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Post by Tear on Jul 25, 2007 12:59:20 GMT -5
Great Chapter, Beautypelt.
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Post by Tigerfur on Jul 25, 2007 22:08:01 GMT -5
I LOVE your story Beautypelt, and for the record bats are one of my favorite animals too! So I hope you update again soon! ;D Oh yeah, is Fuzz a she-bat or a he-bat?
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Jul 26, 2007 11:42:24 GMT -5
Thanks! Fuzz is a he-bat. Brownwings Vesper saw that the bats were tailless bats. A specie of bat without tails. The bats flew at the crows and bit them. The crows cawed in sheer pain. The bats and us kept on biting at the crows. Then, the crows saw how outnumbered they were and flew away. "Thanks, guys! You saved our lives!" Vesper squeaked at the tailless bats. "You're very welcome. You should've known how fool-hardy it was to fly during the daylight hours! There are many day predators out there that love bat flesh!" the lead tailless bat that was a female squeaked. "We have night predators that hunt us at night as well!" Vesper screeched. "What are you doing flying in the daylight?" the lead tailless squeaked. Vesper told her. "Well, that explains a lot." the lead tailless squeaked. "Who are you and what's your colony's name?" Vesper demanded. "I'm Sokar. And, I'm the leader of my colony. We are known as Brownwings." the lead tailless squeaked. Vesper and her friends introduced themselves and their colonies. Vesper also told Sokar about their mission. "The Bloodwings are terrorizing you, huh? Yeah, they killed and ate nine-hunred-seven on my bats." Sokar squeaked darkly. "Well, if we band together, we can stop them for good!" Vesper squeaked. "I don't know, they're awfully big and there's an awful lot of them." Sokar squeaked. "Well, if you and your colony join us, we'll find more bat colonies and we can make the Bloodwings leave us alone!" Vesper exclaimed. "Well, we're going to killed if we don't do anything. So, it would be worth it if we can stop them." Sokar squeaked. "So, you'll join us?" Vesper asked. "Yes, we'll join you guys." Sokar answered.
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Post by Tigerfur on Jul 26, 2007 12:55:46 GMT -5
FANTASTIC chapter! ;D I wonder what the Brownwings eat?
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Jul 27, 2007 11:05:41 GMT -5
The tailless bat eats bugs. Two More Shadey Bats The bats roosted in the cracks of a huge cliff by the ocean. Vesper was real glad that they had convinced the Brownwings to join them on the quest to put an end to the Bloodwings' deadly attacks on bats. But, there was one bat that Vesper didn't quite trust. It was a Brownwing she-bat named Spark. Spark opposed Vesper and her friends from the very day Vesper met her. And, Vesper was quite friendly towards Trout. When they were getting confortable in the cliff cracks, Spark lied right next to Trout. Vesper saw Spark glaring at her. She glared at her until she driffted off to sleep. Vesper knew that she had to watch out for Trout AND Spark. "Can't sleep?" Casaja whispered to Vesper. Vesper shook her head. "It's about Spark and Trout is it?" Casaja whispered. "How did you know?" Vesper whispered. "I'm not blind as the humans say I am! I saw the way Trout and Spark were treating you!" Casaja whispered. "I just don't know what to do! We need these colonies to help us fight the Bloodwings, but there are a couple that we can't trust!" Vesper whispered. "Have you told their leaders?" Casaja whispered. "Yes, but they refused to believe me! They refused to think that their bats are untrusted!" I whispered. "I know how you feel. Carsen, the Vampwing he-bat, had been bullying me." Casaja whispered. Vesper gasped. "Why would he bully you?" Vesper whispered. "Because, he's no good! That's why! Plus, he hangs out with Trout and Spark an awful lot! I tried telling Noct, but she said that I was exaggerating! She won't believe that her Carsen is a bully!" Casaja whispered. "Are the leaders blind as humans say they are???" Vesper whispered. "Hey, will you two shut up over there? Some of us are trying to sleep!" Spark screeched. "Yeah, go continue your chat near an owl's perch!" Trout screeched. "Or continue your chat near a crow's nest!" Carsen screeched. Then, all of the other bats woke up and began to complain. "Sorry everyone! We'll be quiet now!" Vesper squeaked. "For the sake of Nocturna you two better!" Trout snarled. Vesper glared at him. "Try to get some sleep." Casaja whispered into Vesper's left ear. Vesper returned her gave back to Casaja and nodded. It took a while, but Vesper finally managed to fall asleep.
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Post by Tear on Jul 27, 2007 19:51:32 GMT -5
Great Chapters
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Jul 28, 2007 19:28:17 GMT -5
Thanks!
A Bat In Need
Night has fallen in the sky. The bats began to awake. Vesper woke up with a squeaky yawn. She rubbed the sleep from her eyes with her thumbs. She smacked her lips. Casaja's eyelids were still heavy. "Didn't sleep well?" Vesper squeaked. "Didn't sleep at all!" Casaja muttered. "Why?" Vesper asked. "Guess!" Casaja spat. Vesper was shocked by her best friend's snappish anger. "Trout, Carsen, and Spark?" Vesper asked. "Bingo! Mostly Carsen!" Casaja screeched angerly. Vesper crawled back a few steps in her sleeping area. "I'm sorry, Vesper. I didn't mean to take it out on you." Casaja apologized. Vesper took a step forward, glad that Casaja apologized. "That's okay, Casaja. You stayed up all day, that can make anyone snappish." Vesper squeaked. "Well, maybe I'll sleep this day. Anyway, I bet I can catch a flying insect before you!" Casaja squeaked. Vesper smiled. She was glad that her best friend was back to her chipper old self. The two crawled out from the cracks from the cliff and flew off with their traveling mates. It was a beautiful night. The stars sparkled and the moon shone brightly. And, the air was full of insects. Vesper and Casaja saw a mayfly. "That mayfly is mine!" Vesper and Casaja said together. The two flew after the mayfly. The mayfly saw the two bats and flew away from them as fast as it could. The two bats flew after the mayfly. Vesper flew faster. So did Casaja. The mayfly flew up higher. The bats flew up higher too. "I'm getting that mayfly!" Casaja squeaked. "Fat chance! That mayfly has my name written all over it!" Vesper squeaked. The two bats flew faster and faster. Then, a flash of white swooped down and snatched the mayfly. The white was Fuzz. "Hey! That was mine!" Vesper and Casaja screeched together. Fuzz chewed up the mayfly and swallowed it. "It's mine!" Fuzz said with a grin. "You're owl bait, Fuzz!" Casaja snarled in mock fury. "Oooh, my fur is shaking!" Fuzz mocked. Then, a distress shriek pierced the air. "Did you hear that?" Fuzz asked. The sound came from a boulder below the three bats. "We should go see who it is." Vesper squeaked. The three leaf-nosed bats flew down towards the boulder. On the ground, was a black mastiff bat. A male. The three landed next to the black mastiff. "What's wrong?" Vesper asked. "I......broke my right wing." the black mastiff groaned.
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Post by Tear on Jul 29, 2007 22:41:20 GMT -5
Great Chapter.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Jul 30, 2007 16:29:59 GMT -5
Thanks!
Lending A Helping Wing
"How did you break your wing?" Vesper asked the black mastiff he-bat. "I was...hunting with my colony, we were having a great time. While we were hunting, a dozen of Bloodwings flew at us. Luckily, my colony managed to get away, but, one of the Bloodwings caught me. Caught me by my right arm. It bit down, HARD. Breaking my wing. So, I used by left thumb claw to gouge out its right eye. It shrieked in pain and dropped me. I fell and fell. Then, I landed, HARD. It was amazing that I survived the fall. I've been lying here for two nights. It's a wonder that a predator hasn't caught me yet." the black mastiff squeaked in pain. "Oh, you poor thing..." Vesper squeaked. "So, you were another victim to those wretched false vampire bats, huh?" Casaja squeaked. "Yes." the black bat moaned. "Grrrrrrrrrrrr, I HATE those disgusting spectral bats!" Fuzz screeched. "Where's your colony?" Vesper asked. "They live in that cave in that yonder." the black bat answered. Vesper looked at the cave. It wasn't that far away. "We can fly over to your cave! We'll carry you!" Vesper squeaked. "But, I'm a big bat and there's only three of you small bats. You three will never be able to carry me." the black-furred bat squeaked. "Oh, we're with other bats. A LOT of bats!" Casaja squeaked. "And, I'm sure they'll help you!" Fuzz squeaked. "Where, are these other bats at?" he asked. "Out hunting, but we can call them." Vesper squeaked. "You three will really help me?" he asked. "Sure! We're always willing to lend a helping wing!" Fuzz replied. "Thanks, thanks so much." the ebony bat squeaked. "What's your name?" Vesper asked. "Josheua." the black mastiff squeaked.
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Post by Tigerfur on Aug 5, 2007 22:29:00 GMT -5
AWESOME chapter! I hope you continue soon so we can see what happens next! ;D
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 7, 2007 12:11:20 GMT -5
Thanks!
Blackwings
Vesper, Casaja, and Fuzz called out for the bat colonies. They came. "What is it now?" Noct griped. "This is Josheua. He's a male black mastiff bat. A Bloodwing broke his wing. His colony lives in that cave over there. He's really nice! We have to carry him to that cave!" Vesper squeaked. "We?" Trout sneered. "Yeah, 'we?'" Spark sneered. "Yeah, you expect US to carry that thing?" Carsen screeched. "At least I'm not a brainless bloodsucker!" Joshuea spat. That's bloodLAPPER, dimwit!" Carsen snarled. "I know you are, but what am I?" Joshuea snarled back. "Bats! Bats! Calm down!" Kosak screeched loudly. We all became silent. Kosak turned his gaze towards Josheua. "Son, we'll be more than happy to carry you." Kosak squeaked calmly. "WHAT???" Trout screeched angerily. "You heard me, Trout! We're helping this, this," he turned his gaze towards Josheua. "What wing are you, sonny?" "Blackwing." Josheua squeaked. Kosak returned his gaze towards Trout. "We're going to help this Blackwing if it's the last thing we do!" Kosak screeched. Trout, Carsen, and Spark frowned. "I'll pick Josheua by his left shoulder. Noct, you pick him up by the right shoulder. Casaja, you pick him up by the left foot. And, Vesper, you pick him up by the right foot. The four chosen bats nodded and flew over towards Josheua. "Who died and made him leader of the colonies?" Spark muttered. The four chosen bats grabbed Josheua and lifted him off the ground. "Thanks!" Josheua squeaked gratefully. "No problem!" Vesper replied. The bats and the traveling mates flew over towards the cave. It took a thousand wingbeats, but they made it. "Hello? Blackwings? We brought your Josheua! He's broken his wing!" Vesper screeched loudly. Soon, a thousand black mastiffs gasped happily. A huge black mastiff she-bat flew over towards Josheua. "Joshuea! You've returned!" she screeched happily.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 7, 2007 12:31:03 GMT -5
GREAT chapter! I wonder if the Blackwings are going to join in the war?
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 8, 2007 17:17:11 GMT -5
Thanks!
New Allies
"I'm Marieko! I'm the leader of the Blackwings and Josheua's mommy!" the huge black mastiff she-bat squeaked. "Pleased to meet you, Marieko!" Vesper squeaked. We introduced ourselves and the Blackwings introduced themselves. "What do you bottom feeders want?" a Blackwing female with a fluffy back snarled. "Kreeda! Show some manners!" Marieko spat. The fluffy backed she-bat named Kreeda rolled her eyes. "Mother, these bats are not our speices and they're trespassing!" Kreeda screeched angerily. "Kreeda is your sister?" Vesper asked Josheua. "Unfortunatly!" Josheua muttered quietly. "I heard that, boy! Now, I know that your sister can be rude and mean, but she is your sister and you shall treat her with respect! I'LL deal with her!" Marieko screeched sternly at Josheua. Josheua sighed. "Yes mother." Josheua squeaked. Vesper told Marieko what happened to Josheua. Fear and anger rippled through Marieko's pelt. "Bloodwings! We always been having problems with them!" Marieko screeched angerily. "We have a plan that could stop the Bloodwings from attacking us for good." Fuzz squeaked. "What is it, ghosty?" Kreeda demanded. Vesper told them about the plan to stop the Bloodwings's deadly raids for good. "So, will you join us?" Moth asked. "My, my, your plan is a bold one! But, um, wouldn't you all die? I mean, their are over a million Bloodwings out there..." Marieko squeaked. "My colony, the Leafwings, has over a million members too! And, These colonies that are aiding up are going to help us! You black mastiffs are pretty large bats and there's over a thousand of you guys! You guys could be useful in this battle!" Vesper screeched. "Hmm, well, we're definatly going to get killed by those dreadful bats if we don't fight. But, if we join you colonies, maybe prehaps we can stand a fighting chance. Alright, we'll join you." Marieko squeaked. "Mother! You can NOT be serious!" Kreeda screeched in fury. "I AM serious, sugar dumpling! Not only am I your mother, I am also your leader! And, you HAVE to do what I say!" Marieko screeched sharply. "But, we'll get killed!" Kreeda screeched. "Yeah, we'll get killed if we don't do anything, but maybe we won't if we have a solution!" Marieko screeched. Kreeda narrowed her eyes. "Igglore, Scriff, Luland, Meidre, Moryn, Scrina, Meetle, Buffy, Rotha, and Kalooa, you bats stay here with Josheua. The rest of us are going to fight in the war." Marieko squeaked. "Mum?" Josheua squeaked. "Yes, baby?" Marieko squeaked. "Be careful." Josheua squeaked.
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Post by Tear on Aug 16, 2007 21:55:39 GMT -5
Asome chapters!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Aug 18, 2007 15:38:16 GMT -5
Thankies!
Sudden Death
Vesper and her allies flew on until the sun peaked up from the sky. They took shelter in a large and abandoned cave. They were now asleep. Vesper dreamed of Sky Haven agian. Vesper saw a false-vampire bat flying towards her. Vesper screamed and tried to fly away. "Take it easy, little one. I'm not going to hurt you." the he-bat squeaked. Vesper turned around and glared at him in hatred and fear. "You Bloodwings are all the same! You all are nothing but cannabalistic bullies!" Vesper screeched. "Well, I'm not. My name is Murk." he squeaked. Murk! Vesper heard about Murk. He helped a small groud of bats from the Underworld to reach Nocturna's tree! "Murk, I'm so sorry!" Vesper apologized. "Your apology is accepted. Now, listen to what I have to say." Murk squeaked. Vesper listened. "A sudden death will wake you up. Not your death, but one of your traveling mates' death." Murk screeched softly. Vesper's eyes widened. "NO!!!" Vesper screamed. Then, Vesper heard a blood-curling scream. Vesper woke up. So did her allies. "NO!!!" Marieko screamed. "What is it?" Vesper asked. "My mate, Rannocko, is dead!!!" Marieko screamed with tears dripping down her cheeks.
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Post by Hushpad on Aug 18, 2007 22:11:44 GMT -5
Oh no! Great Chapter! Can you take a look at Final nights? I typed the prologue. I want to know if some people like it before typing more.
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Post by Tigerkit on Aug 19, 2007 21:54:33 GMT -5
No, thats so sad!
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