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Post by Beatiful Beautypelt on Mar 21, 2007 10:15:27 GMT -5
Chapter 8
"Everyone, it's tall tale time! Gather around me!" hollered my father. Tall tale time! That was and still is my favorite time of the day! My father tells the best stories! I ran towards my father. It turns out that I was the last one to arrive. "Nova Lee! So good of you to join us!" griped Blue Jay. "Now father, you can be late sometimes too." said my father in a stern voice. "Bah!" growled Blue Jay. "Now that we all are here. I shall begin the tall tale. This tall tale is about to brave bears, and a vicious rat. Once there were two she-bears. A black bear and a grizzly bear. They were out playing near their land. 'Tag! You're it!' shouted the black bear to the grizzly bear. The grizzly bear chased after the black bear. They were having a Shadowclan Trash old time. Little did those two bears know, they were not alone. A rat was watching them. The biggest, the meanest, the nastiest, and the most vicios rat in the world. The rat had a big fang. The rat used it to impale the skulls of innocent bears. The two bears got closer and coser to the rat. The rat pounced onto the black bear, trying to sink its fang into the black bear's skull. 'Help me! Help me!' the black bear cried out in terror. The grizzly bear pushed the rat off of her friend. The grizzly bear punched the rat in the nose. The rat staggered and fell onto its back. The black bear flipped the rat onto its belly. The black bear held the rat down. The grizzly bear went over towards the rat. The grizzly bear scalpped the rat with a her teeth. The black bear released the rat. The rat ran away from the bears' land and bled to death. The two bears went back to there tribes and told them what happened. The black bear became the most honorable bear ever and the grizzly bear became her tribe's next chief. That's the story. The End." said my father. "Wow Red Wood, that's a really great story!" said Oak Tree. "The best!" chorused the rest of us. "I don't know about 'the best,' but I tried." said my father. "Are you kidding? That IS the best!" exclaimed Elm Tree. "Well anyway, everyone, it's time to sleep. Time to go inside of your burrows, and sleep." said my father. After saying our good-nights, went went into our burrows. My fater's stories reminded me of something. The story was exactly what Skunk Tail said! Can it be that Skunk Tail had visited my fathr as well? Oh Spirit Tribe, please don't let anything bad happen!
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 22, 2007 8:26:45 GMT -5
Coolio chapter!
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 22, 2007 17:50:37 GMT -5
Thanks for the reviews, Firelover! Chapter 9 I was in Spirit Tribe. This time, I was all alone. "Hello! Hello! Anyone here? Hello!" shouted I. There was no answer. 'Where can everyone be?' I asked silently to myself. I began to wonder around in the forest. Still no sign of a single bear. I searched and searched. 'Spirit Tribe has sent me up here for a reason. What can the reason be?' I asked silently to my self. I went deeper and deeper into the forest. Then, I saw a beam of diagonal light shining about twenty-five wolf lengths away from me. 'No wonder Spirit Tribe doesn't have dark forests!' thought I to myself. By some instinct, I descided to walked towards the place where the light was shining at. As soon as I got there, I saw the spot was behind a row of tall bushes in front of me. I also heard a couple of bears talking! To my surprise, I heard that one of the voices belonged to my father. I pawed out a small hole in one of the bushes. I peeked through the hole. My father was talking to a pretty black she-bear. "Heart Of Gold, you were my medicine bear. The best medicine bear the forest on earth has ever seen. It broke my heart that a pack of wolves took your life." said my father to the she-bear. "And, you are the best chief that the forest on earth has ever seen. It's a tragedy that you're going to have to leave it soon." said Heart Of Gold in a weepy voice. 'Leaving my forest? What is this she-bear talking about?' I asked silently to myself. "Yes, you've been visiting me for the last three nights. I'm not afraid to die, Heart Of Gold. My gradson will take good care of Rain Tribe. It's just, I'm going to miss them all so much!" said my father, getting weepy as well. 'Did I hear right? My father is going to die?' I asked silently to myself. "Red Wood, you have ruled your tribe for one-hundred and eight moons. I wish that you can live for many more moons to come, but I can't control your future, but I will be the first bear in Spirit Tribe to welcome you with open arms." said Heart Of Gold. "I know, Heart Of Gold. I know that you and all of the other Spirit Tribe bears will take good care of me, and I'll watch over my family." said my father. 'My father is going to die?! No!!! It...can't be! There are no illnesses, my father is still young, we keep my forest safe, we have burrows to hide in to protect us from danger, and we lead a healthy life!' I shouted silently in my head. "I know this must be hard for you, Red Wood. It was really hard for me to leave your forest when I died. Now, I don't know when you'll die, but I know that it'll be soon. Very soon." said Heart Of Gold. "Should I warn my family/tribe that I'm going to die?" asked my father. Heart Of Gold shook her head. "No. They have to find out on there own. Telling them will only make them more heart-broken and uneasy." said Heart Of Gold. My father dipped his head. "I understand, Heart Of Gold." said my father. "When you do die, I'll guide you up to here. You shall not be alone." said Heart Of Gold. "I'm grateful to hear that." said my father. "Now, you must return to your other dreams. I shall see you agian soon." said Heart Of Gold. I was outraged. 'How DARE that she-bear steal my father from me!' thought I to my self. As soon as I was about to charge towards Heart Of Gold, blackness engulfed me. All became black.
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 23, 2007 8:24:15 GMT -5
Aww, sad chapter. Poor Nova Lee
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 23, 2007 19:05:38 GMT -5
Chapter 10
It was morning. We all woke up. Wanted to tell my tribe mates about my nightmare, but I couldn't. Not only did I had the heart to tell them, I knew that Heart Of Gold didn't want them to know about it. So, my lips were sealed. "Good morning y'all! You know what time it is! It's time for our bath. Everyone, head on over to the pond!" said my father with a smile. I can tell that my father was forcing himself to be happy. "Well, what are y'all waiting for? I ordered y'all to go to the pond!" snarled my father. The others were shocked by my father's mood swing, but they nodded and obeyed. I walked towards Ash Fall, and walked by her side. "Spirit Tribe! What's gotten into Red Wood?" said Ash Fall, still shocked. "He probably didn't get enough sleep last night." said I. "Funny, he didn't look like he was tired!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "He probably had a bad dream then." said I, still trying to keep my father's secret. "Bad dreams never bothered him before. Why would it bother him now?" demanded Ash Fall. "Well, maybe fleas were pestering him agian." said I. "Maybe someone put a thorn up his nose!" growled Ash Fall. 'I wish it was that instead of that nightmare!' thought I to myself. As we walked on, I saw a small, gleaming light shining underneath the leaves. Ash Fall was walking towards it. I quickly realized that the gleaming thing, was a Big Teeth! "Ash Fall, stop! What ever you do, don't move a muscle!!!" exclaimed I. To my relief, Ash Fall obeyed me. "What's up with you?" asked Ash Fall with her eyes narrowed. I carefully brushed the leaves off of the Big Teeth. I exposed it. "Big Teeth!" exclaimed Ash Fall with terror in her voice. I grabed the stick and stabbed it in the Big Teeth's mouth. The Big Teeth slammed its jaws shut, snapping the stick in half. "Thanks for saving me, Nova Lee!" exclaimed Ash Fall with gratitude in her voice. I pulled out the stick out of the Big Teeth's tail. I lifted it off the ground. "I'm going to show this wretched thing to my father right now!" exclaimed I. I ran towards my father. "Father! Father! I found another one!" shouted I. My father gazed at the Big Teeth in my mouth. No pun intended. "Well done, my daughter. You have a fortunate talent of finding Big Teeth." said my father. 'Did Blood Tribe know about Big Teeth too?' I asked silently to myself. I realized that I must warn Blood Tribe. "Father? May I warn Amber Mist and her tribe about Big Teeth?" asked I. "Yes, you may. We should always warn our friends about something dangerous as Big Teeth. You may go. Just meet us at the pond." said my father. "Thank you, father!" said I. I licked my father on the nose, and raced towards Blood Tribe territory. I ran and ran, carefully keeping my watching the ground. I made it to Blood Tribe land. I sniffed around for Amber Mist. I picked up her scent, and followed it. I finally found her. She was eating a fawn carcass. "Amber Mist! I'm so happy that I found you!" panted I. "Nova Lee! What are you doing here?" demanded Amber Mist. 'Gee, nice to see you too, Amber Mist!' thought I to myself. "I have to warn you about something!" said I in an urgent voice. "What?" asked Amber Mist. "I found two Big Teeth in the forest!" exclaimed I. "Big Teeth?!?!?! Oh Spirit Tribe, no!!!" shouted Amber Mist. "Yeah, I had to tell you that so that you and your tribe will be on the look out for them too." said I. "Thanks for the warning! I shall report that to my father right away!" said Amber Mist in a grateful voice. Just then, Amber Mist and I saw that we're not alone. To our fear, we saw Rat Fang. She saw staring at us about three fox lengths away from us. "Hi Rat Fang! Amber Mist and I were just talking!" said I. "Did you have Gore Fang's permission to come here, dear heart?" asked Rat Fang as she stared at me. "Aunt Rat Fang, you know that my father lets Nova Lee and her tribe visit us!" said Amber Mist. "She should of gotten Red Wood's permission! But, if RGore Fang doesn't mind, I don't mind." said Rat Fang. I could tell that those words were forced out. "So, you two were talking about Big Teeth? Yes, it is that time of year for them to be in our forest. Valuable information." said Rat Fang. 'Valuable information? What's she talking about?' I asked silently to myself. "Well, I better finish my buck leg. You two carry on." said Rat Fang. Rat Fang walked away from us. A few seconds later, she was out of ear shot. "Is she giving you any trouble?" asked I to Amber Mist. "Yes, she watches me like a hawk. Everytime I make a mistake, including small mistakes, she gets reports it to my father. And, when my father 's not looking, she bullies me." said Amber Mist. "What? That's terrible!" snarled I. Rat Fang is becoming a real problem. "I tried to tell my father that she was no good, but he won't believe me. He said that I'm just a young, naive bear that doesn't know my left from my right." said Amber Mist. "Did you tell your medicine bear?" asked I. "Yes, but she won't believe me either! None of them believe me!" sobbed Amber Mist. "Well, I believe you." said I. "Thanks!" said Amber Mist in a grateful tone. Her and I hugged. Then we released each other. "Well, you better get back to your tribe." said Amber Mist. "Yeah, my father will be wandering what happened to me." said I. "Bye!" said Amber Mist. "Bye!" said I. I headed back to my land. Spirit Tribe, who will protect my tribe and Amber Mist's tribe from Rat Fang?
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 24, 2007 14:37:06 GMT -5
Sweet chapter. I liked it.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 24, 2007 21:02:11 GMT -5
This chapter is very sad. Chapter 11 I leapt into the pond. Just as I was about to scrub myself, my father walked out of the water. "Everyone, it's time to forage! Get dried off, and go forage!" said my father. 'Wow! I didn't get a chance to scrub myself!' thought I to myself. I swam to shore. "No, Nova Lee. YOU need to get your bath done. You, stay here." said my father. My stomach growled in hunger, but I nodded and leapt back into the water. I was all alone. I had the entire pond to myself! Sweet! I splashed and rolled around in the water. An hour has passed. I began to scrub myself. I scrubbed myself, using my favorite rock. As I scrubbed, I heard a roar. 'What was that?' I asked silently to myself. I heard the roar agian. I realized that the roar belonged to my father! "My father's in trouble!" gasped I. I threw my rock aside, and swam to shore. I desperately tried to pick up my father's scent. After a few sniffs, I picked up my father's scent. I raced towards it. I ran and ran. The scent came from in between my land and Blood Tribe's land. Then, I found my father. His foot was caught in something. To my horror, I realized that Big Teeth has got my father! Big Teeth had its teeth into my father's foot. To my horror agian, I smelt a human! I saw that the human was a male, and he was crouching behind a bush. He aimed his gun at my father, and fired. The bullet went into my father's left shoulder! My body was full of rage. I charged at the human. I caught the human by surprised. I jerked the gun out of the human's hand. I threw the gun aside. I grabbed the human with my teeth and shook him. I shook and shook. Then, I threw him. Away from his gun. I stompped towards the human. The human screamed in terror and ran. Then, I went towards the gun. I picked it up, and dug a big hole. I buried the gun. 'There, now that wretched human won't be able to get back to his gun!' thought I to myself. Then, I remembered my father. I ran towards my father. Then, I picked up another scent. It belonged to Rat Fang. "Father? What happened?" asked I. "Rat Fang...wanted to show me something. She lead me away from our tribe. Then, the next thing I knew, Big Teeth has captured me. It bit me and refused to let go. Then, Rat Fang looked at me, and began laughing in a sinister laugh. Then, I realized that this was she had in mind all along. I asked her why she did it, her reply was, 'You black bears have been infesting my forest for too long! I'm going to kill you black bears one by one, starting with you!' I was shocked. Very shocked. I thought Rat Fang was my friend. I trusted her. Then, I roared. Rat Fang's grin got bigger. She WANTED me to roar! After fifthteen heart beats, I smelt a human. She said, 'I smell a hunter! Say good-bye to life, Red CRAP!' Then, she left. The human's scent got stronger and stronger. Then, I smelt you. Oh, Nova Lee, you did a very foolish thing by going after that armed human!" said my father in a weakening voice. I saw a small pond of blood forming out of my father's sholder. "Nova Lee, I can see Heart Of Gold. She's coming to get me. I'm dying. Talon Of Mighty Eagle shall become chief today." said my father in a soft voice. Tears formed in my eyes. "NO!!! Please daddy, don't die!!!" sobbed I. "I'm sorry, Nova Lee. I'm dying. Don't worry, I shall always watch over you and your tribe. I'll always be with you. I promise. I love you, Nova Lee. Tell your tribe that I love them too." said my father in an almost inaudable voice. "Father, don't go!" whispered I. It was too late. My father died.
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 27, 2007 8:33:50 GMT -5
that was sad..
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 27, 2007 17:55:39 GMT -5
Chapter 12
I stared at the bloody hole in my father's shoulder. I can't believe that my father is dead! He's supposed to live for moons and moons to come! More tears dripped down my cheeks. 'How can I ever tell my tribe that our chief is murdered?' thought I. I still smelt Rat Fang's scent. 'Rat Fang! That disgusting pile of skunk dung! How dare she lead my father to the wretched Big Teeth! Making my father roar so that he can attract that filthy human! Ooh, when I catch her, I'll gouge out her eyes and rip out her guts!' thought I in rage. Then, I realized that I had to take my father's corpse back to my land, showing and telling everyone the horrible news. I grabbed my father's hands with mine. I began to drag him while I walked backwards and turned my head. 'Great Spirit Tribe! My father's heavy!' thought I. Step by step, step by step, step by step, I dragged him towards my territory. "Young one, I saw the whole thing. I am also filled with grief." said a familiar voice. I turned my head, and saw Night Wing. "Night Wing! I'm so glad you are here! I need some comfort really bad!" said I. "I know. I need some comfort too. I thought that we can keep each other company." rasped Night Wing. "I would appreciate it, very much." said I, with more tears dripping down my cheeks. "Hmm, I know this will be very hard for you to tell your kin about this tragedy. I'll go tell them what happened. That way, they'll be more prepared when you bring Red Wood's body to their land." said Night Wing. "Thanks, Night Wing! After You do that, will you please comfort me?" said I. "Of course I will. Now, I must fly to them at once." said Night Wing. With that, Night Wing flapped off. 'Good old Night Wing, always shows up when you need her.' thought I to myself. Then, I continued to drag my father's body back to camp. I have a long way back to my territory.
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 28, 2007 12:47:50 GMT -5
Sad but good chapter
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 28, 2007 17:40:23 GMT -5
Chapter 13
"Night Wing has told us what happened. We all are heart broken." said my mother as I entered my land with my father's corpse. "Yes, I can't believe that my big brother is gone." said Oak Tree. "He was the best chief the world has ever known." said Honey Bee. "Did I here right? My granddaddy is dead?" mewled Wind That Carries Leaves. "Yes darling, he's dead." said I in a choked voice. "No! It can't be! I don't want my granddaddy to be dead!" cried Night Owl. "I'm sorry my darling dears. Red Wood is murdered." said Black Storm with misty eyes. "My father...is...dead..." said Acorn Tree as she blinked away her tears. "These are dark, dark times. Red Wood has lead our tribe for many moons. Now, he's gone." said Holy Rain as she bowed her head in sorrow. "I'll never forget about that bear. He's done so much for us." said Elm Tree. "Spirit Tribe will honor him and welcome him." said Umber Fur. "He was my son. No father can ask for a better son." said Blue Jay. "And, no one can ask for a better friend." said Night Wing. "No, this...is...hard to believe. My grandfather had so many moons left in him, and...they're all ended with just one bullet..." said Talon Of Mighty Eagle with wide eyes. "Well, as Spirit Tribe knows, Red Wood doesn't live in our forest anymore. We all know the bear that shall be our new chief. Talon Of Mighty Eagle, is now Rain Tribe's chief." said Holy Rain. We all stared at Talon Of Mighty Eagle. His fear was on his face. "NO!!! I can't! I never lead a tribe before! I don't know the first thing about being a chief! I can't do it! I just can't!" shouted my son. "But brother, our granddaddy told you that you were to be our tribe's chief when he dies!" exclaimed Wind That Carries Leaves. "I'm sorry, I just can't do it. I can't." said my son. "Hi everyone! We came all the way from Nome, Alaska to visit you all! I'm sorry, what happened?" asked a voice. We all turned around, and saw Snow Flake and her tribe.
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Post by Grayshadow on Mar 30, 2007 8:28:03 GMT -5
Wow! *sits and waits for more*
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Post by Tear on Mar 30, 2007 10:22:54 GMT -5
Sad, sad chapters
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Mar 30, 2007 19:53:13 GMT -5
Chapter 14
"Mother! Mother! It's Snow Tribe!" exclaimed I, getting cheered up a little bit. "This is...Snow Tribe? Those polar bears? The tribe you, Acorn Tree, Ash Fall, Black Storm, and Amber Mist visited moons ago?" asked my mother. I nodded. "Wow. I...can't believe it. I can't believe that we got polar bears in our forest. What an honor." said my mother. "Everyone, these polar bears are Snow Tribe! They are good friends! Please, welcome them!" said I. "Welcome!" chorused the tribe with shocked looks on their faces. "Nova Lee, it's so good to see you agian! I'm honored to meet your tribe!" said Snow Storm. "I'm so happy to see you agian, Nova Lee!" squealed Snow Flake in delight as she hugged me. I hugged her back. "You are not going to believe this!" said Snow Flake as she released me. "What?" asked I. "I'm a wife and a mother!" shouted Snow Flake with a huge smile on her face. I nearly fell over. She's a wife and a mother! Just like me! "That's wonderful! Who's your mate and who's your cub?" said I. "Heart Of Ice, will you come over here?" asked Snow Flake. A few moments later, a burly polar he-bear came walking towards Snow Flake while cradling a tiny polar she-bear cub in his arms. "Heart Of Ice, this is Nova Lee. She's a great friend of mine!" said Snow Flake. "Nova Lee, heard a bunch of great stories about you. Pleased to meet you. This is my daughter. Her name is Little One." said Heart Of Ice. "Aww, she's so cute!" said I as I gazed at the fuzzy, white cub. "Thanks!" said Snow Flake. "I'm a wife and a mother too!" said I. "No way! Really? How awesome!" said Snow Flake. "Black Storm is my husband, he's over there. My oldest cub is Night Owl, she's over there. Other daughter is Wind That Carries Leaves, she's over there. My son is Talon Of Mighty Eagle, and he's right over there." said I. "What lovely bears!" exclaimed Snow Flake. "Yes, yes they are. My son is the new chief of our tribe." said I, getting grief stricken agian. "That's great! Um, what happened to your old chief?" said Snow Flake. "My old chief was my father. His name was Red Wood. He died." said I. "That's so sad! Poor, poor, Red Wood!" said Snow Flake. "Snow Tribe, we all are happy to see and meet y'all! What happened is this, our chief was murdered." said my mother in a loud voice.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 2, 2007 13:23:05 GMT -5
Sorry for the double-post, but what do y'all think about that chapter?
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Post by Grayshadow on Apr 3, 2007 12:43:05 GMT -5
Oh boy... Good chapter.
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Post by Beautiful Beautypelt on Apr 3, 2007 14:16:51 GMT -5
"Red Wood is dead?!?!?!" exclaimed Snow Wind. "Who murdered him?!?!?!" exclaimed Snow Ground. "How did he die?!?!?!" exclaimed Snow Fall. "How awful!!!" exclaimed Snow Ball. "Where did you find his body?" exclaimed Snow Flurry. "Silence!" shouted my mother. We all became quiet. "Nova Lee, tell Snow Tribe what happened." said my mother. I turned towards Snow Tribe. "I hear my father roar. I raced towards his scent to help him. I found him. Big Teeth has captured him. Then, a human has shot him. I fought the human off. The human ran away. Then, I buried his gun. Then, my father died." said I. Snow Tribe gasped. "That's so, so terrible!" exclaimed Snow Angel. "And, my son, Talon Of Mighty Eagle, is the new chief of Rain Tribe." said I. I saw my son flinch. "Well, Talon Of Mighty Eagle is the grandson of a really great chief. He'll make a fine chief." said Snow Ball. I heard my son mutter quietly, "No I won't!" "I so sorry that y'all came in a very bad time, but y'all are still welcome to Rain Tribe." said my mother. "Thank you, Maple Leaf. Sorry agian about your loss." said Snow Storm. "You had nothing to do with my husband's death. The human killed him, not you." said my mother. "Well, I still grieve about your loss." said Snow Storm. "Red Wood's funeral starts at sun down, want to join us?" asked my mother. "Sure, we'll come." said Snow Storm in a kind voice. "Talon Of Mighty Eagle, you may dig a hole for Red Wood's grave. Dig the hole near the old oak tree. He loved that tree. That was his favorite climbing tree." said my mother. "Sure, mom. Anything you say." murmured my son with his head bowed. "In the mean time, my tribe, make our guests feel at home." demanded my mother. My tribe and I nodded with sad looks. We went towards Snow Tribe.
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