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Post by n.i.n.j.a.m.i.n.d. on May 15, 2007 18:58:03 GMT -5
Lightningpelt padded out of the Warrior Den. She spotted the leader, Thunderstar and her deputy, Loudstreak. "Gathering tonight!" Loudstreak yelled. Lightningpelt looked at the dawn sky, and she swore she saw her deceased mate's face. That night at the Gathering, Lightningpelt couldn't listen. She kept hearing Ripplestripe, her dead mate's, voice. After they left the Gathering, Thunderstar walked over and said, "What's wrong?" Lightningpelt shook her head and walked away.
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Post by Shadeheart on May 16, 2007 14:31:18 GMT -5
Um... This is supoed to be on the Warriors Stories forum, and not the Non-Warriors Stories...
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on May 20, 2007 14:31:35 GMT -5
It's good, a little short, the topic is strange and not explained fully. And yes, this is in the wrong forum. Try making it longer and reposting it in the correct forum. =^-^=
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