GOOD!
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Oct 7, 2006 0:50:05 GMT -5
Post by | s.t.o.r.m.y x Moss | on Oct 7, 2006 0:50:05 GMT -5
Thanks Silverwind! ^.^
Cautious
Step by step Right and left Clumsy, adolescent, and inadept Leaning forward and back, bereft
This way and that Trapped and caught Flicked aside and called a nat Still unseen, still unsought
Tip toe Creaking croak Hear the song, of life's old woe One mistake, one provoke
And everything goes under Ice broken, asunder
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Oct 7, 2006 4:48:26 GMT -5
Post by Nothing but Silverwind on Oct 7, 2006 4:48:26 GMT -5
*Stands up and continues clapping* WOOHOO!
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Oct 7, 2006 19:25:58 GMT -5
Post by HRH The King XIX on Oct 7, 2006 19:25:58 GMT -5
simple yet very nice, I tend to over-do my poems. -D
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Oct 8, 2006 20:54:09 GMT -5
Post by | s.t.o.r.m.y x Moss | on Oct 8, 2006 20:54:09 GMT -5
^.^ Thanks guys! I'm trying to think of another, don't want to rush it.
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Oct 13, 2006 23:50:21 GMT -5
Post by | s.t.o.r.m.y x Moss | on Oct 13, 2006 23:50:21 GMT -5
Dreaming of a Dream
I walk along In this hazy fog In this dream-filled dream In this nightmare in disguise
I walk along I don't know what I'm searching for I don't know where to go I don't know where this ghost is calling for
I walk along In this crowded place In this time-ticking space In this misted race
I walk along Rushing past clouded faces Pushing through the large crowd Trying to slow my hammering heart
I run forward I run out I skid to a halt It's much too late
The plane's already gone I'm sent tumbling back Tears sting my eyes as the wind Pushes me back
I stand alone In this hazed fog In this misted place I stand alone
In this dream of dreams
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Dec 27, 2006 15:32:59 GMT -5
Post by Grayshadow on Dec 27, 2006 15:32:59 GMT -5
Wow, I love it! way to go and i like the others too!
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Jan 3, 2007 2:33:41 GMT -5
Post by | s.t.o.r.m.y x Moss | on Jan 3, 2007 2:33:41 GMT -5
Thanks Firelover! I'm glad you liked it! Here's another one I had for a while, just decided to post it here.
Dreamer
Dreamer, dreamer When you cry Who is there To hear you sigh?
Dreamer, dreamer When you whisper Who is there To catch your murmur?
Dreamer, dreamer When you curl Who is there To make you unfurl?
Dreamer, dreamer When you fall Who is there To be your steady wall?
Dreamer, dreamer When you frown Who is there To turn it upside down?
Dreamer, dreamer When you grin Who is there To be your mirrored twin?
Dreamer, dreamer When you break Who is there To be your healing sake?
Dreamer, dreamer When you shatter Who is there To ask what's the matter?
Dreamer, dreamer When you whimper Who is there To be your sweet whisper?
Dreamer, dreamer When you bawl Who is there To answer your tortured call?
Who is there To keep you standing? Who is there To hear you singing? Who is there To shout for you in joy? Who is there To embrace you with love?
Dreamer, dreamer When you're trying to mend Who is there To be your friend?
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Feb 17, 2007 14:18:23 GMT -5
Post by [[_ moon/beam on Feb 17, 2007 14:18:23 GMT -5
FANTASTIC!!! Those are all really good! I also tend to over-do my poems too Lemon. My favorite one was 'Dreamer' *claps*
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Mar 31, 2007 23:53:01 GMT -5
Post by | s.t.o.r.m.y x Moss | on Mar 31, 2007 23:53:01 GMT -5
Thanks. ^-^
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Jul 15, 2007 11:27:33 GMT -5
Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jul 15, 2007 11:27:33 GMT -5
YOU'RE THE MASTER AT WRITING THESE! No, seriously, I love your ability to write about a depressing topic in such a pretty way!
o.0 I don't think that came out right. But I luvs your poems!!!
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