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Post by ¢~Sky{frosty}~¢ on Jan 6, 2008 11:41:48 GMT -5
I found a few typos in Dark River.
On page 263 the book reads
"'That could have just been a mistake.' Jaypaw felt Firestar's amber gaze warm his pelt."
Ok, since when does Firestar have amber eyes? He has always had green eyes! I mean look on Firestar's quest!
~~~~~~ On page 302 the text reads
"Five Warriors and three kits! He means us!" First of all, when did Jaypaw, Lionpaw, Hollypaw, Heatherpaw, and Breezepaw Become Warriors???
Second of all, i thought i was amusing that the editor didn't make the word us italic...
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On page 311, I know that this is most likely on purpose, but it says: "'Thats the horriblest thing i ever did!' She shook the water from her fur" Last time I checked Horriblest, is not a word...
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Post by Sunsetfur on Jan 6, 2008 21:14:07 GMT -5
"'That could have just been a mistake.' Jaypaw felt Firestar's amber gaze warm his pelt." Yep, I noticed that. Pathetic, really, they mess up their biggest hero's eye color. " Five Warriors and three kits! He means us!" Rofl, that's great. "'Thats the horriblest thing i ever did!' She shook the water from her fur" Yeah, that was on purpose, since it was a little terrified kit talking... Only other thing I picked up was Heavystep's reincarnation.
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Post by moonrain on Jan 7, 2008 15:04:33 GMT -5
Well... technically it is in Jaypaw;s point of view basically and he is blind (but yeah it's still sad. I wasn't looking for any mistakes and I haven't read the books in a while so I didn't notice)
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Post by ¢~Sky{frosty}~¢ on Jan 7, 2008 15:28:55 GMT -5
Sunny- wait what about Heavystep's reincarnation? Moonrain- ya neither was i, but i was like, "wait that doesn't sound correct... does it?"
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