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A HEART MADE FULLMETAL
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Oct 27, 2006 7:11:57 GMT -5
Woah! Awesome Chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Oct 29, 2006 17:54:02 GMT -5
Chapter 3
Tonight was the full-moon. All of HeartClan but Beautypelt were asleep. Beautypelt quietly got up and silently headed off to the old oak tree. Beautypelt saw two other cats beside it. "Hey, I think I know you, you are Beautypelt of HeartClan aren't you?" A slate-gray she-cat with a white throat and a white chest and a white belly with black specks meowed. "Yes I am. Who are you and where are you from?" Beautypelt meowed. "I'm Mysticwind. I'm from DreamClan." The she-cat meowed in a friendly tone. "Pleased to meet you Mysticwind." Beautypelt meowed. "I'm Starbeam. I live in ValleyClan." A hazel she-cat with tabby legs and a tabby tail meowed. "Happy to meet you Starbeam." Beautypelt meowed. "Well, that's a cat from HeartClan, a cat from DreamClan, and a cat from ValleyClan. All we're missing is a cat from NightClan." Mysticwind meowed. "I wonder who the cat is." Starbeam meowed. Beautypelt suddenly got a chilling feeling. "I smell DreamClan, ValleyClan, and...HEARTCLAN!!! Great, THREE cats from diffrent clans!!!" A jet-black she-cat with emerald green eyes hissed. "Saberclaw? You're the NightClan cat that's going to be traveling with us?" Starbeam asked the ebony she-cat. "UNFORTUNATLEY!!!" The she-cat spat. "So, Saberclaw is the NightClan cat that's coming with us." Starbeam meowed. "I knew it!" Beautypelt wailed quietly. "Oh!!! YOU!!!" Saberclaw spat in disgust as she saw Beautypelt. Beautyplelt's chilling permotion came true. Saberclaw was one of the chosen cats that is going to travel with her. What was Saberclaw going to do? Will she finish the fight she had with her from yesterday?
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Post by Firelover on Oct 30, 2006 13:08:51 GMT -5
Good continue!
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Post by Beautypelt on Oct 30, 2006 17:28:07 GMT -5
Thanks!
"Hi...Saberclaw." Beautypelt meowed. "Shut up! I don't want to hear a single word out of you until we get this journey over with!" Saberclaw snapped. "Hey! Don't be rude to Beautypelt! She has the right to speak when she wants to!" Starbeam hissed. "Yeah, please be nice! Please!" Mysticwind pleaded. "I'll take care of this Mysticwind." Starbeam meowed. "I can talk anyway I want!" Saberclaw spat. "We are NOT going to listen to that attitude on such a long and perilous journey!" Starbeam growled. "Shut your stupid mouth!" Saberclaw snarled. "Um, guys, we should really start our journey." Beautypelt meowed. "Who died and made YOU leader UGLYpelt?" Saberclaw snarled. "Nobody did. All I said was that we should really start on our journey instead of fighting." Beautypelt meowed. "Why did Bonemoon chose ME to go on some stupid journey with these losers?" Saberclaw muttered to herself. "Ignore her Beautypelt. Lets just go and do what MoonClan told us to do." Starbeam meowed. "I bet this journey is going to be fun!" Mysticwind purred in a friendly tone. "Well, let us get started." Beautypelt meowed. Beautypelt was the first to head off towards the horizon. Mysticwind was the second. Starbeam was the third. After a few moments, Saberclaw slowly followed the them. Soon, the four she-cats were off on the journey.
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 10, 2006 23:20:41 GMT -5
UpDaTe PlEaSe!!!
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 13, 2006 16:42:25 GMT -5
Beautypelt, Mysticwind, Saberclaw, and Starbeam walked out of Clan Territory. The four walked towards a long and wid river. Soon, they were there. "If you dimwits think I'm going to get my precious fur wet, you all go another thing coming!" Saberclaw spat. "We don't have to cross it, we can use the fallen log." Beautypelt meowed. "That log looks flimsy!" Saberclaw growled. "No it's not." Starbeam meowed as she leapt onto the log. Starbeam walked aross the river on the log. Soon, Starbeam was on the other side. "See? It's easy." Starbeam meowed. "Out of my way!" Saberclaw hissed as she ran past Beautypelt. Saberclaw ran across the river. Soon, Saberclaw was on the other side with Starbeam. Mysticwind was next to cross the river. Soon, Mysticwind was on the other side as well. "Come ON Uglypelt! Come on while we're still young!" Saberclaw spat. "Okay, here I come." Beautypelt meowed. Beautypelt got on to the log. Beautypelt began to cross the river. Suddenly, the skinny log snapped and Beautypelt crashed into the river. The river's powerful rapids carried the broken pieces of log and Beautypelt away. "BEAUTYPELT!!!" Mysticwind and Starbeam cried in terror.
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A HEART MADE FULLMETAL
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 13, 2006 21:52:26 GMT -5
BEAUTYPELT!!! lol great chap.
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 15, 2006 5:51:37 GMT -5
Chapter 4
"I knew that log was flimsy." Saberclaw sneered as she rolled her eyes. "Hang on Beautypelt! I'm coming!" Starbeam yowled. "I'll save you Beautypelt!" Mysticwind yowled. "I don't need your help Mysticwind, I'll save her." Starbeam meowed. "You are going to need help!" Mysticwing protested. "I don't need your help Mysticwind, I'll save her." Starbeam repeated. "I'm going to help you!" Mysticwind meowed. "I don't need help!" Starbeam meowed with a hint of growl in her voice. While the two she-cats argued, a hazle brown tabby tom with shining amber eyes, a black cowboy hat on his head and his back paws in black cowboy boots jumped into a river and swam towards Beautypelt. The tom was a powerful swimmer. He swam and swam. Then, he grasped Beautypelt's scruff and hauled her up towards land with her fellow she-cats. The tom climbed up with them. The tom and Beautypelt shook their fur. "Thank you so much! You probably saved my life!" Beautypelt meowed. "Indeed I have pretty kitty. There's a waterfall beyond the rapids. I come from the country, not from the city. If you fall, that certainly won't be a ball." The tom meowed. "Huh?" The four she-cats asked in confussed usion. "Allow me to introduce myself. I'm Hank. I travel all by myself. I saw you four at the riverbank." Hank meowed. "Does anyone understand what this cat is saying?" Saberclaw meowed. "Who may you four be? Do you all travel together? If you all don't tell me your names, you all will fill me with misery. I want to know even in the darkest weather." Hank meowed. "I'm Beautypelt. This is Mysticwind and Starbeam and Saberclaw." Beautypelt as she pointed each she-cat with her tail. "Beautypelt, doesn't that sweet scent I smelt. Mysticwind, that name is unique and doesn't blend. Starbeam, what a nice theme. And Saberclaw, you are beautiful from head to paw." Hank purred. The four she-cats looked each other with confused eyes. "Well, thanks for saving our friend Hank." Mysticwind meowed. "Well, their friend anyway." Saberclaw growled under her breath. "Anytime my sweet. When it comes to saving damsils in distress, I'm hard to beat." Hank meowed. Beautypelt suddenly looked at Hank with eyes full of admiration. "Well, I must go. I'm a drifter. I must go like the river flow. I travel alone, even without my sister." Hank meowed. Beautypelt's eyes were suddenly full of sorrow.
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 19, 2006 16:50:06 GMT -5
Wow Beautypelt this is fantastic! please write MORE!
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 23, 2006 7:56:34 GMT -5
"Bye Hank, and thanks agian!" Mysticwind mewed. "Bye Hank!" Starbeam meowed. "Good ridance!" Saberclaw muttered. "Hank, I'll never forget you!" Beautypelt yowled in mourning. "Bye ladies! I shall see y'all agian soon! I fly with the bees. Maybe I'll see y'all in the afternoon!" Hank purred. The four she-cats watched Hank walk away. "It's a very good thing that Hank came along when he did!" Mysticwind meowed. "A very good thing!" Starbeam meowed in agreement. "Great idea Uglypelt! 'Lets cross that log!' Did you realize that could have been ME swept away in the river? I have a good mind to slash open your cheeks!" Saberclaw snarled. Mysticwind glared at Saberclaw. "HEY! Leave Beautypelt alone! She didn't know that long would snap!" Mysticwind growled. Starbeam glared at Saberclaw as well. "YOU were the one that didn't want to get your fur wet!" Starbeam growled. Beautypelt was to miserable to listen to them. Beautypelt thought that she would never love a tom before until she met Hank. What if Beautypelt never sees Hank agian?
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Post by [[_ moon/beam on Nov 23, 2006 22:44:12 GMT -5
Great! Hank+Beautypelt is an adorable couple! XD
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Post by Beautypelt on Nov 26, 2006 6:28:14 GMT -5
"Are we going on this stupid quest or what?" Saberclaw snarled. "Fine, lets go." Starbeam sighed. Saberclaw walked along with Starbeam and Mysticwind. Beautypelt slowly brought up the rear. She was still thinking about Hank. The way he talks in rhymes, the way he wears his black bandana, his cowboy boots, his cowboy hat, his hazle brown tabby coat, and his shining amber eyes. Beautypelt let out a sad mew and continues to follow her friends as the crossed a bridge that has the river running underneath it. The four she-cats crossed many bridges that had rivers running underneath them. Soon, it was night-fall. The four she-cats saw an oak tree. "Let's sleep near that tree." Starbeam meowed. Beautypelt, Starbeam, and Mysticwind slept near each other while Saberclaw slept three fox-lengths away from them. Beautypelt awoke. She just couldn't get Hank out of her mind. Her love for him grew and grew. "Oh Hank, will I ever see you agian?" Beautypelt mewed quietly and sorrowfully.
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Post by Tigerfur on Nov 26, 2006 15:09:48 GMT -5
Awwww, Beautypelt sounds so sad.
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 3, 2006 21:18:35 GMT -5
Chapter 5
Beautypelt and her friends awoke. They got up and crossed rivers, stopped to hunt, stopped to groom, and began crossing rivers agian. "This quest better be worth it!" Saberclaw spat. "It will be." Mysticwind replied gently. "My fur is getting wet!" SAberclaw hissed. "Let's not start that agian!" Starbeam growled. Saberclaw glared at her, but became quiet. The four she-cats crossed rivers until the sun was setting. The four she-cats decided to get some sleep. Beautypelt, Mysticwind, and Starbeam slept together while Saberclaw slept five fox-lengths away from them. The moon shone down on them. Was the moon telling them that they're going the right way?
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Post by Grayshadow on Dec 4, 2006 9:20:53 GMT -5
Great job!
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Growing Kit
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Post by Tear on Dec 8, 2006 23:09:40 GMT -5
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Post by Beautypelt on Dec 16, 2006 16:30:15 GMT -5
Thanks guys!
Chapter 6
Beautypelt and her traveling mates woke up. The groomed themselves and continued their quest. "I see a pond!" Beautypelt meowed. "Great! More water!" Saberclaw growled. "I bet there are some tasty fish in that pond!" Mysticwind meowed as she licked her lips. "Why don't we have some breakfast first and then we'll continue our quest?" Starbeam asked. "It's only morning, I suppose we can fish." Beautypelt meowed. The four she-cats headed over to the pond and began fishing. Mysticwind caught three fish. Starbeam caught two fish. Saberclaw caught five fish. Beautypelt was the only one that haven't caught a fish. Saberclaw picked up a fish and walked towards Beautypelt. Saberclaw dropped the fish on Beautypelt's forepaws. "What's that for?" Beautypelt asked. "You can have one of mine fish. Since I caught the most fish and you haven't caught one, I figure that you can have one of my fish." Saberclaw growled. "Saberclaw, thanks!" Beautypelt purred. "Saberclaw? Is that you?" Starbeam asked. Saberclaw ignored them and went back to her fish. Beautypelt was astonished that Saberclaw was finally being nice. She was grateful for that and took a bite of her fish.
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