Sharplily
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Abyss
Apr 21, 2006 18:34:42 GMT -5
Post by Sharplily on Apr 21, 2006 18:34:42 GMT -5
Abyss In this chaotic, mazed abyss In this world oh so confusing The wind howls as I squat in my crevice of loneliness
The world spins by me They are all swept up Into the whirlwind of life As I huddle in my corner of fright
They're all gone As I sit here Unmoving and lonely In my place of tears
They all left without a word I stayed without a sound If only life wasn't so jumbled If only I could go, too
But I'm too different I'm too weird They're all the same Square and solid
I'm a liquid Drifting off in my own world But always staying there In my seat of fear
In this chaotic, mazed abyss In this world oh so confusing The breeze whispers as I perch on my rock of spirit
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Apr 21, 2006 18:41:25 GMT -5
Post by | s.t.o.r.m.y x Moss | on Apr 21, 2006 18:41:25 GMT -5
Woah. Man that's deep. Very good and reminds me of an anime I like. Very good. Speechless. XD
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Sharplily
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Apr 21, 2006 18:45:33 GMT -5
Post by Sharplily on Apr 21, 2006 18:45:33 GMT -5
Thank you. It was completely random. Well, my Honors English teacher said it isn't random, that I was trying to say something. Yet, I have no clue what I was trying to say...
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Apr 21, 2006 18:58:35 GMT -5
Post by HRH The King XIX on Apr 21, 2006 18:58:35 GMT -5
lol, teacher's always think works of their students have deep meanings Very clever I must say!
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Sharplily
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Apr 21, 2006 19:05:48 GMT -5
Post by Sharplily on Apr 21, 2006 19:05:48 GMT -5
Maybe I was expressing how different I felt from everybody else, and when they all went one way (as in followed a trend) I stayed where I was and didn't change. Hmmm...maybe. Oh well. Thanks for the input!
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Apr 21, 2006 19:09:51 GMT -5
Post by HRH The King XIX on Apr 21, 2006 19:09:51 GMT -5
I feel sooooooooo much like that too! I never (really never) follow fads, etc.
I'm so unique it's sometimes annoying because I ussually can't identify in any way with anyone!
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