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Post by Tear on Feb 16, 2007 19:30:06 GMT -5
Cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 17, 2007 9:27:17 GMT -5
Firelover, chapter 14 is on page 2. You didn't read it. I thought I tell you that just in case you want to read it. The 'tall cave' the bears are talking about is a building. Just in case y'all are wondering. Chapter 15 Acorn Tree, Amber Mist, Black Storm, and I climbed up the tall human cave. My son's scent is on top of it. The cave was hard to climb. Luckily, there were ledges for us to put our paws on when we climbed up that cave. "That little twerp better be on top of this blasted cave!" growled Amber Mist. "Wow Amber Mist, you sound just like Ash Fall!" exclaimed Black Storm. "That sounded like something she would say!" exclaimed Acorn Tree agreeing with Black Storm. "I hang out with her a lot." grunted Amber Mist. "At least you had the guts to set your paws onto this human land!" said Black Storm. "Don't be too hard on Ash Fall. You can't blame her for being cautious." said Amber Mist. "But, she's always saying how tough she is! She's always saying how scary she is! So, why did she robined out?" growled Black Storm. "We're all afraid of something! Ash Fall is afraid of humans! What's wrong with that?" said Amber Mist. "But, last time we were here, she wanted to scare the humans! She said that her and her old tribe used to dine on human flesh! Why is she now afraid of them?" growled Black Storm. "Well Black Storm, we DID had a bad experiences with humans. Ash Fall's old tribe were murdered by humans, your old tribe were murdered by humans, and YOU were captured by humans! So, it's perfectly normal to be afraid of humans!" growled Amber Mist. "Well, I guess I can't argue about those logics." grunted Black Storm. "Neither can I." said Acorn Tree. "Come on y'all! We have to keep climbing up this thing!" exclaimed I. "We're coming, Nova Lee!" called Amber Mist. We climbed higher and higher up. Humans saw us through the strange clear and flat pices of rocks and screamed at the top of their puny lungs. We just ignored them and focused on our mission. We climbed up higher and higher. My son's scent still filled my nostrils. We kept on climbing. We were almost at the top. "Come on y'all! We're almost there!" called I. We kept on climing and the humans kept screaming at us. After a few more pawsteps, we were finally at the top of the very tall human cave. To my shock, my son wasn't here on that human cave! The only thing that was on top of the human cave were us, my son's scent, and fish bones.
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 17, 2007 15:50:52 GMT -5
Yeah I did! Good chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 18, 2007 9:40:12 GMT -5
Chapter 16
"WE CAME ALL THIS WAY, JUST TO FIND A PILE OF FISH BONES?!?!?!" roared Amber Mist. "My son must of climbed on top of this human cave to enjoy his meal in peace. When he ate the fish, he must've climbed back down and went in another direction." said I. "When I get my claws on Talon of STUPID Eagle..." snarled Amber Mist. "Hurry, if we hurry up and climb back down, we should keep up with my son's scent." said I. None of us said another word as we climbed back down. We did our best to not look down. Climbing back down was harder than climbing up. "If I fall down and break my bones, I'm going to break ALL of Talon Of Mighty Eagle's bones in his body!" muttered Amber Mist. We climbed further and further down. We still have a long way to go before we get to the ground. As we climbed down, without warning, a disgusted she-human lifted up the flat clear rock piece of rock and pushed me off the very tall human cave! "SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!" bellowed I in terror. "HANG ON, NOVA LEE!!! I GOT YOU!!!" bellowed Black Storm as he grabbed my left forepaw with his right one. My love held my paw tight. I happen to notice how far down the hard human ground was. I gulped in terror. "Don't worry, Nova Lee, I'll put your paws back on the cave's ledges!" panted Black Storm. Black Storm swung his powerful arm and put my body back in front of the human cave. My paws grabbed the ledges. Black Storm released me. "Thank you so much, Black Storm! You save my life agian!" panted I. "I love you too much to let you die." said Black Storm. "Uh, if you two love birds are done, I suggest we hurry back down before something else happens!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "She's becoming more like Ash Fall every second!" exclaimed Black Storm. "We're coming, Amber Mist!" shouted I. We climbed back down really fast. We climbed and climbed. What seemed like moons, we finally made it back down. "Phew! That's the last time I ever climb on a human cave!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Okay, Nova Lee, can you pick up Talon Of Mighty Eagle's scent agian?" asked Acorn Tree. I lifted up my nose and began sniffing. I sniffed and sniffed. "I can smell him! He's over in that direction!" exclaimed I. I raced towards my son's scent. The others sighed and raced after me. We ran and ran. We ran past shouting humans and pint-sized dogs, we ran past cooing birds and scurring rats. We ran and ran. Then, I skidded to a halt. The others did the same thing. "Y'all, my son is inside of this zoo!" exclaimed I. The others gasped as we gazed at the zoo we visited last time.
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Post by Tear on Feb 18, 2007 20:16:28 GMT -5
Great chapter
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 19, 2007 9:23:51 GMT -5
Awesome chapter!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 19, 2007 17:27:58 GMT -5
Chapter 17
We climed up the tall black bars. Once we made it to the top, we slid down inside of the zoo. "Lets ask the zoo bears. Maybe they'll know where Talon Of Mighty Eagle is." suggested Acorn Tree. "It's worth a try." said Amber Mist. "We got nothing to lose." said Black Storm. "Let's run to the zoo bears, we want to hurry so that the humans don't catch us." said. I. The others nodded and ran after me. We raced towards the zoo bears. We ran and ran. "What's the hurry?" asked a furry human-like creature. "This place is not safe for wild animals like you bears!" whinnied a striped doe deer-like creature. We ignored them and ran towards the zoo bears' section. We made it, were near the zoo bears. "Look, Giant Of The Land, its those wild bears agian!" squealed Bamboo Forest in delight. "Great to see y'all agian!" grunted Coyote Nose That Sniffs The Air. The other zoo bears grunted in delight. Then, we saw two bears that we never seen before. "What happened to Ash Fall?" asked Bamboo Forest. "Oh, she decided to stay behind. She depises human land." said Amber Mist. "Aww, that's a shame. We were really looking forward to see her agian too." groaned Rain Forest. "We were." said Frigid Weather Of Blizzards. "Well, call can call off the water works, because I'm here!" exclaimed a voice. We all turned around, and saw my best friend, Ash Fall.
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Post by Tear on Feb 21, 2007 16:55:18 GMT -5
Great Chapter!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 21, 2007 22:17:50 GMT -5
Chapter 18
"Ash Fall! You...you're here!!!" exclaimed Amber Mist as she embraced Ash Fall. "What made you descide to come to the humans' land?" asked Black Storm. "Well, we're supposed to find that little brat together. No matter what obsticals." muttered Ash Fall. "Well, we're glad that you came." said Acorn Tree. "We are." said I. "Ash Fall! Great to see you agian!" exclaimed Wing Of Soaring Falcon. "Great to see y'all zoo bears agian too." said Ash Fall. "Rays Of The Sun? Who are these wild bears?" asked a long-haired bear. "Yeah, who are they?" asked a black bear with a white V on her chest. "The scarred black she-bear is Ash Fall, the black he-bear is Black Storm, the grizzly she-bear is Amber Mist, the big black she-bear is Acorn Tree, and the smaller black she-bear is Nova Lee." said Bamboo Forest. "She's right. By the way, who are you two?" asked I. "My former name was Long Fur. My current name is Gray-Gray. I'm a sloth bear. I came from Rock Tribe." said the long-haired gray he-bear. "My former name was Crest White As Snow. My current name is Vee. I came from Night Tribe." said the black she-bear with the white V on her chest. "We're please to meet you two too. We'll call you by your former names." said I. "Would you? Thanks! I can't stand being called 'Vee!'" said Crest White As Snow. "And I hate the name 'Gray-Gray!'" spat Long Fur. "Uh, let's cut to the chase. We're looking for a young black he-bear. He's Nova Lee's and Black Storm's son. His name is Talon Of Mighty Eagle. Have you seen him?" demanded Ash Fall. I sighed under my breath. My best friend was still as impolite as ever. "Now that you mention it, we did see a young male black bear not too long ago. He was lucky that the zoo-keepers hadn't caught him." said Frigid Weather Of Blizzards. "You have? Which way did he go? What did he say?" asked Acorn Tree. "Well, he made fun of us because we're locked up in cages and have humans to raise us. Then, he said something about going west." said Coyote Nose That Sniffs The Air. Acorn Tree let out an exasperated sigh. "Why does that little twerp have to be so disrespectful?" exclaimed Amber Mist. "That was a moon ago." said Rain Forest. "A moon ago?!?!?! He could be miles away by now!!!" exclaimed Black Storm. "Oh well, no big loss." said Ash Fall. I shot Ash Fall a glare. "If you five hurry and go west, maybe y'all can catch up with him." said Giant Of The Land. "We'll do that! Thanks!" said Acorn Tree. "Not to be pushy, but I suggest y'all leave right now before the zoo-keepers cat y'all." said Crest White As Snow. "Yah, we best be going." said Black Storm. "Bye! Come agian soon!" chorused the zoo bears. "Bye!" chorused us. After saying our good-byes to the zoo bears, we snuck quietly back to the gate. we climbed up the bars and climbed down to the other side. We headed towards west. Sure enough, my son's scent came from that direction. I sure hope we find my son soon.
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Post by Tear on Feb 21, 2007 23:47:13 GMT -5
Cool chapter!!!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 22, 2007 13:24:25 GMT -5
Chapter 19
Five moons has passed. We were now many pawsteps away from human land we were now in a field of grass. We were heading west. I became increasingly worried about my son. "We got to find him! We just got to find him!" shrilled I. "Nova Lee, get a hold of yourself!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "Sorry, Ash Fall. It's just, I can't help it! Talon Of Mighty Eagle has been gone for moons now! What if we never find him?" exclaimed I. "We'll find that little shrimp, don't worry." growled Ash Fall. "Yeah, we gotten this far, maybe we're getting closer and closer to that little twerp!" growled Amber Mist. "They're right, you are getting more and more like me! If you turn into a scarred up black bear, you and I can be twins!" exclaimed Ash Fall to Amber Mist. I let out a little laugh. Ash Fall has always been the comic relief of the bunch. She'll make you laugh and smile no matter how bad things get. "His scent is getting really strong now, maybe we'll find him before dusk." said Black Storm. "I heard that one before!" muttered Ash Fall. "It's no good worrying, the only thing we can do is hope for the best." said Acorn Tree. "Acorn Tree's right, all we can do is hope." said I. None of us said another word as we headed on. Soon, we walked out of the field. To our horror, we saw more human land in the horizon. "Here we go agian!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Don't tell me that we have to go into the humans' land agian!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "Sorry, but we have to go into their land." said I. "You have got to be kidding me!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "She's not kidding! We're going into the human land!" growled Black Storm. "But-" Ash Fall protested. "No buts! We're going in!" growled Acorn Tree. Ash Fall and Amber Mist let out exasperated sighs. "Everyone, follow me." ordered I. "Sure, we always do." sighed Ash Fall. None of us said another words as we headed over towards the human land. We walked and walked. After many pawsteps later, we made it to the human land with my son's scent still in our nostrils.
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Post by Tear on Feb 22, 2007 22:14:20 GMT -5
Great chapter, Beautypelt!!!!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 23, 2007 10:32:38 GMT -5
Thanks for the review, Hushpad! Chapter 20 We walked into the human land we have never seen before. I always dread human land, but we got to find my son. This human land was no diffrent than the last human land we walked through. Human stared at us with eyes widened in terror, dogs barked at us, a bunch of gray birds with purple and green heads cooed, rats scurried back and forth, and cockroaches crawled on human caves. "Your son, has some sort of fasination about these wretched human places!" gagged Ash Fall at me. "Why does he want to come here?" whined Amber Mist. "I don't know, but we'll soon find out." said I. "Hey! Hey! What are you bearsies doing in the city?" cooed one of the gray birds. "We're looking for my son. Have you seen a young male black bear?" asked I. "Why yes, I did see a bearsie. He was locked up in a circus wagon." cooed the bird. My mouth fell open. My eyes widened in terror. The circus people has cub-napped! "We know what a circus is, but what is a circus wagon?" asked Amber Mist. "It's a cage on wheels. They're hooked to the circus vehicle. They're used to transport animals." cooed the bird. "What's a wheel and what's a vehicle?" asked Amber Mist. "Sheesh, you country bears! Wheel are the things that makes a vehicle move. A vehicle are the things that humans ride in. Look over there, there's a vehicle!" cooed the bird. We looked at the vehicle that turned out to be a rolling boulder. "Oh, you mean rolling boulders!" exclaimed Acorn Tree. "Uh, they're called vehicles, sweetheart." cooed the bird. "Okay, we'll remember that. Now, did you see which way the circus wagon went?" asked Black Storm. "They went north. They'll stop in a circular patch of grass. They'll only be in there for three days. So, you bears better hurry." cooed the bird. "Thanks you so much! You've been a big help!" said I. "Bye!" cooed the bird. "Bye!" chorused us bears. We ran towards north. I was now petrified. Those wretched circus humans cub-napped my son! Those humans better leave when they see me because when I find them, I'll kill them!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 23, 2007 11:29:45 GMT -5
Cool chapters!
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Post by Tear on Feb 23, 2007 21:08:02 GMT -5
Asome chapter, Beautypelt!
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Post by Beautypelt on Feb 24, 2007 9:55:31 GMT -5
Chapter 21
We ran towards north. I was still frightened out of my paws that the dreaded circus humans captured my son. I shuddered as I imagined them making my son perform meaningless tricks for a bunch of wretched people among strange and never before seen animals. I just wanted to gut those filthy circus humans! "I can smell Talon Of Mighty Eagle! I also can smell other animals too! And, humans and their vehicle!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Good nose, Amber Mist! I can smell them as well!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "We got to find them!" exclaimed Black Storm. "Yeah, they'll only be on this human land for three days!" exclaimed Acorn Tree. "Which is why we got to hurry!" exclaimed I. We ran faster towards north. We ran and ran. We passed some very spooked humans and snarling dogs. We passed some cawing crows and yowling cats. We passed some squeaking rats and flying cockroaches. We ran in our fastest speed. "My paws are going to fall off!" panted Ash Fall. "There's no time to rest! We got to find the circus!" said I in a stern voice. "Great Spirit Tribe!" panted Ash Fall. We ran and ran. We ran and ran. "Talon Of Mighty Eagle's scent is getting stronger!" exclaimed Amber Mist. "Good! We shouldn't have much further to go!" said I. I sniffed. Amber Mist's right, my son's scent is getting stronger! Nothing can stop us now! "When I get my paws on that boy, I'll strangle him!" growed Ash Fall. "You do, and I'll strangle YOU!" snarled Black Storm. "Why shouldn't I strangle him? He's been leading us on a wild loon chase for moons!" exclaimed Ash Fall. "Still, no one's strangling my boy!" said Black Storm. "My son is your future chief after all!" said I to Ash Fall. Ash Fall rolled her eyes, but said nothing. We ran and ran. My son's scent got stronger and stronger. I prayed to Spirit Tribe that we'll find him very soon. Just then, a bullet shot passed us. We skidded to a hault. We all turned around, and saw two humans shooting at us!
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Post by Grayshadow on Feb 26, 2007 9:24:26 GMT -5
Uh oh, keep going your doing a awesome job!
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