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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 28, 2006 11:25:18 GMT -5
Chapter 25
We all stared at the hostile fox. "What are y'all lookin' at?" asked the fox as he glared at us. "We just want to know what your name is." said I. "What's it to ya?" asked the fox in a harsh voice. "It might help us out alot!" said Black Storm. "How would knowing my name help ya?" asked the fox in the same harsh voice. "We're looking for a creature named Sly. The creature is supposed to help tell us the way to Nome, Alaska." said I. "Well, my name is Sly, but why should I tell y'all the way to Nome, Alaska?" growled the fox. "Yes! We found Sly!" said Amber Mist in glee. "But, he's not telling us the way to Alaska!" exlaimed Acorn Tree with wide shocked eyes. "I'm not going to help a bunch of honey licking bears like y'all! I'm leavin'!" barked Sly as he walked passed us. Ash Fall ran towards Sly and pounced on him. "Look you pint sized coyotie, we traveled a very long way! One of us dreamed about a deceased fellow tribe bear, and the bear said that you were supposed to tell us the way to Nome, Alaska. Now, start talking or I'll eat your skin off!" snarled Ash Fall as she pinned Sly down to the ground. "Alright! Alright! I'll talk! I'll talk!" screamed Sly in a frightened voice. "We're waiting!" growled Ash Fall. "First, y'all go through this forest. Then, y'all go north. Keep going North until you see a hill. Beyond that hill, y'all head towards the river. That's all I know. I promise!" said Sly. "Thank you Sly. That'll help us." said I. "Yes, thanks." said Black Storm. "Thanks Sly!" said Amber Mist. "You've been a big help Sly." said Acorn Tree. "I suppose I owe you a thanks." said Ash Fall as she still had her claws on Sly. "Now, can ya please get off of me?" asked Sly. "Release him Ash Fall." said I. Ash Fall got off of Sly. Sly got up and shook himself. "Thank you Sly! Bye!" Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Amber Mist, Black Storm, and I chorused. "Don't forget what I've told y'all!" said Sly as he ran away from us. "Okay, you heard that fox, the first thing we do is get out of this forest." said Ash Fall. "Fine by me!" exclaimed Acorn Tree. I lead the others through the forest. After walking over two hundred wolf lengths, we were now out of the forest. "We did it. We're out." said I.
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Post by Grayshadow on Dec 28, 2006 13:04:16 GMT -5
Yea! they're out! I hope you keep writing!
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 28, 2006 13:59:21 GMT -5
Chapter 26
After getting out of the shadowy forest, we headed up north. Now that we were out of the forest, Acorn Tree's fear scent faded. We were now crossing a grassy plain. I was in the lead as usual. We walked in single file. Black Storm was behind me, then followed Amber Mist, then followed Acorn Tree, and then followed Ash Fall. Then, I spotted a pond. "Ash Fall, there's a pond! You can go wash your foot!" said I. "Thank you Spirit Tribe!" sighed Ash Fall in relief. Ash Fall ran towards the pond. She leapt into it. The rest of us stared at the pond. After a few moments, Ash Fall poked her head up out of the water. She swam towards the shore. After she got out, she shook her fur dry. "Got the deer dung off of your foot?" asked Amber Mist. "You bet I did! Take a good wiff of my now clean foot!" said Ash Fall. "Ewwww! We're not going to sniff your smelly feet!" said Black Storm. "I'll have you know that I now got the cleanest feet around!" said Ash Fall. "Until you step in some more dung." said Black Storm. "Like you never stepped on dung before!" growled Ash Fall. "I never stepped in dung!" boasted Black Storm. "Are you sure or do you just not want to-" said Ash Fall. "Can we PLEASE continue our trek while the sun is still up?" interuppted I. "Yes, can we please?" said Amber Mist. "Coming!" chorused Ash Fall and Black Storm. After putting an end to their agruement, we headed on. We continued to head north. After walking over five hundred rabbit lengths, I saw a very faint hill in the horizon. "Everyone! Look! I see the hill! Let's get out of this plain and run towards it!" shout I in a happy voice. With out waiting another word, I ran towards the hill. "Nova Lee! Wait!" chorused Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Amber Mist, and Black Storm. They ran after me. We ran and ran. The hill got closer and closer. We were really excited. we ran and ran. The hill got closer and closer. After running over two-hundered wolf lengths, we were now one-hundred coyotie lengths away from the hill. "We're so close! Let's keep running!" exclaimed I. We continued to run towards the hill. In only a matter of moments, we were finally at the hill. "Everyone, climb up the hill!" said I. I was first to climb up the hill. The others climbed after me. We climbed up higher and higher. Suddenly, Acorn Tree tripped and rolled back down the hill. "Acorn Tree! Are you okay?" asked I in a conscerned tone. "I'm fine!" grunted Acorn Tree in slight pain. Acorn Tree leapt onto the hill, and climbed as fast as she can. Seeing that she not in too much pain, we continued to climb. We still have to climb about twenty fox lengths. We climbed and climbed. "I'll be happy once we climb up this stupid hill!" grumbled Ash Fall. We climbed and climbed. Finally, we were on top of the hill. Now that we were all on top of the hill, we saw the river running about thirty rattle snake lengths away. "There's the river! Let head towards it!" said I. We ran down the hill. We ran and ran. Then, Acorn Tree tripped agian and went rolling down the hill. "Not good with hills are you Acorn Tree?" said Ash Fall. "Ash Fall! Enough!" growled I. We ran towards Acorn Tree. Then, we made it down the hill. "Acorn Tree? Are you okay? Please be okay!" said I in a worried voice. "My right forepaw is sore, but other than that I'm fine." said Acorn Tree. "The river's really close. We could run, but you may not be able to." said I. "Don't worry, I got three good paws. I can run on three legs." said Acorn Tree. "Are you sure?" asked Amber Mist. "I'm sure." said Acorn Tree. "Okay, we can all run towards the river. The sooner we get there, the sooner we can sleep. A good night sleep will do your paw some good." said I. We ran towards the river. To my surprise, Acorn Tree ran just as fast with three legs. Her sore paw didn't slow her down. We ran and ran. Then, we finally mad it to the river. "We did it! We did it! We're at the river!" said Amber Mist in a gleeful voice. "Now, let's get some sleep. The sun if setting." said I. The others nodded and lied down. I lied down as well. After a few moments, we were now asleep. I was now in Spirit Tribe. What bear will I see this time? Then, a brown she-bear in the shape of a black bear, walked towards me. That's unusal! A brown bear in the shape of a black bear! "Hi Nova Lee! At last we meet!" said the she-bear. "Hi. Uh, are you a brown bear or a black bear? You're brown, but you're in the shape of a black bear!" said I. "I'm a black bear just like you. Not all of us black bears are black. We can be brown, or grayish, creamish, or even white." said the she-bear. "Wow! I never knew that!" said I. "There's something else you should know. I'm Blood From Wounded Elk. I'm Ash Fall's mother." said the she-bear. I thought I felt the ground learch underneath my paws. "You're my daughter's best friend. I respect you." said Blood From Wounded Elk. "Do you really used to live in Thorn Tribe? Do you and your tribe really kept yourselves warm by covering yourselves in mosse guts? Rest your heads on dead foxes? Eat cougars and humans for snack? Drink coyotie blood? Is Guts Moose With Teeth the chief of your tribe?" asked I. "Yes to all of your questions. My tribe, my daughter, and I were a bunch of ruthless bears!" said Blood From Wounded Elk. "Gross!" gagged I. No wonder Black Storm threw up! "But, that's not why I'm here." said Blood From Wounded Elk. "Why are you here?" asked I. "You and your traveling mates must travel north. Then, you'll a valley. And in that valley, you'll meet Rock. No, he's not an actual rock. He's a living critter. That's all I have to say. Bye, and do as I say." said Blood From Wounded Elk. "Bye? I want to know what kind of creature Rock is!" exclaimed I. Blood From Wounded Elk walked back to the direction she came from. "Come back!" shouted I. I awoke. The others were fast asleep. I sighed. Okay, we met Night Wind, we met Sheena and Lion, we met Sly. Now, we have to meet Rock. This Rock lives or wonders in some valley. Oh Spirit Tribe, what next?
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Post by Grayshadow on Dec 28, 2006 14:14:08 GMT -5
Woah, long chapter! I like it continue! i'll work on mine right now!
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 28, 2006 18:54:58 GMT -5
Chapter 27
It was a sunny morning. We awoke. I told the others about my dream last night. "So, you finally met my mother!" snarled Ash Fall. "Yes! She's the first nonblack black bear I've ever met! Not to mention the only one." said I. "She's MY mother! Why should she visit you instead of me?! What make you so wolfgone special?!" roared Ash Fall. "Woah! Ash Fall! Calm down!" gasped I. "When I last saw my mother, she was lying on the ground with a big bloody hole on her shoulder! she said, 'Ash Fall, I'm going to live in Spirit Tribe. Don't worry, I'll see you agian. I love you. Take care.' and she died! She said that she'll see me agian, but instead, she visited YOU! You were never her cub! Why did she visited you instead of me?!?" screamed Ash Fall with tears streaming down her cheeks. "Ash Fall, I don't know. She just-" said I in a gentle voice. "Just, leave me alone!" interuppted Ash Fall in a bellowing voice. Ash Fall ran towards a tree and climbed up. "Ash Fall! Come back!" called Amber Mist. "Please come back Ash Fall! I never meant to hurt you!" called I. "Nova Lee never meant to get you crush your feelings! Come back!" called Acorn Tree. "I'll talk to her. Don't worry." said Black Storm. Black Storm walked towards the tree and climbed up. The rest of us waited at the bottom. "Ash Fall? Are you okay?" asked Black Storm in a kind voice. "Of course not you rabbit-brained bear!" growled Ash Fall with tears dripping down her cheeks. "Would you mind telling me what's wrong?" asked Black Storm keeping his kind voice. "Why do you care?" growled Ash Fall turning her head away from him. "I care because you're my friend. If you tell me, maybe I can help you." said Black Storm. "Nothing in the world can help my problems!" cried Ash Fall spewing more tears from her eyes. "Try me." said Black Storm. Ash Fall gave him a side glance. Then, she looked at him with both of her eyes. "When I was a newborn cub, the first scent I smelled was my mother. I would suckle from her, and she would lick me. When I first opened up my eyes, the first thing I saw was my mother. She gave me my name. She raised me. She taught me how to forage. She introdued me to my family. She was the first one to tell me what tribe I was born in. She said that giving birth to me was the best thing that happened to her. She told me that she never wanted me to be out of her sight. And, I never wanted her to be out of my sight. Her and I were insepratable. Then, we smelled a human. It was a sunny morning. I was still a cub back then. She told me, 'Little darling, stay right there. Get ready to eat some human flesh.' and her and the rest of my tribe ran after the humans. I waited for them. Then, the noon sun began to shine. I got scared. So, I followed my mother's scent. When I found her, she was lying on her side. There was a hole on her shoulder. A bullet hole. She was loosing alot of blood. It wasn't just her. My whole tribe had been shot. They were all dead, but my mother was still alive, but she was dying. She said, 'Ash Fall, I'm going to join Spirit Tribe with the others. Don't worry, I'll see you agian soon. I love you. Take care.' she said all that with a dying breath. I licked she muzzle and breathed in her scent one last time. Then, she died. I began to cry. I wanted to rip open every human throat I find. When I went looking for the humans that killed my family, I stumbled to Rain Tribe. Nova Lee was the first one to notice me. She ran towards her father. Him and the others questioned me. I told them that I was a lonely cub that has lost her tribe to a pack of cougar-hearted humans, and that I wanted to kill them. Nova Lee begged her father to let me join her tribe. Her father sniffed me, and descided that I can live in her and his tribe. I wanted to avenge my family's deaths, but I couldn't pick up their scent. Nova Lee introduced me to her family. That's the day I became a Rain Tribe bear. When my mother visited her instead of me, my heart broke. She rather visit her instead of me. She's probably mad that I didn't keep Thorn Tribe alive." said Ash Fall. "I feel your pain. My family got killed by humans too. When my father visited Nova Lee and not me, I didn't get mad. I respected his decison on which bear he wanted to visit. We both lost our familys Ash Fall. And, believe me, the pain hurts. Hurts real bad. But, Nova Lee said, 'Once you love someone, they stay in your heart forever.' and she also said that we'll eventually be reunited with our familys when our times come to join Spirit Tribe. Your mother WILL see you agian Ash Fall. I promise." said Black Storm. "Promise?" asked Ash Fall. "Promise." said Black Storm. "No wonder Nova Lee fell in love with you!" said Ash Fall. "She's quite a bear." said Black Storm. "She's my best friend in the whole universe!" said Ash Fall. "You're one lucky bear!" said Black Storm. "I know!" giggled Ash Fall. "Now, I think there's some good-tasting fish in that river. Want to climb down and do some fishing?" asked Black Storm. "I would love to!" said Ash Fall. We watched as Ash Fall and Black Storm climbed down. We made room for them. We headed towards the river. I gave Black Storm a lick on the cheek. "Thanks for cheering my best friend up." said I. "It was my pleasure." said Black Storm. We all sat in a horizontal row, and began fishing.
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Post by Grayshadow on Dec 28, 2006 22:40:57 GMT -5
*sniffs* that was sad! But i still enjoied reading it! Yea!
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 29, 2006 11:48:39 GMT -5
Chapter 28
After our breakfast, we headed north to find the valley. We were looking forward to see the valley. "I can't wait to see the valley!" said Amber Mist. "I bet it'll be beautiful!" said Acorn Tree. "I wonder what it'll be like!" said Black Storm. "I wonder what Rock is and what he's like." said Ash Fall. "We'll find all that out when we get there." said I. We walked and walked. The noon sun shone down on us. We past more plains. We past fields. We past ponds. We past rivers. We walked over hills and down the hills. We were wondering when we'll find this valley. "How much further is it to the valley?" asked Amber Mist. "I don't know." said I. "It better be soon, my paws are about to fall off!" growled Ash Fall. "Maybe it'll be soon, maybe it'll still be faraway." said I. Ash Fall let out an exasperated sigh. Four moons has passed. The valley was still not in sight. "For the love of Spirit Tribe how much further is it to the friggin' valley?!?" screamed Ash Fall. "I don't know." said I. "Holy crap! Are we EVER going to find it?!?" screamed Ash Fall. "We'll find it, don't worry." said Black Storm. "Just be patient." said Acorn Tree. "I'm kind of curious myself, when will we find the valley?" asked Amber Mist. "We'll find it soon enough." said I. "Spirit Tribe!" muttered Ash Fall. None of us said another word as we walked on. We passed more plains. We walked over hills and down hills. We passed ponds and crossed rivers. Then, I finally fond the valley. "Everyone! Look! It's the valley!" exclaimed I in a happy voice. The others let out a cheerful gasp. We did it. We were now at the valley.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Dec 30, 2006 14:42:28 GMT -5
Wow, so much has happened! Keep going! It's fantastic!
I was wondering...are Nova Lee and Black Storm going to have kids?
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 30, 2006 23:09:27 GMT -5
I'm not telling! Y'all just have to read the story and find out! They may and they may not. But, it's very likely that they will have cubs! Thanks for the comment Moony! Chapter 29 We did it. We were now in the valley. Now we got to find Rock. "Finally! I was begining to think that we will never get here!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "It took four moons, but we're now here." said Black Storm. "This valley is so beautiful!" said Acorn Tree. "Spirit Tribe would be proud of us." said I. "Uh, y'all? Are y'all sure we're in the right valley? This isn't the only valley on earth. Are you sure this is the place Spirit Tribe wants us?" asked Amber Mist. "We better! It took us four dang-blasted moons to get here!" laughed Ash Fall in an annoyed voice. "I'm sure we're in the right valley Amber Mist." said Black Storm. "My sister's heart never failed before. If this is where her heart lead her, then it's the right place." said Acorn Tree. "Okay, then we are in the right place." said Amber Mist. "Okay, we all agree that we're in the right place. Now, can we PLEASE find Rock?" asked I in an exasperated voice. "Lead the way." the others chorused. I lead the search for the mysterious Rock. We saw and heard a bunch of ignorant squirrels. We watched a very busy and irratable woodchuck digging a burrow. The crows were having a conversation about which animal carcass was the most delicious. The honeybees were making a batch of mouth-watering honey. The fish were swimming back and forth for an unexpecting insect to come flying over them. None of the critters were Rock. We saw three frogs having a hopping race. We smelt raccons sleeping in a far off tree. We heard a flock of geese flying over our heads. We felt bunch thirsty fleas hopping on our skin. We stopped to scratch them off. They just leapt away from our claws and hopped to our necks. The scratched the back of our necks, but the fleas agian dodged our claws. "Lets jump in the water. It'll get the fleas off of us." said I. We all headed to the water and jumped in. The fish fled from us. In only a matter of seconds, black flecks rosed to the top of the water. The fleas were now off of us. "That takes care of that. Let get out of this cold water and find Rock." said I. The others nodded and followed me out of the water. We shook our fur and continued our serch. We heard the fish poking their heads out of the water to feast on the fleas. We heard a he-spider proposing a she-spider on her web. We heard the crickets laughing. We saw a she-weasle looking for ungaurded eggs and chicks. We heard four hedgehogs arguing with eachother. We saw a fawn he-deer looking for his mother. We saw two she-badgers having a fight. We smelt a wounded she-rabbit in a rabbit hole. We smelt a she-skunk waddling in the tall grass. We smelt an ill he-porcupine in his den. None of them were Rock. "Are we EVER going to find this stupid Rock?!" screamed Ash Fall. "Ash Fall, take it easy." said I. "It took us four moons to get to this dumb valley, those loser animals aren't the Rock we've been looking for, and now we got to walk some more until this Rock is found!" growled Ash Fall. "We'll find him Ash Fall. Don't worry." said Black Storm. "WHEN?!?" asked Ash Fall in a snarling voice. "Soon enough." said Amber Mist. "Thanks Amber Mist." said Black Storm and I at the same time. "Uh guys, we should keep on serching while the sun is still up." said Acorn Tree. "No wonder humans ride in rolling boulders!" muttered Ash Fall. Just then, we heard a deep howl. "W-w-what was that?" stammered Amber Mist. "Sounds like a coyotie." said Ash Fall. "No. It's far too low-pitched to be a coyotie. Coyoties have high-pitched howls. That sounded like a wolf." said Black Storm. "A w-w-w-wolf?" stammered Amber Mist. A wolf?!?!?! Wolves hated us bears and want nothing to do with us, but is a wolf sees a bear, it'll attack, and wolves always travel in packs. So, if that was a wolf, we have a problem. "COME OU AND SHOW YOURSELF YOU STUPID WOLF!!!" bellowed Ash Fall. Then out of nowhere, an adult timber he-wolf pounced on Amber Mist. The wolf was ripping out mouth fulls of Amber Mist's fur. The wolf barred its fangs and was about to sink them into Amber Mist's throat. The rest of us raced to Amber Mist's rescue. Black Storm and I tackled the wolf off of Amber Mist. The wolf let our a surprised URR and got up and ran away from us. The wolf ran back towards Amber Mist and bit her left forepaw. Amber Mist screamed in pain and used her other forepaw to slash the wolf's forehead. Her claws scratch open wounds on the wolf's head. Acorn Tree barred her fangs and bit the wolf's nose. The wolf howled in agony and ran away from her. The wolf ran back towards Amber Mist and bit her tail. Amber Mist bellowed in pain. I headbutted the wolf off of Amber Mist. The wolf ran away from me. The wolf ran back towards Amber Mist. The wolf gave Amber Mist's ears sharp bites. Black Storm scored his claws across the wolf's flank. The wolf howled in agony and ran away from him. The wolf ran back towards Amber Mist. What does this wolf have agianst Amber Mist? Why did he kept attacking her? The wolf leapt onto Amber Mist's back. He barred his pwerful fangs at her. He opened his mouth towards Amber Mist's neck. He was about to give Amber Mist a fatal neck-bite.
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 31, 2006 8:53:34 GMT -5
Sorry for the double post, but what do y'all think of that chapter?
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 1, 2007 19:17:56 GMT -5
Uh oh. I think she killed his family or something. Well sorry for not commenting. I loved it and Happy 07!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 1, 2007 21:30:17 GMT -5
Amber Mist is a good bear Firelover. What are you talking about? Chapter 30 I pushed the timber wolf off of Amber Mist. Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Black Storm, and I surronded the wolf. "LEAVE OUR FRIEND ALONE!!!" snarled Acorn Tree. "Why are you attacking her?!?" asked I in a snarling voice. "Why I'm attacking her?! Why I'm attacking her?! Because she's a grizzly bear!!!" growled the wolf with barred teeth. "That's a little prejedice don't you think?" growled Black Storm. "Why do you hate grizzly bears?" asked Ash Fall. "Thirty-three moons ago, a swarm of grizzly bears attacked and killed my pack. I was only a pup back then. Those stinking grizzlies mauled my pack to death. Each and everyone of them! Including my mother and father! I managed to sneak away from them. I had to eat small rodents and lizards until I was big enough to catch bigger prey. I couldn't find a pack that would take me in. That's why I'm a lone wolf. Since then, I've always hated grizzly bears. If I see one, I'll do whatever it takes to kill it!" growled the wolf. "Well, the grizzly you've attacked just happens to be our friend. Her name is Amber Mist. And, we'll do whatever it takes to defend her!" growled Acorn Tree. "How can y'all be friends with a vicious grizzly bear?!? They're extremely dangerous!" exclaimed the wolf. "Look, I'm very sorry about what those grizzly bears did to your pack, but that gives you no right to attack their kind! That makes you no better than those grizzly bears that killed your pack. Believe it or not, their are good grizzly bears in this world. Amber Mist is one of the good grizzly bears. Now, if you're not going to listen to reason, we'll be happy to claw you." said I. "No, there's no need. You're right. I'm sorry. I shouldn't be going around and attacking the grizzlies that didn't kill my family." said the wolf. The wolf turned towards Amber Mist. "I'm sorry that I injured you." said the wolf. "I forgive you." said Amber Mist. "I'm Rock by the way." said the wolf. We all stared at the he-wolf with wide eyes. "At last! We finally found you!" said Ash Fall. Rock stared at us in confusion. "Allow me to introduce us. I'm Nova Lee. This is Acorn Tree and Ash Fall and Black Storm. You already know Amber Mist. We're on our way to Nome, Alaska. Ash Fall's mother visited me in my dream. She said that you're supposed to tell us which way we're supposed to go next." said I. "That's where my pack and I used to live. It's been so long, so I can only tell y'all what I remember. Okay, y'all get passed my valley and y'all go north. Then, y'all should see a cave. I'm sorry, but that's all I can do." said Rock. "Oh no, you've been good help. We all go past your valley, we all go north, and then we should see a cave. Spirit Tribe will guide us next. Thanks Rock." said I. "Uh, no problem. What's Spirit Tribe?" asked Rock. "It a heavenly place where all of us tribe bears go when we die." explained I. "How will they guide you then?" asked Rock. "They have the power to visit us in our dreams." said I. "Wow." said Rock. "Well, thanks agian. We'll be going now." said I. "Will Amber Mist be okay? I did some damage on her." said Rock. "I'm okay!" said Amber Mist in a positive voice as she got up. "That's good. We'll, I guess this is good-bye." said Rock. "We'll see you agian soon. Don't worry." said I. "Well, bye. Hopefully I'll see y'all agian soon. We all said our good-byes and we got through Rock's valley and we headed north. When we'll see this cave?
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 2, 2007 16:16:25 GMT -5
Sorry for the double-post, but what do y'all think about that chapter?
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 3, 2007 16:46:03 GMT -5
I'm sorry I'm thinking of the other bear, Ash Fall? Anyway, keep going!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 3, 2007 22:10:51 GMT -5
Chapter 31
We headed north. The afternoon sun shone down on our necks. We walked and walked. "Wow! We're going to a real cave! Our ancestors, the cave bears, lived in caves!" squeaked Amber Mist in delight. "Cave bears, they were twice the size of grizzly bears!" said Acorn Tree. "I know! Bears that were bigger than Amber Mist!" said Black Storm in astonisment. "It's a shame that they're none alive today. I really wanted to see one. If it weren't for them, bears and tribes never would've exsisted!" said Amber Mist. "Don't worry Amber Mist, they're in Spirit Tribe watching over us. When our time comes to join Spirit Tribe, you'll get to see one." said I. "I can't wait to see one. They were the biggest bears ever!" said Acorn Tree. "They lived a LONG time ago! Back when strange creature walked across their path!" said Black Storm. "I heard they looked like giant versions on my father!" said Amber Mist in awe. "They must of been really annoying bears then." muttered Ash Fall. "I told you not to say bad things about my father!" snarled Amber Mist. "I'll say whatever I want about the mangy flea-bag!" sneered Ash Fall. "I didn't insult your father!" yelled Amber Mist. "My father didn't go around attacking other tribes!" yelled Ash Fall. "My father does what he believes is right!" yelled Amber Mist. "Face it, your father is a nut-case!" boomed Ash Fall. "Take that back!" boomed Amber Mist as she tackled Ash Fall. I stared at Amber Mist in shock. She was normally a placid bear. I never would of dreamed to see her attack another bear! Especially her friend! Amber Mist slashed at Ash Fall's left cheek. Ash Fall pushed her off and managed to sink her bite her. Amber Mist knocked her off and slashed at her cheek agian. The rest of us jumped in front of them. "Stop this!" roared I. "You two are friends!" bellowed Black Storm. Ash Fall and Amber Mist just kept fighting and fighting.
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Post by Tear on Jan 4, 2007 17:59:06 GMT -5
NIce, I realy like the story and the chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 4, 2007 22:08:07 GMT -5
Chapter 32
Black Storm grabbed Amber Mist. I grabbed Ash Fall. We pried the fighting bears off each other. "That's enough! This is ridiculous! You two are friends! Friends don't claw-fight eachother! Now, we're all on a really important quest! So, I suggest you two appologize this instant." said I. "I'm sorry Amber Mist!" growled Ash Fall. "I'm sorry Ash Fall." growled Amber Mist. "Good. Now, let's go find that cave." said I. Ash Fall and Amber Mist glared at eachother, but said nothing and nodded. After putting a stop to the fight, we continued our trek. We walked over rocks and fallen trees. We crossed puddles and bracken. We passed hollies and brambles. We still saw no sign of the cave. "When will we see this dang-blasted cave?" asked Ash Fall in a complainy voice. "We'll find it. Don't worry." said I. "I've been walking for so long!" whined Ash Fall. "We all have, but we're going to find that cave!" snapped Black Storm. "Don't you DARE snap at me!" snarled Ash Fall. "Then stop acting like a cub!" growled Black Storm. "I'm NOT acting like a cub!" growled Ash Fall. "Oh, you act like a cub! Believe me!" snickered Black Storm. "I DO NOT!!!" roared Ash Fall. "Hey! Don't raise your voice at me!" growled Black Storm. "I'll raise my voice whenever I want!" snarled Ash Fall. "Ash Fall, that temper of yours is going to get you into a lot of trouble some day!" snarled Black Storm. "YOU, HAVEN'T SEEN MY TEMPER!!!" bellowed Ash Fall. "Did you talk to your family that way?" asked Black Storm as he glared at her. "NO!" snapped Ash Fall. "Hey! You didn't like it when I snapped at you! What make you think it's okay for you to snap at me?" growled Black Storm. "You snapped at me! Why shouldn't I snap at you?" growled Ash Fall. "I think you're just a big hipocrite!" growled Black Storm as he rolled his eyes. "I'm NOT a hipocrite!" growled Ash Fall. "You are!" snapped Black Storm. "I'm not!" snapped Ash Fall "You see? You just snapped at me agian!" growled Black Storm. "So did you!" snarled Ash Fall. "You know something? You don't DESERVE to be Nova Lee's best friend!" snarled Black Storm. "Take that back right now!" snarled Ash Fall. "I will not!" snarled Black Storm. "She knew me far longer than she knew you!" snarled Ash Fall. "Poor Nova Lee!" snarled Black Storm. "You know something? You don't deserve to be Nova Lee's mate!" snarled Ash Fall. "Take that back this instant!" snarled Black Storm. "Never!" snarled Ash Fall. "I said take it back!" snarled Black Storm. "Make me!" snarled Ash Fall. "It'll be my pleasure!" snarled Black Storm. "Bring it on Tree Boy!" snarled Ash Fall. "I will Thorn Brat!" snarled Black Storm. "Anytime you're ready Blackie!" snarled Ash Fall. Before Acorn Tree and I were ready to stop their fighting, Amber Mist gasped. "What is it Grizzly Bear?" asked Ash Fall in a snarly voice. "I found it." whispered Amber Mist. "Found what?" asked Acorn Tree. "The cave!" gasped Amber Mist. The rest of us looked at Amber Mist's direction. Sure enough, there stood the cave. "Nice work Blood Girl!" said Ash Fall in an impressed voice. "Way to go Amber Mist!" said Acorn Tree. "You found the cave!" said Black Storm. "It's a big cave too!" said Amber Mist. "Yes, it's big and you found it. I'm proud of you Amber Mist. Now, it's getting late. Let's go inside the cave and sleep." said I. "Works for me." said Amber Mist. "I am awfully tired." said Acorn Tree. "It is best we get some sleep." said Black Storm. "When we wake up, we'll figure out why Rock sent us to this cave in the first place." said Ash Fall. We all walked into the cave and curled up. Soon, sleep engulfed us. One question, what WILL happen next?
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