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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 25, 2007 9:13:37 GMT -5
Wow! Good chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 25, 2007 19:11:08 GMT -5
Chapter 48
We all finished our dinner. We were heading back to Wyoming. Snow Tribe followed us just as we wanted them to. We walked in the same direction we came from. We don't need the animal or Spirit Tribe to guide us anymore. We remembered the trail. We walked past Twilight's home. Then, we saw one of the polar bears ran towards us. It was Snow Flake. "If y'all don't mind, I like to walk with y'all." said Snow Flake. "Sure, you can walk with us." said I. "We don't mind at all." said Amber Mist. "We be happy if you walked with us." said Black Storm. "It'll be a pleasure to have you near us." said Acorn Tree. "What they said." said Ash Fall. "Thanks y'all!" squeaked Snow Flake. "You polar bears are HUGE!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "When my grandmother said you polar bears are the biggest bears ever, she meant it!" said I. "We polar bears have to be big if we are to hunt seals. Sometimes, seals hide under ice. We have to use our strength to break through the ice." said Snow Flake. "You're kidding!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "I'm serious. Want me to demonstrate?" asked Snow Flake. "Yes! Yes please! Yes!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "There's a frozen pond over there. Follow me." said Snow Flake. We followed Snow Flake to the frozen pond. Snow Flake walked on top of the ice. Snow Flake reared up and her front paws slammed onto the ice, pushing as hard as she can. She reared up and did it agian. She reared once more and did it agian. This time, her front paws broke the ice and busted a hole. The hole revealed water. "Wow! That's amazing!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Awesome!" chorused Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Black Storm, and I. "Not to be pushy, but can we please keep going? It's a long way to Wyoming and we want to get there as soon as possible." said Snow Storm. "All right, we coming." said I. We went back to them and continued our trek. Several moons has passed. We were now so close to my home! My heart cried in joy! "It took us lots of moons to get back here, but it was worth it!" exclaimed Black Storm. "It's so good to be back here!" sighed Acorn Tree in a happy voice. "I can't wait to be reunited with my tribe!" squealed Ash Fall. "I'm going back home where everything is normal!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "If we keep going, we'll all be home before nightfall." said I. "Phew! It sure is hot! I'm sweating my fur off!" exclaimed Snow Storm. "It is hot! How can you black bears and grizzly bears stand this heat?" exclaimed Snow Cloud. "How do you polar bears stand your freezing home?" exclaimed Ash Fall. "Every specie of bear is diffrent. We perfer warm enviornments, polar bears perfer cold enviornments." said Snow Flake. "Thank you Snow Flake. I couldn't said it better myself." said I. "Excuse me, but if we're this close to your home, can we please keep going?" asked Snow Angel. "Were walking." said I. I continued to lead the others to my home. As we walked, a raven flew down in front of us. She shook her feathers as she landed. There was someting familiar about that ebony bird. Then, I remembered who she was. Night Wing! "Greetings young travelers. I see that you found Snow Tribe. Y'all brought them with you no?" croaked Night Wing. "Great to see you agian Night Wing! Yes, these polar bears are Snow Tribe. We're bringing them to our forest home." said I. "Hi Night Wing!" said Snow Flake in a gleeful voice. "I thought we never see you agian Night Wing!" exclaimed Snow Storm. "It's a thrill to see you agian Night Wing!" called Snow Angel. "Hya Night Wing!" shouted the other polar bears. "I'm happy to see y'all as well." rasped Night Wing. I remembered, Night Wing said that she met Snow Tribe once. "Doing good Night Wing?" asked Snow Fake. "I'm doing great for my elderly age. How about you?" cawed Night Wing. "We're doing great!" said Snow Flake. "Good. Well, I just want to said my greetings to y'all bears. I must be going. Bye y'all!" crowed Night Wing. "Bye Night Wing!" chorused all of us bears. We watched Night Wing fly away. "It's so good to see her agian!" exclaimed Snow Flake. "Same here." said I. I lead the other on. After a few miles later, we're finally at my home. "Home sweet home!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "It's so good to be home!" exclaimed I. "Nova Lee? Is that you?" asked a voice. We all headed to the sound. Then, I realized that the voice belonged to my father! Red Wood! After a few seconds, my father appeared. "Nova Lee! Acorn Tree! I'm so happy to see you two agian! Come over here and give me a hug!" exclaimed my father. Acorn Tree and I ran towards him. Our father wrapped his arms around us. He hugged us tight. Very tight. It was hard for me to breath, but I didn't care. I just breathed in his strong and wise scent. After a few moments, he released us. "I thought I never see you girls agian! I thought cougars or Blood Tribe has gotten a hold of you two! Speaking of which, I smell a Blood Tribe grizzly right now! What's that grizzly doing near you two?" exclaimed my father. "This is Amber Mist, she's our friend. Look father, we brought Ash Fall along as well. We met Black Storm as well and he's with us too! And look, we found Snow Tribe!" exclaimed I. "Bringing your tribe mate along on a dangerous journey, meeting a strange bear, bringing in another tribe to our land, and worst of all, you had our enemy with you!" growled my father. "Ash Fall wanted to come, Black Storm is a very sweet bear and he's now my mate, we brought Snow Tribe to help us defeat Blood Tribe, and Amber Mist isn't like her Blood Tribe mates! Please father, don't be angry!" pleaded I. "Ash Fall, she's not a cub anymore and she's trusted. Black Storm, alright, he looks suitable enough to be your mate. Snow Tribe, not a bad idea to use them to help us slay Blood Tribe. AMBER MIST, I won't tolerate! Amber Mist lives with our enemies! She shouldn't be here with y'all!" growled my father. "I'm not like my family sir. I'm Snow Tribe's and your daughters' and Black Storm's friend!" said Amber Mist. "I don't believe that load of racconcrap for a second!" snarled my father. "It's true Red Wood. Amber Mist is a good grizzly bear! She's our friend!" said Ash Fall. "I also noticed that you no longer have a tail! Does your FRIEND have anything to do with it?" growled my father. "Well, Amber Mist did ripped my tail off, but that's because I was talking cruel about her family. I deserved it." said Ash Fall. "No bear deserves to have his or her body parts ripped off! That does it, that grizzly bear should leave at once!" snarled my father. "I apologized sir!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Don't give me that! You grizzlies are nothing but cold-blooded killers!" snarled my father. "Excuse me?!" gasped Amber Mist in a shocked voice. "You heard me you human-hearted beast!" snarled my father. We all gasped in a very shocked tone. Human-hearted is the biggest insult you can ever think of. If you're human-hearted, you're extremely cruel and bloodthirsty. "Take that back!" snarled Amber Mist. "Never you human-heart!" snarled my father. "Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Black Storm, Nova Lee, I must go. It's clearly that I'm unwanted by a certain bear. I shall miss y'all except for that mean bear! Bye!" sobbed Amber Mist. "Amber Mist wait!" called I. Amber Mist cried and ran back to her tribe mates. "How could you say that father?" exclaimed Acorn Tree. "It's for the best! That grizzly doesn't need to be with you!" exclaimed my father. "You don't know her!" exclaimed Black Storm. "She's a grizzly bear, and she's from Blood Tribe! What else is there to know?" growled my father. "Why is our daughter crying?" snarled a voice. We all turned around, and saw Gore Fang with his tribe standing behind him. Him and his tribe mates all stared at us with aggresive eyes.
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 26, 2007 9:12:04 GMT -5
wow, awesome chapter! I updated Featherheart's story and Leaf,Crow, Feather. Review please!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 26, 2007 20:39:18 GMT -5
Chapter 49
"She's crying because those wretched black bears kidnapped her!" exclaimed Raven Wing. "We didn't kidnapped that mangy furball you human-hearted savages!" snarled my father. "We're human-hearted?! Look who's talking!" snapped Gore Fang. "Hey y'all, look! Those black bears have brought a bunch of polar bears in our forest!" yelped Hawk Feather. "Why are you frost-bitten snow bears here?" demanded Gore Fang. "We're here to help." said Snow Storm. "Help? Are you helping those black bears are are y'all here to help us grizzly bears?" asked Rat Fang. "We're here to help both of you tribes." replied Snow Ball. "Help them and us?! Who side are y'all on?" exclaimed Yellow Moon. "We're on nobody's side. We're here to put an end to y'all's war without clawing y'all." said Snow Cloud. "What?! You got to be kidding! We came all this way to bring y'all down here so y'all can help us get rid of those filthy grizzlies, and now you're telling me that y'all won't fight?!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "We're going to help Ash Fall, but we're going to do it without violence." replied Snow Flake. "Traitor! You polar bears are traitors!" snarled Ash Fall. "We're not betraying you dear, we said we were going to help you, and we will." said Snow Angel. "How are y'all going to help us if y'all won't fight?!?" exclaimed Ash Fall. "We're going to TALK to Blood Tribe. We're going to sort things out." replied Snow Fall. "THERE'S NOTHING TO TALK ABOUT!!! BLOOD TRIBE, ATTACK!!!" roared Gore Fang. Just then, my tribe appeared, and they charged towards Blood Tribe. Blood Tribe all let out a startled scream. My tribe pounced on Blood Tribe. Some of my tribe charged at Snow Tribe. "STOP!!!" bellowed Snow Tribe and I. In a split second, my tribe and Blood Tribe released each other. "Nova Lee? Where have been? Who are these polar bears? How...why...but...oh my poor heart!" exclaimed Umber Fur. I told the tribes what happened, how we befriended Amber Mist and Black Storm, what we've been through, why we brought Snow Tribe into the forest, and everything else that happened on my journey. "Nova Lee honey, it's a great idea to seek help, it's sweet that you let a tribeless young bear come with you, but befriending a Blood Tribe bear, that's a little extreme." said my mother, Maple Leaf. "Loon feathers! You black bears never befriended my daughter! Y'all STOLE her!" snarled Gore Fang. "They didn't steal me daddy! I DID befriend them!" replied a voice. We all turned around, and saw our dear friend, Amber Mist. "They didn't steal you? Then, why were you crying?" demanded Cougar Claw. "I cried because Red Wood didn't like me for what y'all did to his tribe!" snapped Amber Mist. "Why do you want HIM to like you? He's our enemy!" exclaimed Sharp Fang. "Do uncle, WE'RE their enemy. They lived in this forest a lot longer than we have. Ever since we came, we have been trying to kick them out instead of letting them share their forest with us! Why can't we live in their forest without driving them away?" said Amber Mist. "We're BIGGER than those black bears Amber Mist. We need room. Having those black bears in this forest with us, there just isn't enough room." said Raven Wing. "There's plenty of room mother!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Amber Mist, I'm going to have to punish you for befriending our enemies!" growled Gore Fang. "Who says Rain Tribe is our enemies?" demanded Amber Mist. "SILENCE!!!" bellowed my grandmother, Holy Rain. We all stared at her. "Moons ago, Spirit Tribe has visited me. They said that we, yes us Rain Tribe bears and you Blood Tribe bears are supposed to live in harmony in this forest. We are to share this forest. They wanted us to get Snow Tribe down here so they can solve this war once and for all." said Holy Rain. "Live in harmony? What kind of trick is this?" growled Gore Fang. "This is no trick. I to had a prophecy from Spirit Tribe. They said that five young bears came from a long way to seek our help. Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Amber Mist, Black Storm, and Nova Lee are the five bears that seek our help. So, we followed them down here, and we're going to settle this feud." said Snow Angel. "How are you going to do that?" demanded my father. "We're going to settle this without violence." replied Snow Angel. My father and Gore Fang stared at her. "I to had a prophecy from Spirit Tribe!" exclaimed Whispering Shadow. We all stared at her. "They said that this feud is going to end on this very day." said Whispering Shadow. "Who's going to settle this feud?" demanded Oak Tree. "Listen! Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, and Nova Lee befriended Amber Mist. They didn't care what tribe she was from. They just saw what was in her heart. They trusted her well enough to let her go on the journey with them. Later, they befriended Black Storm. Another bear from nother tribe. They befriended him and accepted him. Later, they befriended us Snow Tribe bears. Snow Tribe are polar bears, and yet, they saw what was inside of their hearts. Now, if they can befriend bears from another tribe, why can't we all be friends?" replied Snow Flake. "Can't you see that this war is pointless?" said I. "Now that I think about it, Snow Flake is right. If our daughters can be friends with each other, why can't we be friends?" said Maple Leaf. "But-" said Gore Fang. "She's right. Our feud is senceless. Our forest is big enough for two tribes. We can coexsist peacefully. Our daughters absences have taught me something. They went on a dangerous journey because of our stupid war. Now, is our daughter can be friends, then we should be friends." said Red Wood. "I guess you're right. If our daughters can be friends and befriends with Snow Tribe, then we should be friends to. I'll call of the war." growled Gore Fang. We black bears and Snow Tribe cheered. Some of Blood Tribe cheered, but some were stunned. Snow Flake, Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Amber Mist, Black Storm, and I fell into each others arms. The war is over! We can live in peace! "Well, our job here is done. Come Snow Flake, we're going back to Alaska." said Snow Storm. "Bye Snow Tribe! We'll miss y'all! Come visit us agian soon!" we all hollered at Snow Tribe. "We will! Bye!" replied Snow Tribe as they left our forest. The war is over. Peace at last. A moon has passed. My heart was flooded with joy as Black Storm became the newest member of my tribe. My body was acting funny. So, I went to Holy Rain's den. "Grandmother?" called I. "What is it sweetie?" asked Holy Rain. "It's my body! It's been doing some weird things lately." replied I. "Roll over onto your back." demanded Holy Rain. I obeyed. My grandmother let out a joyful laugh. "What is it?" asked I. "My precious dear, you're pregnant!" exclaimed Holy Rain with a big smile on her face. "You mean...I'm going to have cubs soon?" asked I. "Of course! You're going to be a mother! Let me guess, Black Storm is the father." said Holy Rain. "How did you know?" asked I. "Deary, I'm not blind. I see how much in love you are with Black Storm and how much in love he is with you. Who else made you pregnant?" laughed Holy Rain. "Black Storm and I are going to be parents! Black Storm and I are going to be parent! Yay! I can't wait to tell him!" squealed I. "You go right ahead dear!" chuckled Holy Rain. I ran toward's Black Storm's burrow. "Black Storm! Black Storm!" called I. "What is it?" asked Black Storm as he came out of the hole. "You're going to be a father! I'm pregnant!" exclaimed I with a big smile on my face. "You're going to have my cubs? Oh Nova Lee, I'm, so happy I could just burst!" replied Black Storm with a big smile on his face. "Me too!" replied I. Black Storm and I hugged. The war is over, were now friends with Snow Tribe and Blood Tribe, and Black Storm now lives in my tribe and he's now the father of my cubs! Oh Spirit Tribe, I'm the happiest and proudest bear in the world!
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Post by Sunsetfur on Jan 26, 2007 22:28:14 GMT -5
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! SO cute! Plus the feud's finally over. I can't wait to see Nove Lee and Black Storm's cubs. Sorry I havn't reviewed in a while; schoolwork's catching up on me and I have to study for a million quizzes plus a History midterm. bleh
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 27, 2007 9:50:48 GMT -5
Chapter 50
Moons has past. I felt a strong kick in my belly. The cubs were coming! I ran towards Holy Rain's hole. "Holy Rain! Holy Rain! The cubs are coming!" exclaimed I. "Oh my goodness! I coming sweetie!" said Holy Rain as she ran out of her hole. "What's going on? What's wrong with Nova Lee?" demanded Black Storm. "Your cubs are coming!" exclaimed I. "Our cubs are coming? Don't worry Nova Lee! I'll be right by your side!" replied Black Storm. "Nova Lee's cubs are coming?" Why didn't y'all tell me?" asked my father as he and the rest of my family circled around me. "Lie down on your back. I've got poppy seeds in my paw." said Holy Rain. I lied down on my back. Holy Rain gave me the poppy seeds. "Hold still." demanded Holy Rain. Holy Rain pushed down on my belly. I strained. "Breathe deep." demanded Holy Rain. Holy Rain pushed down on my belly agian. She did it agian and agian. I breathed deeply as she instructed. Soon, a small head popped out of me. Holy Rain kept pushing. Soon, the head and its torso came out. Holy Rain pulled the cub right out of me. "Maple Leaf, give this cub a good licking." demanded Holy Rain. My mother obeyed. Holy Rain pushed down on my belly once agian and agian. Soon, another head popped out of me. Holy Rain kept pushing. Soon, its torso came out. Holy Rain pulled the small cub out of me. "Red Wood, you lick this one." demanded Holy Rain. My father obeyed. Holy Rain pushed on my stomach agian. She pushed and pushed. Soon a tiny head popped out. Holy Rain pushed and pushed. Soon, its torso popped out. Holy Rain pulled it out. "Black Storm, lick this cub." demanded Holy Rain. My love obeyed. "Well, that's it. Your belly is officially cub free." said Holy Rain. "What are my cubs' genders?" asked I. "The oldest on is a she-bear, the middle cub is a he-bear, and the youngest cub is a she-bear." replied Holy Rain. "Two girls and one boy! Wow!" gasped Black Storm. "Black Storm, why don't you name one of our cubs?" asked I. "Are you sure?" asked Black Storm. "Possitive." replied I. "Thanks! Um, our oldest cub shall be known as Night Owl." said Black Storm. "Night Owl, how pretty!" whispered I. "Thanks! You can name the rest." said Black Storm. "You mean it? Our you sure?" asked I. "Possitive." replied Black Storm. "Thank you so much! Uh, our youngest shall be known as Wind That Carries Leaves." said I. "Beautiful!" whispered Black Storm. "Thanks!" whispered I. "What are you going to name our son?" asked Black Storm. "How about, Talon Of Mighty Eagle?" asked I. "Perfect!" replied Black Storm. "Thanks! purred I. "Talon Of Mighty Eagle, shall be this tribe's future chief." said my father. "My son is going to be a chief?" asked Black Storm with a big smile on his face. My father nodded. "Did you hear that Nova Lee? Our son is going to be our chief someday!" exclaimed Black Storm. "I heard! I'm so happy!" squealed I. "We heard that Nova Lee gave birth to Black Storm's cubs, can we see them?" asked a voice. We all turned around, and saw Amber Mist and her tribe. "Of course y'all can!" replied Holy Rain. Blood Tribe came towards my cubs. "They're adorable!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Thanks!" purred I. "My mother gave birth as well. Want to see them?" asked Amber Mist. "Sure!" said I. "We have two cubs. A girl and a boy. The girl's name is Beauty Of The Night. The boy's name is Skunk Tail, and he's ging to be my tribe's chief someday." said Gore Fang. My Tribe and I looked at those fuzzy grizzly bear cubs. Raven Wing carried Beauty Of The Night, and Hawk Feather carried Skunk Tail. "They're so cute!" exclaimed I. "Thanks." said Amber Mist. "What are your cubs' names?" asked Gore Fang. "My oldest one is a female, and her name is Night Owl. My middle cub is a male and Rain Tribe's future chief, and his name is Talon Of Mighty Eagle. My youngest is a female, and her name is Wind That Carries Leaves." replied I. "Those are wonderful names!" replied Amber Mist. "Well, we better go back to our half of the forest. My wife has to nurse my children. Bye, we'll see y'all agian." said Gore Fang. "Bye! Come agian!" hollered us Rain Tribe bears. We watched Blood Tribe go. "Well Nova Lee, I'm very proud of you. You couldn't have gave birth to more wonderful cubs." said Ash Fall. "Thanks!" said I. "I'm an auntie! I'm and auntie!" squealed Acorn Tree in delight. "I proud to be these cubs' father, and I'm proud to be your husband." said Black Storm with a big smile on his face. I licked his nose. "I'm proud to be these cubs' mother, and I'm proud to be your wife." replied I. Black Storm and I hugged. This is the best day of my life. Blood Tribe and my tribe our friends, Black Storm and I are married, and I'm now a mother to three precious cubs. The glorious sun shone down on us. Spirit Tribe has truely blessed me.
Well, that's the end. Don't y'all worry, I'm going to write a sequle, it's called Talon Of Mighty Eagle. It'll still have Nova Lee's point of view in it. Well, did y'all enjoy this story?
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 27, 2007 16:59:57 GMT -5
YEAHHHHH! Great story!
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Post by Tear on Feb 3, 2007 15:39:26 GMT -5
nice story
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