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Post by HRH The King XIX on Mar 2, 2006 3:24:44 GMT -5
NOTE- This is a poem about how terrible the destruction of the Amazonian rain forest is. Every year, beautiful mounds of green forests are cut away. Enjoy! ____________________________________________ The forest sang a melody A new sub-age was born The howls of wind brought pain and sighing To the perfection of the once green trees The dead fish spun about the lake The sun was launching streaks of death The blackened rivers coldly whispered Life would soon be through The fish died out from lack of water Its once live body lifeless The rotting flesh would be the meal For others facing starvation The red hot skies blazed deathful rays Smoke was ever scene Whilst fires burned away the earth Goodbye, my once green tree
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Post by Needlepa†ch on Mar 22, 2006 21:43:10 GMT -5
Wow! That's good. I would never be able to write anything that good. (I suck a whole lot at poetry.)
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Post by Silverheart on Mar 30, 2006 12:22:39 GMT -5
Wow that was really good! By the way Needlepatch, I'm really bad at poetry too!!! We can make a club! lol jk
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Post by Needlepa†ch on Apr 1, 2006 17:57:15 GMT -5
lol
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Post by HRH The King XIX on Apr 1, 2006 18:09:40 GMT -5
Glad you like it guys! I authored it 1 and a half months ago,
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Post by Needlepa†ch on Apr 2, 2006 20:00:06 GMT -5
Cool.
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Post by Silverheart on Apr 3, 2006 8:29:33 GMT -5
Way cool. I wish I was good at poetry!
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Post by kyttiemeowmeow on May 22, 2006 18:12:32 GMT -5
that was good. i write lyrics and poetry, so i understood the sybolism. it was real.
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Post by Nothing but Silverwind on May 27, 2006 1:32:54 GMT -5
It was fantastic!
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