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Jan 21, 2008 11:11:38 GMT -5
Post by Shattereddream on Jan 21, 2008 11:11:38 GMT -5
I am filled with fright So lost and alone Racing through the night
Clouds cover the stars No moon can be seen Pain sears from my scars
I desperately call out But no one answers me My mind is haunted by doubt
Where do I belong? Where can I call home? Everything feels wrong
I know I'll fall into the snow My tiny legs can't hold up Against the icy wind that blows
I fall heavily to the ground My life fading slowly I cannot make a sound
I still don't know my name Or where I come from But I'll go to StarClan all the same
Suddenly I can't feel pain All my troubles slip away Exactly like rain
"Come Eternalkit," says someone I hurry towards the starry cat Finally knowing who I am and that I'm going home
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Jan 24, 2008 15:53:07 GMT -5
Post by Lazzy Sky on Jan 24, 2008 15:53:07 GMT -5
oh my god. That is so incredibly good. Thats is amazing. Yet so sensitive and sad.
You are an amazing writer.
you should publish this
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Jan 25, 2008 17:58:52 GMT -5
Post by Shattereddream on Jan 25, 2008 17:58:52 GMT -5
My goal in life is to become an author... Thank you for the comment!
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Sunsetfur
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New TSF M0d!
Teh Sunnieh is LOST
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Feb 6, 2008 21:02:42 GMT -5
Post by Sunsetfur on Feb 6, 2008 21:02:42 GMT -5
Very, very nice! Great description and good rhyming.
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Feb 15, 2008 16:16:24 GMT -5
Post by Shattereddream on Feb 15, 2008 16:16:24 GMT -5
Thanks!
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ƒrФ§тƒire
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Grand Duke of..... nevermind....... A MOD!
Look, guys, I can finally make images like Dreamy. <3
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Feb 16, 2008 17:00:04 GMT -5
Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Feb 16, 2008 17:00:04 GMT -5
Yay, another author! When you get published, I can be all, "I used to be a mod on the website she went to..." etc. Very good poem. It would appear we share the same kind of death and joining StarClan taste in warriors poetry. XDDDD
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Feb 20, 2008 18:28:25 GMT -5
Post by Shattereddream on Feb 20, 2008 18:28:25 GMT -5
Wow... Thanks you guys. XD lol Frostfire.
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