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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jun 22, 2007 14:00:18 GMT -5
Dusk settled around the territory Frostfire called home. She was lost, so lost, and no cat stood with her. She was desperate for the exhileration of battle, the cries of her comrades, the thrill of the first blood drawn from an enemy Clan. She wanted a home, a place to defend and belong to.
Frostfire wasn't home just yet.
"Why?" she yowled to the stars, so unblinkingly cold as they sparkled, newly risen in the sky. "StarClan! You know I am innocent! Why have I been betrayed like this! Why has Redstar exiled me under your eyes!"
Silence. No dream. Nothing. Frostfire had learned, recently, you couldn't count on anyone, and no one could count on her.
No one. Otherwise, she'd still be a warrior for WingClan. She'd still be looking for her mother as a warrior, at least.
And she'd still have a home.
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Rosekit nosed out of the thick undergrowth surrounding the nursery. Her bright green eyes surveryed WingClan's camp; no cat stirred. All asleep.
Perfect.
Her adoptive mother, Whitetail, had never truly spoken of Rosekit's blood mother. All the kitten knew was that she had been taken prisoner by rogues, and her sister, Frostfire, had been exiled from camp by Redstar after a horrible battle with SunClan. No cat trusted another. Rosekit wasn't an experienced warrior, but she knew that the imbalance of trust would implode on the Clans. Soon.
She was reaching the age where she could become an apprentice, and when her name changed to Rosepaw, she needed to know the camp and WingClan's territory well. Otherwise she'd never find her mother as quickly as she desired.
From the last gathering of apprentices, Rosekit had met a young she-kit called Lotuskit from BoulderClan. Redstar, Ebonystar, Rainstar, and Darkstar had allowed kits to come as well, and she and her adoptive brother, Icekit, had gone with Whitetail. Lotuskit told Rosekit about the expellance of a senior warrior named Pantherfur and two younger warriors, Birdflight and Blackthroat. No cat knew why they had been exiled, only BoulderClan's leader, Rainstar.
Rosekit soon learned through Lotuskit that SunClan and DuskClan had had similar banishings.
There was something conected between them. They were not coincedences. At that time, WingClan had only lost her mother.
And then she lost Frostfire.
Rosekit would find her sister and mother again, this she swore on all of her ancestors in StarClan. But first, she needed to leave camp and explore before any cat woke up.
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jun 22, 2007 14:08:38 GMT -5
Ok, that was my prologue and rather short first chapter, everybody. I'm not very good at warrior-stories. Anyways, here are my stats: Note, warriors are listed later. SunClan Leader: Ebonystar Deputy: Speckledfur Likeness: ThunderClan BoulderClan Leader: Rainstar Deputy: Stormgaze Likeness: RiverClan??? WingClan Leader: Redstar Deputy: Moonpelt Likeness: WindClan DuskClan Leader: Darkstar Deputy: Goldeyes Likeness: ShadowClan
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Growing Kit
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Post by Tear on Jun 22, 2007 19:15:02 GMT -5
Good start.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 24, 2007 10:34:58 GMT -5
Awesome story! Please type more!
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Post by Tigerfur on Jun 25, 2007 20:51:25 GMT -5
GREAT start! ;D I hope you type more soon! ;D
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jun 28, 2007 18:56:47 GMT -5
Thankies! Sorry I didn't update right away, I was on vacation. =^-^= I had access to the Internet, but I didn't have enough time to actually make another chapter.
Icekit shouldered through the thicket into the nursery. "Rosekit!" he yowled. With a jolt, the kit woke and jumped to her feet, her green eyes wide.
"Icekit!" she breathed after a moment, gasping hard.
Her brother looked down at her disdainfully. "You're a mousebrain," he informed her. "You're always sleeping after the sun has risen. You'll never be a warrior, Rosekit."
Icekit's words stung. She couldn't tell him why she slept so long, or why she kept her distance from the others. Rosekit wanted to be a warrior more than anything, and she would defend her pride against Icekit's theories. "How much do you want to bet?" she snarled, and threw herself at him. Rosekit's weight caught the larger kit off guard, and he toppled to the ground, pinned under her paws. Struggling, he tried to right himself, but Rosekit held him down easily and cuffed the side of his head. Her midnight excursions had left her fit and strong.
"Ow!" Icekit whimpered, and Whitetail peered into the nursery. Her eyes flared open in shock, and in two bounds, she had Rosekit and Icekit seperated. Her dismay and disappointment in them sank into Rosekit's heart like a blackthorn. She felt horrible. Instead of saving her energy and controlling her temper, she only proved herself untrustworthy to her adoptive mother.
Whitetail said nothing except, "I'm ashamed in both of you," and made a point of discluding Rosekit from playing with the others in the nursery outside. Rosekit was sore at herself, and resented her behavior later when Whitetail confronted her.
"What were you thinking?" she wailed. Rosekit's tail drooped.
"Icekit told me I wouldn't become a warrior," she whispered.
Whitetail's eyes narrowed. "You shouldn't let him discourage you, even when he is wrong and out of place," she scolded, "and it was even more wrong of you to attack him like a rogue! You'll turn out like your sister, and what will I do then? Don't you have better things to do than worry your poor mother to death?"
Rosekit wanted to say, "You aren't my mother," but held back. "I'm sorry, Whitetail," she murmured.
Whitetail's gaze softened. "I shouldn't leave you any fresh-kill, but I'll except your apology. Come." With that, she turned and padded off to join her son, and Rosekit followed.
Nothing will distract me from my goal again, Rosekit vowed. I'll be a warrior, the best Redstar's ever had, and I will find my kin.
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Frostfire had recently hunted and eaten. Exhausted by her wayward travel, she stopped to rest. A twig cracked under another's paw; startled, she looked up, braced for battle.
Eyes glowed in the shadowed undergrowth. "This is rogue territory," a tom growled. "And who are you to travel here?"
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 28, 2007 19:19:23 GMT -5
Awesome Chapter!!! ^^
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jun 29, 2007 11:56:14 GMT -5
Thanks! I don't have enough computer time to finish another chapter today. Sorry.
It's kind of taking on a darker tone, though....*shrugs* Mwahahahaha! I am EVIL!!!!!!!!! AND I LOVE HAWKFROST EVEN THOUGH I NEVER USED THE HAWKFROSTLOVER SIGGY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*coughs* never mind, sorry.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 29, 2007 19:27:21 GMT -5
YAY HAWKIE!!!
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jun 30, 2007 17:07:24 GMT -5
Hawkfrost's my BOY! Yeah!
Er, anyway, I'm going to post an Avatar fanpic I did recently, everyone go look at it!!!!
NOTE: I think I forgot to mention, these Clans are in a different forest than where the series takes place. *haha, no duh* That's why I listed the likenesses; they're actually ThunderClan, WindClan, ShadowClan, and RiverClan, but their original names have been forgotten. *I get into that twist later, too* ~~ Taking a deep breath to calm her nerves and temper, Frostfire retorted, "Takes a rogue to know one is the saying; I suppose it doesn't work for an idiotic mousebrain like you?" Before the tom could react, she continued, "My name is Frostfire. I've been banished from WingClan, and I've come to join you."
Eyes widened, and the rogue stepped forward from the shadow, his eyes bright. His long-furred pelt was a smoky-colored gray, his eyes an unfazed amber. He was unusually large and formidiable, and Frostfire immediately felt weaker and defenseless. What was she doing here?
"Welcome, sister. This changes...everything."
She didn't like his tone of voice. "I'm not your sister," she spat. "I told you before, my name's Frostfire--"
"Yes, yes," the tom dismissed, ignoring her outburst. "I'm Fogfur," he said, changing the topic. "I'm the one Chosen from DuskClan."
Frostfire froze. "Chosen?"
"Of course," Fogfur replied. "Can't you see? Our banishings aren't coincidence. Redstar expelled you, as Darkstar exiled me. There was one reason. StarClan has turned their backs on us Chosen. This plot was by our great ancestors, Hawkfrost and Tigerstar. We are Chosen to fulfill their own prophecy."
Something about those names chilled Frostfire to the bone. "...What? Who? Who are they, Fogfur?"
"Our ancestors," he told her again, and turned. "Come with me. Our other brothers and sisters are waiting."
Curious, as well as terrified, Frostfire followed. It was, quite possibly, the worst mistake she could have made.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 30, 2007 17:16:18 GMT -5
Avatar? The Last Airbender or something like that?
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Post by Shadeheart on Jun 30, 2007 17:34:19 GMT -5
Awesome chapter, Frostfire! ^^
I wonder what happens next!
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Post by Tear on Jun 30, 2007 21:53:29 GMT -5
Great Chapter
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jul 1, 2007 11:03:33 GMT -5
Thankies, this is getting kinda confusing. I appreciate all my readers!!!!!!!!!
*Pokes Shadeheart and Hushpad*
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Post by Shadeheart on Jul 1, 2007 11:23:55 GMT -5
Muwahahahahahahahahahahahaha!
I AM THE EVIL ONE, AND I TELL YOU... CONTINUE YOUR EVIL STORY!
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Post by ƒrФ§тƒire on Jul 9, 2007 15:41:19 GMT -5
Lolz! Okay! ;D ;D
Today was the day!
Rosekit woke with the dawn, her eyes shining. "Wake up, Icekit!" she mewed eagerly, prodding her adoptive brother with her forepaw.
"What?" Icekit groaned, muffled by his sleepiness.
"We're six weeks old! We're apprentices today!" the kitten meowed matter-of-factly, but couldn't contain her excitement. "I can't wait to see who my mentor is! I'm gonna be the best warrior ever!"
Icekit gave her a cool look, but defrosted after a moment and remarked, "I kind of hope my mentor is Moonpelt."
Rosekit started, her eyes wide. Moonpelt was the deputy, and her apprentice, Foxpelt, had just become a warrior. "What? Why?"
"She's a good warrior and very popular," Icekit admitted. "I admire her skills and I want to be like her in every way I can."
Rosekit didn't remark on this, but she secretly wondered if her brother wanted to become deputy. It certainly seemed like this was his ambition. "Well, I want my mentor to be Amberclaw." The female warrior was beautiful and strong, and Rosekit admired her ability as a warrior greatly. ~~ Later that evening, Redstar called his Clan to the Standing Stone, where he always addressed the Clan. Rosekit could barely contain her excitement as he called her brother and herself forward.
"Rosekit and Icekit, you both are now six moons old, old enough to become apprentices." After that, Rosekit barely paid attention to the short ritual, her gaze sweeping the crowd for possible mentors. Goldwing? No, she was still nursing her kits. Blackstorm, then? A possibility. All of the warriors had apprentices, except for Amberclaw, Moonpelt, Blackstorm, and the medicine cat, Petalpaws. Rosekit shook her head--becoming a medicine cat was a wonderful thing, but she wanted to fight and protect her Clan. She wanted to bring her mother and sister home.
She suddenly snapped back to attention as Redstar said Moonpelt's name. "Moonpelt, you have no apprentice since Foxpelt became a warrior. Rosekit will become your apprentice. Rosekit, you are now Rosepaw. StarClan welcomes you as an apprentice of the Clan."
Her eyes widened as the black, mysterious she-cat stood and walked over to greet her new apprentice. Rosepaw ignored the look of venom Icekit gave her and touched noses with Moonpelt, awed.
"Amberpelt. You have not had an apprentice for two Gatherings--Icekit will be your apprentice. Icekit, you are now Icepaw. StarClan welcomes you as an apprentice of the Clan."
Amberpelt stood, her amber eyes shining, and she trotted over to greet Icepaw. Coldly, Icepaw touched noses with her in a stiff greeting, and turned away. Amberpelt obviously felt worried, but said nothing.
As the Clan spoke as one, their voices raising to Silverpelt above, chanting Rosepaw's and Icepaw's new names, Rosepaw smiled to herself. I'm coming for you, Frostfire. We'll find our mother together, I promise.
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Post by Shadeheart on Jul 11, 2007 16:13:17 GMT -5
Weeks? They'd have a LONG way to go until becoming apprentices if they're only a six weeks old. A moon is a month!
But great chapter! ^_^
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