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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 12, 2007 12:51:47 GMT -5
Uh oh. O.O
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 12, 2007 17:34:56 GMT -5
Chapter 23
"STOP...RIGHT...THERE!!!" bellowed I as I charged at Rat Fang. "YOU!" snarled Rat Fang. "Drop those traps right now!" demanded I. Bright As The Sun dropped her trap, but Rat Fang didn't drop her traps. "I know what your doing Rat FINK, and I won't let you do it! We know how to take care of those traps! You are only wasting your time!" snarled I. "Funny, one of my Big Teeth has caught your stupid father/chief! I even made him roar, luring that human to him! So, aparentally you black rats don't know how to deal with those traps!" laughed Rat Fang. "True, my HONORABLE father/chief wasn't lucky to escape Big Teeth, but we do know how to make the Big Teeth safe!" snapped I. "Show me!" demanded Rat Fang. "Bright As The Sun, hand me a stick." said I. The little cub handed one to me. I grabbed it by the tip. I stabbed the inside of Big Teeth's mout with the stick. Big Teeth snapped its jaws shut, snapping the stick in half. "Well, well, looks like we have a CLEVER black bear with us!" grumbled Rat Fang. "Wow! That was amazing!" gasped Bright As The Sun in awe. "Since you have all of that knowledge, including about knowing about my plan, I'm going to have to kill you!" snarled Rat Fang in a very quiet tone. "You were going to kill her anyway, you filth hole!" snarled Bright As The Sun at Rat Fang. "I'm going to kill you next! You were never a good slave!" snarled Rat Fang to Bright As The Sun. I tackled Rat Fang to the ground. "YOU ENSLAVED YOUR OWN NIECE?!?!?!" roared I. "Every chief needs slaves!!!" snarled Rat Fang. "No decent chiefs has slaves!!!" snarled I. Rat Fang's response was a snarl and a kick. Rat Fang kicked me in the stomach. I gasped for air. Rat Fang swatted me to the ground. Before I could get up, she held me down. Before she was about to sink her teeth into my throat, Bright As The Sun pounced onto her head. Caught off guard, Rat Fang released me and staggered to her paws. "Get off of me you infernal pest!" snarled Rat Fang. "I won't let you kill Nova Lee! I won't let you kill ANY of those innocent black bears!" snapped Bright As The Sun. "You're turning against your own species?!?!?!" exclaimed Rat Fang. "Black Bears, grizzly bears, what's the differance? We're all bears! We all have fur and bleed red blood! We're all God's creatures!" said Bright As The Sun. "You are so clueless! We grizzly bears are the ultimate animals on the planet! Are job in to rule and kill all of those lesser animals, including black bears!" snarled Rat Fang. I was really shocked by Rat Fang's racism. Rat Fang pulled her off of her head. Rat Fang threw her at a tree. Rat Fang turned around and slashed at my forehead. She raised her paw agian, but I dodged it just in time. I scored Rat Fang's chest with my claws. We fought and fought. "WHAT IN SPIRIT TRIBE'S NAME IS GOING ON?!?!?!" bellowed a voice. We all turned around, and saw Gore Fang and the rest of Blood Tribe.
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 13, 2007 8:26:03 GMT -5
nice chapter!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 13, 2007 17:56:08 GMT -5
Chapter 24
I stared at Blood Tribe in horror. "What are YOU doing here?" snarled Gore Fang at me. "She was trying to put these traps on our territory! She wanted us to get caught and be killed by humans! It's a good thing that I stopped her just in time!" said Rat Fang. "That's a lie!!!" exclaimed I. "That's true! Rat Fang is a dirty liar!" exclaimed Bright As The Sun. "Darling, how can you say that about your own auntie?" said Rat Fang to Bright As The Sun with a faint hint of a menacing snarl in her voice. "Don't you 'darling' me! You enslaved, me, you threatened me, you make me do things for you, AND you're a liar! YOU wanted ME to place these traps on Rain Tribe territory!" snarled Bright As The Sun in a brave voice at Rat Fang. "Don't listen to her! She's a delirious cub!" demanded Rat Fang at Rain Tribe. "Bright As The Sun is telling the truth!" said I. "Blood Tribe, just who are you going to belive? A dirty black bear and a little cub with a wild imagination, or an honest bear like me?" said Rat Fang. My neck fur bristled. "I didn't imagine it! Rat Fang is no good!" shouted Bright As The Sun. "She isn't! Don't believe Rat Fang! Nova Lee and Bright As The Sun are telling the truth!" exclaimed a voice. I turned around, and saw Amber Mist. "You are on those two's sides?" growled Rat Fang at Amber Mist. "Yes I am! We know all about you, Rat Fang! We know that you are nothing but a murderous liar!" snarled Amber Mist. "Just who are you calling-" snarled Rat Fang. "ENOUGH!!!" roared Gore Fang. We all stared at Gore Fang. "I know what's happening! We all know that Rat Fang is Nova Lee's friend! We all know that Nova Lee would do anything for Amber Mist! So, Amber Mist and Nova Lee turned my daughter agianst the rest of us! Nova Lee, Amber Mist, and Bright As The Sun were trying to place these traps on our territory! Luckily, Rat Fang stopped those three just in time!" declared Gore Fang. I felt like gagging. Gore Fang STILL trusts Rat Fang! He trusts her more than he trusts his own daughters! "You're right, Gore Fang! That's exactly what happened!" said Rat Fang. I really wanted to strangle Rat Fang. "Yellow Moon, Sharp Fang, you send Bright As The Sun and Amber Mist to there burrows and watch them! They are not to leave their burrows for ANY reason! They don't come out until I say so!" Gore Fang ordered. Yellow Moon and Sharp Fang dipped their heads and seized Bright As The Sun and Amber Mist. "Let me go! Let me go!" screamed Bright As The Sun as Sharp Fang carried her to her burrow. "Rat Fang is lying!" shouted Amber Mist as Yellow Moon wrestled her into her burrow. "As for you, NOVA LEE, you are going to be our prisoner! You can stay in the extra burrow we got until I decide what to do with you!" snarled Gore Fang. "You can't take me away from my tribe!" protested I. "Oh no? Hawk Feather, take this prisoner to that burrow!" said Gore Fang. Hawk Feather grabbed me feet and dragged me towards the reeking burrow. "Help! Help! Some body, help me!" hollered I as Hawk Feather dragged me closer and closer towards the unpleasent burrow.
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 16, 2007 12:57:58 GMT -5
O.O uh oh!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 16, 2007 17:31:56 GMT -5
Chapter 25
I lied inside of that wretched burrow. I prayed to Spirit Tribe that Hawk Feather and the rest of the Blood Tribe grizzlies would fall asleep so that I can escape. I heard snoring. Blood Tribe were asleep! I quietly walked out of the burrow. "Where do you think you are going?!?!?! You're our prisoner! Get back inside the prisoner burrow!!!" snarled Hawk Feather. Hawk Feather punched me back inside of the burrow. My body hit the wall of the burrow. I landed on my belly and face. "Filth!" said I in a quiet voice. I kicked the dirt in rage. How DARE did those grizzly bears turn me into a common prisoner?! Great, the guards were awake and the REST were asleep! I can never escape now! 'What...are they going to do to me?' thought I in mild fear, forgetting my anger. I heard many stories about prisoners. They were treated like crap, forced to eat nasty stuff, they drink very little water, or they were even put to death! Oh Spirit Tribe which of those things are they going to do to me? I felt alone and afraid. Well, at least I stopped Rat Fang just in time. And, I don't think even Rat Fang would have the guts to do terrible things with three bears on guard duty. I tossed and turned in the burrow. It was NOT a comfortable burrow. It was full of rocks, pebbles, weeds, and twigs. 'How can any bear sleep in this burrow?' thought I in discomfort. I tried to push those things out, but Hawk Feather pushed them back in. 'Great! I'm stuck lying on junk!' thought I in discomfort. Well, there was nothing I can do. All I can do was lie down and sleep. Oh Spirit Tribe, help me!
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 25, 2007 12:07:58 GMT -5
Good chapter!!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 26, 2007 7:01:11 GMT -5
Chapter 26
It was morning. I woke up. Blood Tribe did their morning routine. To my luck, they left Amber Mist in charge of me. They said that they wanted to test Amber Mist's loyalties. "Nova Lee, I'm so sorry that this happened!" said Amber Mist. "It's not your fault." said I. "I knew that my aunt is a rotten pile of carcasses!" growled Amber Mist. "Well, I've stopped her this time." said I. "How DARE she enslave my baby sister!" snarled Amber Mist. "How long do I have to be a prisoner?" asked I. "Until my father decides what to do with you." said Amber Mist. I was full of dread. "Don't worry. My father might be an angry bully, but he'll never kill a bear." said Amber Mist. I began to feel relieved. "I just wish that there was some way that I can let you go without my tribe finding out." said Amber Mist. "I know!" exclaimed I. Amber Mist's eyes were full of sympathy. "So, what's your tribe doing now?" asked I. "They're having breakfast. Then, they'll take a bath. Then, they'll groom themselves. Then, they'll have lunch. Then, they'll patrol the territory. Then they'll have dinner. Then, my father will tell us a story. And then, we sleep." said Amber Mist. I was full of awe. Blood Tribe has a similar schedual as my tribe! Then, I smelt grizzly bears. "Here comes my tribe now!" growled Amber Mist in dread.
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 30, 2007 12:02:49 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on May 2, 2007 10:12:31 GMT -5
Chapter 27
"Well, well, well, Amber Mist, looks like you finally realize where your loyalties are!" said Gore Fang. "She was talking to our prisoner, Gore Fang! She must be punished at once with her!" snarled Rat Fang. "Now, now, I never said that Amber Mist wasn't allowed to talkto that blck bear." said Gore Fang. "But Gore Fang, Rat Fang's right! Amber Mist must be punished for talking to our prisoner!" protested Yellow Moon. "Look, I'M chief of this tribe! And, what I say goes! And, I say that there is nothing wrong with talking to an imprisoned black bear!" growled Gore Fang. I stared at Gore Fang in gratitude. Maybe that grizzly wasn't as bad as I thought he was. "He-bear! If I were chief, things sure would be diffrent around here!" muttered Rat Fang. "Well, Rat Fang, when you chief, you can do what ever you want! But, I'M still chief of this tribe! So, until then, you have to obey ME!" snapped Gore Fang. Rat Fang turned her head away with a dark look in her eyes. "Um, Gore Fang, what ARE we going to do with Nova Lee?" asked Raven Wing. "BLIND HER!" bellwed Yellow Moon. "ENSLAVE HER!" bellowed Hawk Feather. "KILL HER!" bellowed Rat Fang. I trembled as I stared at the bellowing bears. "Now, now, aren't those things a little TOO harsh?" said Gore Fang in a stern voice. "Nothing is too harsh for a black bear!" snapped Yellow Moon. "Don't use that tone of voice with me1" growled Gore Fang. "Well, aren't we going to kill the prisoner?" demanded Rat Fang. Amber Mist sheilded me. He glared at Rat Fang with bared teeth. "No! We certainly NOT going to kill Nova Lee!" snarled Gore Fang. "But-" Rat Fang began. "No 'buts!' Nobody is killing anybody! Despite our tribe name, we AREN'T going to shed blood!" growled Gore Fang. "But Gore Fang, what ARE we going to do with the prisoner?" asked Hawk Feather. "We are-" began Gore Fang. "GET AWAY FROM MY MOTHER!" roared a voice. We turned around, and saw my son and my tribe.
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Post by Grayshadow on May 2, 2007 15:36:47 GMT -5
Oh boy!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on May 2, 2007 17:45:48 GMT -5
Chapter 28
My tribe were snarling at Blood Tribe. I smelt some new bear scents that I didn't recongize. "Give us back, Nova Lee! Now!" snarled my son in a quiet voice. "Ah, Talon Of Mighty Eagle, one minute, you were a sniveling cub, and now, you are a bossy little female dog!" taunted Rat Fang. "No one speaks to my leader like that!" snarled a young black she-bear. "Yeah, no one!" snarled a young black he-bear. "Who are you two?" asked Gore Fang. "I'm Butteryfly Wing. This is my brother, Ear Of Fast Hare. We used to live in Rainbow Tribe, but they were killed in a foest fire. So, Talon Of Mighty Eagle took us in." said the young black she-bear. "Typical black bears, always stick together!" muttered Yellow Moon. Just then, there was another new bear scent. This time, it belonged to a grizzly bear. My tribe and Blood Tribe smelt the scent as well. "Come on out who ever you are!" snarled Raven Wing. A few seconds later, an adult grizzly he-bear appeared from the bright side of the forest. "Who are you?" asked Gore Fang. "I'm Tail Of Strong Alligator. I used to live in Rock Tribe, but my tribe abandoned me because their tribe was getting overcrowded." said the adult grizzly he-bear. "So, why have you come here then?" snarled Blue Jay. "I was looking for a tribe of grizzly bears that will take me in." said Tail Of Strong Alligator. "Well, we're a tribe of grizzly bears." said Bright As The Sun. "Shh!" said Raven Wing. Gore Fang walked over towards Tail Of Strong Alligator. Gore Fang sniffed the strange bear. "You smell harmless. Nothing strange in your scent." said Gore Fang. "What are you saying, Gore Fang?" said Raven Wing. "What I'm saying is, I'm going to let Tail Of Strong Alligator join Blood Tribe. I want to see what he's like. Maybe he will be valuable to us." said Gore Fang. "But, Gore Fang, you can't just bring strays to our tribe! They can be dangerous!" protested Raven Wing. "Talon Of Mighty Eagle let Butterfly Wing and Ear Of Fast Hare to his tribe! Why shouldn't Tail Of Alligator be part of Blood Tribe?" said Gore Fang. "We AREN'T Rain Tribe, Gore Fang!" spat Rat Fang. "No we're not, we're Blood Tribe. But, that doesn't mean that we have to be the complete opposite of other tribes!" said Gore Fang. "We're NOT black bears!" snarled Rat Fang. "Tail Of Strong Alligator is a Blood Tribe bear and that's final!" snapped Gore Fang. "Wow, Gore Fang, thanks!" said Tail Of Strong Alligator as he walked into Blood Tribe territory. "Great! Just what we need! Another grizzly bear!" muttered Blue Jay. "Look, we came here for Nova Lee, and we're not leaving until we get her!" growled my son. "No chance! Nova Lee is to be Blood Tribe's prisoner for the rest of her life! Don't worry, well feed her and shelter her!" said Gore Fang. "She's NOT your prisoner! Give her back, or you'll be sorry!" snarled my son. "Is that a challenge, Talon Of Mighty Eagle?" asked Rat Fang with a wicked grin on her face. "RELEASE NOVA LEE!!!" bellowed my son in rage.
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Post by Grayshadow on May 4, 2007 12:37:19 GMT -5
Get angry!!!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on May 6, 2007 8:20:31 GMT -5
Chapter 29
To my horror, Rat Fang tackled my son to the ground. Rat Fang bit into my son's chest. My son kicked her off and punched her. "If Rat Fang wins, we get to keep Nova Lee! If Talon Of Mighty Eagle wins, you can have her back!" growled Gore Fang to my mother. "My grandson WILL win!" growled my mother to Gore Fang. "They shouldn't be fighting! Blood Tribe should give Nova Lee back!" said Tail Of Strong Alligator to Amber Mist. "You care?" asked Amber Mist with wide eyes. "I do." said Tail Of Strong Alligator. "Wow, I'm not the only one that cares about Rain Tribe!" said Amber Mist. " I wish I can stop them from fighting!" said Tail Of Strong Alligator. "Me too!" said Amber Mist. I began to like Tail Of Strong Alligator. He was kind and sensitive! To my horror, I saw Rat Fang slashed at my son's privates! My son roared in agony. Luckily, his you-know-whats are still okay. My son took his paws off of his you-know-what-they-ares and sank his teeth into Rat Fang's left hind theigh. Rat Fang roared in pain. My son bit down harder. Rat Fang roared louder. My son bit down harder and harder. I smelt Gore Fang's fear scent. "We surrender! We surrender! We'll give y'all back Nova Lee! Just, make Talon Of Mighty Eagle release Rat Fang!" cried Gore Fang. "Talon Of Mighty Eagle, release Rat Fang!" ordered my mother. My son released Rat Fang. "Gore Fang, what do you think you are doing?!?!?! Nova Lee is our prisoner!" snarled Rat Fang. "Not anymore!" growled Gore Fang. "I could've beaten that mangy black bear!" snapped Rat Fang. "Looks like HE was beating YOU!" exclaimed Gore Fang. "I didn't feel any pain!" snapped Rat Fang. "Oh sure! Your roars must be part of your plan to defeat him!" said Gore Fang in a sarcastic voice. "I...was just trying to scare him!" lied Rat Fang. Gore Fang narrowed his eyes at her. "I mean, who ever heard of a black bear defeating a grizzly bear? Come on!" exclaimed Rat Fang. "Nova Lee, you're free to go!" said Gore Fang to me. "Thank you, sir!" said I to Gore Fang. I ran out of the prisoner's burrow and ran to be reunited with my tribe. "NO!!!" bellowed Rat Fang. "We'll be leaving now!" growled my son to Gore Fang. "Good! Go back to your territory! Get out of our sight!" snarled Gore Fang. My tribe and I headed back to our territory. I thanked Spirit Tribe that I'm back with my tribe.
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Post by Tear on May 6, 2007 13:24:22 GMT -5
Great and Asome chapters!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on May 6, 2007 20:11:05 GMT -5
Chapter 30
A quarter moon has passed. My son became an excellent chief. I thanked him for saving me. Ear Of Fast Hare and Butterfly Wing are fitting in very well. I noticed that my son and Butterfly Wing were spending a TON of time together. I also noticed that my son stared at Butterfly Wing the same way I stared at Black Storm. We were now cleaning ourselves. Then, I noticed that I smelt grizzly bear scents, but friendly grizzly bear scents. "I smell Blood Tribe!" snarled Blue Jay. Then, appearing from the thicket, were Amber Mist and Tail Of Strong Alligator. "What are you two doing here?" snarled my mother. "Maple Leaf, it's okay. It's just Amber Mist and Tail Of Strong Alligator." said my son. "We just snuck out of our tribe. We were wondering how y'all were doing." said Amber Mist. "We're doing great!" said my son with a smile. "Despite that they're grizzly bears on our territory!" snarled Blue Jay. my son gave him a warning look. "That's great! We're glad that y'all are okay!" said Tail Of Strong Alligator. I saw Amber Mist smiling at Tail Of Strong Alligator. The same smile when I smile at Black Storm. I saw Tail Of Strong Alligator smile at Amber Mist. The same smile when Black Storm smiles at me. "Well, you two better go back to your tribe before they get suspicious." warned my son. "Good idea." said Tail Of Strong Alligator. "Bye, y'all!" said Amber Mist. We waved our good byes to the grizzlies. Today, I noticed that my son and Butterfly Wing have a liking for each other just like Amber Mist and Tail Of Strong Alligator. Is it mating season already?
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Post by Tear on May 20, 2007 21:54:46 GMT -5
Great chapter!
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