Rat Fang

[Grayshadow]

Aww, sad Stop making me sad! lol

[Beautful Beautypelt]

Chapter 15

It was sun down. We buried my father.
"My husband, was a loyal, devoted chief. No bear can ask for a better chief." said my mother.
My mother set a rock on my father's grave.
"My brother, was the best brother in the world. I was and still proud to be his brother." said Oak Tree.
Oak Tree set a rock on my father's grave.
"Red Wood, was a very fair bear. He was the fairest bear I know." said Honey Bee.
Honey Bee set a rock on my father's grave.
"Red Wood, was so honest. He never lied. He always told the truth. You can alway trust him to be honest." said Holy Rain.
Holy Rain set a rock on my father's grave.
"My son, was a very good son. No father can ask for a better son." said Blue Jay.
Blue Jay set a rock on my father's grave.
"I was and still proud to be his mother. I will always love him." said Umber Fur.
Umber Fur set a rock on my father's grave.
"I was and still am, very fond of Red Wood. He was so easy to get along with." said Elm Tree.
Elm Tree set a rock on my father's grave.
"Red Wood was a mighty great chief. I always respected him. I will always respect him." said Black Storm.
Black Storm set a rock on my father's grave.
"My father, was the best father in the world. I will always be proud to be his daughter." said Acorn Tree.
Acorn Tree set a rock on my father's grave.
"My father, was the best father and in the universe. He was so wise, honorable, powerful, kind, and brave. He was the best bear ever." said I.
I set a rock on my father's grave.
"My granddaddy, was the best granddaddy ever. I loved him so much." said Wind That Carries Leaves.
Wind That Carries Leaves set a rock on my father's grave.
"My granddaddy was the best. And, he still is the best." said Night Owl.
Night Owl set a rock on my father's grave.
"My grandfather, was the greatest chief ever. I can never take his place. I'll never forget him." said Talon Of Mighty Eagle.
Talon Of Mighty Eagle set a rock on my father's grave.
"Red Wood, was a very good friend. He was one of my best friends. He shall always be one of my best friends." said Night Wing.
Night Wing set a rock on my father's grave.
"We never met Red Wood, but we know that he was an awesome chief. And, we shall pray for him." said Snow Storm.
"Bless you!" said my mother as she hugged Snow Storm.
I saw that my mother was crying.
We all cried.
"Hey y'all. We heard about Red Wood. We're so sorry to hear that." said a voice.
We all turned around, and saw Gore Fang and his tribe with rocks in their paws.

[Grayshadow]

One word: sad! Quit it!!!!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

This chapter is just a LITTLE sad. This will be my last SAD chapter.


Chapter 16

"Yes, Red Wood is dead." said Blue Jay, with more tears dripping down his cheeks.
"We just want to say that we feel your pain. We too have lost our tribe mates. We still grieve for Skunk Tail and Beauty Of The Night. We thought that y'all might need our comfort." said Raven Wing.
"Thanks." said my mother.
I saw Amber Mist walking towards me.
"Nova Lee, I'm very sorry. You must be very sad." said Amber Mist.
"EXTREMELY sad!" sobbed I.
"I saw Rat-You-Know-Who! I saw her lead your father to that trap! She made him roar so that he would attract that murderous human! I tried to tell my tribe that Rat-Spit was the one that killed your father, but they said that I was a liar that's jealous about HER! Oh, Nova Lee, I tried!" said Amber Mist.
"I know! I already know that Rat Fang killed my father! She's a demon, I know!" snarled I, replacing my sorrows with rage.
"Have you told your tribe that Rat-Wretch murdered your father?" asked Amber Mist.
"No, but I'm going to. After this funeral." said I.
"What are you two ladies talking about?" asked my mother.
"Uh, we're just talking!" said I.
"We were just introducing Snow Tribe to Blood Tribe, but why don't you two tell us what you are talking about?" said my mother.
'The sooner I tell my tribe about my father's murderer, the better. I'll tell them now. Maybe Blood Tribe will finally believe the truth about Rat Fang.' thought I to myself.
I cleared my throat.
"Everyone, we all know about Rat Fang. She's strong, determined, powerful, cunning, intellegent, and smart." said I.
"Why Nova Lee, thank you for those compliments!" said Rat Fang in an aluring voice.
"But, there are other things that Amber Mist and I know about Rat Fang. She's ambitious, a liar, deciever, blood thirsty, tricky, wicked, and a murderer!!!" shouted I.
"Nova Lee, those words aren't compliments!" said Rat Fang in a dangerously low voice.
"Everyone, Rat Fan killed Skunk Tail and Beauty Of The Night! And, she ALSO killed Red Wood!!!" hollered I.

[Tear]

that chapter was not sad. it just mad me want to rip Rat Crap into peaces.

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Chapter 17

Gasps flooded the air.
"It's true!" said Amber Mist.
"THAT'S A LIE!!!" bellowed Rat Fang.
"Doesn't anyone find it interesting that Nova Lee is my daughter's friend? My daughter is just jealous that Rat Fang is going to be my tribe's future chief instead of her. It's very logical that Nova Lee would lie for my daughter!" growled Gore Fang.
"My daughter NEVER lies!" snarled my mother.
"Well, Rat Fang my sister never lies either!" snarled Raven Wing.
'Yeah, right!!!' thought I to myself.
"I've known my sister my whole life! And, I have yet to hear her lie!" snarled Sharp Fang.
"We, Rain Tribe bears, never, EVER, lie!!! I say that Nova Lee is telling the truth!" snarled Blue Jay.
"Blow it out your ear you old bird!" snarled Yellow Moon.
"Everyone, please, let's not start another war!" pleaded Holy Rain.
"Oh, keep quiet you lying peace of raven food!" snarled Cougar Claw.
"Hey!" cawed Night Wing.
"Even your own daughter agreed with my daughter! Rat Fang is the liar! Not us!" exclaimed my mother.
"Amber Mist is just jealous!" snarled Gore Fang.
"Yeah! My niece is just jealous of me!" snarled Rat Fang.
"You, keep your mouth shut! We already have to witnesses about your actions!" snarled Night Owl to Rat Fang.
"That's no way to respect your elders you little brat!!!" snarled Rat Fang to my daughter.
"Don't you DARE call my daughter a brat!!!" snarled Black Storm to Rat Fang.
"You keep out of this, half -tribe!" snarled Hawk Feather to Black Storm.
"I may not be born in Rain Tribe, but I'll do what ever it takes to defend them!" snarled Black Storm.
"I always knew that we can never trust you black bears!" snarled Dark Sky.
"And, I always knew that we can never trust you grizzly bears!" snarled Umber Fur.
"Everyone, please, calm down!" pleaded Snow Flake.
"You polar bears butt out! Y'all don't even live in this forest!" snarled Night Fall.
"Hey, since Snow Tribe are with us agian, why don't we team up with them to drive out Blood Tribe from this forest?" said Ash Fall.
"That's a fine idea!!!" exclaimed Elm Tree.

[Tear]

Battle! Battle! Great chapter Bueatypelt!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Chapter 18

I saw that Snow Tribe became nervous.
"Talon Of Mighty Eagle, your the chief of this forest now! Just say the word, and we'll attack those filthy grizzlies!" said Blue Jay.
My son became worried and scared.
"Well, Talon Of Mighty Eagle, aren't you going to say the word?" said Oak Tree.
"I-I-I...say...we should let Snow Storm decide!!!" stammered my son in a loud, paniced voice.
"WHAT?!?!?!" roared Ash Fall.
"That's your battle command?!?!?!" bellowed Blue Jay.
"Well, Snow Storm has been leader a whole lot longer than I have, maybe he has better ideas." said my son in a quiet, timid voice.
"Well, well, well, looks like chief Talon Of Mighty Eagle's real name is Talon Of Cowardly Pidgeon!" shouted Gore Fang.
My son covered his eyes with his paws.
"Grandson, you are Rain Tribe's chief now. We follow your orders now. Now, what's your order?" said my mother as she place her paw on my son's back.
"I already told you. We'll let Snow Storm decide what to do." said my son, still covering his eyes.
"Talon Of Mighty Eagle, I know that being a new chief can be scary, but we must always do what is right and honor our chief before us. Your dad was a really great chief, and someday, you'll be as good as your dad. Another chief can't make decisions for you. YOU have to make YOUR OWN decisions. Now, what's your order for your tribe?" said Snow Storm.
My son uncovered his eyes. He faced his and my tribe.
"Well, we fought Blood Tribe before, and Spirit Tribe were displeased about that. If we battle, we'll anger Spirit Tribe. So, I say...there would be no battle today or ever agian. Blood Tribe and Snow Tribe should go home. We'll have to get on with our lives peacefully. I repeat, there would be no battle today." said my son.

[Tear]

Oh well. Cool chapter!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Chapter 19

"YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS!!!" roared Ash Fall.
"I-I-I am serious." stammered my son in a very quiet voice.
All of the Blood Tribe bears, except for Amber Mist, laughed.
"I knew those gutless black bears wouldn't have the guts to fight us!" laughed Hawk Feather.
"We're not gutless! Our chief is!" snarled Ash Fall.
My neck fur bristled. How DARE my best friend dis my son like that!
My son covered his eyes agian.
Blood Tribe laughed agian.
"Be gone, you useless bears! Get out of Rain Tribe territory! Get!" snarled Snow Storm to Blood Tribe.
"You're not our chief!" snarled Rat Fang.
"Want to fight us?!" snarled Snow Storm.
Blood Tribe noticed that the polar bears are larger and stronger than they are. They quicky got the message and fled back to their territory.
"I'm sorry for everything!" whispered Amber Mist to me.
"Don't apologize, YOU didn't do a thing!" whispered I to her.
"I'll talk to you later!" whispered Amber Mist.
I dipped my head and waved a good-bye to her.
Amber Mist dipped her head and went with her tribe.
"I'm sorry that we came in such a bad time." said Snow Angel.
"No, that's okay! You didn't start the fight!" said my mother.
"Perhaps we should get going. We'll visit you all agian some other time." said Snow Storm.
"Oh, okay. Bye! Come see us agian soon!" said my mother.
"Bye!" chorused Snow Tribe.
"Bye!" chorused us Rain Tribe.
"Bye, Nova Lee!" said Snow Flake with a very sad look on her face.
"Bye-bye, Noa Wee!" said Little One.
"Bye!" said I to them.
With that, Snow Tribe went back towards the direction they came from.
I sure am going to miss those polar bears.
I saw that my son had his head bowed. Oh Spirit Tribe, why does our life have to go from bad, to worse?

[Tear]

Great chapter!

[Grayshadow]

good chapters

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Thanks for the compliments, y'all!


Chapter 20

We, Rain Tribe bears, and Night Wing, were all alone agian. I saw that my son still had his head bowed as he sat on the leafy ground.
"You call yourself a chief?! You look more like a helpless cub!" growled Ash Fall to my son.
Black Storm pushed her to the ground.
"Leave him alone!!! He hasn't done anything to you!!!" snarled Black Storm.
"We could've attacked and chased off those wretched grizzly bears, but Talon Of Cowardly Pidgeon refused to start the fight!" snapped Ash Fall.
"You call those grizzly bears, 'wretched,' and yet, YOU sound just like them!" exclaimed Black Storm.
"At least they were right about that! Your son is nothing, but a gutless coward!" snapped Ash Fall.
"You take that back!!!" snarled Black Storm as he slapped Ash Fall's cheek.
"NEVER!!!" roared Ash Fall as he slapped Black Storm's cheek.
Then, Black Storm and Ash Fall began their fight. I could've stopped them, but my son needed help the most. I went over towards my son.
"Talon Of Mighty Eagle? It's me, your mother. I was wondering if we can talk." said I.
"I wish to be alone." said my son in a quiet voice, with his head still bowed.
"It's just, everybody want to know that you want all of us to do now. What do you suggest?" said I.
"Everybody can do what ever they want. I just want to be alone." said my son with his head still bowed.
"A chief always gives us a schedual. A chief always tells us what to do." said I.
"Well, I'm NOT a chief!" cried my son.
"Of course you are a chief! You were Red Wood's heir! You have to take his place!" said I.
"I can NEVER take his place!" sobbed my son.
"Your granddfather has trained you the ways of being chief! Surely you didn't forget all that training he gave you!" said I.
"I didn't forget!" shouted my son.
"Then, why don't you accept yourself as our tribe's chief?" asked I.
"Because, Red Wood was the greatest chief that ever lived! He made me look like a novice! How can you expect me to take his place?!" cried my son.
"If you do your best, you'll be as good as your granddfather." said I.
"Raccooncrap!" sobbed my son.
"It'll take practice, but you'll eventually get the hang of it." said I in a kind voice.
"You...think so?" asked my son, lifting up his head.
"I'm positive!" said I.
"Uh...maybe I can be this tribe's chief. Just like my granddfather wanted. Just like Spirit Tribe wanted." said my son.
"Good! I always knew that I had faith in you!" said I as I hugged my son.
"I'll try, but I'll never be my granddfather." said my son.
"You'll be as great as him! I have faith in you!" said I.
My son took a deep breath, and then let it out.
"Now, make an announcement of what time it is." said I.
"Everyone, it's time for bed! Time to go into your burrows!" said my son.
"Why should we listen to you?!?" challanged Ash Fall.
"Because, he's our chief!" snapped Black Storm.
"Why the buck should we go to bed this early?" growled Ash Fall.
"I said, go to your burrows, NOW!!!" exclaimed my son.
Everyone, but my son and Ash Fall, went inside their burrows. I saw that Ash Fall just sat there, glaring at my son.
"Ash Fall, gut your dusty tail into your burrow!" snapped I.
Ash Fall opened her mouth to protest, but she stopped. She gave my son another glare, and went into her burrow.
"She listens to you far better than she listens to me!" muttered my son.
"She's just mad. She'll get over it." said I.
"I sure hope so." murmmured my son.
Without waiting for another reply, my son went into his burrow.
I sighed and went into my burrow.
Oh Spirit Tribe, I sure hope things get better soon!

[Grayshadow]

Great chapter!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Chapter 21

I was in Spirit Tribe land agian. I was flooded with joy. I desperatley needed help from those bears!
I smelt two familiar scents. I followed them. They were coming from the same direction.
The scents lead me across a babbling brook, to a field with mountains beyond the horizon.
Then, I saw my father talking to my son! Those were the scents I've smelt!
"Red Wood, I need your help more than ever! I can't be Rain Tribe's chief! I can never take your place!" cried my son.
"Talon Of Mighty Eagle, you ARE a chief! You are just to grief stricken to realize it yet." said my father in a wise voice.
"I miss you so much! You were such a good mentor, chief, father, brother, husband, AND grandfather! How can I ever be like YOU???" cried my son.
My father placed his left front paw onto my son's right sholder.
"I was many things. But, you can be many things too. I can see into another bear's future now. And, I saw into your future. From what I've seen, you are going to be a really great chief with numerous responsiblities coming up." said my father.
"Numerous responsibilities? What do you mean?" asked my son.
"You'll find out soon enough, but trust me, you will be many things too. Remember, you ARE a chief." said my father.
"Grandfather, please tell me what you mean! What responsibilities will I have? What are the 'many things' I will become?" demanded my son.
"I can't tell you, but being a true chief will be one of your responsibilities and one of the things you will become." said my father.
"I understand." said my son as he dipped his head.
'Thank you, father! thank you!' thought I as I looked at my father.
Just as I was about to walk over towards my father, blackness engulfed me.
Everything became black.

[Grayshadow]

YEA! nice chapter!

[Beautiful Beautypelt]

Chapter 22

I woke up. It was still dark outside.
'I need to be alone!' thought I to myself.
I snuck quietly out of my burrow. I walked out of Rain Tribe camp. I noticed a lot of creatures up and about.
"Hey, shouldn't ya be sleepin'?" asked a voice.
I looked up, and saw a female opossum.
"I had to go for a walk! I need to be alone!" whispered I.
"Don't blame ya. I'm a loner myself. The name's Relly-Kae. What's yours?" asked the opossum.
"Nova Lee." whispered I.
"Purddy name." said Relly-Kae.
"Thanks." whispered I.
"Well, I'll leave ya 'lone. Buh-bye fer now." said Relly-Kae.
I waved a good-bye to her and continued my walk.
I walked deeper and deeper into the forest.
Just then, I picked up a couple of scents.
Enemy scents!
It was Rat Fang!
The other scent belonged to Rat Fang's niece, Bright As The Sun.
Oh no! Rat Fang must be planning to kill Bright As The Sun!
"Okay half pint, you know the plan! I've found five Big Teeth. I had been keeping them hidden. Now, you must place these traps into Rain Tribe territory! Those humans will hear those mangy black bears roar and those humans will slay them!" whispered Rat Fang.
"I can't do this! Why should I, an innocent cub, follow orders from a rotten liar like you?" snarled Bright As The Sun/
"Because, you're my niece, and I'm going to be chief soon! Listen closely, you roach infested piece of bat guano, if you don't do as I told you to, I'll rip a hole in your throat, and I'll blame your death on those filthy black bears!" snarled Rat Fang.
I smelt the little cub's fear scent.
"Y-yes, auntie." whimpered Bright As The Night.
Rat Fang handed a Big Teeth to Bright As The Sun.
"E-excuse m-me, but I notice that you had one more Big Teeth hidden near that tree. What are you going to do with that one?" asked Bright As The Sun.
"I'm saving that trap for a certain bear. That bear is going to be horrified when she/he figures out that I lured her/him to the trap and making her/him roar, and sending a bear killing human after her/him!" said Rat Rang.
"Who's...going to be that bear?" asked Bright As The Sun.
"For me to know, and for you to find out!" growled Rat Fang in a dark voice.
Bright As The Sun stared at Rat Fang in horror.
"Well, go on! We have to plant these traps before dawn!" snarled Rat Fang.
I was flooded in fear and rage.