The Fall Of Crowfeather

[Saberclaw]

Oh Feathertail, your gone.
Gone, gone, gone.
Everyday I my heart weeps for you.
My heart craves for you.
Day after day I mourn for you.
The way you sacrificed your life to save others overwhelmed me.
With you is where I want to be.
You are the only one that understands me.
Despite my aggresive ways.
Without you, my heart pays.
I loved you more than anything.
Your death chills me like a cold ring.
You were the only cat that I ever cared about.
The day that my heart grew for Leafpool made me want to shout.
Do you realize how much I hate myself for loving another?
Do you realize how my love for her makes me smother?
I love her as much as I love you.
My heart sparkels for her like the morning dew.
Will you ever forgive me?
Her and you is where I want to be.
It tears me up like fangs and claws.
You are still the only one that can oversee my flaws.
How can I love her too?
I wanted to be with you.
Will you ever forgive my heart?
My love for her and you tears me apart.
Even though I named myself after you, she walks in my dreams.
You both warm my heart like sunbeams.
Will you two share me?
You both fill my heart with glee.
You and her is where I want to be.
Oh Feathertail, do you still love me?

[Saberclaw]

Sorry everyone that I accidentli typed "I" in between "Everyday" and "my heart weeps for you" I typed too fast. Agian, sorry for the typo. I hope you still enjoyed the poem.

[Bramblestar]

It's touching. That's pretty much the feeling I got in the dream where Feathertail came to him saying he could love Leafpool.

[Saberclaw]

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem Bramblestar! ;D

[[[_ moon/beam]

This poem is fantastic! Your excellent at poetry Saberclaw!

[Saberclaw]

Thanks! ;D

[Beautypelt]

My name used to be Saberclaw, but stole my name. So, now I was Knifeclaw, but cats don't know what a knife is. So, I'm now Beautypelt. Anyways, what do you think about my poen Firelover?

[Firerlover]

I think its great! CrowXFeather lives on! (I like CrowXLeaf too!)

[Beautypelt]

Thanks Firelover!

[Grayshadow]

No prob! I like to review stories and poems!