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Post by Grayshadow on Dec 18, 2006 9:27:04 GMT -5
Yea! I like it keep going!
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 24, 2006 10:07:14 GMT -5
Chapter 7
Beautypelt, Saberclaw, Mysticwind, and Starbeam finished their meal and continued on their journey. Beautypelt lead the others through a field of flowers. "These flowers are so beautiful! I bet their ragwort!" exclaimed Mysticwind. "They ARE ragwort!" meowed Saberclaw as she rolled her eyes. "They are lovely, but we have to watch out for bees." warned Beautypelt. "Ooh, I can't stand those stinging things!" shuddered Starbeam. The she-cats walked on. Soon, they were out of the flower field. The she-cats walked on and on. Soon, they were now entering a forest. "Careful, we don't know what lives in this forest." warned Beautypelt. "We will." meowed Mysticwind. The four she-cats walked on and on. Suddenly, the saw a dark figure looking at them. "W-What's that?" stammered Mysticwind. "I-I d-don't k-know." stammered Beautypelt. "W-we should s-stay away from it." stammered Starbeam. "Go away! Get! Go before I claw your heart out!" snarled Saberclaw. The figure ran towards the she-cats. To the she-cats' horror, the figure is a real fox.
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Post by Tear on Dec 24, 2006 17:11:56 GMT -5
Nice story.
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 25, 2006 17:50:23 GMT -5
I'm also writing Nova Lee. Review it please!
Chapter 8
The fox attacked. It leapt at Mysticwind. Starbeam pounced onto its back and began biting hard. The fox released Mysticwing and reared back in pain as Starbeam bit harder. Saberclaw ran up to the fox and gave its chest a deep slash. "Take that you mangy canine!" spat Saberclaw. The fox rolled on some rocks. Starbeam's grip loosened and fell off the fox. Saberclaw gave the fox a deep slash on the nose. The fox yelped in agony. Saberclaw slashed the fox on its right eye. The fox became half blind. The fox's right eye can no longer see images. The fox yelped in pain and rage. The fox charged at Saberclaw. Saberclaw hissed at the fox and ran away from it. Mysticwind and Starbeam ran after the fox. The fox heard them and whirled around to face them. Starbeam sank her teeth into the fox's left forepaw. Mysticwind clawed at the fox's right shoulder. Saberclaw ran at the fox and bit its tail. The fox leapt up real high and managing to pry the she-cats off. The fox landed six yards away from the she-cats. The fox, full of deadly rage, charged at the she-cats. Saberclaw, Mysticwind, and Starbeam screamed in fear and ran away from the furious fox. The cats ran and ran. Soon, they ran towards a line of tall boulders. "We're trapped!" shrilled Mysticwind. "This is the end!" shrilled Starbeam. "Before the stupid fox kills us, I just want to say that I'm glad that I met y'all." mewed Saberclaw. "Ditto." mewed Mysticwind and Starbeam at the same time. The fox ran closer and closer to them. The three she-cats shook in terror. Just when the fox was about to kill them, Beautypelt tackled the fox from its left side. "Beautypelt!!!" gasped Saberclaw, Mysticwind, and Starbeam. The fox fell from the impact. Beautypelt used both of her foreclaws to slash furociously at the fox's flank. The fox screamed in pain. Beautypelt's claws slashed deeper and deeper. The fox bit Beautypelt's tail tip. Beautypelt jumped up in the air. The fox swatted Beautypelt. Beautypelt fell on impact. The fox tried to bite her neck, but Beautypelt leapt just in time. Beautypelt jumped onto the fox's back. "STAY AWAY FROM MY FRIENDS!" snarled Beautypelt. Beautypelt sank her teeth into the fox's ear. The fox yelped in agony. The fox jerked it head. The fox sanks its teeth into Beautypelt and shook her. The fox released Beautypelt. Beautypelt landed HARD on the ground. The fox looked at the the she-cats and ran away, screaming in terror. "AND DON'T EVER COME BACK!" spat Saberclaw. "We're safe!" meowed Mysticwind in relief. "Oh no! Beautypelt!" exclaimed Starbeam in panic. The three looked at Beautypelt. Beautypelt layed motionless on the ground and bled heavily.
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Post by Grayshadow on Dec 26, 2006 19:32:14 GMT -5
oh no! Great job! i love it
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Post by Tigerfur on Jan 2, 2007 14:31:46 GMT -5
That was really great, type more!
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Post by Beautypelt on Jan 2, 2007 16:15:07 GMT -5
Chapter 9
Beautypelt didn't move a muscle and she bled heavily. "Beautypelt, please get up!" cried Mysticwind. "The fox is gone. You've chased it away. You can get up now Beautypelt." mewed Starbeam. "Beautypelt, I take back everything I've said about you! You're a great cat! You saved our lives! Come on Beautypelt, get up please!" yowled Saberclaw. Beautypelt laid deathly still. She didn't breath. She didn't move. "She's...she's dead." whispered Starbeam. "The mangy fox killed her." whispered Saberclaw. "No, MoonClan no. We...we...we're never going to see Beautypelt ever agian." whispered Mysticwind. Beautypelt didn't move. She didn't breath. She laid deathly still. She continued to bleed heavily.
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Post by Tear on Jan 2, 2007 19:44:46 GMT -5
Does Beautypelt die for good? She was my fav. character.
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Post by Grayshadow on Jan 3, 2007 16:49:19 GMT -5
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